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8 months 13 hours ago #66937 by null0trooper
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8 months 9 hours ago #66941 by Greatdingo
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I read it. It wasn't half bad. I guess there were a few parts I didn't entirely get, but I can see why a nerd club would have a scavenger hunt as a sort of hazing ritual.

I don't have anything to say about the technical parts of the story, it seemed perfectly fine to me.

So, thumbs up!
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8 months 4 hours ago #66943 by null0trooper
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Greatdingo wrote: I read it. It wasn't half bad. I guess there were a few parts I didn't entirely get, but I can see why a nerd club would have a scavenger hunt as a sort of hazing ritual.


Asking questions about overly obscure references and so forth is also feedback! There is some jargon in use, along with dialect; other folks might be having the same problems.

Scavenger hunt are hokey, but they can be useful for team-building and ensuring that at least someone's getting to know the new folks faster.

Greatdingo wrote: I don't have anything to say about the technical parts of the story, it seemed perfectly fine to me.

So, thumbs up!


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