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2 months 3 weeks ago #68640 by null0trooper
null0trooper created the topic: Discussion for "In Dreams: Dream A Little Dream For Me"
I guess I should start a topic for Dream A Little Dream For Me ?

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2 months 3 weeks ago #68647 by SDom111
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Null, Sir. It was a very well written story. You intermixed a couple of original gen characters. Just not sure your main antagonists of the story had the same breathe of character that we are use to them having. I also want to make it clear that you are a very talented writer. I look forward to reading more of your writings.

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2 months 3 weeks ago #68650 by null0trooper
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SDom111 wrote: Null, Sir. It was a very well written story.


Thank you!

SDom111 wrote: You intermixed a couple of original gen characters. Just not sure your main antagonists of the story had the same breathe of character that we are use to them having.


I wanted to suggest what sort of people they could be without diving into much darker waters, but you're right. More depth wouldn't hurt at all.

SDom111 wrote: I also want to make it clear that you are a very talented writer. I look forward to reading more of your writings.

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Again, my thanks.

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