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2 years 10 months ago - 2 years 10 months ago #50091 by Anne
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Nowhereville What did I do right? Wrong? Shall I burn my computer to get rid of it? Ack! I misplaced this, can someone please move it?
Last Edit: 2 years 10 months ago by Anne. Reason: Please move misplaced thread!

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2 years 10 months ago #50106 by Rose Bunny
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Interesting, so far.

was nearly as being named Sue and being a boy.


you seem to be missing a word here... I'm guessing "bad"

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2 years 10 months ago #50130 by Anne
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I changed that and a couple of other spots that I thought were rough... No one else has commented yet :cry:

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2 years 10 months ago #50131 by mhalpern
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interesting so far

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2 years 10 months ago #50132 by null0trooper
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There might be a missing
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tag, maybe near

“Smell anything to eat?”

, as half of the entire post is italicized.

You might not get many comments other than "When are we going to see more of Kelly?". I thought it was well-written.

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2 years 10 months ago #50141 by Anne
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I think I found all the missing tags... GRRR!
As for more of Kelly? I don't know, Like all characters I write it is hard to not want to follow her more... but at the same time I had no plan for her other than the scene that I started with and even that was more of a reaction to Haunted than something I planned to write...
Then again if I revealed my blog, you might see where I discuss being a discovery writer. I never have learned to really pre-plot my stories. I just write them as I discover them. That makes writing true endings hard. Then again, having read somewhere in the neighborhood of 50,000 novels I would say that there is no story I've ever read that I didn't want to see more of the characters. At least the ones I finished. I've run into maybe half a dozen or so that just didn't catch my attention or as we discussed here in the case of War and Peace somewhere in the middle the continuity was broken and I found the remainder to disjointed to get caught up in.

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2 years 10 months ago #50146 by Wavehead
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I got so caught up in Kelly I was imagining myself running around on 4 legs :)
My only disappointment was when the story finished :-? There could be a whole string of adventures starting from this beginning :) If your muse gets excited :woohoo:

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2 years 10 months ago #50151 by Anne
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Keep watching, such a thing might occur! More tails of Kelly that is!

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2 years 10 months ago #50161 by Nagrij
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I approve this message.

Oh, and the tale. Go nuts. I have to admit to being a little flattered, actually.

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2 years 10 months ago #50237 by Anne
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Another part has been put up to discuss!
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