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2 years 10 months ago #50245 by Rose Bunny
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Hm... heading to Whateley. that's interesting. Having her being drawn that direction already. If she has interactions with the local weres there, it could be cool. I know she's not a true were tho. Could have some potential for interaction with Pounce. That would be very cool. and of course we can talk about a loan of some of my characters.

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2 years 10 months ago #50281 by Wavehead
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Great Story :) when’s part 3 coming out “makes eager panting noise” 8P
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2 years 10 months ago #50282 by Anne
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Well.... I have a title for it, but not much more. I'm plotting it in my head now, so when I feel it is urgent I'll get started on the body of the work. This one increased the size of the whole by about 50% but I doubt the next one will be that large of an increase. If this follows my usual pattern I will add between 3-5000 words...

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2 years 10 months ago #50364 by Mister D
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Nice intro to Whateley.

Looking forward to see where you take this next.


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2 years 10 months ago #50424 by Wrayth
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good story, keep working it. I didn't notice any misspellings or major grammar problems, but I wasn't really looking, lol. A fairly safe guess for where the next chapter might go... roadtrip? But that is just a guess. Again keep it going, your tale is an enjoyable read and I look forward to more.

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2 years 10 months ago #50759 by Anne
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A new post should come out this week. I just sent off to Elrod, hoping to figure out the best way to correspond with him on this. I have ~3000 more words added to the story... Hard to tell when using my WP counts html tags as words...
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2 years 10 months ago #50961 by Wavehead
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Any news yet 8P

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2 years 10 months ago #50964 by Anne
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I'm sort of waiting on Elrod to give me the thumbs up on the next part.
That doesn't mean I've stopped writing, just that I'm waiting to publish. In fact I've almost got two parts finished now...

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2 years 9 months ago #51001 by Anne
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I've posted another part of this. I don't think that I've done anything objectionable, but if so I'll pull it down.

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2 years 9 months ago #51004 by Mister D
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Nicely chewy reading.

It's interesting to see the perspective of an Avatar who has almost been over-powered by the spirit that's too large for the Hallow.

It'll also be interesting to see what Kayda makes of Coyote turning up again...

Looking forward to the next part.


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