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2 years 9 months ago #51008 by Darkmuse
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It's good stuff. This is Coyote so I'm thinking that this is not just a straightforward Avatar tale...

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2 years 9 months ago #51009 by null0trooper
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Mister D wrote: Nicely chewy reading.

It's interesting to see the perspective of an Avatar who has almost been over-powered by the spirit that's too large for the Hallow.

It'll also be interesting to see what Kayda makes of Coyote turning up again...

Looking forward to the next part.


It could a coyote spirit, or even one tribe's Coyote, but not The Coyote. The latter two options love to shape-shift, so YMMV.

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2 years 9 months ago #51016 by Anne
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As she said, Coyote is coyote! And Coyote will be coyote!
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2 years 9 months ago #51038 by Wavehead
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I’m Really enjoying this story Anne, it’s different from the majority of stories in the WA Universe and the currently stuck in spirit form makes for some interesting dialogue. So part 4 is coming out soon I hope :)

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2 years 9 months ago #51040 by Anne
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I can say that I have been writing on another part, when it will be done I'm not certain of!
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2 years 9 months ago #51074 by Anne
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Part 4 is up! I gave up putting the fin at the end of these, I'd like comments on anything technical, police, or magic related to the universe that I have bent, folded, spindled, or mutilated...

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2 years 9 months ago #51108 by Mister D
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Anne wrote: As she said, Coyote is coyote! And Coyote will be coyote!


And not a dead goose lying by the edge of a lake...?


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2 years 9 months ago #51110 by Anne
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Well Coyote is somewhat analogous to Loki, but no, unless Coyote wants you to think you saw a dead goose, then Coyote will not be a dead goose...

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2 years 9 months ago #51352 by Anne
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I just sent part 5 of this off to elrod for review. I do hope he gets back to me soon with his take, so you all can enjoy it!
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2 years 9 months ago #51390 by Wavehead
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Eagerly awaiting next episode 8P

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