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Parallels, official feedbacks n stuff thread

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9 months 1 week ago - 8 months 3 weeks ago #67232 by JulesMorrison
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This is for my "non-canon unashamedly self-insert Mary-so-sue-me Whateley Academy tale", Parallels.

Table of contents, this will be updated as I add parts:

Please feel free to give any critique, feedback, feelings, fan-thoughts, not-a-fan thoughts...
Last Edit: 8 months 3 weeks ago by JulesMorrison. Reason: Oops! Forgot the TOC. This will be my last edit on this thread. Enjoy!

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9 months 1 week ago #67234 by null0trooper
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JulesMorrison wrote: But silence seems to be the order of the day for most posts there so okay, I'll go make a Project Discussion post...


Isn't that usually the order of the day until a project gets more engagement?

I've only read part of the way through, so, yeah.:huh:

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9 months 1 week ago #67235 by JulesMorrison
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When I say "silence", I'm meaning, looking down the posts and it's 0 replies, 0 replies... and not just for mine so it looks like nobody replies there? I'm new enough here I don't know the conventions of what goes where.

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9 months 1 week ago #67236 by null0trooper
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I wouldn't say it's zero replies down the line:
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At the moment, we have "Total users online: 10 Members and 866 Guests Online"

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"The Misfits" and "If I Had A Hammer" usually averaged 100-200 views per weekly update when they were active.

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9 months 1 week ago - 9 months 1 week ago #67237 by JulesMorrison
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In the fabrication lab, I meant!

Sorry if I was confusing there.
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9 months 1 week ago - 9 months 1 week ago #67238 by null0trooper
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JulesMorrison wrote: In the fabrication lab, I meant!

Sorry if I was confusing there.


There are no replies there because there's a box at the top of the page that reads:
"Posting rules: Only the AUTHOR of a given story project is permitted to post here."

Edit: So if there's only one part posted, there should be no replies.

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9 months 1 week ago #67239 by JulesMorrison
JulesMorrison replied the topic: Parallels, official feedbacks n stuff thread
Ya, I finally figured that.

There's enough ambiguity between "only the author is allowed to make a top level post" and "only the author is allowed to post or reply to a post" that I misread it as the former to begin with.

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9 months 1 week ago - 9 months 1 week ago #67240 by Malady
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So, reposting my spec:

Malady wrote: Ah! Interesting.

Betting she's dumped in 'cause some Alien Space Bat wants to mess with the Whateleyverse.

Or you just want a personal SI Slice of Life Fanfic.

Either or.


Lucky for Parallel, getting caught and contained by the one entity that'd do it well, etc.

Expecting more AU people shot in to try and mess things up.

This is apparently not a Merchant-based story, 'cause, well, no Merchant.
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9 months 1 week ago #67243 by JulesMorrison
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It isn't her only bit of implausible luck. She gets burn out in a world that doesn't support the existence of mutants, and teleports across realities to one that does, to the one place where her abilities could be nurtured, to a point in the timeline she knows, into a snowdrift that will slow her explosive fever to something regeneration can remake into a body that suits her and will fit in at the school, smack dab into the path of Sara out on a nocturnal wander.

Admittedly this is her luck power running at a high scream in unusual circumstances.

The story is based on what I've read so far, original canon gen 1 up to about Easter. But suggestions for influences to merge in will be gratefully considered :-D

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9 months 1 week ago - 9 months 1 week ago #67244 by Malady
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Wow, that's a lotta luck. Usually that leads to a bad luck backlash after, but maybe her luck tank is really big.

Or taking some from her parallels.

Had thoughts of one trying to kill her to stop the bad luck.
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