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9 months 4 weeks ago #67618 by JulesMorrison
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She probably figures that Parallel is using a different kind of replication, no nano involved. But she's also relatively easy to persuade it's a bad idea so perhaps she realised that explaining this loophole to Carson after the tunnels got overrun by a prototype would not go well.

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9 months 4 weeks ago #67620 by Mister D
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Any time you see a rule introduced, think of the story behind why that is... :D


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9 months 4 weeks ago #67621 by JulesMorrison
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9 months 3 weeks ago #67650 by JulesMorrison
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Part eight , a quiet interlude with parkour and a hacienda.

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9 months 3 weeks ago #67656 by JulesMorrison
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Part nine , a conversation with the headmistress.

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9 months 3 weeks ago #67726 by JulesMorrison
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Part ten , with introspection and piratical music.

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9 months 3 weeks ago #67735 by mhalpern
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That bone trick might be more risky than working with blood...

Any Bad Ideas I have and microscene OC character stories are freely adoptable.

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9 months 2 weeks ago #67739 by JulesMorrison
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She can vanish it as quickly as she made it, and that helps, but it'd be dangerous if anyone managed to sneakily steal some.

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9 months 2 weeks ago #67755 by JulesMorrison
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Part eleven , meditation and GOOs.
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9 months 2 weeks ago #67760 by Mister D
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Nice approach towards becoming un-human. :D


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