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3 months 2 weeks ago #69199 by JulesMorrison
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Part seventy one , Ayla and secrets

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3 months 2 weeks ago #69216 by JulesMorrison
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Part seventy two , Tansy and singing

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3 months 2 weeks ago #69222 by JulesMorrison
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Part seventy three , Mostly mages

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3 months 1 week ago #69237 by JulesMorrison
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Part seventy four , dinner and Poe

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3 months 1 week ago #69242 by Mister D
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It's a shame that the events in these stories didn't take place before Parent's Day.

It would be one way of getting Parallel in closer proximity to the parent's of the students who aren't out.

As proximity has an effect on how strongly people are influenced by Parallel's powers, it would have been an easier way of affecting the parents without it being classed as mind control...

Chewy issues. :D


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3 months 1 week ago #69243 by JulesMorrison
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Such sneaky-sneaky plans have begun many a career into villainhood. A thing doesn't become legal just because it's well hidden :-p
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3 months 1 week ago #69261 by JulesMorrison
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Part seventy five , choice and song

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3 months 1 week ago #69268 by JulesMorrison
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Part seventy six , lifeboating Cat

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3 months 1 week ago #69273 by JulesMorrison
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Part seventy seven , breakfast, Head and Donna

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3 months 5 days ago #69287 by JulesMorrison
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Part seventy eight , tea and visiting

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