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8 months 1 week ago #69289 by JulesMorrison
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Part seventy nine , Necromancer's end

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8 months 5 days ago #69300 by JulesMorrison
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Part eighty , Paige is missing

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8 months 5 days ago - 8 months 5 days ago #69304 by Mylian
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Render unto Paige what is Paige's yes, but even more so render unto Carson what is Carson's. Because someone. Is fucking. With her school. On top of that, neutrality has well and truly been violated. Powers on both sides of the fence are going to be coming swiftly for whoever is behind this to Make An Example Of Them to show that Whateley is not a candy bowl full of powered children free for the taking. Their reckoning will be the stuff of legend. There is no hole this person can hide in now that will save them.
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8 months 3 days ago #69319 by JulesMorrison
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Part eighty one , visitors and dreams

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1 month 4 days ago #69396 by JulesMorrison
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There is a gap above this at present due to DB crash, but please enjoy Part one hundred and fourteen , the conclusion of the hearing, and meeting Mr Lodgeman

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3 weeks 6 days ago #69441 by JulesMorrison
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Part one hundred and fifteen , Lodgeman, Donna, and Bunny

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3 weeks 6 days ago #69445 by JulesMorrison
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Part one hundred and sixteen , Cecilia, and a plan for after lunch

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2 weeks 2 days ago #69512 by JulesMorrison
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Part one hundred and seventeen , Fun in Sara's room, picking up a sword, and trouble in combat movement

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4 days 18 hours ago #69550 by JulesMorrison
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Part one hundred and eighteen , Molly, Vamp, Doc Bellows, and Jadis

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