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Interlaced, official feedbacks n stuff thread

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3 weeks 3 days ago #69567 by JulesMorrison
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Part eighty eight , clean-up and song

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3 weeks 3 days ago #69570 by mhalpern
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Stopping a hyper velocity kinetic energy weapon is a whole other kind of message.

Any Bad Ideas I have and microscene OC character stories are freely adoptable.

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3 weeks 2 days ago #69576 by JulesMorrison
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Eyebrows will certainly be raised among the military types tasked to review this... incident.

She was looking for a rating of "too terrifying to mess with" and she may have achieved it.

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3 weeks 11 hours ago #69582 by JulesMorrison
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Part eighty nine , recovery and rest

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2 weeks 6 days ago #69588 by JulesMorrison
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Part ninety , morning, Tai Chi, Paige, and Tansy

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2 weeks 5 days ago #69597 by JulesMorrison
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Part ninety one , Tansy has a change of heart

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2 weeks 5 days ago #69598 by Mylian
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Of course the Don is going to force a psychic ethics examination of Tansy. It won't be all he does, but he'd be wasting a free move if he didn't.
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2 weeks 3 days ago #69605 by JulesMorrison
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Part ninety two , Kimba conversation and Carstaires.

And yes, obvious next free move is obvious. And likely only the start of his pending nefariousness. Mwahaha!

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2 weeks 10 hours ago #69625 by JulesMorrison
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Part ninety three , mostly lessons

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1 week 4 days ago #69646 by JulesMorrison
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Part ninety four , Tansy and studying

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