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1 month 3 weeks ago #69647 by Mylian
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"The sun is extremely hot out there, and the shadows are very cold."

Not quite as cold as one might think, given that vacuum is an insulator. If you don't radiate more heat than you produce, you'll cook even in shadow. Which is why actual long-term spacecraft like the shuttle and ISS tend to be painted white or have metallic surfaces, you want a high albedo.

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1 month 3 weeks ago #69676 by JulesMorrison
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Probably less of an issue for a human in regular clothes, surrounded by an air bubble that's held in by artificial g-forces rather than walls. Humans radiate fairly effectively. She is creating a spell with high albedo though, and not worrying about freezing. Her blood-sugar creation and dial-up-able body thermostat make cold mostly moot, so long as she doesn't try to swim in nitrogen or something.

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1 month 3 weeks ago #69678 by JulesMorrison
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Part ninety five , secrets come out.

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1 month 3 weeks ago #69691 by JulesMorrison
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Part ninety six , regrets and repairs

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1 month 2 weeks ago #69729 by JulesMorrison
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Part ninety seven , feelings and idiots

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1 month 1 week ago #69796 by JulesMorrison
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Part ninety eight , meeting Monkey

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1 month 3 days ago #69856 by JulesMorrison
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Part ninety nine , dinnertime discussions

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2 weeks 6 days ago #69984 by JulesMorrison
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Part one hundred , talking to the Head

This one has taken me a very long time because I've been fighting an awful migraine, sorry. It's a little longer than normal, I hope you enjoy.

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2 weeks 1 day ago #70063 by JulesMorrison
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Part one hundred and one , breakfast and conversations

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1 week 5 days ago #70081 by JulesMorrison
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Part one hundred and two , the battle of Hekate's circle

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