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1 month 4 days ago #67822 by JulesMorrison
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Part twelve , powers creep and a fighting lesson.
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1 month 3 days ago #67844 by JulesMorrison
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Part thirteen , ogling and breakfast
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1 month 3 days ago #67846 by Mister D
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Try to think like, you're not moving your body. You're moving your intent, and your body is flowing along effortlessly.


Excellent description. :D


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1 month 2 days ago #67852 by JulesMorrison
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Part fourteen , tentacles, necromancy, and Tolman
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4 weeks 2 days ago #67877 by JulesMorrison
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grumble grumble Fricken Winter term. I've made a mistake in my timeline and there's no easy way to repair it now - classes don't actually start until Tuesday. Meh. I'll just let the mistake stand. frustrated sigh

Which means some things that happen on Wednesday in canon are gonna get pulled to Monday in my story. Hrmph. Sorry.

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4 weeks 2 days ago #67881 by JulesMorrison
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Part fifteen , lunch and escape class

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4 weeks 17 hours ago #67904 by JulesMorrison
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Part sixteen , Aquerna, codebreaking and Englund

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4 weeks 4 hours ago #67905 by mhalpern
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JulesMorrison wrote: Part sixteen , Aquerna, codebreaking and Englund


Yeah hopefully Jules "nopes" this one

Any Bad Ideas I have and microscene OC character stories are freely adoptable.

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3 weeks 6 days ago #67909 by JulesMorrison
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Part seventeen , oath, Jade, and itch

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3 weeks 6 days ago #67912 by JulesMorrison
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Part eighteen , sewers, dance and hatching

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