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9 months 4 days ago #67918 by JulesMorrison
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Part nineteen , Carson, Gothmog, weres, news and Sara
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9 months 4 days ago #67919 by mhalpern
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JulesMorrison wrote: Part nineteen , Carson, Gothmog, weres, news and Sara


Does she realize the implications yet that the new rune is almost certainly a major part of her name, and as it becomes known, it will be easier for people to figure out how to summon her, than it would be to do so for other GOO, If she hasn't Circe almost certainly has, and likely will make that part of her detention, nothing is without its price.

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9 months 3 days ago #67920 by JulesMorrison
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It probably does help summoning her. But then, Sara and Gothmog have well known "domains" too. Parallel just has a brand spanking new one.

As I understand it, there's two levels to being summoned. One, as a bargainer - constrained by Solomon's rules to drive a hard bargain, but free to say yes or no. And the other, as a do-as-ordered slave - but only if someone cracks the whole of their True Name.

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9 months 3 days ago #67925 by Mister D
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JulesMorrison wrote: It probably does help summoning her. But then, Sara and Gothmog have well known "domains" too. Parallel just has a brand spanking new one.

As I understand it, there's two levels to being summoned. One, as a bargainer - constrained by Solomon's rules to drive a hard bargain, but free to say yes or no. And the other, as a do-as-ordered slave - but only if someone cracks the whole of their True Name.


As she's originally from outside the WA universe, is she constrained by Solomon's rules?


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9 months 3 days ago - 9 months 3 days ago #67942 by JulesMorrison
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Mister D wrote: As she's originally from outside the WA universe, is she constrained by Solomon's rules?

Yes, a cross-universe teleport is essentially a mapping operation from one set of fundamental laws to another, you have to exist in this universe's rules to exist in this universe. Also her GOO nature was sparked in Whateley.
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9 months 2 days ago #67949 by Mister D
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JulesMorrison wrote:

Mister D wrote: As she's originally from outside the WA universe, is she constrained by Solomon's rules?

Yes, a cross-universe teleport is essentially a mapping operation from one set of fundamental laws to another, you have to exist in this universe's rules to exist in this universe. Also her GOO nature was sparked in Whateley.


Nice structural rationale. :D

I vaguely remember reading about some form of spiritual-entity/psychic-structure/magic-based-sapient, that was not subject to Solomon's Bargain, but i don't remember if it was fanfic or Canon, so i'm probably wrong.


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9 months 23 hours ago #67963 by JulesMorrison
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Part twenty plans, angels, demons, and a haircut

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8 months 4 weeks ago #67987 by JulesMorrison
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Part twenty one , lunch, rumours, babies, and trouble
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8 months 3 weeks ago #68033 by JulesMorrison
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Part twenty two , Doc Bellows and combat movement

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8 months 2 weeks ago #68050 by JulesMorrison
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Part twenty three , powers re-test

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