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7 months 1 week ago #68089 by JulesMorrison
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Part twenty four , bouncing and Circe

This one fought me a bit, but I got there!
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7 months 4 days ago #68148 by JulesMorrison
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Part twenty five , big me and changes
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7 months 4 days ago #68153 by Mister D
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Nice interpretation of the human vs. un-human perspectives on reality. :D

Looking forward to your future work. :D


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7 months 1 day ago #68173 by JulesMorrison
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Part twenty six , Kimbas, Counterpoint, and teeth

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6 months 3 weeks ago #68263 by JulesMorrison
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Part twenty seven , dreams, secrets, and sex

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6 months 2 weeks ago #68283 by JulesMorrison
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Part twenty eight , play and baby.

This one does get its own content note. Includes forceful sex (with consent) and selfcest. Smut level: intense. Have fun and enjoy!

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6 months 2 weeks ago #68293 by JulesMorrison
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Part twenty nine , tai chi and busted
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6 months 4 days ago #68430 by JulesMorrison
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Part thirty , Tolman and fighting.

Sorry for the delay! I blame the world falling upside down. This one was hard to write, I hope the next will be easier.
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6 months 4 days ago #68438 by mhalpern
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a fun addition

Any Bad Ideas I have and microscene OC character stories are freely adoptable.

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5 months 4 weeks ago #68498 by JulesMorrison
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Part thirty one , Petra and healing

In which I start to bend things even further away from canon, mwahaha.

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