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4 months 1 week ago #68861 by JulesMorrison
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Part fifty five , several kinds of unexpected company
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4 months 1 week ago #68875 by JulesMorrison
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Part fifty six , meeting Mrs Goat

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4 months 1 week ago #68909 by JulesMorrison
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Part fifty seven , Journeyman's class

This one, I'm doing something a bit cheeky - reprising an existing scene, but from a different perspective, with one extra person in the scene, and with a timeline that flows between altered and unchanged. Playing with how time heals small rifts, but larger divergences grow. A lot of dialogue is borrowed, but even the borrowed bits change subtly.

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4 months 1 week ago #68921 by JulesMorrison
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Something new! I got a sketch of Sara and Parallel by overshia.

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4 months 6 days ago #68957 by JulesMorrison
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Part fifty eight , cuffs, Dyffud, and comms
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4 months 1 day ago #68991 by JulesMorrison
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Part fifty nine Englund and cryptids

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4 months 21 hours ago #68994 by mhalpern
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Hmm I wonder what more reliable (working for less religious people) method Jules will propose.

Any Bad Ideas I have and microscene OC character stories are freely adoptable.

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4 months 16 hours ago #68998 by JulesMorrison
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It was "off camera" but Englund discussed a few other methods, such as magical banishment. As for whether his method would work equally well for other religious people - well, let's just say that "your faith was not sufficient" is a very convenient justification.

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4 months 14 minutes ago #69004 by JulesMorrison
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Part sixty Assembly and after

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3 months 4 weeks ago #69027 by JulesMorrison
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Part sixty one , Jade, library and stars

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