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The Nefarious Three

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2 months 2 weeks ago #66086 by CrazyMinh
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Seriously. Either that was the most chaotic story there has ever been in this universe, or it was the hardest story to follow that has ever been written for this universe.

...I mean...it was like my brain went on a frakking rollercoaster. It was insane with the amount of plot that went into the story.

It was good, but a little jumbled in places. It wasn't disjointed, but it was more chaotic than even the most crazy Whateley stories.

Well...done?

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2 months 2 weeks ago - 2 months 2 weeks ago #66088 by null0trooper
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CrazyMinh wrote: ...I mean...it was like my brain went on a frakking rollercoaster. It was insane with the amount of plot that went into the story.


Stories, including paranormal mystery capers, are supposed to have plots. It's almost a requirement for plot-driven stories.

CrazyMinh wrote: It was good, but a little jumbled in places. It wasn't disjointed, but it was more chaotic than even the most crazy Whateley stories.


Minh, the kindest thing I can say to that is that you missed the point of conveying the protagonists' confusion - as events go horribly wrong - to the reader. In fact, I'd say the narrative was far more straightforward, even linear, than you've been able to recognize.



Also, there are definitely a number of ideas worth appropriating once the serial numbers are filed off.

Forum-posted ideas are freely adoptable.

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2 months 2 weeks ago - 2 months 2 weeks ago #66094 by Malady
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Yeah, the descriptions has everything clear.

If this were a movie from Slim's POV, it'd likely be a mess.

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Betting Slim takes over Ulrike's body.

And Doc gets a copy of Dodger's body.

How did Ulrike know how to rip items from Slim's Pocket?
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2 months 2 weeks ago #66095 by null0trooper
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Malady wrote: How did Ulrike know how to rip items from Slim's Pocket?


Maybe Ulrike has rumbled with the Dodger before, and knows something about her/their powers?

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2 months 2 weeks ago #66099 by Mister D
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Malady wrote: How did Ulrike know how to rip items from Slim's Pocket?


Maybe Ulrike has rumbled with the Dodger before, and knows something about her/their powers?


Since the story isn't complete yet, we'll have to wait, but Bek is usually good at denouement's that cover all of the bases.

Waiting for the rabbits... :D


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2 months 2 weeks ago #66123 by Cryptic
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Malady wrote: Yeah, the descriptions has everything clear.

If this were a movie from Slim's POV, it'd likely be a mess.

So, directed by Michael Bay?

Hmm, so Dodger is new... cool. Maybe we'll see her in a Gen2 Year2 story. -gives Bek the Jade puppy dog eyes-

It boggles my mind that the sack of flab is a successful if not semi-competent supervillain.

that reminds me Sli's attitude about AI makes me want to check out the latest Sigma Force novel. And figure out how to fold a Sigma Force knock off into the WU.

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2 months 2 weeks ago #66124 by Rose Bunny
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Malady wrote: Yeah, the descriptions has everything clear.

If this were a movie from Slim's POV, it'd likely be a mess.

...

Betting Slim takes over Ulrike's body.

And Doc gets a copy of Dodger's body.

How did Ulrike know how to rip items from Slim's Pocket?


It's too obvious for the two spare bodies to end up with Doc and Slim in them after the big magical and technological chaos makes everything go smoosh, but that may happen. It's not so much fun to end up nearly identical to someone, unless they are a relative.

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2 months 2 weeks ago #66127 by CrazyMinh
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CrazyMinh wrote: ...I mean...it was like my brain went on a frakking rollercoaster. It was insane with the amount of plot that went into the story.


Stories, including paranormal mystery capers, are supposed to have plots. It's almost a requirement for plot-driven stories.


I do know that. I was trying to be funny.

CrazyMinh wrote: It was good, but a little jumbled in places. It wasn't disjointed, but it was more chaotic than even the most crazy Whateley stories.


Minh, the kindest thing I can say to that is that you missed the point of conveying the protagonists' confusion - as events go horribly wrong - to the reader. In fact, I'd say the narrative was far more straightforward, even linear, than you've been able to recognize.

Also, there are definitely a number of ideas worth appropriating once the serial numbers are filed off.


I was also trying to be funny.

I guess my humour fell flat there.

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2 months 2 weeks ago #66148 by Wavehead
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When I first started to read Whateley stories many moons ago, I found it challenging to understand Bek’s stories but I persevered :)
Now I really enjoy untangling the “Webs of Intrigue” that Bek writes B)

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2 months 5 days ago #66311 by Dreamer
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And the third and final part of this fun, chaotic story is here. It is a wild ride once again, so read, enjoy, and please comment.

Thank You for story comments appreciated and help me know me they are being read and liked. :-) Note: My story comments can't nor are trying to replace reading the stories, simply my way of enjoying them and letting the authors know I enjoy them.

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