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The Nefarious Three

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2 months 2 weeks ago #66314 by Dreamer
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2 months 2 weeks ago #66320 by Mister D
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Very Bek. :D

Nice round-off, and set-up for the next adventure. :D

Looking forward to the next episode of Slim, Wheels and Doc. :D


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2 months 2 weeks ago #66322 by null0trooper
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Mister D wrote: Looking forward to the next episode of Slim, Wheels and Doc. :D


Whateley Universe Boston needs a Bek-penned Mother, Jugs, and Speed. I'd like to know if the mayhem only doubles, or if it is squared.

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2 months 2 weeks ago #66325 by joreymay
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“We’re on North Broadway!” Doc said, looking around. “Why would Belpho target his mass driver to deliver us to such a wide open landing spot?”

“He didn’t!” Wheels sneered. “We probably would have gone another block, if SOMEONE hadn’t weighed us down with 200 pounds of extra weight!” She gave Doc, who was almost buried in boxes, a dirty look.


Given his weight, and the variables such as what he's wearing, how many passengers, what else he's taking with him, that doesn't sound right. More likely, a quick calibration for weight would be part of the prelaunch sequence. Of course, that leaves Doc's question wide open again.

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2 months 2 weeks ago #66327 by null0trooper
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joreymay wrote:

“We’re on North Broadway!” Doc said, looking around. “Why would Belpho target his mass driver to deliver us to such a wide open landing spot?”

“He didn’t!” Wheels sneered. “We probably would have gone another block, if SOMEONE hadn’t weighed us down with 200 pounds of extra weight!” She gave Doc, who was almost buried in boxes, a dirty look.


Given his weight, and the variables such as what he's wearing, how many passengers, what else he's taking with him, that doesn't sound right. More likely, a quick calibration for weight would be part of the prelaunch sequence. Of course, that leaves Doc's question wide open again.


Now that you mention it, incorporating a strain gage into the vehicle's struts/shock absorbers would be good for getting the vehicle's gross weight and to identify unbalanced loading.

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2 months 2 weeks ago - 2 months 2 weeks ago #66332 by Malady
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Did not expect the POVs we got.

Slim X Blue Comet still gonna be a thing??
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2 months 2 weeks ago #66337 by Kettlekorn
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joreymay wrote:

“We’re on North Broadway!” Doc said, looking around. “Why would Belpho target his mass driver to deliver us to such a wide open landing spot?”

“He didn’t!” Wheels sneered. “We probably would have gone another block, if SOMEONE hadn’t weighed us down with 200 pounds of extra weight!” She gave Doc, who was almost buried in boxes, a dirty look.


Given his weight, and the variables such as what he's wearing, how many passengers, what else he's taking with him, that doesn't sound right. More likely, a quick calibration for weight would be part of the prelaunch sequence. Of course, that leaves Doc's question wide open again.

Hell, with three women and 200 lbs of loot the car is probably underweight compared to three women and Belphegor. Of course, we don't know that the loot only weighed 200 lbs; that was just Wheels pulling a number out of her ass. Maybe it's a lot heavier than that.

My guess is that it landed right where Belfegor wanted it to land. He's got plenty of tricks tucked up that car's fenders to deal with escaping once he's on the ground, so he'd have preferred safe landing zones over secluded landing zones.

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2 months 2 weeks ago #66424 by Hardric
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I would have liked going back to these things sooner, but he, I still get to come back to a Bek fic. Just the last part rather than the first. C&C, onwards!

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Feels good to post that... Hopefully next can be actually done too.
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