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Scald-Crow 1: The Rocky Road to Whateley

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6 days 23 hours ago #67183 by DanZilla
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6 days 22 hours ago #67187 by Malady
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Given that hunter in the background, I expected more danger than there was. Like possessing the Principal or something. The way she was described made her seem more dangerous than she was. Yeah, she got Grainne expelled, but didn't just manifest a killer spirit and try to slay her.

Nice first part of the intro! Getting her cleanly split from her hometown, for a smooth transfer to Whateley and stuff!

And given the title, she is actually gonna get to Whateley.

Hmm... Formal arrested, so Red Carded and dropped off like Claude or some of the other Gen2 Juvie kids or whatever?

Hoping that the MCO agents are putting up a facade, and are actually on the up and up...

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I'm surprised that Goodkind money is spent on local politics, or is it filtered through some organizations instead of donated directly?

Shipping with Sophia or John, 'cause they're the only viable candidates. Leaning on Sophia 'cause as another mutant, they can be at Whateley together!

Was afraid that Sophia was gonna try and exorcise Morrigan out, after she saw her the first time, but thankfully not!
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6 days 22 hours ago - 6 days 22 hours ago #67188 by mhalpern
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Character witnesses on the alleged victims?

Edit of course if she escapes after the local MCO tries to disapear her they could be tried with kidnapping, especially if it is after a scheduled court appearance and it is clear in how she escapes that she was still in their custody at the time, that shit gets it kicked up to state, and there are plenty waiting to nail the MCO, and they are in Miles Wylann's (Absinthe's father's) territory

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6 days 22 hours ago - 6 days 22 hours ago #67189 by ShadowedSin
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Lol. You guys are onto some stuff. But a few points are off.

The school is charging her as the attacker, since it's the varsity squad's word against hers. The MCO sees no point in investigating since Fairchild called them.

There are several very rich families in Whatcom, many are Uber conservative.

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6 days 20 hours ago - 6 days 20 hours ago #67190 by Court
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I was curious, and so googled The Rocky Road to Dublin, and youtube popped up a video by The Dubliners that was utterly incomprehensible. After that, though, it gave an arrangement by The High Kings, which was very good indeed. I posted a link in the Song-Links thread.
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6 days 20 hours ago #67192 by mhalpern
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ShadowedSin wrote: Lol. You guys are onto some stuff. But a few points are off.

The school is charging her as the attacker, since it's the varsity squad's word against hers. The MCO sees no point in investigating since Fairchild called them.

There are several very rich families in Whatcom, many are Uber conservative.



OHH THAT is golden, the burden of proof is on the state, by refusing to investigate, all the defense needs is to draw suspicion on the witnesses for the prosecution, all you need to do is get them to admit to their usual behavior, shouldn't be hard for a decent lawyer as they are teens that wouldn't recognize what they are being asked in cross examination, the other route is catching them in a lie, which can invalidate their testimony, a good lawyer will do both.

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6 days 19 hours ago - 6 days 19 hours ago #67193 by ShadowedSin
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mhalpern wrote:

ShadowedSin wrote: Lol. You guys are onto some stuff. But a few points are off.

The school is charging her as the attacker, since it's the varsity squad's word against hers. The MCO sees no point in investigating since Fairchild called them.

There are several very rich families in Whatcom, many are Uber conservative.



OHH THAT is golden, the burden of proof is on the state, by refusing to investigate, all the defense needs is to draw suspicion on the witnesses for the prosecution, all you need to do is get them to admit to their usual behavior, shouldn't be hard for a decent lawyer as they are teens that wouldn't recognize what they are being asked in cross examination, the other route is catching them in a lie, which can invalidate their testimony, a good lawyer will do both.


My dear fellow, look up Gerald Jameson.

Court wrote: I was curious, and so googled The Rocky Road to Dublin, and youtube popped up a video by The Dubliners that was utterly incomprehensible. After that, though, it gave an arrangement by The High Kings, which was very good indeed. I posted a link in the Song-Links thread.


The Kings of Connaught have a good one. I can easily understand the Dubliners. Then again, I lived in Ireland for a summer.

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6 days 19 hours ago #67195 by null0trooper
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ShadowedSin wrote: The Kings of Connaught have a good one. I can easily understand the Dubliners. Then again, I lived in Ireland for a summer.


I'm fond of The Pogues' "Medley" ( The Recruiting Sergeant / Rocky Road To Dublin / The Galway Races )

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6 days 18 hours ago #67196 by Dreamer
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6 days 18 hours ago #67199 by ShadowedSin
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Oh Gods, I'm geeking out so much from having Morpheus post thoughts on my story *Fangirls hard*!

That being said, all of your thoughts on this -one- part are seriously sparking ideas. I'm about done with part 3, I need to polish off scene 2. And I'll be ready to tear into Scald 2.

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