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1 year 1 month ago #64994 by null0trooper
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Malady wrote: Well, Tako doesn't have Octopus GSD... But then the question is, "What *does* he have?"


A killer version of "Puttin' On The Ritz".

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1 year 1 month ago #64996 by Sir Lee
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It's all about the tentacles. The boy should have taken "Hentai" as a codename.

Don't call me "Shirley." You will surely make me surly.

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1 year 1 month ago #64998 by Astrodragon
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Hey, tentacles need love too!

I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.

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1 year 1 month ago - 1 year 1 month ago #65001 by Schol-R-LEA
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Sir Lee wrote: It's all about the tentacles. The boy should have taken "Hentai" as a codename.


That was his first choice, actually. I wonder why it was rejected...

Yeah, I figured that the class of 2022 would need its own version of Peeper... or in this case, perhaps should I say, their version of Grapejuice.

(I still need to watch that series, but that may be a long time in coming still. The main reason I haven't is my money problems - I am using my phone hotspot for Internet as I can't afford a proper cable or DSL connection, and even the monthly sub for Crunchyroll would be a bank breaker. I've seen endless clips - albeit with constant stutter and buffering - and read a fair amount about the characters, but I haven't actually seen any full episodes.)

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1 year 1 month ago - 1 year 1 month ago #65002 by Schol-R-LEA
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Malady wrote: So, I guess Tako is presumably the guy from the same city as Emi?

How many Japanese kids are at Whateley? Or is it just that they're lucky / unlucky to both be JH kids from the same city in Japan?


OK, I probably dropped the ball on that one; in retrospect, I should have been even more evil and made the two of them twins, just to ensure that Emi never escapes from this torment. :twisted:

I'm still not sure what name to give him, but looking some up I found one that seems the perfect one for punny alliteration: Eiichi . Other appropriate options include 'Tatsuo' (that might be a little too appropriate, actually... :ohmy: :sick: ), 'Toshio' (as in the manga-ka responsible for the previous work and similar, who more or less created the whole Naughty Tentacles trope single-handedly - wait, that came out a little too right), 'Ataru' (hey, Urusei Yatsura is a classic), 'Minoru' (had to get Mineta in there somewhere), 'Ryo' (as in Saeba), 'Sanji' (OK, I don't really know One Piece, but I've heard about the character), 'Takuma' (because we also needed a Shimoneta call-out somehow), or 'Issei' (I had to look that one up, but the clothes-eating slime thing fits). It's just a shame we don't know the given names of Jiraiya, Happosai, or Master Roshi...

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1 year 1 month ago - 1 year 1 month ago #65003 by Sir Lee
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Well, since he deceived someone into getting a bad codename... what about the admin choosing, as a form of punishment, a bad codename for him? "Happosai" comes to mind...

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1 year 1 month ago - 1 year 1 month ago #65006 by Schol-R-LEA
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Astrodragon wrote: Hey, tentacles need love too!


Hey, Astrodragon! I think AkiDearest has hacked your account!

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1 year 1 month ago - 1 year 1 month ago #65007 by Schol-R-LEA
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And.... I decided to go the evil route and edited it so that Eiichi (Tako) is Emi's twin brother.

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1 year 2 weeks ago #65519 by Kettlekorn
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This is an excerpt from a story I'm working on. I don't have any experience writing seduction (nor with practicing/experiencing it, for that matter). Am I doing it right? Janak is a shameless flirt, so it's fine if it's super blatant. What I'm concerned about is whether it actually makes sense, or if it comes across as weird and unnatural.

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1 year 2 weeks ago #65522 by Bek D Corbin
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It's sort of a rule, KK; those who know how to seduce are too busy doing it to bother writing down how they do it. Even Casanova was more bragging about his exploits in his memoirs than he was instructing
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