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4 years 10 months ago #1 by DanZilla
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  • EE Nalley's latest addition to the tales of Sith Lord Nyeomi Fens is available now for your reading pleasure... please leave comments if you so desire.
    4 years 10 months ago #2 by Dreamer
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    4 years 10 months ago #3 by marie7342231
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  • Wow, real punch to the gut. Nyeomi Taking a left turn and the loss of Darth Marr. A shame we never got to see his face. Perhaps that’s in honor of KOTOR. I haven’t gotten into it yet.

    Anyway a great chapter, especially the presence of Vannacen to caress her apprentice as the attack was imminent. It will all read differently on the second pass.

    Again, EE, thank you. What a gift. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
    4 years 10 months ago #4 by E. E. Nalley
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  • marie7342231 wrote: Wow, real punch to the gut. Nyeomi Taking a left turn and the loss of Darth Marr. A shame we never got to see his face. Perhaps that’s in honor of KOTOR. I haven’t gotten into it yet.


    Darth Marr has always been something of a mystery. It is rumored that he took his mask off once to express his supreme disapproval of a subordinate, who, after the interview, went home, put his affairs in order and killed himself.

    He's always been one of my favorite Sith because he isn't the usual power mad maniacal 'bad guy', and while his IS ruthless, he shows that Sith can and do have admirable qualities. He is completely loyal to the Sith Empire and its people, he overlooks failure of best effort in his own troops and in so doing, engenders a tremendous loyalty in his own followers. He is true to his word and completely honorable to his own code. He is a master class in how to write a compelling villain, in that he is a hero to his own men and side.



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    4 years 10 months ago #5 by marie7342231
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  • ::powers up Steam:: I have purchased the old Star Wars bundle for PC but haven't tried any of them except for Tie Fighter. Should I go straight to KOTOR II or give I a try? I have very little free time and I get the look of annoyance from my wife anytime I'm gaming and spending time with the 3 kids.

    Thanks!
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  • Well, if you really want to see how this period is shaped and sounds like, I recommend Star Wars: The Old Republic which is, for the most part, free to play. There are eight classes: Four Imperial, four Republic and each gives a unique perspective on the galaxy and the politics. The Classes are:
    Republic                             Sith Empire
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    Trooper                               Imperial Agent
    Smuggler                            Bounty Hunter
    Jedi Knight                         Sith Warrior
    Jedi Councilor                     Sith Inquisitor

    There's something like 80 to a hundred hours of game play IN EACH CLASS, depending on how fast you go. Then there are a number of free expansions, Galactic Starfighter which is basically this era's Tie Fighter, Rise of the Hutt Cartel, an additional expansion with two new planets, The Shadow of Revan another expansion with the addition of Yavin 4, Knights of the Fallen Empire another expansion with two new worlds, then Knights of the Eternal Throne. KOFE and KOET are both massive expansions adding about ten to twenty hours each of game play. The others also add, but are significantly smaller, usually with only a single planet and three to five hours of new story. YMMV

    You don't have to play KOTOR one or two to play SWTOR, but there are some nods you might miss otherwise. The games are excellent at being self contained and not needing external material. The newest expansion Jedi Onslaught will be out this September. One of the beauties of the game is, if you pay, there are a number of perks, but even if you only buy 1 month, every content available for that month is unlocked for you and remains unlocked even if you return to free to play.

    I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
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  • Thank you. Too bad it's not avail on Mac. Looking into the options now...
    4 years 10 months ago #8 by E. E. Nalley
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  • Part 2 of Darth Nyeomi's latest adventure is now up for your reading enjoyment!

    I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
    Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
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    4 years 10 months ago #10 by E. E. Nalley
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  • Dreamer wrote: Darn, I can't figure out which of his song she would be humming. A private suite and dang is it extremely nice. And darn it, why did Zakuul have to get essentially taken over by a power-mad emperor, would be a great place for a vacation otherwise.


    Oh, I can shed some light there, Dreamer!

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  • Dreamer wrote: Lana goes to get Bree, while the Alderaan Princess is finally underway. Bantha Piss, bwahahaha, that name for an alcoholic drink still gets me. And the Force trick for extra energy plus beer equals Nyeomi finally drifting off to sleep. I hope things keep getting better for them, especially after Nyeomi lost 10 years with her husband and children.


    I can picture Part 3 opening with "Da-ad! Mom's passed out again!"

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    4 years 10 months ago - 4 years 10 months ago #12 by Kristin Darken
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  • SWTOR may not be available on Mac, but it should run on a fairly outdated PC or even PC laptop... its not hugely intensive on system requirements... especially if you don't get involved in any large scale battles. The standalone KOTOR and KOTOR2 are old enough that you can probably find an emulator that lets you run PC software on your Mac that can handle them.

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    4 years 10 months ago #13 by marie7342231
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  • EE your writing emotes every time and I cannot but ride the waves along with Nyeomi. Thank you for the second installment. The cliffhangers are killing me hahaha
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  • If you happen to use Steam, KOTOR is available for both Mac and Windows, and KOTOR2 is also available on Linux. (Sadly, GoG only supports both games on Windows).

    Back on the topic of the story itself, I theorize that the entity behind the Eternal Empire's space fleet is none other than the Void. By definition, the Void is an eternal entity. What if Nyeomi delivered Vitiate such a setback in 'The Good Sith Triumphant' that he felt his only option was to go to the Void for support and made a deal with the proverbial devil? While he provided a biological front to the Eternal Empire, the Void would provide the muscle to back it up. For a price.

    The Void has demonstrated a distributed cognitive function that is immune to normal intercepts, similar to the Eternal Empire's space fleet. In addition, it has a significant manufacturing base that it could use to build a flotilla of the size demonstrated in part 2. This could also explain the odd decision for the Skytroopers to be brains in a jar that carry weapons. Suppose that the core of the Void was programmed with what we know as the 3 laws of robotics. As such, it wouldn't be able to directly target a sentient life form directly. However, it could sidestep this limitation by using conventional weapon systems to target anything from a motorized vehicle to a metropolis. It could also utilize a creative interpretation of the laws of robotics to justify the construction of the Skytroopers, and then direct the brains to carry out their bidding in ground combat situations.

    One other interesting observation I have is that the crime on Nyeomi's carbonite slab was 'Murderer' rather than 'Traitor'. Normally, murder is considered to be a lesser crime than treason. The fact that a lesser crime was the marker on her slab suggests that Arcann may not have considered her actions to be opposed to his goals for the eternal empire.

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  • cprime wrote: One other interesting observation I have is that the crime on Nyeomi's carbonite slab was 'Murderer' rather than 'Traitor'. Normally, murder is considered to be a lesser crime than treason. The fact that a lesser crime was the marker on her slab suggests that Arcann may not have considered her actions to be opposed to his goals for the eternal empire.


    If Arcann had survived, Nyeomi might have been a hero.

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    4 years 9 months ago #16 by E. E. Nalley
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  • Part Three is now up for your reading enjoyment!

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  • OK where and when can I see this story in animation or live action. It's just too good not to be brought to life. Maybe a graphic novel?

    EE, you have brought me fully into the worry of a mother and the anger of a sith. So good and I can imagine it so vividly.

    Thank you again. I cannot wait for the next story!
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  • marie7342231 wrote: OK where and when can I see this story in animation or live action. It's just too good not to be brought to life. Maybe a graphic novel?

    EE, you have brought me fully into the worry of a mother and the anger of a sith. So good and I can imagine it so vividly.

    Thank you again. I cannot wait for the next story!


    Well, I don't want to put the Bantha ahead of the repulsor cart, but, here is my brother Steve's work in progress take on the Aces and Eights. Why do I need a Maya model of the Aces and Eights? Well, I hope you'll see...


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