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4 years 1 month ago #1 by null0trooper
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  • I guess I should start a topic for Dream A Little Dream For Me ?

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    4 years 1 month ago #2 by SDom111
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  • Null, Sir. It was a very well written story. You intermixed a couple of original gen characters. Just not sure your main antagonists of the story had the same breathe of character that we are use to them having. I also want to make it clear that you are a very talented writer. I look forward to reading more of your writings.

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  • SDom111 wrote: Null, Sir. It was a very well written story.


    Thank you!

    SDom111 wrote: You intermixed a couple of original gen characters. Just not sure your main antagonists of the story had the same breathe of character that we are use to them having.


    I wanted to suggest what sort of people they could be without diving into much darker waters, but you're right. More depth wouldn't hurt at all.

    SDom111 wrote: I also want to make it clear that you are a very talented writer. I look forward to reading more of your writings.

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    Again, my thanks.

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