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Question The Second Circle Discussion

8 years 5 months ago - 8 years 5 months ago #1 by Paradox
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    • Please feel free to comment or discuss The Second Circle here.
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    8 years 5 months ago #2 by Yolandria
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    • Oh no...If Sara finds out about this upstart..Things might get a bit dicey in the midwest. I don't think i want to be in that part of the country when that match up goes down. :P
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    8 years 5 months ago #3 by shadeofred
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    • Well this certainly took a turn for the perverted....

    Also, I've noticed you always use "passed" in situations such as "looking passed a point" or "just passed that doorway you will see a window". I believe the proper word is actually "past".

    Looking forward to the next segment.
    8 years 3 weeks ago #4 by Wavehead
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    • Just read this and I'm impressed :)
    I like the idea of another academy similar to Whateley, a sort of natural progression really from Whateley Universe to Whateley Galaxy :)
    I will now go and read all your other stories that provide the background and origins for your characters before commenting further B)
    8 years 3 weeks ago #5 by Sir Lee
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    • Going from Universe to Galaxy would actually be a regression ;)
    Don't call me "Shirley." You will surely make me surly.
    8 years 3 weeks ago #6 by Wavehead
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    • Well after I posted it that is what I realised, so I thought who would be the first person to point that out :??? Yes you were the person I thought would do so ;)
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