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Question You can Choose Your Friends....

3 years 8 months ago #1 by Dreamer
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  • A short, but wonderful Vignette by elrod. Read, enjoy, and please comment.

    SPOILER ALERT
    Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.

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    3 years 8 months ago #2 by cprime
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  • One minor note - I think part of a line got lost in the editing process. It ends with 'Imp was', though the rest of the line can be guessed from context.

    I also note that there is an implied reference to an arena match between Martina and Christina's cliques. I look forward to reading that play out as more than a noodle incident.

    Suffice to say, I don't think most of this story can be discussed without
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    3 years 8 months ago #3 by Greatdingo
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  • I don't have much to say, but this was a rather good, short piece. Short and to the point.

    Honestly, I didn't see it coming and it's a story venue that leaves ample room for more development, if at all.

    Well done, Elrod!
    3 years 8 months ago #4 by Valentine
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  • I thought it was
    "you can pick your friends, you can pick your nose, but you can't pick your friends nose"

    Well this is certainly not something I was expecting. I don't think Martina would have said anything to Christina under normal circumstances, she might have blurted it out as "revenge," if Christina pissed her off enough. I think her talk with Imp headed that off.

    A short and enjoyable tale.

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    3 years 8 months ago #5 by elrodw
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  • The way I've always heard it (and the source of the title) is "You can choose your friends, but you can't choose your family".

    Never give up, Never surrender! Captain Peter Quincy Taggert
    3 years 8 months ago #6 by Wavehead
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  • This little vignette is much appreciated by me because it give me a warm feeling and some hope for the future B)
    3 years 8 months ago #7 by mhalpern
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  • so now I have to blame either odds manglers or somebody who knew about this for their original room assignments. All things considered, both possibilities are very valid

    Any Bad Ideas I have and microscene OC character stories are freely adoptable.
    3 years 8 months ago #8 by elrodw
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  • The conclusion of Knockoff 2 is in work, but I hit a major stalling point (real life stuff of the not-fun kind), and I know this is a bit out-of-order with that, but rest assured, Knockoff 2 will be completed.

    Then I've got more Shine, and Kayda (2 stories?) and Danny, and a couple of Charge of the Light Vignettes, and Laura in Gen 2, and ......

    Never give up, Never surrender! Captain Peter Quincy Taggert
    3 years 8 months ago #9 by mhalpern
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  • elrodw wrote: The conclusion of Knockoff 2 is in work, but I hit a major stalling point (real life stuff of the not-fun kind), and I know this is a bit out-of-order with that, but rest assured, Knockoff 2 will be completed.

    Then I've got more Shine, and Kayda (2 stories?) and Danny, and a couple of Charge of the Light Vignettes, and Laura in Gen 2, and ......


    so is a Manger responsible for the Poe room assignments?

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    3 years 8 months ago #10 by Commander_Knight35
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  • elrodw wrote: The conclusion of Knockoff 2 is in work, but I hit a major stalling point (real life stuff of the not-fun kind), and I know this is a bit out-of-order with that, but rest assured, Knockoff 2 will be completed.

    Then I've got more Shine, and Kayda (2 stories?) and Danny, and a couple of Charge of the Light Vignettes, and Laura in Gen 2, and ......


    That sounds like a lot on your plate. Are you sure can manage? We don't want you feel overworked and burnout.
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