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Question My work for a possible new Kimba character
7 years 6 months ago #1
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7 years 6 months ago #2
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Couple quick points
While a great many of the original protagonists are TG or another variant of LGBT, that is more a factor of the origin of the author group (we mostly started out as TG Fiction authors and the sites we were creating for were heavily biased for stories with transformations, especially gender flips). While an androgynous-bisexual character will certainly appeal to a portion of our audience base, it isn't 'required' to be a WU protagonist. If that gives the character something that you want to explore as a storyteller? Great. If not, don't feel forced to include it just to make people happy. Most of us would rather see a good story than a mediocre story with a gender flip. But a good story with a gender flip, even better.
The same thing can be said about powers. Team Kimba is somewhat atypical... some of the most powerful new mutants in the world. Most mutants aren't that powerful. And again, while the stories were set to use the superpower setting; few of the stories are actually about the powers.They're about people. People who are uncontrollably different from other people in their world, who many people for entirely irrational reasons are hated by much of the populace. So, we recognize that its less important to come up with a unique power set gimmick than it is to create an interesting person and place them in dynamic conflicts with obstacles to overcome and all that jazz.
Finally, don't worry that we will look negatively on 'any' story just because it is labeled 'fan fiction'. In fact, we've gone out of our way to label community contributed non-canon stories as WhatIF (Whateley Independent Fiction) stories here. That's because many people DO consider fan fiction as something 'lesser' than the original author's work... something incapable of standing on its own merit. And sure... there IS some of that. But there are also plenty of stories over the years that are just as high quality, just as accurate to the way the universe works, and just as successfully portraying the characters and setting as any canon piece... and really the only thing keeping it from being canon is that the author didn't have access to the canon details that protect it from breaking continuity once other events happen that were not public at the time it was written. So to recognize that; we call it WhatIF instead of fan-fic... and maybe some of the What-IF is fan fic... but much of it is just as good (or better) as some of the canon stuff.
The only thing being canon means is that you have to spend more time avoiding continuity problems and coordinating with the rest of the authors. In fact, we tend to consider 'ability to work with the other authors on the team' as just as (if not more) important than quality writing.
Anyway... we'll look forward to seeing what you come up with. From your MID, I'd say first glance 'too powerful' ... and I'd be curious to see why you need both Warper 7 AND Gadg 5... and how ESP 5 fits in there (which specific ESP traits are involved, etc). Just as a rough estimate, 'most' mutants manifest with 2-4 total ranks of powers (Underdogs), 5-7 total ranks is uncommon but possibly more visibly present at WA itself (because the main body of the lower powered average doesn't need to go to Whateley to hide/gain control over their powers). 8-10 ranks is consider a heavy hitter... and above 10 is world class/ A-list. Now that's not a 'rule' or anything... but its a good estimate for keeping tabs on where your character is as you start out. Most of the time, I find that people put their character at 5 or 6 without realizing just how powerful 5 or 6 makes them. Relative to a Marvel or DC hero? Maybe not.. but being able to toe-to-toe with a tank is not inconsiderate power.
While a great many of the original protagonists are TG or another variant of LGBT, that is more a factor of the origin of the author group (we mostly started out as TG Fiction authors and the sites we were creating for were heavily biased for stories with transformations, especially gender flips). While an androgynous-bisexual character will certainly appeal to a portion of our audience base, it isn't 'required' to be a WU protagonist. If that gives the character something that you want to explore as a storyteller? Great. If not, don't feel forced to include it just to make people happy. Most of us would rather see a good story than a mediocre story with a gender flip. But a good story with a gender flip, even better.
The same thing can be said about powers. Team Kimba is somewhat atypical... some of the most powerful new mutants in the world. Most mutants aren't that powerful. And again, while the stories were set to use the superpower setting; few of the stories are actually about the powers.They're about people. People who are uncontrollably different from other people in their world, who many people for entirely irrational reasons are hated by much of the populace. So, we recognize that its less important to come up with a unique power set gimmick than it is to create an interesting person and place them in dynamic conflicts with obstacles to overcome and all that jazz.
Finally, don't worry that we will look negatively on 'any' story just because it is labeled 'fan fiction'. In fact, we've gone out of our way to label community contributed non-canon stories as WhatIF (Whateley Independent Fiction) stories here. That's because many people DO consider fan fiction as something 'lesser' than the original author's work... something incapable of standing on its own merit. And sure... there IS some of that. But there are also plenty of stories over the years that are just as high quality, just as accurate to the way the universe works, and just as successfully portraying the characters and setting as any canon piece... and really the only thing keeping it from being canon is that the author didn't have access to the canon details that protect it from breaking continuity once other events happen that were not public at the time it was written. So to recognize that; we call it WhatIF instead of fan-fic... and maybe some of the What-IF is fan fic... but much of it is just as good (or better) as some of the canon stuff.
The only thing being canon means is that you have to spend more time avoiding continuity problems and coordinating with the rest of the authors. In fact, we tend to consider 'ability to work with the other authors on the team' as just as (if not more) important than quality writing.
Anyway... we'll look forward to seeing what you come up with. From your MID, I'd say first glance 'too powerful' ... and I'd be curious to see why you need both Warper 7 AND Gadg 5... and how ESP 5 fits in there (which specific ESP traits are involved, etc). Just as a rough estimate, 'most' mutants manifest with 2-4 total ranks of powers (Underdogs), 5-7 total ranks is uncommon but possibly more visibly present at WA itself (because the main body of the lower powered average doesn't need to go to Whateley to hide/gain control over their powers). 8-10 ranks is consider a heavy hitter... and above 10 is world class/ A-list. Now that's not a 'rule' or anything... but its a good estimate for keeping tabs on where your character is as you start out. Most of the time, I find that people put their character at 5 or 6 without realizing just how powerful 5 or 6 makes them. Relative to a Marvel or DC hero? Maybe not.. but being able to toe-to-toe with a tank is not inconsiderate power.
Fate guard you and grant you a Light to brighten your Way.
7 years 6 months ago #3
by null0trooper
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7 years 6 months ago #4
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7 years 6 months ago - 7 years 6 months ago #5
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