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Question I need to change a line, just not sure how

8 years 3 weeks ago #1 by Cryptic
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    • In my story Reflections and Filters I have the line "Pull a Phase." referring to Gen 1's Ayla, but as I realized I want the story to be a Gen 2 one I don't wanna use his name any more. So how can I change it up?
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    • Cryptic wrote: In my story Reflections and Filters I have the line "Pull a Phase." referring to Gen 1's Ayla, but as I realized I want the story to be a Gen 2 one I don't wanna use his name any more. So how can I change it up?


    Depends on the timing, but using a small Gen 2 dust-up:

    “I am so gonna pound whoever was peeping on us!” Ash said hotly. “maybe drop them into the floor like Beatdown and use their head for golf practice ...”
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