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Question Got a character missig one piece to her

7 years 3 months ago #1 by Cryptic
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  • Probably gonna throw her in Hawthorn as an resident nurse or working i Doyle's rehab/adjust to the new you wing but I have a character I am calling Kate who's appearance is inspired by one of the ladies who was doing my in patient rehab though This version's appearance is based off what I saw with out my glasses: An attractive young woman who had four eyes arranged like this -=- (two mostly in the normal spots and two arranged between then stacked on top of each other).

    Other then the facial GSD I'm not sure what to give her power wise, though I tink she has a power or more gsd that inspired her career choice.

    I am a caffeine heathen; I prefer the waters of the mountain over the juice of the bean. Keep the Dews coming and no one will be hurt.
    7 years 3 months ago #2 by null0trooper
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  • Huh. You'd have to displace the nasal cavities a bit for one of the center eyes, and it may help to widen the distance between the two normally-expected eyes. A bit of body horror for appearance, but if the lower center eye worked in the near infrared having some of the body's best cooling equipment adjacent right there might help. Maybe shift the upper center eye to be more sensitive in the near UV for a killer night-vision package?

    A bit horrific, but rerouting the nasal passages to at either side of the face (somewhat like a pit viper) might justify giving the character enhanced chemo-reception.

    From there a package of esper senses could make for a good searcher/tracker/rescue worker, etc. :shrug:

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    7 years 3 months ago #3 by Rose Bunny
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  • well, if her extra eyes could see in some other fashion, such as x-ray or aura-reading, for instance, that could steer her towards a career in the medical field. Maybe she would be a healer, as well. The ability to diagnose visually, and then heal the problem would be valuable.

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    7 years 3 months ago #4 by Kettlekorn
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  • She has superhuman depth perception, the ability to induce hypnosis by blinking one eye at a time in a circular pattern, and contact with her eyelashes is hallucinogenic.

    Oh, and she really hates wide-screens. She tolerates standard-def, but would much prefer a truly square display.

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    7 years 3 months ago #5 by NJM1564
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  • Has the ability to forcefully swap vision of her normal set of eyes with another person. That would make a useful and interesting weapon. And an interesting story line could be someone trying to get her to swop with them when she goes into the showers. But the one or ones who wants to swap with her forgot she would be showering with all the other GSDers.
    7 years 3 months ago #6 by Cryptic
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  • After some thought she will have born with the extra eyes and gain extralimbs from her mutation, ending p centaur like though I am thinking the extra limbs are human like.

    I am a caffeine heathen; I prefer the waters of the mountain over the juice of the bean. Keep the Dews coming and no one will be hurt.
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