×

Notice

The forum is in read only mode.
× This section is for feedback and discussion about in progress Fabrication Lab works (before the story is 'published' to the site, at which point use the commenting system or the Evaluation section for formal reviews).

If a author is open to discussion/feedback on their story, they will create a thread for it to take place in... if no thread exists, it means the author prefers to work without feedback at this time. Authors may also make a post and just ask that any feedback be sent via PM instead of public posting.

Posting rules: Only authors and staff may create threads but all registered members can post replies.

Question Shattered Glass Discussion

9 years 5 months ago #1 by Domoviye
  • Domoviye
  • Domoviye's Avatar Topic Author


  • Posts: 2428

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
    • So two broken birds trying to become unbroken in Whateley. What can go wrong?
    9 years 5 months ago #2 by E M Pisek
    • E M Pisek
    • E M Pisek's Avatar


  • Posts: 1299

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 24 Apr 1960
    • Need we ask? ;)
    What is - was. What was - is.
    9 years 5 months ago #3 by Domoviye
    • Domoviye
    • Domoviye's Avatar Topic Author


  • Posts: 2428

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
    • It's ultimately a hopeful story.
    9 years 5 months ago #4 by E M Pisek
    • E M Pisek
    • E M Pisek's Avatar


  • Posts: 1299

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 24 Apr 1960
    • *sigh

    Not enough time, not enough time.

    Now name me where that line might have originated from.
    What is - was. What was - is.
    9 years 5 months ago #5 by Domoviye
    • Domoviye
    • Domoviye's Avatar Topic Author


  • Posts: 2428

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
    • All I'm getting is a song from the 90's.
    9 years 5 months ago #6 by E M Pisek
    • E M Pisek
    • E M Pisek's Avatar


  • Posts: 1299

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 24 Apr 1960
    • Twilight Zone 'Time Enough to Last'
    What is - was. What was - is.
    9 years 5 months ago #7 by jmhyp
    • jmhyp
    • jmhyp's Avatar


  • Posts: 359

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
    • Love the Furies using "good guy" tactics in order to have an "in" with Tink. Too funny.
    9 years 5 months ago #8 by Domoviye
    • Domoviye
    • Domoviye's Avatar Topic Author


  • Posts: 2428

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
    • When Tink gets things going for her Fashion Club, the Furies and TNT are going to be her biggest headache and her biggest bat for dealing with problems.
    It's going to be fun.
    9 years 5 months ago #9 by Isodecan
    • Isodecan
    • Isodecan's Avatar


  • Posts: 114

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 16 Jan 1974
    • While you are (as usual) being needlessly cruel to your characters, at least in this one you are taking people who have hit bottom (and in Ruth's case gone through) and building them back up. The interaction with other established fanfiction characters was also well done, hopefully those stories will also be coming back, as well as continuations of them.
    9 years 5 months ago - 9 years 5 months ago #10 by Domoviye
    • Domoviye
    • Domoviye's Avatar Topic Author


  • Posts: 2428

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
    • I was needlessly cruel. Now I'm only being moderately cruel.
    All of my stories will be placed on the site within two weeks, and each one will be finished, they might just finish their current arc, but they'll have a nice resolution and then turn into secondary characters (Caroline and Glitch I'm looking at you), or stay main characters. All of these stories started up between February and March of this year, so I'm not exactly laying down on the job.
    And now I've found my core that I like and are interacting nicely, so I'll keep to them and only slowly expand as they finish their arcs.
    Last Edit: 9 years 5 months ago by Domoviye.
    9 years 5 months ago #11 by E M Pisek
    • E M Pisek
    • E M Pisek's Avatar


  • Posts: 1299

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 24 Apr 1960
    • We all go through a part that wants to be extremely cruel. This is writing of course and hopefully does not transcend outside of it. Its a form of relief and learning which I'm assuming you tempered slightly.
    What is - was. What was - is.
    9 years 5 months ago #12 by Domoviye
    • Domoviye
    • Domoviye's Avatar Topic Author


  • Posts: 2428

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
    • Yep. Writing is stress relief for me. How Far was written when I was pretty depressed. Shattered Glass is seeing if the character is salvagable.
    When I'm really depressed I write stuff that isn't fit for print. It keeps me sane.
    9 years 5 months ago #13 by Dawnfyre
    • Dawnfyre
    • Dawnfyre's Avatar


  • Posts: 422

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown

    • Domoviye wrote: Yep. Writing is stress relief for me. How Far was written when I was pretty depressed. Shattered Glass is seeing if the character is salvagable.
    When I'm really depressed I write stuff that isn't fit for print. It keeps me sane.


    You are sane?


    post that stuff anyway, people might love it.
    Stupidity is a capitol offense, a summary not indictable one.
    9 years 5 months ago #14 by Domoviye
    • Domoviye
    • Domoviye's Avatar Topic Author


  • Posts: 2428

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
    • No. The one I did complete and posted under a pen name has gotten me called many nasty names.

    And I'm sane enough to pass as normal, if I try. Not that I usually do.
    9 years 5 months ago - 9 years 5 months ago #15 by E M Pisek
    • E M Pisek
    • E M Pisek's Avatar


  • Posts: 1299

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 24 Apr 1960

    • Domoviye wrote: No. The one I did complete and posted under a pen name has gotten me called many nasty names.

    And I'm sane enough to pass as normal, if I try. Not that I usually do.


    Not your known handle I'm sure.

    A lot of famous authors had penned under different names. Most are caught do to their writing styles and how the two don't differ on the type of stories so it does lead to how their notice. I can't think of their names but I remember about 2 who wrote completely different genres as they wanted to dip into them but not have the skewered reviews they would normally get. Another way to expand their writing styles without hurting their fan base.
    What is - was. What was - is.
    Last Edit: 9 years 5 months ago by E M Pisek.
    9 years 5 months ago - 9 years 5 months ago #16 by Domoviye
    • Domoviye
    • Domoviye's Avatar Topic Author


  • Posts: 2428

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
    • Well from the writing style you could guess that it was mine if you paid a lot of attention. but considering it was something like a cross between Saw and an adult movie, made worse, and with an actual plot, the genre was pretty different.
    Last Edit: 9 years 5 months ago by Domoviye.
    9 years 5 months ago #17 by E M Pisek
    • E M Pisek
    • E M Pisek's Avatar


  • Posts: 1299

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 24 Apr 1960
    • And I can imagine they never seen Saw. I've read worse and unfortunately seen worse.
    What is - was. What was - is.
    9 years 5 months ago #18 by Domoviye
    • Domoviye
    • Domoviye's Avatar Topic Author


  • Posts: 2428

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
    • I'd rather not talk about it. It's an old shame that still gets me a couple of cents a month from Amazon.
    9 years 5 months ago #19 by Dawnfyre
    • Dawnfyre
    • Dawnfyre's Avatar


  • Posts: 422

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
    • finding a corpse that was decomposing, rig in arm and 18" dild0 in HIS rear. ( his face was melted to the floor, ass in the air )
    female corpse, her hand in her vagina ( she died while cleaning herself )

    senior I had to wake up to let his homecare providers help him with cleaning, put on a shit filled diaper to get dressed.

    naked dead female in middle of public hallway

    just to name a few incidents from the last job I had, as desk clerk / security in a cockroach hotel.
    Stupidity is a capitol offense, a summary not indictable one.
    9 years 5 months ago #20 by E M Pisek
    • E M Pisek
    • E M Pisek's Avatar


  • Posts: 1299

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 24 Apr 1960
    • I think I'll also agree with Dom. Lets not discuss this further. This is not the place for such matters.
    What is - was. What was - is.
    9 years 5 months ago #21 by E M Pisek
    • E M Pisek
    • E M Pisek's Avatar


  • Posts: 1299

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 24 Apr 1960

    • Domoviye wrote: So two broken birds trying to become unbroken in Whateley. What can go wrong?


    Actually a lot. But then even if two wrongs don't make a right, its possible to change the outcome of ones life. Two people hurt, deciding if their hurt is worse than the other. Taking a tentative first step in what they hope is the right direction as they see another person in the same predicament they were or are in.

    Its all up to them on how far they want the help. Its just the actions of others that help drive the way.
    What is - was. What was - is.
    9 years 5 months ago #22 by Domoviye
    • Domoviye
    • Domoviye's Avatar Topic Author


  • Posts: 2428

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
    • Pretty much my thinking.
    9 years 4 months ago #23 by Malady
    • Malady
    • Malady's Avatar


  • Posts: 3893

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
    • Oh hey! It's Statue-guy!

    Okay, shipping Randy and Ruth now... Rock and Glass... I think there's some puns there?
    Archives: Rubberjohn's Fanfic + CrystalHall + Mittfh's Wordcount Spreadsheet

    My Patreon. But, support the Crystal Hall 1st?
    9 years 4 months ago #24 by Domoviye
    • Domoviye
    • Domoviye's Avatar Topic Author


  • Posts: 2428

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
    • Go for it, I'm actually not sure how far they'll go, but I figured Rona needed a friend.
    9 years 4 months ago #25 by Malady
    • Malady
    • Malady's Avatar


  • Posts: 3893

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown

    • Domoviye wrote: Go for it, I'm actually not sure how far they'll go, but I figured Rona needed a friend.


    Problem is, my Pun-ability is failing me right now... I'm thinking along the themes of "Drinks that are On The Rocks", 'Cause they're served in a Glass, or something geological or something, as Sand is made out of Rocks, and Glass is made out of Sand...
    Archives: Rubberjohn's Fanfic + CrystalHall + Mittfh's Wordcount Spreadsheet

    My Patreon. But, support the Crystal Hall 1st?
    9 years 4 months ago #26 by NeoMagus
    • NeoMagus
    • NeoMagus's Avatar


  • Posts: 1053

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 26 Jul 1991

    • Malady wrote:

    Domoviye wrote: Go for it, I'm actually not sure how far they'll go, but I figured Rona needed a friend.


    Problem is, my Pun-ability is failing me right now... I'm thinking along the themes of "Drinks that are On The Rocks", 'Cause they're served in a Glass, or something geological or something, as Sand is made out of Rocks, and Glass is made out of Sand...


    Oh dear...now they just need a Sand-man...

    (or woman, that's an option too...)
    ... . . -.- / .--- ..- ... - .. -.-. . .-.-.- / .-.. --- ...- . / -- . .-. -.-. -.-- .-.-.- / .-- .- .-.. -.- / .... ..- -- -... .-.. -.-- / .-- .. - .... / -.-- --- ..- .-. / --. --- -.. .-.-.-
    9 years 4 months ago #27 by Domoviye
    • Domoviye
    • Domoviye's Avatar Topic Author


  • Posts: 2428

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
    • Sand is flexible he/she could be either depending on his/her mood.
    9 years 4 months ago #28 by NeoMagus
    • NeoMagus
    • NeoMagus's Avatar


  • Posts: 1053

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 26 Jul 1991

    • Domoviye wrote: Sand is flexible he/she could be either depending on his/her mood.


    Sounds appropriate for Whateley.
    ... . . -.- / .--- ..- ... - .. -.-. . .-.-.- / .-.. --- ...- . / -- . .-. -.-. -.-- .-.-.- / .-- .- .-.. -.- / .... ..- -- -... .-.. -.-- / .-- .. - .... / -.-- --- ..- .-. / --. --- -.. .-.-.-
    9 years 4 months ago - 9 years 4 months ago #29 by Domoviye
    • Domoviye
    • Domoviye's Avatar Topic Author


  • Posts: 2428

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
    • You should see a potential character I have who roles a die to see what her sexuality is in the morning.
    Last Edit: 9 years 4 months ago by Domoviye.
    9 years 4 months ago #30 by NeoMagus
    • NeoMagus
    • NeoMagus's Avatar


  • Posts: 1053

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 26 Jul 1991

    • Domoviye wrote: You should see a potential character I have who roles a die to see what her sexuality is in the morning.


    :blink:
    ... . . -.- / .--- ..- ... - .. -.-. . .-.-.- / .-.. --- ...- . / -- . .-. -.-. -.-- .-.-.- / .-- .- .-.. -.- / .... ..- -- -... .-.. -.-- / .-- .. - .... / -.-- --- ..- .-. / --. --- -.. .-.-.-
    9 years 4 months ago - 9 years 4 months ago #31 by E M Pisek
    • E M Pisek
    • E M Pisek's Avatar


  • Posts: 1299

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 24 Apr 1960

    • NeoMagus wrote:

    Domoviye wrote: You should see a potential character I have who roles a die to see what her sexuality is in the morning.


    :blink:


    Well given that a die has six sides I shutter to think what two of them would be. :unsure: :huh: :dry: :whistle:
    What is - was. What was - is.
    Last Edit: 9 years 4 months ago by E M Pisek.
    9 years 4 months ago #32 by Domoviye
    • Domoviye
    • Domoviye's Avatar Topic Author


  • Posts: 2428

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
    • She uses role playing dice, they come in 4, 6, 8, 10, 12, 20 and 100.

    And it really does make sense in context.
    9 years 4 months ago #33 by Malady
    • Malady
    • Malady's Avatar


  • Posts: 3893

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown

    • Domoviye wrote: She uses role playing dice, they come in 4, 6, 8, 10, 12, 20 and 100.

    And it really does make sense in context.


    How does she even discover her power in the first place??
    Archives: Rubberjohn's Fanfic + CrystalHall + Mittfh's Wordcount Spreadsheet

    My Patreon. But, support the Crystal Hall 1st?
    9 years 4 months ago #34 by Domoviye
    • Domoviye
    • Domoviye's Avatar Topic Author


  • Posts: 2428

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
    • The dice are a focusing device, her power is not related to them. Deciding things with the dice is just a habit of hers.
    9 years 4 months ago #35 by konzill
    • konzill
    • konzill's Avatar


  • Posts: 500

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
    • Iin canon doesn't Jade flip a coin to decide if she will be pacafist or ultra violent for the day? Granted this happend right before her author retired so we may never know where this was meant to go.
    9 years 4 months ago #36 by Domoviye
    • Domoviye
    • Domoviye's Avatar Topic Author


  • Posts: 2428

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
    • She does. It's mentioned in a later work that she still does.
    9 years 4 months ago #37 by Valentine
    • Valentine
    • Valentine's Avatar


  • Posts: 3121

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 17 Aug 1966

    • Ib12us wrote:

    NeoMagus wrote:

    Domoviye wrote: You should see a potential character I have who roles a die to see what her sexuality is in the morning.


    :blink:


    Well given that a die has six sides I shutter to think what two of them would be. :unsure: :huh: :dry: :whistle:


    There are roughly 7.4 billion types of sexuality out there, one for each of us.

    BTW Don't throw Stone Friends into Glass Friends.
    Don't Drick and Drive.
    9 years 4 months ago #38 by Domoviye
    • Domoviye
    • Domoviye's Avatar Topic Author


  • Posts: 2428

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
    • Can they throw themselves at each other? If they can't bye bye sex life.
    9 years 4 months ago #39 by Valentine
    • Valentine
    • Valentine's Avatar


  • Posts: 3121

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: 17 Aug 1966

    • Domoviye wrote: Can they throw themselves at each other? If they can't bye bye sex life.


    Only with appropriate cushioning materials.
    Don't Drick and Drive.
    9 years 4 months ago #40 by Domoviye
    • Domoviye
    • Domoviye's Avatar Topic Author


  • Posts: 2428

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
    • They can figure something out.
    9 years 4 months ago #41 by E M Pisek
    • E M Pisek
    • E M Pisek's Avatar


  • Posts: 1299

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 24 Apr 1960

    • Domoviye wrote: They can figure something out.


    I found a gravel driveway with broken stained glass. Don't think it worked.
    What is - was. What was - is.
    9 years 4 months ago #42 by Domoviye
    • Domoviye
    • Domoviye's Avatar Topic Author


  • Posts: 2428

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
    • :blink: :S :cheer:
    9 years 4 months ago - 9 years 4 months ago #43 by Phoenix Spiritus
    • Phoenix Spiritus
    • Phoenix Spiritus's Avatar


  • Posts: 2595

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 20 Jan 1976

    • Domoviye wrote: They can figure something out.


    Yes, after all he can manifest himself into toys.
    Last Edit: 9 years 4 months ago by Phoenix Spiritus.
    9 years 4 months ago #44 by Domoviye
    • Domoviye
    • Domoviye's Avatar Topic Author


  • Posts: 2428

  • Gender: Unknown
  • Birthdate: Unknown
    • Yep. They can do wonderful things with silicone these days, and life size dolls are easy to get online.
    9 years 4 months ago #45 by E M Pisek
    • E M Pisek
    • E M Pisek's Avatar


  • Posts: 1299

  • Gender: Male
  • Birthdate: 24 Apr 1960

    • Domoviye wrote: Yep. They can do wonderful things with silicone these days, and life size dolls are easy to get online.


    I heard his Woody toy was missing and he couldn't get his erector set up anymore as it was now broken. Bo Peep left him for some other sheep.

    Well that's what I heard anyway through the grape vine.
    What is - was. What was - is.
    Moderators: WhateleyAdmin, Kristin Darken, E. E. Nalley, elrodw, Nagrij, MageOhki, Astrodragon, NeoMagus, Warren, Morpheus, Wasamon, sleethr, OtherEric, Bek D Corbin, MaLAguA, Souffle Girl, Phoenix Spiritus, Starwolf, DanZilla, Katie_Lyn, Maggie Finson, DrBender, JG, Bladedancer, Renae_Whateley
    Powered by Kunena Forum