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Question Ice Cold Blood Discussion

8 years 6 months ago - 8 years 6 months ago #1 by Wyverntamer
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    • Discuss Ice Cold Blood here, if there is any interest in discussing it. I will clarify things when asked about them, unless I plan to clarify them in the next chapter, in which case you just get a slight spoiler about what it'll be. :P

    For those wondering, yes, I will continue Deathwalker, but I had a really long chapter written, and then my laptop crashed, and I lost all my progress, so I was kinda pissed about that and I haven't really continued the story since, especially because the idea for Ice Cold Blood was more enticing for me.
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    8 years 6 months ago #2 by mhalpern
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    • Wyverntamer wrote: Discuss Ice Cold Blood here, if there is any interest in discussing it. I will clarify things when asked about them, unless I plan to clarify them in the next chapter, in which case you just get a slight spoiler about what it'll be. :P

    For those wondering, yes, I will continue Deathwalker, but I had a really long chapter written, and then my laptop crashed, and I lost all my progress, so I was kinda pissed about that and I haven't really continued the story since, especially because the idea for Ice Cold Blood was more enticing for me.

    Change the name of the thread to include the word "Discussion" otherwise it can get mixed up
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    8 years 6 months ago #3 by Wyverntamer
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    • Oh shit, I had forgotten that, hadn't I? Normally I am quite precise about such things, but I didn't get much sleep last night (30 minutes max) and it being late now isn't helping things.

    Anyway, do you have thoughts on the story?
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    8 years 6 months ago #4 by mhalpern
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    • Wyverntamer wrote: Oh shit, I had forgotten that, hadn't I? Normally I am quite precise about such things, but I didn't get much sleep last night (30 minutes max) and it being late now isn't helping things.

    Anyway, do you have thoughts on the story?

    interesting start
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    8 years 6 months ago #5 by Wyverntamer
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    • And Chapter 1 part 2 is up.
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    8 years 6 months ago #6 by Malady
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    • Interesting... Where is the Taken Castle? ... So, what does being Lord mean? Knowledge of area of control to some extent? Intellectus of that area?
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    8 years 6 months ago - 8 years 6 months ago #7 by Wyverntamer
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    • The Taken Castle is somewhere in the middle of the USA, though due to how it is enchanted, it won't be found on any map, and being the Lord of the Taken Castle means just that, the Lord is the leader of the area and the one who gets to make some of the rules, he isn't the absolute ruler, but he does have more control than a mayor of a town of comparable size a population of ~30.000.

    So there are no supernatural powers, except of course, that mutant Lords from recent times can far more easily hold the title.
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    Two, I really like watching thunderstorms from inside the house, reading, gaming and sleeping.
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