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Question Triumvirate Discussion

8 years 6 months ago #1 by Paradox
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    • Please feel free to discuss your thoughts on Triumvirate here.
    8 years 6 months ago - 8 years 6 months ago #2 by Malady
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    • Uhh... Did you just duplicate the story thread??
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    8 years 6 months ago #3 by Paradox
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    • I did, though not intentionally. There was such a long delay in the loading of it the first time I thought the server had crapped out on me so I went back and submitted again. No idea how to delete the duplicate so I adjusted the title to try and avoid confusion.
    8 years 6 months ago #4 by Malady
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    • Well, you could repurpose it for your next story?
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    8 years 6 months ago #5 by Phoenix Spiritus
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    • I deleted the duplicate thread, don't worry :)
    8 years 6 months ago #6 by Paradox
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    • Thank you, I appreciate it.
    8 years 6 months ago #7 by mhalpern
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    • good start
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    8 years 6 months ago #8 by Cryptic
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    • What font size are you using to write this story? Could you maybe shrink it down some?
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    8 years 6 months ago #9 by mhalpern
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    • I get the feeling that this other school wont take them for whatever reason
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    8 years 6 months ago #10 by tenwaters
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    • Great story. I see a bit of the bad boy turned good but i am betting on only 2 out of three going that way.
    8 years 6 months ago #11 by mhalpern
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    • tenwaters wrote: Great story. I see a bit of the bad boy turned good but i am betting on only 2 out of three going that way.

    They are charming them
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    8 years 6 months ago #12 by Yolandria
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    • I see a bit of Sidhe Aura at work in the one girl. Very simular to Fey. Perhaps not as strong. But still there.
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    8 years 6 months ago #13 by konzill
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    • was there a story that came before this one, that covers the two years mentioned at the start?
    8 years 6 months ago #14 by Paradox
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    • There have been a few, actually. Triumvirate is the latest in the series involving these characters. To follow the timeline properly you should probably read, in this particular order, Heal Thy Self, Mind Games, and The Call of The Hunt.
    8 years 5 months ago #15 by Yolandria
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    • I'm really enjoying this series. Can't wait to see how the new school turns out to be.
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