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8 years 6 months ago - 8 years 6 months ago #1 by Quorry
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    • So, this was based off a bad idea I had a while back. Some random hermit sells Earth to aliens in exchange for powers. It's meant to be a more comedic story but the first part doesn't really reflect that too much. Maybe it's just me. Anyway, have at it. Tell me whatever you think, if it's ridiculous, if I made any typos, if something doesn't make sense, etc.
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    8 years 6 months ago #2 by Malady
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    • A Very Long Time Ago, so Chirrup was a dinosaur? ... And I guess those stones were Stonehenge? ... I wonder who or what Chirrup is...

    The Greater Intelligence, I guess is a reference to Doctor Who's Great Intelligence , although apparently more peaceful or something. Won't it be surprised when it reaches Earth! :lol:
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    8 years 6 months ago #3 by Quorry
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    • Oh shoot, I never thought of Chirrup being a dinosaur. She can build things, though, so she's probably just an early human, before any real civilization started.

    The stones are similar to Stonehenge, but aren't the ones in question. Stonehenge isn't on a mountain, I think. And people haven't carved things into Stonehenge, I think.

    Let's just say I'm making it a reference retrospectively.

    It will be surprised, certainly.
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