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Question A Slightly Bent Tale of the Five Fold Court Discussion

6 years 11 months ago #1 by Cryptic
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    • Discussion thread for a Whateley spin on the Little mermaid story.
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    6 years 11 months ago #2 by Rose Bunny
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    • well, she could get a tank next to Fubar, if things don't work out.
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    6 years 11 months ago - 6 years 11 months ago #3 by Malady
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    • I want to be like him from here down.


    Well, there's the "Bent". Genderbent, that is, presumably. Shoulda worded your wish a bit better, girl.

    The witch gave her an 'are you dense?' look.


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    • Rose Bunny wrote: well, she could get a tank next to Fubar, if things don't work out.

    Story is Pre-Sundering, so Foobs ancestors haven't been born yet.
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    • ok, so she won't be coming back as her descendant?
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    6 years 11 months ago - 6 years 11 months ago #6 by E!
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    I'm getting a serious Venus/Aphrodite vibe from being born of foam and the bubbles. Was that intentional? Or am I reading too far into it?
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    I'm getting a serious Venus/Aphrodite vibe from being born of foam and the bubbles. Was that intentional? or am I reading too far into it?

    It's actually from the non Disney version of the story, though I did spin it to include a rebirth aspect where tte HCA version just had "No soul, your are dead."
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    • Rose Bunny wrote: ok, so she won't be coming back as her descendant?


    -shrug- Who knows. Depending on what I do to her, she may show up in my Changeling or Reflections, or what ever I call the stories when they get to Whateley.

    @ Malady; Honestly don't take the 'Bend' in the title to seriously. i was trying for a play on the "Fractured Fairy tales" from the old Rocky and Bullwinkle show.
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    • Cryptic wrote: @ Malady; Honestly don't take the 'Bend' in the title to seriously. i was trying for a play on the "Fractured Fairy tales" from the old Rocky and Bullwinkle show.


    Ah. Personally, I'd use Twisted instead of Bent then? For the alliteration? ... But then, that makes me think of Morpheus's Twisted-verse...

    A Five Fold Fairy Tale... Or something like that?

    A Mixed-up Mermaid in the Five Fold Court... *shrugs*

    A Fractured Fairy Tale in the Five Fold Court... Ooh... Alliteration...
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