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5 years 3 weeks ago #1 by frosty563
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    • looking for feedback on an ongoing project. All comments welcome.
    5 years 3 weeks ago #2 by Malady
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    • So, is this Whateley-verse, or Original Fic?

    Interesting, very vague characters and stuff. No proper names, etc.

    The leg injury thing, was surprising.
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    5 years 3 weeks ago #3 by frosty563
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    • Yes it is in the WU. I wanted to try writing from a parents point of view as life turned hard for a character. So far members are vague cause I wanted to focus more on the development of feelings instead of characters. Kinda like doing the norm but backwards. Also wouldn't mind feedback from parents who can imagine their own feelings if they had to watch their child go through this. The legs are also explained in the next part.
    5 years 3 weeks ago #4 by Malady
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    • Cool.

    Just note. It's one story per thread. Telling you, 'cause the title makes it sound like you're going "One Chapter, per thread"...
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