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5 years 4 months ago - 5 years 3 months ago #1 by JulesMorrison
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    • This is for my "non-canon unashamedly self-insert Mary-so-sue-me Whateley Academy tale", Parallels.

    Table of contents, this will be updated as I add parts:

    Please feel free to give any critique, feedback, feelings, fan-thoughts, not-a-fan thoughts...
    Last Edit: 5 years 3 months ago by JulesMorrison. Reason: Oops! Forgot the TOC. This will be my last edit on this thread. Enjoy!
    5 years 4 months ago #2 by null0trooper
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    • JulesMorrison wrote: But silence seems to be the order of the day for most posts there so okay, I'll go make a Project Discussion post...


    Isn't that usually the order of the day until a project gets more engagement?

    I've only read part of the way through, so, yeah.:huh:
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    5 years 4 months ago #3 by JulesMorrison
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    • When I say "silence", I'm meaning, looking down the posts and it's 0 replies, 0 replies... and not just for mine so it looks like nobody replies there? I'm new enough here I don't know the conventions of what goes where.
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    • I wouldn't say it's zero replies down the line:
    Kitsune 2 Discussion                                 Replies:14
Twinkle twinkle little Starlight! Feedback           Replies:39
Songs of the Compass Roses Discussion                Replies:52
The Survivors.                                       Replies:5
Metro & Company Anthology Discussion                 Replies:50
Evershade - Reforming/Rebirth Discussion             Replies:159
"Whateley Academy: the Series" (prop #1) Discussion  Replies:18
Max Does the Splits discussion                       Replies:38
untitled chapter 1                                   Replies:3
Scald-Crow                                           Replies:8
Silence Is Deafening                                 Replies:4
Reflections and Filters                              Replies:77
Majiana                                              Replies:6
Chainsaw wielding Maniac - Discussion                Replies:42
Mezzo discussion                                     Replies:39
A Changeling's Tale Discussion                       Replies:19
The Misfits - Discussion.                            Replies:243
If I Had A Hammer - Discussion                       Replies:39
Battery-Discussion                                   Replies:6

    At the moment, we have "Total users online: 10 Members and 866 Guests Online"

    Many of those Guests might be search engines, but they're all readers who don't have an account and can't post responses even if they read anything other than the latest canon story. There's no way of knowing how many of those real person guests can't afford for anyone to find out they have an account on a TG fiction site.

    "The Misfits" and "If I Had A Hammer" usually averaged 100-200 views per weekly update when they were active.
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    5 years 4 months ago - 5 years 4 months ago #5 by JulesMorrison
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    • In the fabrication lab, I meant!

    Sorry if I was confusing there.
    Last Edit: 5 years 4 months ago by JulesMorrison. Reason: Politeness
    5 years 4 months ago - 5 years 4 months ago #6 by null0trooper
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    • JulesMorrison wrote: In the fabrication lab, I meant!

    Sorry if I was confusing there.


    There are no replies there because there's a box at the top of the page that reads:
    "Posting rules: Only the AUTHOR of a given story project is permitted to post here."

    Edit: So if there's only one part posted, there should be no replies.
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    Last Edit: 5 years 4 months ago by null0trooper. Reason: Add'l stuff
    5 years 4 months ago #7 by JulesMorrison
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    • Ya, I finally figured that.

    There's enough ambiguity between "only the author is allowed to make a top level post" and "only the author is allowed to post or reply to a post" that I misread it as the former to begin with.
    5 years 4 months ago - 5 years 4 months ago #8 by Malady
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    • So, reposting my spec:

    Malady wrote: Ah! Interesting.

    Betting she's dumped in 'cause some Alien Space Bat wants to mess with the Whateleyverse.

    Or you just want a personal SI Slice of Life Fanfic.

    Either or.


    Lucky for Parallel, getting caught and contained by the one entity that'd do it well, etc.

    Expecting more AU people shot in to try and mess things up.

    This is apparently not a Merchant-based story, 'cause, well, no Merchant.
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    Last Edit: 5 years 4 months ago by Malady.
    5 years 4 months ago #9 by JulesMorrison
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    • It isn't her only bit of implausible luck. She gets burn out in a world that doesn't support the existence of mutants, and teleports across realities to one that does, to the one place where her abilities could be nurtured, to a point in the timeline she knows, into a snowdrift that will slow her explosive fever to something regeneration can remake into a body that suits her and will fit in at the school, smack dab into the path of Sara out on a nocturnal wander.

    Admittedly this is her luck power running at a high scream in unusual circumstances.

    The story is based on what I've read so far, original canon gen 1 up to about Easter. But suggestions for influences to merge in will be gratefully considered :-D
    5 years 4 months ago - 5 years 4 months ago #10 by Malady
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    • Wow, that's a lotta luck. Usually that leads to a bad luck backlash after, but maybe her luck tank is really big.

    Or taking some from her parallels.

    Had thoughts of one trying to kill her to stop the bad luck.
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    Last Edit: 5 years 4 months ago by Malady.
    5 years 4 months ago #11 by JulesMorrison
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    • Well, she did get dead. (She got better.)

    Also dropped into the shark tank a bit due to very explosive information. But there may be more backlash.

    Her parallels are unrealised possibilities, not actual sapient persons so they aren't quite that independent.
    5 years 4 months ago #12 by JulesMorrison
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    • Part two has landed!
    5 years 3 months ago #13 by JulesMorrison
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    • Part three has landed!

    Content warning! Contains on camera explicit sex.

    Whee, this is fun.
    5 years 3 months ago #14 by JulesMorrison
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    • Part four has landed!

    This is a calmer, gentler one, although I plan more havoc and hotness in the future.

    Despite feeling personally heartbroken by developments over in Britain, this story is my lifeline of joyful escape into a nicer world.

    Onward and upward!
    5 years 3 months ago #15 by JulesMorrison
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    • Random fact: I seem to be cutting about 3000 words in about 3 days each part. Which means, around 1000 per day. Which is good enough to be An Actual Writer.

    Whee. I hadn't realized that. That opens possibilities.
    5 years 3 months ago #16 by JulesMorrison
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    • Part five has landed!

    Fun with snuggling, accidental high energy physics, and a certain well known tailor.
    5 years 3 months ago - 5 years 3 months ago #17 by JulesMorrison
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    • Part six has landed! The last part in this story.

    Content warning! Contains on camera explicit sex. Also havoc, snuggling and aliens.

    Stay tuned for the upcoming next story, Interlaced.
    Last Edit: 5 years 3 months ago by JulesMorrison.
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