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Loved Re: Getting the Team Back Together

9 years 2 days ago #1 by Phoenix Spiritus
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    • Hi,

    This was a series of Micro-scenes that built into a mini-vignette, so I posted it here rather then putting it in the Micro-Scenes thread.

    No its not canon, no its never likely to be canon, they all have much better ideas then this, but I couldn't help myself :-p
    9 years 2 days ago - 9 years 2 days ago #2 by DanZilla
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    • Cute... and Scary... so very, very scary... ;)

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    9 years 1 day ago #3 by Valentine
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    • Not enough Cabbit.

    Since Gunny said they could recruit new members, Ribbon and Danny might work
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    9 years 1 day ago #4 by mhalpern
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    • Valentine wrote: Not enough Cabbit.

    Since Gunny said they could recruit new members, Ribbon and Danny might work


    Ribbon is practically "tailored" for Wondercute
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    9 years 1 day ago #5 by Phoenix Spiritus
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    • Gee, the story mentions exact numbers of the ones I was thinking they should recruit. No speculation about who I was suggesting?
    9 years 1 day ago #6 by mhalpern
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    • Phoenix Spiritus wrote: Gee, the story mentions exact numbers of the ones I was thinking they should recruit. No speculation about who I was suggesting?


    4 girls and 1 guy, Ribbon, Esoteric, Lexi, Danny or Cassie (from Learning to Hunt) or Julie Robinson (Kayda's girlfriend from when she was Brandon that is a Sidhe subspecies with an interesting teleportation ability), and because we don't know many G1Y2 freshman guys, it defaults to Shine,

    other than Ribbon and Glow Morph's characters already have a team ahead of them

    I wouldn't underestimate Shine, while he is just a devisor/avatar with a specialty for alcoholic fermentation and a lessor spirit, it is important to remember alcohol can be rather flammable I wouldn't be surprised if with a little help, he could distill something suitable as an ingredient in a rocket fuel mixture, and using it for a flame thrower and well Molotov would be very easy.
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    9 years 1 day ago #7 by Valentine
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    • Phoenix Spiritus wrote: Gee, the story mentions exact numbers of the ones I was thinking they should recruit. No speculation about who I was suggesting?


    Danny Franks
    Ribbon
    Mischief
    Palantir
    Abracadabra

    Clover would be a better fit, but she won't be a Freshman yet.
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    9 years 1 day ago #8 by Jarjaross
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    • DanZilla wrote: Cute... and Scary... so very, very scary... ;)


    Really I thought it was more like this

    My dreams take me to far off lands and times of distant past and future. They tell what has been done, what will happen and who I am. They show me things beyond the machinations of any man. Tell me, what are dreams to you?
    9 years 1 day ago #9 by mhalpern
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    • Valentine wrote:

    Phoenix Spiritus wrote: Gee, the story mentions exact numbers of the ones I was thinking they should recruit. No speculation about who I was suggesting?


    Danny Franks
    Ribbon
    Mischief
    Palantir
    Abracadabra

    Clover would be a better fit, but she won't be a Freshman yet.


    I'm not sure if that will work, 4 girls and a guy, and by virtue of Danny both being Elrod's chewtoy and not liking that particular possible change, its more likely to happen.
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    9 years 1 day ago - 9 years 1 day ago #10 by DanZilla
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    • Jarjaross wrote:

    DanZilla wrote: Cute... and Scary... so very, very scary... ;)


    Really I thought it was more like this


    Wow... and that would even add up to the right number of members...

    OK... calling it right now... the next wondercute sotry is going to be a heist... Wondecute v Spykids.
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    9 years 1 day ago #11 by Jarjaross
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    • There's a better scene where they are recruiting one guy who is working at a bank and he just walks off and quits. I couldn't find it though.
    My dreams take me to far off lands and times of distant past and future. They tell what has been done, what will happen and who I am. They show me things beyond the machinations of any man. Tell me, what are dreams to you?
    8 years 11 months ago #12 by Phoenix Spiritus
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    • Valentine wrote:

    Phoenix Spiritus wrote: Gee, the story mentions exact numbers of the ones I was thinking they should recruit. No speculation about who I was suggesting?


    Danny Franks
    Ribbon
    Mischief
    Palantir
    Abracadabra

    Clover would be a better fit, but she won't be a Freshman yet.


    Danny, the Three Little Witches and Mischief where my suggestion too, and yes, technically Clover isn't a freshman, but I'm sure that with the right pleading they can get around that :p
    8 years 11 months ago #13 by Astrodragon
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    • Phoenix Spiritus wrote:

    Valentine wrote:

    Phoenix Spiritus wrote: Gee, the story mentions exact numbers of the ones I was thinking they should recruit. No speculation about who I was suggesting?


    Danny Franks
    Ribbon
    Mischief
    Palantir
    Abracadabra

    Clover would be a better fit, but she won't be a Freshman yet.


    Danny, the Three Little Witches and Mischief where my suggestion too, and yes, technically Clover isn't a freshman, but I'm sure that with the right pleading they can get around that :p



    Yeah, pleading insanity will probably work :P
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    8 years 11 months ago - 8 years 11 months ago #14 by Malady
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    • So, what new tactics are available with this new team?

    And isn't teaming up with a probability warper a risky proposition?

    Especially ones like Clover, who don't have an internal measure of what they've altered to know when the probabilities have gone into bad luck, which was mentioned in the TLW first story, IIRC.
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    8 years 11 months ago #15 by Phoenix Spiritus
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    • I imagine answering Gunny "so we sent down Clover so that she could use her luck to ..." would be good for at least a red face, if not a white one, remember the stated intention of the recruiting is to get Gunny to turn red white and blue :p
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