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Question The Bear, the Bitch, and Everything
- Sir Lee
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I didn't even start reading the story yet (I was converting it for my ePub reader) when I noticed this tiny issue: some question marks in the middle of the Hawaiian song at the end.
"Aha!" I thought, "this smells like diacritic conversion failure! No problem, I'll just google for a correct version of the lyrics and paste it in place, and that will satisfy my obsessiveness."
Turns out that it's not so easy. Roughly speaking, I found two different versions of the song:
- one that is widely tagged as coming from the Disney movie "Lilo & Stitch", and which I was able to find what appear to be, to my non-Hawaiian-reading eyes, fairly good copies and translations -- but which has MAJOR differences from the one E.E. used;
- And one that seems very similar to the one in the story (even to the unnecessary, hyphenated line-break) -- but without all the diacritics.
Now, in the interest of having the best possible story... can somebody point me to a version of the song which IS nearly the same as the one in the story, but WITH the diacritics? If you do so, I will figure out all the encoding things and make it available here as an in-place replacement.
I might attempt to figure it out line-by-line, but not understanding more than two or three words of Hawaiian (and those would be "aloha", "wahine" and maybe "kapu"), it will be a lot of work.
- E. E. Nalley
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kapalama.ksbe.edu/elementary/lilo_and_stitch/he_mele_trans.html
I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
- Dreamer
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Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.
The Bear, The Bitch, and Everything Part 1 comments
Ugh, setting up a charity for mutant children just for good PR. Payoff to keep the video involved Tansy from the press, bad day for the guy who filmed it if he leaks it after the payoff, scary man Tansy's dad. Plus find out if the guy has any past connections to Tansy, thorough. And wishes to know how Tansy was off Whateley Academy grounds in that situation in the first place, this isn't going to end well.
Completed her entire core plus all the training with Ito so nothing but electives for senior year, just what level Exemplar is Tansy I wonder. Spending time with Lanie and Wyatt, from the sounds of it in dream space I would hope otherwise that is a lot of traveling, oh boy. Huh, help from Wyatt and Kodiak helped Tansy figure out she is bisexual, not a repressed lesbian. Dang, all that between her and Lanie. Ah, confirmed it is all in dream space, plus deep affection for Wyatt, oh boy.
Whoa, all those emotions just from seeing Lanie, plus wondering how different she would be from Lanie. Picked up Marty and Steve from New York, bet that ride was crazy back. Talking about your sibling and his girlfriend's sex life, oh brother. She is going to show Tansy The Grotto!?! If the other girls find out this could be huge trouble.
Dead Oak Grove, between Poe and Hawthorne cottages, and the skeleton of an old oak tree being where the secret door into the Grotto is. Nice to know the exact location now. Princess Bride quote, very nice. Nice details on what it looks like on the inside. Mentioning how Mustang says all women are bisexual, which Lanie says there is something to it. Ouch, what kind of bad memories could have Tansy freaking out about security cameras or anything down there.
Legacy but don't know from what year, Maria aka Songbird knows about the place, betting Mrs. Carson and some of the other staff know about it. Okay, that is a huge mystery, how is the Grotto maintained and such from day to day. Whoa, what is Tansy going to reveal to Lanie that she has kept secret until now, she really has changed a lot. Finally, Lanie explains why Tansy should never, ever call herself a whore, something she needed to hear. Ah, guilt for being with Wyatt when Lanie wasn't there, something Lanie says she doesn't need to apologize about, good friend right there. Oh boy, getting into it in the real world now, things sure have changed a lot in just a year.
Crud, Coyote wanted them to do exactally that, that ancient spirit is a dangerous and unpredictable one.
A man like that, dangerous but also forgettable. Mr. Lewis from earlier is this man, yikes. And meeting with a Mr. Anders, a younger version of himself. The photographer of the footage already dead by a professional, yet left behind the device with the footage on it, weird.
*eyes bug out* That is her private room in Poe, Lanie just got upgraded to an impressive suite, wish I had something like it myself. All that for her job, all spelled out. No overnight guests, hehehe, love Lanie's reaction. Roslyn delayed, Lanie having to show all the freshman girls around the cottage and campus, plus explain about the spell being placed on them. Even Tansy is jealous and wishes she had signed up as an advisor for a room like this. Dang, keeping Tansy in mind if something changes, everyone has noticed how Tansy has matured in such a short amount of time. And yeah, who would have guessed those two would be lovers, farthest thing from possible when we first meet them in the older stories.
Pict banshee, intense dreams, dreaming parts of her life like this, wonder how much of it is connected to an ancestor and how much to her present self. One still alive, begging for mercy, whoa, that is a complex name. This is definitely another life, weird to experience is through her dreams. Helping out the man however she can, wonder if she can save him. Yikes, wound requiring magic of considerable power to save him.
Ouch, having to keep herself from retching from the dream, Grizzly pulling her into dream space to comfort her and assure her it was only a dream. Crud, past life incursion, no wonder it was so intense. Whoa, more in common with the stars while in dream space than with flesh and blood, that is heavy. And the energy that makes up Lanie's soul is very old.
Lanie's grandma always said she had an old soul, she isn't just descended from that Pict warrior, she was that Pict warrior. Whoa. Reincarnation was part of Christian doctrine until the Middle Ages, removed because too many serfs got the bright idea of telling the clergy they would pay their tithes extra in their next life. D'oh!
"Okay, Ah'll try, but you got to promise to keep me from throwing up! These are new sheets!"
Poe freshmen showing up, always fun to see. Hehehe, love how Lanie tells things to them, especially about her being out. And finding out about the changelings so early on, explaining how they need to help them, because the changelings didn't get taught all the things girls do with upbringing. Lanie is doing great on her job already.
Finding out about Lord Paramount, about the gold pile, Jamie, how Ms. Guzman would give everything to have Jamie back. About the original history of the school, about Tywyswr aka Ty West and such. These freshmen are learning things even some seniors haven't learned yet. Heh, so that is why they weigh the food, part of ongoing study of mutation.
At least there are a few friendly smiles for Tansy in Poe, Marla there and smiling, hoping that her dreams have come true. Yikes, telling Poise you consider VI more than a little frivolous, that takes guts. Tansy, don't tease the girl if you aren't going full in, it will hurt more. Full on infatuation, yikes. Oh boy, jealousy about Tansy and Lanie without even knowing if anything happened, this girl is dangerous. And then accusing and forcing Tansy into a kiss, this girl needs counseling.
That much trouble with assigning rooms and that much of the place still not finished, thought it was less, like 3-4 rooms at most. Ah, the brunette from earlier is Bethany aka Cover Girl. And she is overhearing what Lanie and Kayda are talking about, racing Picket's Revenge, Kayda joking like that, didn't think she had it in her. And teaching Kayda how to sail in the simulator, lucky. And Lanie having to bring Anomaly up, her job is simple for now, want to bet how soon that changes."This sex thing was so much simpler when I didn't enjoy it!"
Okay, that clears up and covers why she didn't show in the stories in the past better than the ending to Small Mercies actually. Plus fun way to put being made to interact with others."She said, and ah quote 'Anomaly is not to hide from the rest of the cottage and only come out when the Outcast come to get her.' Ah'm afraid you've been sentenced to be social with the rest."
Just following and not arguing, she is well-behaved. Bi Changeling, all that kept her out of sight for the most part from January to June. A lot to deal with.
Bwahaha, Monica is not a shy one, plus such a sense of humor, shows she hangs out with Jericho too much."Wanna find out if I'm into girls?"

Good lord, what has Murphy been through? Scar on her face, left eye black, glassy, and no discernable features, plus bigger than before. Oh boy, Murphy not happy to be here, Lanie not happy to have her there. Attack and BIT-splicing experiment involving Vamp!?! No wonder she is a mess and they are concerned about how she might change, what monster did this to her.
Former friend, what happened between them? Both feeling guilty, betrayed, and angry with each other, this is serious. Poor girl, a year of this to watch and see if she changes any more, if she doesn't she can go back next year to room with Grabby in Whitman. Murphy going to the Range 2 to take out some anger. Lanie kicked out of the Lit Chicks and Murphy back them up and slapped her nose too, dang, that is just nasty. Won't even talk to Lanie. Hope Monica is right about Murphy feeling guilty about something she did and Lanie and her can make up.
Dang, that is a good simulation to duplicate sea conditions in such a small area of water. Why did Lanie gesture Kayda to remain silent, that is unusual. Very interesting song that Tansy is singing. Thought it was an Hawaiian song, very lovely, wish I hear it actually sung. Summer home on Maui, every summer there except this year, dang. Ah, yachting is about the skill of the crew and the rules instead of the boat, interesting. Whoa, so that is how things are rated, handicap against a theoretical perfect boat.
Stomper, interesting name for a horse, Morlock, a city named Morlock. Domnall still alive, tough guy even with the fever. Angry at her for bringing an Irish Celt into their home, her mother not wishing to heal him, stating Irish Celts are their enemies. Yet she was an Irish Celt, her marriage was supposed to seal an oath of friendship between their people and her father betrayed it, ouch. Having to do all that to stay alive, saying she is a Pict now. And she wishes to save the man because he is a skilled warrior, hope this works out for them and he doesn't betray the Pict banshee who is Lanie and her ancestor.
Thank You for story comments appreciated and help me know me they are being read and liked.

- Malady
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The redhead's hand went out and took the blonde by the chin and forced her to look her in the eye. "Ah don't think you really know what that word means, because if you did you would never use it to describe yourself. Ah might be called loose, 'cause Ah sure didn't wait for marriage. Ah might be called a slut and, being honest with myself, Ah've been a bit casual and fast, maybe more than a lady should be. But a whore? Tansy, a whore only cares about money, or status, or things; she trades her body for what she wants because she can't trade her love. A whore can't love, she's forgotten how; don't ever, ever call yourself that."
The philosophical and such bits are always cool!
... Coyote... Well, that makes things a lot more interesting.
Dang. Got spoiled for Murphy 'cause I read this first...
... Why don't I have as many interesting things saved for this as for Murphy's Laws?? Different attention levels, I guess...
Hmm... Coyotes are wolves... No, wait, can't be the bitch 'cause Coyote's male... But, Lupine's related... And there might be a fem!Wolf spirit somewhere else??
"past life incursion" just sounds so bad... I guess I've been reading too much SCP or something. ... Dimensional Incursions.
Past Life Loophole had a brother too. Coincidence or not? How much of Elaine's family is reincarating?? 'Cause I'm thinking her mom might be one as well...
... How much of Banshee's life can be mapped onto Loophole's Life?
Stomper = Mustang?
Domnall = Kodiak?
Aunt = Carson???
The song was nice... And the info on how yacht racing works is informative, and shows Loophole being competitive as well. ... The Yacht race arc... That should be an interesting event to see conclude? It sets them so far away from Whateley, no?
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"… Yes," she replied. "She made it out like this was a big secret, but here's the thing. Being an engineer, if the faculty doesn't know about this place, Ah wonder who is balancing the chlorine levels in this water? Or keeping the heater working? Or washing and refolding those towels? All Ah can tell you is I've never been in here and seen anyone from the faculty or the staff working on it. There’s always towels, the water is always hot and clean and Ah don't really look into it much beyond that to be honest."
Thinky think think!

- DanZilla
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Sir Lee wrote: Sometimes I'm just too obsessive for words...
I didn't even start reading the story yet (I was converting it for my ePub reader) when I noticed this tiny issue: some question marks in the middle of the Hawaiian song at the end.
"Aha!" I thought, "this smells like diacritic conversion failure! No problem, I'll just google for a correct version of the lyrics and paste it in place, and that will satisfy my obsessiveness."
Turns out that it's not so easy. Roughly speaking, I found two different versions of the song:
- one that is widely tagged as coming from the Disney movie "Lilo & Stitch", and which I was able to find what appear to be, to my non-Hawaiian-reading eyes, fairly good copies and translations -- but which has MAJOR differences from the one E.E. used;
- And one that seems very similar to the one in the story (even to the unnecessary, hyphenated line-break) -- but without all the diacritics.
Now, in the interest of having the best possible story... can somebody point me to a version of the song which IS nearly the same as the one in the story, but WITH the diacritics? If you do so, I will figure out all the encoding things and make it available here as an in-place replacement.
I might attempt to figure it out line-by-line, but not understanding more than two or three words of Hawaiian (and those would be "aloha", "wahine" and maybe "kapu"), it will be a lot of work.
I took the reference EE provided and have gone through and put in the correct letters where I could... it doesn't match the EXACT wording we have so I can't be sure of everything... I also stripped out the quotation marks from the start and end of each section as they were unnecessary in this context and fixed some spacing and line-endings and wrapping that had gone "off".
- Sir Lee
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Note also that, while an ancestor of the Walcutts was a signatory of the Declaration of Independence, there's no one named Walcutt in our world's Declaration. There are a few possible explanations:
(1) In the Whateley Universe, the list of signatures is slightly different
(2) The ancestor was not named Walcutt, that is, the bloodline was not exclusively patrilineal.
(3) There's no "Walcutt", but there's an "Oliver Wolcott," which is pretty close. The written form of the name changed at some point.
- null0trooper
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Sir Lee wrote: (3) There's no "Walcutt", but there's an "Oliver Wolcott," which is pretty close. The written form of the name changed at some point.
My own surname has changed spellings at least twice since then, so that's not too far-fetched.
“Oh if only you knew…” Having to keep a secret about Poe was fine. She’d not cooperated with Horton trying to guide her through a promise that could be sealed with a Sorcerer’s Contract. Every instinct she had shrieked at her to never, ever make any promise, ever. Hanging out with Diamond and Caitlin told her the score.
“And Horton says you have to put up with the spell.”
“No, I don’t.” Monica shook her head. “I haven’t even told my twin sister about Poe’s secret.”
“I’m just the messenger, not the one messaging.” She looked thoughtful. “I’m Lanie, by the way.”
So we have a compulsion spell being made a condition of boarding at the school after it's too late for the student to be moved to another cottage, and after the school has accepted payment for the term. What happens if a student does refuse to be the target of a mind-altering spell that could incapacitate them at any time with no consequences for the caster? (If Marty had been flying when it kicked in and knocked her out, she could be dead instead of dating.)
Suppose one of the bespelled students had to testify in a court case. How valid is the testimony of a witness who turns out to be under a magical compulsion that affects what they can or cannot say?
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I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
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Wrayth wrote: I might be remembering this from a non cannon source, but I thought the "no talking about Poe" spell was not incapacitating... It just prevents a person from talking or writing the secret. And it wears off after the student is done with the school.
To be honest, at that age I would not have believed that the spell would wear off on its own like that, so I would have been out the door, looking for a bed elsewhere.
"Don't you see?" she wailed. "They hate us! They killed Jamie because he didn't fit in their little gender boxes and now they're going to kill us all! Every...!" her mouth snapped shut as she jerked trying to speak and unable.
"Marty?" he asked, startled. "Marty!"
She couldn't speak for the sobs and hiccups that wracked her. Finally, Mrs. Horton got up and pronounced a heavy sounding word while she touched Marty's forehead. The young blonde sagged as she lost consciousness so completely that her shell dissipated and the young, thin, mostly-androgynous boy underneath was exposed.
You're right. It was Mrs. Horton that knocked her out - I misremembered that part. The spell did rob her of the capacity for speech, which does seem to have made matters worse, not better.
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null0trooper wrote: . What happens if a student does refuse to be the target of a mind-altering spell that could incapacitate them at any time with no consequences for the caster?
As a practical matter, the students don't have a choice. The school does have the power of loco parentis to act in the best interests of the child, which the spell meets the criteria of. This is Spelled out (no pun intended) in the contract the parents sign giving the school permission to treat them medically as needed which may or may not include the use of magic.
As an interesting side note, it never ceases to amaze me as an author the things that I put into a story that I think will get lots of comments and laughs about that are frequently overlooked, or is things that I didn't pay that much attention to become matters of debate and great concern among the fans. Quite interesting of phenomena.
One of the matters in which specific I am talking about, there's an Easter egg in the spell the Picts mother uses to heal Domnall. If you're not getting the gag try reading it out loud.

I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
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E. E. Nalley wrote: As an interesting side note, it never ceases to amaze me as an author the things that I put into a story that I think will get lots of comments and laughs about that are frequently overlooked, or is things that I didn't pay that much attention to become matters of debate and great concern among the fans. Quite interesting of phenomena.
One of the matters in which specific I am talking about, there's an Easter egg in the spell the Picts mother uses to heal Domnall. If you're not getting the gag try reading it out loud.
I notice the same. Or people get things which I didn't intend (Freudian slip or misconstrual).
As to this Easter egg - I got it INSTANTLY.
Never give up, Never surrender! Captain Peter Quincy Taggert
- Malady
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- Sir Lee
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- Sir Lee
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Basically, the school has to figure out a way to impose the restrictions on her without her agreement, so they don't imprint on her soul.
- null0trooper
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E. E. Nalley wrote:
null0trooper wrote: . What happens if a student does refuse to be the target of a mind-altering spell that could incapacitate them at any time with no consequences for the caster?
As a practical matter, the students don't have a choice. The school does have the power of loco parentis to act in the best interests of the child, which the spell meets the criteria of. This is Spelled out (no pun intended) in the contract the parents sign giving the school permission to treat them medically as needed which may or may not include the use of magic.
This spell was never intended as a medical charm, but the school's going to pretend otherwise because it has better lawyers than ethics. No redress through the courts. Got it. As a practical matter, most kids that age wouldn't bat an eye. I'm just not one of those kids, nor one that responds well to coercion.
E. E. Nalley wrote: One of the matters in which specific I am talking about, there's an Easter egg in the spell the Picts mother uses to heal Domnall. If you're not getting the gag try reading it out loud.
Never saw the movie in full

On the other hand, explaining why the Pict's mother would know and use Gaelic in the story is a good catch. (IIRC, Lovecraft and company thought of Pictish as a language isolate, while the best current estimates are that it may have been a Brittonic dialect.)
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And I thought Nicol Williamson did a fantastic job as Merlin!

I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
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But as for the contracts and such, I wonder if there'd be a loophole for an agreement to come to pass without it being outright stated and therefore magically binding. Something along the lines of "I don't agree to you casting this spell on me, but I won't prevent you from doing so"? Assuming said spell is even able to function in one form or another without the express permission of the target, but I feel that it's a moral restriction on the part of Mrs. Horton and the rest of the staff more than anything. I could be wrong in this, of course.
Seriously, thank you for your time and effort. It is appreciated.
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Do I need a small wooden board to read it out properly? If so I shale opt not to.E. E. Nalley wrote:
null0trooper wrote: . What happens if a student does refuse to be the target of a mind-altering spell that could incapacitate them at any time with no consequences for the caster?
As a practical matter, the students don't have a choice. The school does have the power of loco parentis to act in the best interests of the child, which the spell meets the criteria of. This is Spelled out (no pun intended) in the contract the parents sign giving the school permission to treat them medically as needed which may or may not include the use of magic.
As an interesting side note, it never ceases to amaze me as an author the things that I put into a story that I think will get lots of comments and laughs about that are frequently overlooked, or is things that I didn't pay that much attention to become matters of debate and great concern among the fans. Quite interesting of phenomena.
One of the matters in which specific I am talking about, there's an Easter egg in the spell the Picts mother uses to heal Domnall. If you're not getting the gag try reading it out loud.
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I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
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And Sandra knows the secret, she learned it in Ill Winds.
- Valentine
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amratner wrote: Where was this spell first mentioned? I do not recall it from any of the Kimba stories.
And Sandra knows the secret, she learned it in Ill Winds.
Sandra doesn't know the secret. She knows that Toni and Nikki are Trans, but not about anything else. I think the spell is first mentioned in the scene with Marty and Steve.
Don't Drick and Drive.
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Valentine wrote:
amratner wrote: Where was this spell first mentioned? I do not recall it from any of the Kimba stories.
And Sandra knows the secret, she learned it in Ill Winds.
Sandra doesn't know the secret. She knows that Toni and Nikki are Trans, but not about anything else. I think the spell is first mentioned in the scene with Marty and Steve.
This is correct.
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Sir Lee wrote: Basically, the school has to figure out a way to impose the restrictions on her without her agreement, so they don't imprint on her soul.
Bella Horton could accept the student's statement that they affirm without oath that they will not willingly betray the Poe Secret. But she won't, or she would have months before.
Since it's taken this long to get her way, I'd bet that she knows there's a cost for imposing her will on one of the Fae, and has no intention of paying it herself.
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I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
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Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
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Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
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I totally would have buggered that up
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Excuse me. Coyotes are not wolves. Canines, yes. Wolves, no.Malady wrote: Hmm... Coyotes are wolves... No, wait, can't be the bitch 'cause Coyote's male... But, Lupine's related... And there might be a fem!Wolf spirit somewhere else??
(Why no, I'm not at all biased. What gave you that idea?

"Shared pain is lessened; shared joy, increased — thus do we refute entropy." - Spider Robinson
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She lied about being trans, got a gen female roomie.
Nikki and Toni trans roomies.
Same cottage as ayla.
Now same cottage as her sister who she knows, or can know, admitted to being herm.
Soon as she finds out that Murphy may be going herm, twigs that it's because Ayla's room mate is herm.
Diamond will twig soon, like late 2007 at the latest.
Still.
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annachie wrote: Fair old chance Diamond figgured it out by now anyway.
She lied about being trans, got a gen female roomie.
Nikki and Toni trans roomies.
Same cottage as ayla.
Now same cottage as her sister who she knows, or can know, admitted to being herm.
Soon as she finds out that Murphy may be going herm, twigs that it's because Ayla's room mate is herm.
Diamond will twig soon, like late 2007 at the latest.
Still.
We don't know if she lied about being trans, we don't know if Razor lied either. Considering the Outcast stories, it's fairly obvious that someone on campus knows, because they are together with 4 freshman GSD TGs.
Don't Drick and Drive.
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Valentine wrote:
annachie wrote: Fair old chance Diamond figgured it out by now anyway.
She lied about being trans, got a gen female roomie.
Nikki and Toni trans roomies.
Same cottage as ayla.
Now same cottage as her sister who she knows, or can know, admitted to being herm.
Soon as she finds out that Murphy may be going herm, twigs that it's because Ayla's room mate is herm.
Diamond will twig soon, like late 2007 at the latest.
Still.
We don't know if she lied about being trans, we don't know if Razor lied either. Considering the Outcast stories, it's fairly obvious that someone on campus knows, because they are together with 4 freshman GSD TGs.
when razor and diamond came to whateley there wasn't tunnel access from poe so the severe gsd kids would not of been put there but I don't see anything really stopping them or caitlen there now lol
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slapshots wrote: when razor and diamond came to whateley there wasn't tunnel access from poe so the severe gsd kids would not of been put there but I don't see anything really stopping them or caitlen there now lol
Well, Caitlyn is a Thornie, and as such more important rooming considerations than her gender. But yes, I expect that Poe could open to more GSD students now. But Razor won't move, because it would mean splitting with Joe. Sandra could make a case for it, considering the fiasco that was her last roommate situation. But she doesn't really need to - the Outcasts provide her with the support she needs, and she's friends with a fair number of Posies already. So there's no point to moving her, and she does have friends in her cottage that she'd want to stick with.
I'm still wondering how the dragon guy from Small Mercies was a Poesie considering I didn't see any indication that he could pass as a regular human.
"Shared pain is lessened; shared joy, increased — thus do we refute entropy." - Spider Robinson
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Arcanist Lupus wrote:
slapshots wrote: when razor and diamond came to whateley there wasn't tunnel access from poe so the severe gsd kids would not of been put there but I don't see anything really stopping them or caitlen there now lol
Well, Caitlyn is a Thornie, and as such more important rooming considerations than her gender. But yes, I expect that Poe could open to more GSD students now. But Razor won't move, because it would mean splitting with Joe. Sandra could make a case for it, considering the fiasco that was her last roommate situation. But she doesn't really need to - the Outcasts provide her with the support she needs, and she's friends with a fair number of Posies already. So there's no point to moving her, and she does have friends in her cottage that she'd want to stick with.
I'm still wondering how the dragon guy from Small Mercies was a Poesie considering I didn't see any indication that he could pass as a regular human.
Poe contains GSD students. The only ones who have to go in Hawthorn despite sexuality issues are ones who are unsafe.
I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
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Poe contains GSD students. The only ones who have to go in Hawthorn despite sexuality issues are ones who are unsafe.
My understanding was that that is only a recent change, though.
The Wiki wrote: Originally, only the three farthest cottages, Hawthorne, Twain and Whitman, were accessible by tunnel. The reason is that those are the cottages that house students unable to pass for baselines, who therefore need the tunnels to avoid being seen on red flag days. In November 2006, a spur was built from the Hawthorne tunnel to Poe, which means Poe might receive GSD students in the future.
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it really only manifested fully after adulthood so he could still hide under a hoodie.
Spoiler: He's not a changeling.
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amratner wrote: Sorry, but the last few posts have confused me. Who are you talking about?
They're talking about Daryl, they dragon avatar, introduced in Small Mercies .
Now, as to GSD mutants in Poe, colored-flag days and GSD mutants needing to use the tunnels... everybody ASSUMES this is an original feature of the school. What if they just didn't let outsiders into the campus in the past?
In addition, There's a GSD mutant in the Kimba stories pretty much from Day-one (at least in Diane's later written stories) and they didn't have the tunnel then.
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DanZilla wrote:
amratner wrote: Sorry, but the last few posts have confused me. Who are you talking about?
They're talking about Daryl, they dragon avatar, introduced in Small Mercies .
Now, as to GSD mutants in Poe, colored-flag days and GSD mutants needing to use the tunnels... everybody ASSUMES this is an original feature of the school. What if they just didn't let outsiders into the campus in the past?
In addition, There's a GSD mutant in the Kimba stories pretty much from Day-one (at least in Diane's later written stories) and they didn't have the tunnel then.
While not letting outsiders on campus, except at certain times, may have been possible when the school had a very small student population. They would need so much food delivered now, that they would likely require deliveries many times a week. Plus deliveries to the campus bookstore/notWalmart, Mail, stuff being sent via all the shipping services. . It would be really hard to close the school to outsiders.
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I don't think think the presence of just six people makes it that obvious, actually. Everybody already knows that Poe is the cottage for people who need support for their psychological issues. LGBT folks are more likely than average to have psychological issues, and people who've had an unconsensual sex change are very likely to have psychological issues. Poe is the obvious place to put them. That's the beauty of Poe's cover story. And don't forget that to believe that Poe is secretly the LGBT+changeling cottage also means believing that the administration and dozens of new high school students per year have been successfully maintaining a long-running conspiracy .annachie wrote: Fair old chance Diamond figgured it out by now anyway.
She lied about being trans, got a gen female roomie.
Nikki and Toni trans roomies.
Same cottage as ayla.
Now same cottage as her sister who she knows, or can know, admitted to being herm.
Soon as she finds out that Murphy may be going herm, twigs that it's because Ayla's room mate is herm.
Diamond will twig soon, like late 2007 at the latest.
Still.
What would be really hilarious would be to find out that Poe really is the nuthouse, and they just tell the residents that it's the alternative sexuality cottage to put them at ease.
Valentine wrote: While not letting outsiders on campus, except at certain times, may have been possible when the school had a very small student population. They would need so much food delivered now, that they would likely require deliveries many times a week. Plus deliveries to the campus bookstore/notWalmart, Mail, stuff being sent via all the shipping services. . It would be really hard to close the school to outsiders.
Deliveries don't have to take place in the middle of campus. They could have had deliveries made to a warehouse in Dunwich rather than campus itself, and then had Whateley staff pick it up and bring it the rest of the way. Or (more likely) they could have had an out-of-the-way delivery zone on campus, with the GSD cases just avoiding that zone and the area around the road leading to it.
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In Gen1, there's no question that Poe is both the secret LGBT dorm and legitimately the crazy house. The majority of the POV characters anyways, "split personality" before and presently-depressed Nikki Riley, Wondercute's leader, redeemed villainess Vamp, Hippolyta now that Sara is missing, Spectacle of the Spring Kayda, but now perhaps most importantly, Downpour.Kettlekorn wrote: I don't think think the presence of just six people makes it that obvious, actually. Everybody already knows that Poe is the cottage for people who need support for their psychological issues. LGBT folks are more likely than average to have psychological issues, and people who've had an unconsensual sex change are very likely to have psychological issues. Poe is the obvious place to put them. That's the beauty of Poe's cover story. And don't forget that to believe that Poe is secretly the LGBT+changeling cottage also means believing that the administration and dozens of new high school students per year have been successfully maintaining a long-running conspiracy .
What would be really hilarious would be to find out that Poe really is the nuthouse, and they just tell the residents that it's the alternative sexuality cottage to put them at ease.
There just really aren't that many "crazy" students elsewhere, unless you count the other Wondercute members, the ultraviolents, Jobe at her worst, Joe's taste in clothing, and Sandra and the rest of the Outcasts having PTSD.
Gen 2, 'the crazy' is much more evenly distributed among the POV characters. The PTSD girls are in Poe, International TMZ celebrity Tia is in Melville, and Tanya's dorm is full of girls in most desperate need of acceptance, reassurance, and a firm hug.
Given the other events that started in Gen2, there is much higher risk of the secret getting blown in 2016/2017 than back during Gen1.
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Katssun wrote:
In Gen1, there's no question that Poe is both the secret LGBT dorm and legitimately the crazy house. The majority of the POV characters anyways, "split personality" before and presently-depressed Nikki Riley, Wondercute's leader, redeemed villainess Vamp, Hippolyta now that Sara is missing, Spectacle of the Spring Kayda, but now perhaps most importantly, Downpour.Kettlekorn wrote: I don't think think the presence of just six people makes it that obvious, actually. Everybody already knows that Poe is the cottage for people who need support for their psychological issues. LGBT folks are more likely than average to have psychological issues, and people who've had an unconsensual sex change are very likely to have psychological issues. Poe is the obvious place to put them. That's the beauty of Poe's cover story. And don't forget that to believe that Poe is secretly the LGBT+changeling cottage also means believing that the administration and dozens of new high school students per year have been successfully maintaining a long-running conspiracy .
What would be really hilarious would be to find out that Poe really is the nuthouse, and they just tell the residents that it's the alternative sexuality cottage to put them at ease.
There just really aren't that many "crazy" students elsewhere, unless you count the other Wondercute members, the ultraviolents, Jobe at her worst, Joe's taste in clothing, and Sandra and the rest of the Outcasts having PTSD.
Gen 2, 'the crazy' is much more evenly distributed among the POV characters. The PTSD girls are in Poe, International TMZ celebrity Tia is in Melville, and Tanya's dorm is full of girls in most desperate need of acceptance, reassurance, and a firm hug.
Given the other events that started in Gen2, there is much higher risk of the secret getting blown in 2016/2017 than back during Gen1.
Bwahahahaha, how about OC Dee, Olympia, Mega Death, Compiler, Montana, Frank, Nacht, Bomber, Geomancer, Peril, Psydoe, Reach, Skybolt, Cavalier, Stalwart, and none of those are on your list. That doesn't include the 7 other known Diedrick's sufferers on campus either. Or any of the 4 or 5 other known psychological afflictions that occur in mutants.
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Valentine wrote: Bwahahahaha, how about OC Dee, Olympia, Mega Death, Compiler, Montana, Frank, Nacht, Bomber, Geomancer, Peril, Psydoe, Reach, Skybolt, Cavalier, Stalwart, and none of those are on your list. That doesn't include the 7 other known Diedrick's sufferers on campus either. Or any of the 4 or 5 other known psychological afflictions that occur in mutants.
More than half of these kids are either no more mentally ill than the average teenager, or they weren't when they originally showed up at Whateley.
Not that Slapdash is anything close to being as disabled as Mega-Death, but putting all the Diedrick's cases in the same building? Yeah ... Let's move all the odds manglers and ragers in with them, and see how long before it ends up either vaporized or in orbit.
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null0trooper wrote:
Valentine wrote: Bwahahahaha, how about OC Dee, Olympia, Mega Death, Compiler, Montana, Frank, Nacht, Bomber, Geomancer, Peril, Psydoe, Reach, Skybolt, Cavalier, Stalwart, and none of those are on your list. That doesn't include the 7 other known Diedrick's sufferers on campus either. Or any of the 4 or 5 other known psychological afflictions that occur in mutants.
More than half of these kids are either no more mentally ill than the average teenager, or they weren't when they originally showed up at Whateley.
Not that Slapdash is anything close to being as disabled as Mega-Death, but putting all the Diedrick's cases in the same building? Yeah ... Let's move all the odds manglers and ragers in with them, and see how long before it ends up either vaporized or in orbit.
Montana, Reach, Skybolt and Cav are the only ones on that list that are having problems from stuff that happened to them at Whateley.
OC Dee was on meds for her OCD before she arrived.
Olympia has mental problems when she isn't Dricking.
Mega Death's are solely from Deidricks.
Compiler experimented on herself with untested technology to achieve a "perfect" body.
Frank has severe emotional problems due to his mutation.
Nacht has pretty bad emotional problems thanks to her "mother."
Bomber is a psychopath.
Geomancer has worse issues than Aquerna who is getting help.
Peril is probably the best on this list, but anyone that does the stunts he does needs some counseling.
Psydoe has a debilitating phobia that needs treatment.
Stalwart doesn't even know what century it is, he is a bit delusional.
Even if some of them are no worse off than average teenager, that doesn't mean that they still aren't a bit crazy and need help.
No Slapdash isn't as bad off as MD, but isn't that a bit like saying "you've only lost a hand, that's not as bad as Ralph over there, he lost his arm?"
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He can at least blast a hole in the ground or pynch concrete to take his focus off people
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What happens when you have clearly crazy students, with no sexual issues, in the other dorms? What is the excuse for them not being in Poe?
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Huh. I think that the "Poe is for crazies" cover is spread as a rumor, rather than an official policy. If they're not publicly admitting that such a policy exists, it makes it difficult for anybody to questions the ins and outs of exactly how the policy works.peter wrote: There is one thing I've always wondered about the whole "Poe is for the Crazy" coverup/excuse.
What happens when you have clearly crazy students, with no sexual issues, in the other dorms? What is the excuse for them not being in Poe?
That said, I went looking for where the cover was explained, and I can't find it. I searched the original introductory stories for the words "mental", "head case", and "craz" (for both 'crazy' and 'crazies'), and wasn't able to find any mention of the cover story. Does anybody know where it was first mentioned?
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Also, there's a hell of a lot more to a clinical mental illness than being different from everyone else, or "clearly crazy". For example, Peril, who's just another (stereotypical) Southern boy out to have some fun as long as he gets an adrenaline rush and it doesn't hurt someone else. He just happens to have regeneration, so "crazy" stunts for a baseline only rank at "yeah, I had to sit down for a while" for him.
Not even counting the characters like Slapdash and Bomber who are functional, socially isolating someone (and tossing them into the "nut house" IS doing that) just because they have a diagnosed mental illness is often the worst thing you can do to them. However, someone having social anxiety symptoms might need less forced social interaction for a while.
Tossing random people together just because they have a mental illness is also very high on the sliding scale of stupidity even if only because one person's symptoms can be another's trigger point. There's also the simple fact that many psychologists refuse to recognize: not every condition responds well, or at all, to any one type of therapy. Now throw powers into the mix.
tl,dr,dc version: The response to a student who has a mental illness has to be tailored to the individual and their actual needs.
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Arcanist Lupus wrote: That said, I went looking for where the cover was explained, and I can't find it. I searched the original introductory stories for the words "mental", "head case", and "craz" (for both 'crazy' and 'crazies'), and wasn't able to find any mention of the cover story. Does anybody know where it was first mentioned?
Not sure about the first mention, but it looks like most of the details are handled off-screen.
In Ayla and the New School , it's clear that incoming Poe residents have been told about the cover story.
Billie was just sitting down, and...
OH MY GOD! She was deliberately sitting next to the werewolf! Was she nuts?
Oh, wait. We were in Poe. We were supposed to be nuts.
When the question comes about "not-crazy person X being in Poe", the "helper" cover story is in circulation (not so much a cover in Wallflower's case)
Kismet immediately started in French, “Is it true that you are in the Lunatic House? Poe Cottage?”
. . .
Cytherea said, “Not all of the students in Poe are crazy. I hear that some are there merely for easier observation in case they need counseling, and some are there because they are natural helpers who would be good roommates with a lunatic.” Hmm, did she know some people in Poe?
In A Simple Game , Carmilla is advised to keep it quiet.
“Well, let me be the first to reassure you that Whately has a strict non-discrimination policy, which is why we have Poe cottage. Everyone here knows what they are, so there are no misunderstandings, just keep it quiet from the other cottages.
In The Big Idea , it's clear that Admin is well aware of Poe's reputation among other students.
“No Miss Kumler, Sawyer has already suffered enough, and will suffer even more before the dust settles. I have no intention of dropping him into the middle of Dickinson that way.” Carson paused … “So, where DO we put you two?”
“Poe?” Hartford asked, over-casually.
“No… I don’t think so… After all, it’s supposed to be a temporary measure… Hawthorne would be both embarrassing and too expensive. Melville.
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Arcanist Lupus wrote: Huh. I think that the "Poe is for crazies" cover is spread as a rumor, rather than an official policy. If they're not publicly admitting that such a policy exists, it makes it difficult for anybody to questions the ins and outs of exactly how the policy works.
That said, I went looking for where the cover was explained, and I can't find it. I searched the original introductory stories for the words "mental", "head case", and "craz" (for both 'crazy' and 'crazies'), and wasn't able to find any mention of the cover story. Does anybody know where it was first mentioned?
If you give a plausible explanation for something, most people will not think too hard about it.
I will use Murphy as an example:
She's, by her peers standard, completely cracked in the head. She is suffering from untreated ADHD, she's extremely aggressive when confronted in hostile fashion, and *spoiler* she is undiagnosed Schizoid Personality disorder. (I got the diagnosis after I made her and didn't know to filter that out)
She doesn't really get on well with anyone save a very select few individuals. And she unintentionally burned one.
She's a PRIME candidate for untreated crazy, and dragging her into Poe before she shows signs of Vamps fence-sitting gender just lends credibility to Poe. And I havent decided if she will. I plan to flip a coin when the time comes to do the reveal.
Few in Whitman object because Murphy is difficult to get along with.
But think about the behaviors of kids who dont want to be outted. There's going to be measurable and notable paranoia. There's going to be antsy and clannish behavior. There's going to be a certain level of logic no one else can parse who isn't similar.
So people see what they expect to see.
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Arcanist Lupus wrote:
Huh. I think that the "Poe is for crazies" cover is spread as a rumor, rather than an official policy. If they're not publicly admitting that such a policy exists, it makes it difficult for anybody to questions the ins and outs of exactly how the policy works.peter wrote: There is one thing I've always wondered about the whole "Poe is for the Crazy" coverup/excuse.
What happens when you have clearly crazy students, with no sexual issues, in the other dorms? What is the excuse for them not being in Poe?
That said, I went looking for where the cover was explained, and I can't find it. I searched the original introductory stories for the words "mental", "head case", and "craz" (for both 'crazy' and 'crazies'), and wasn't able to find any mention of the cover story. Does anybody know where it was first mentioned?
The earliest "mentions" of it, are more of implications.
Another Day, We Were Going Where? wrote: “Don’t worry guys. I understand. We have rules over at Poe too.” That last statement seemed to make Blot and Link a little nervous for some reason. Harry just looked relieved. I wondered what the other two had heard about Poe.
Harry mentions rumors just after that.
Just after Toni absconds with T-Bird
Toni and the Tiger wrote: The kids at the tables near us took notice of this, and I heard someone mutter, “Yep, a Poe girl. Figgers.” Hey, screw ‘em.
I'm not sure where the first blatant mention is.
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JG wrote: BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
I fail to see the humor here, but I am pleased to have brightened your day.
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Arcanist Lupus wrote:
Huh. I think that the "Poe is for crazies" cover is spread as a rumor, rather than an official policy. If they're not publicly admitting that such a policy exists, it makes it difficult for anybody to questions the ins and outs of exactly how the policy works.peter wrote: There is one thing I've always wondered about the whole "Poe is for the Crazy" coverup/excuse.
What happens when you have clearly crazy students, with no sexual issues, in the other dorms? What is the excuse for them not being in Poe?
That said, I went looking for where the cover was explained, and I can't find it. I searched the original introductory stories for the words "mental", "head case", and "craz" (for both 'crazy' and 'crazies'), and wasn't able to find any mention of the cover story. Does anybody know where it was first mentioned?
In an interesting situation, when becomes relative. In story chronology Ayla is told by Mrs. Horton on Tuesday September 5th just after breakfast, but that story wasn't published until three and a half years after the first story was published.
So it becomes dependent upon how the stories are read.
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Arcanist Lupus wrote:
JG wrote: BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
I fail to see the humor here, but I am pleased to have brightened your day.
Joe just likes being called an authorlord. It's close to overlord, and he's really set on being one when he grows up. (notes that there IS a list of things JG isn't allowed to do... and it IS posted in the WA Universe section with our other important universe defining documents).
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(The other piece of writing/fan terminology that I'm trying to get established here is RAFO (Read And Find Out), from the Robert Jordan/Brandon Sanderson fanbase. It's just such a handy response to any story question that you don't wish to answer.)
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The Bear, The Bitch, and Everything Part 2 comments

Ooo, not being able to get back at her tormentors, hating being a mutant because of it and lashing out at Montana like she did because of it, harsh. Having to see the same look in Lanie's face, the heartache and despair, to realize what she had done to Montana when she first came to Whateley, hard lesson indeed.
If only more people would remember this simple truth. Having to accept that someone might not forgive and forget something you've done, another harsh truth. Dang, had me tearing up there with Tansy, poor kid is a wreck."Everyone, everywhere makes mistakes."
On a mission to mend fences between his people and the Pict, yet ambushed by bandits, only to be saved by a Pict. Barely surviving long enough for help to arrive, that is an epic tale to tell to children one day. Trying to romance her and gets a dagger to the throat, and dang, it worked, can see where Lanie gets some of that fire of hers from.
Oh @#!$, who did Danny attack and why? Ah, Wihinape attacked someone and Danny had to stop her before she went too far from the sounds of it. Hehe, Danny having dreams about Tansy, poor boy. Oh boy, Dump Truck taunting Danny and calling him gay over and over, something was bound to happen. Runs into Danny on purpose, than taunts him, so Danny punches him which doesn't hurt him, yet he attacks him back, great.
Beaten up so Wihinape takes over and tears DT up, only for Danny to take back over right as security shows up and he gets blamed for starting it, so he panics and runs, oh boy. Ouch, Tansy using her powers to try and get Danny out of trouble with security, only for Carson to show up.
At least DT will live, Carson not taking any of Tansy's nonsense right now, and Danny tells his side of things as they went down. Either get Wihinape under control or an ultraviolent armband for the rest of the year, yikes. 2 weeks detention and stating he needs to learn proportional response, less than expected. That is a lot of charges, Tansy explains she was trying to keep Danny calm so he would turn himself in, her methods are terrible but Carson is pleased with her intentions. 3 page report for it and Carson is proud of her progress, dang, that is huge for her.
Tansy wearing a shirt like that, plus teasing Danny about cutting grass and trimming bushes with his shirt off, poor boy is lucky he isn't bright red after that comment from her. Poor Danny can't believe so many hate mutants so much they have to keep a secret identity, etc. Ah, getting Danny to learn from Jericho and Razorback, smart.
*eyes bug out* She taught herself guitar in 5 minutes, 36 seconds, that would takes months if not years for a baseline. She could play "Dream On...!" like that, good lord. Even playing it with some mistakes after such a short amount of time, that is definitely superhuman.
Nice Empire Strikes Back reference. And ouch, painful truth why many hate mutants, things others struggle to learn can come so easy to them, especially exemplars."that...is why you fail."
Tansy needs to stop thinking that way, she deserves friends, she is working hard to change from what she was. Dang, never thought I would agree so strong with Ms. Hartford. Recruiting Lanie into their little cabal, now Hartford has upset me again, don't like that idea at all. And Tansy talks of landing Kayda as well, oh boy, feel less sorry for her. Know they are trying to save the world, but messing with Lanie and Kayda is just wrong, bringing them into Syndicate activities is bad.
Seeing how others react to Tansy still, especially Skids, gets the point across only those close to her or watching her progress know how much she has changed. Everyone else still sees her as she was in the past. Not calling out to Kayda because of Skids, this is going to complicate things later on, at least imo.
Ah, so telling her about the yacht race and getting Hartford onboard and even Carson, Tansy is more clever than even I think Hartford realizes.
What are they doing at that Data center? A communicator from a teenage boy, footage sold to someone and recordings of when it happened. Yet the target has been dealt with, all this to cover up Tansy's involvement or find out what she said to a certain someone. Mr. Lewis is definitely a cautious one, wonder if the recording being left behind is a trap.
Winter and Domnall walking with a cane, how many months has it been I wonder. Flattering each other while teaching each other their language, cute. Ah, by becoming bean sith she gets to chose who she spends her time with and who she will wed, very nice. *glasses steam up* Dang, and we see a little of where Lanie gets her steamy languages she flirts with from. And they are going to get married, seeing her ancestor and past incarnation like this must be a real trip for Lanie.
Wyatt dressed like an Irish warrior poet, just like Lanie's past incarnation husband, Aunghadhail must have known more than she let on. Ethel, Lanie's middle name is Ethel for her great aunt on her mother's side, woo boy. Bwahaha, Virgil because his dad has a western fixation and due to being 11 lbs. 4 oz. when born his mom was unconscious when he was named. Ouch, Kayda saying she is not feeling well, so not dream space right now as she is lying down.
Dang, find out about the organization that Hartford is a part of and what they do, that would blow almost anyone's mind. That many near Earth objects capable of wiping everything out, yikes feels like an understatement. Seeing pictures of the Committee members, Tansy is strong not break after finding out who Hartford is working with. Dang, buying a yacht for them for the race, thought they were going with Lanie's boat.
Ah, just got back from training in the other dimension, Kayda would be in a bad mood Tansy or no after that. Marla Fontaine wants to get into the special class with Lanie and Kayda, she doesn't know what she is asking. Oh boy, Tansy trying to lighten the mood and only making Kayda more upset, doesn't even know she is doing it. And Lanie doesn't see it either at this point, no wonder things get worse before they get better. *sighs* Lanie flirting with Tansy like that, just doesn't feel right for their relationship to have gone this far after all her talk of remaining loyal to Wyatt to Kayda.
Rules about which powers are disqualifying advantage powers, thorough organization. Jules Vern, very nice name for a Whateley Academy boat. Oh boy, Tansy on Cloud 9 and giving Kayda a hug, not even noticing how upset Kayda is, can't wait till we reach the point in the story where this is resolved. Seeing how Kayda is reacting from Tansy's perspective this time doesn't make it any less painful to watch.
Great, distracted thinking about what she did with Lanie in the shower. Upset about the secrets she is keeping from Lanie, she needs to let it go, the past is in the past. Having to deal with her father's secretary, Rita, just another reminder her mom isn't around. All about what happened in Wyoming and talk about worrying she will be kidnapped, oh brother. Bwahahaha, bunny ears behind Kayda's head by Danny, priceless.
Boy, didn't think marriage contracts existed like that so far back, interesting. Hand fasting and Christian vows, nice mix of cultures. Uh oh, wonder what that chill was about, hope it doesn't mean her new in-laws are planning to attack.
Ah, Rita not even around with Tansy's mom was committed, just another in a line which her father has used since. Nancy Coolidge, someone who needs a dose of karma in Tansy's opinion, forget who she is. Reversed glamour, wonder if she could help Nikki learn that trick with her glamour or if it is too different from hers. Neat trick. Ah, evidence Nancy betrayed Wyatt and the Alphas to the Don. Confirmation from another source and Wyatt knows Nancy is a traitor.
Ouch, Kayda running from them once again. And Nancy gets a very public boot from the Alphas. And Wyatt lays down the law about what happened last year in the Alphas not happening again. Pity anyone who tries.
Mr. Lewis there with info for Tansy's father. News of the original photographer dying, plus evidence of who did it on the phone left behind, oh boy. Not sure if it a third party trying to set Mr. Walcutt after a rival or just a sloppy job. Things just keep getting more complicated.
Danny at the stables, all so he can watch Tansy, boy has got it bad. Already finished with his chores for detention from the sound of it, plus can hide from Wondercute there and watch Tansy ride, saying she is a skilled rider. Awww, poor Tango, going from Maui and having to deal with the winters in New Hampshire. And Tansy is even going to give Danny riding lessons, lucky boy.
Dang, bringing in professionals to finish up their home, I knew Domnall came from a rich family but dang. Taunting and innuendo, these women don't hold back, bet they could make a sailor blush. A banner that is the sign of the Prince, a black arrow calling the various towns to war. Knew trouble was brewing with that chill she felt earlier.
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But Tansy toying with Danny, whether she realizes she's doing it or not, is a bit concerning.
Is Kayda going to be the one who helps Tansy get over her guilt? Mustang is right. She can't ever tell Lanie she helped push Lifeline over the edge, going further than she intended.
Edit: I wonder which picture of the Space Expansion members surprised her the most, Dr. Dad? Someone else we don't know? Somebody with business dealings or rivalry with her father?
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Katssun wrote: Good to know they weren't totally clueless about Kayda's growing weirdness and apprehension, they were just very distracted by the excitement of getting the sailing club going. Lanie and Tansy kept trying to let her know too, but she kept running off. I love the dual perspectives and almost 'unreliable narrator' aspect of it. Kayda glossing over all the times they were trying to include her, and Tansy and Lanie missing the really overt signs of her growing distress. Tansy's mistake was not being persistent and grabbing Kayda in the garage to find Lanie together.
But Tansy toying with Danny, whether she realizes she's doing it or not, is a bit concerning.
Is Kayda going to be the one who helps Tansy get over her guilt? Mustang is right. She can't ever tell Lanie she helped push Lifeline over the edge, going further than she intended.
Edit: I wonder which picture of the Space Expansion members surprised her the most, Dr. Dad? Someone else we don't know? Somebody with business dealings or rivalry with her father?
Either Ayla's father or uncle.
Don't Drick and Drive.
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- Esar
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E. E. Nalley wrote: Not to worry Esar, you get a bit of your wish too! Carry on.
If you had any doubt about it, you have delivered and I was not disappointed to say the least.
(and If I remember correctly, she still has not seen him in his Danica form who has been described as being pretty much in Fey league.)
Thanks a lot for this new part.
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This seems to have a funny statement in it. Why was hand-embroidered mentioned. It couldn't be machine embroidered.
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I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
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Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
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Fate guard you and grant you a Light to brighten your Way.
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Don't Drick and Drive.
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I mean nautical books you have:
Jules Verne (20,000 leagues under the sea), French
Patrick O'Brian (Aubrey/Maturin series), UK ('Master and Commander' for those who only know books by movies)
C.S. Forester (Horatio Hornblower series), UK
Robert Louis Stevenson (Treasure Island), UK
Herman Melville (Moby Dick), American, but name already in use.
Ernest Hemingway (The old man and the sea), American
There is a list of the most popular nautically themed books , but these ones seem to be the most 'Named recognised' nautical stories to me.
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Phoenix Spiritus wrote: None of them strikes me as particularly 'nautical'.
I mean nautical books you have:
Jules Verne (20,000 leagues under the sea), French
Patrick O'Brian (Aubrey/Maturin series), UK ('Master and Commander' for those who only know books by movies)
C.S. Forester (Horatio Hornblower series), UK
Robert Louis Stevenson (Treasure Island), UK
Herman Melville (Moby Dick), American, but name already in use.
Ernest Hemingway (The old man and the sea), American
There is a list of the most popular nautically themed books , but these ones seem to be the most 'Named recognised' nautical stories to me.
I noticed something else with that list. Do you really want to name your boat after the author of The Caine Mutiny, or Robinson Crusoe, or Mutiny on the Bounty, or any of the other 'disaster' on a boat books?
Don't Drick and Drive.
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Valentine wrote: I noticed something else with that list. Do you really want to name your boat after the author of The Caine Mutiny, or Robinson Crusoe, or Mutiny on the Bounty, or any of the other 'disaster' on a boat books?
A lot of people don't realize that mutiny on the bounty was the first book of a trilogy, the other 2 books are Men Against the Sea and The Pitcairn Islanders.
While The Pitcairn Islanders deals with Fletcher Christian and the other mutineers settling on Pitcairn Island, Men Against the Sea details one of the greatest feats of seamanship ever recorded in human history. After Lieut. Bligh and his loyalists are put into the open boat a few hundred miles from Fiji Lieut. Bligh with only a compass and his memory of his charts performed a feat of dead reckoning navigation taking the men to the only friendly port in the hemisphere the island of Timor, a journey of 3,618 nautical miles (6,701 km; 4,164 mi).
I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
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I hope that Sir Lee will share the cover he comes up with for this, as I'm genuinely curious.
I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
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E. E. Nalley wrote:
Valentine wrote: I noticed something else with that list. Do you really want to name your boat after the author of The Caine Mutiny, or Robinson Crusoe, or Mutiny on the Bounty, or any of the other 'disaster' on a boat books?
A lot of people don't realize that mutiny on the bounty was the first book of a trilogy, the other 2 books are Men Against the Sea and The Pitcairn Islanders.
While The Pitcairn Islanders deals with Fletcher Christian and the other mutineers settling on Pitcairn Island, Men Against the Sea details one of the greatest feats of seamanship ever recorded in human history. After Lieut. Bligh and his loyalists are put into the open boat a few hundred miles from Fiji Lieut. Bligh with only a compass and his memory of his charts performed a feat of dead reckoning navigation taking the men to the only friendly port in the hemisphere the island of Timor, a journey of 3,618 nautical miles (6,701 km; 4,164 mi).
Yeah, and almost straight after, as Governor of New South Wales, the New South Wales Corps rebel and depose him as Governor and send him back to Britain, so he has two successful mutinies against his name, not a great record.
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I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
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However, for some reason the one I thought of was Ursula Le Guin - specifically regarding the Earthsea books, where sailing plays a significant role, though needless to say it was not really the focus. It is a rather tenuous connection, though, so it probably wouldn't work.
I wonder what Fina's reaction would be if she heard about the yacht being named the Jules Verne. I am guessing that after a few moments of twitchy discomposure, she'd end up laughing her head off.
Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
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I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
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Phoenix Spiritus wrote: None of them strikes me as particularly 'nautical'.
I mean nautical books you have:
Jules Verne (20,000 leagues under the sea), French
Patrick O'Brian (Aubrey/Maturin series), UK ('Master and Commander' for those who only know books by movies)
C.S. Forester (Horatio Hornblower series), UK
Robert Louis Stevenson (Treasure Island), UK
Herman Melville (Moby Dick), American, but name already in use.
Ernest Hemingway (The old man and the sea), American
There is a list of the most popular nautically themed books , but these ones seem to be the most 'Named recognised' nautical stories to me.
though used it could of been Mark Twain or his actual name Samuel Clemmens
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As for covers... sorry to disappoint, E.E., but I didn't get any particular inspiration yet. I have a "generic Whateley cover layout" that I use in most cases, with small variations (mostly replacing the Whateley crest with a pic of the protagonist), and so far that's what I'm using for this one. I mean, I can't draw worth a damn, so I have to work with whatever appropriate artwork or photo I can find online... and in the case of Whateley, well, finding appropriate artwork for 234 books is enough to discourage anyone. OK, not actually 234, maybe a dozen of those have cover artwork made available by the author or some fan... but in most cases, I simply don't have anything to work with. Thus the generic covers.
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I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
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... But, that's Tansy, and maybe she learned differently or something?? ... Actually since its just Tansy, I'm removing it 'cause its supposed to be for authors' mistakes, and there's nothing indicating author error.
... Most horse forums seem to agree with the other Troper...
Also some claim about AutomatonHorses, but I have only vague guesses where to find that.
... What is really interesting now, is what it would mean about Tansy and her horse knowledge... She's a bit more knowledgeable than Wondercute, but (something...)
Jade might be an even better rider, 'cause she can do Pseudo-ESP. ... ... Can Tansy do Psi on horses?
We haven't gotten anything from Tansy's POV on horse-riding, have we...
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Malady wrote: So... someone on TVTropes just criticized the "the secret to good riding is gripping with your knees", and is saying that it's " exactly what you're not supposed to do "
... But, that's Tansy, and maybe she learned differently or something??
... Most horse forums seem to agree with the other Troper...
Also some claim about AutomatonHorses, but I have only vague guesses where to find that.
I thought it was to wear pantyhose under your uniform ...
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Malady wrote: So... someone on TVTropes just criticized the "the secret to good riding is gripping with your knees", and is saying that it's "exactly what you're not supposed to do"
... But, that's Tansy, and maybe she learned differently or something?? ... Actually since its just Tansy, I'm removing it 'cause its supposed to be for authors' mistakes, and there's nothing indicating author error.
This is one of the most hotly debated topics in equestrian circles. The answer is...yes. If you're doing certain forms of advanced riding, dressage, steeple chase or barrel, knee gripping is something you loose points for because it damages your posture. But for new and inexperienced riders, as I learned, it's a great aid in maintaining your saddle because most horses are trained to SLOW DOWN when you grip them with your knees. Posture in my view is something you worry about once you've mastered staying on the horse.
That's why it's the secret.
Tho I am curious, where is this taking place on TVTropes?
I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
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E. E. Nalley wrote: Tho I am curious, where is this taking place on TVTropes?
Somewhere An Equestrian Is Crying
... I removed it 'cause we had no indication it wasn't just Tansy, but with this, I'm citing as an Aversion, with Word Of God, so thank you!

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"Shared pain is lessened; shared joy, increased — thus do we refute entropy." - Spider Robinson
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Cheese.Katssun wrote: Edit: I wonder which picture of the Space Expansion members surprised her the most, Dr. Dad? Someone else we don't know? Somebody with business dealings or rivalry with her father?
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The Bear, The Bitch, and Everything Part 3 comments
Annoyance, disgust and angry towards Tansy, ouch, still a sore spot for Ayla. Double ouch, Ayla wishing they continue to ignore each other. Yikes, if looks could kill Addy would have slain Tansy 10 times over. Whoa, heartfelt apology by Tansy to Ayla. At least she admits to him she doesn't expect his forgiveness, just needs it for herself on her path to rehabilitating herself. Tansy is braver than a lot to own up to her past.
So the boy who tried blackmail wasn't even using his own phone from the sounds of it. All that to mislead them, clever. And that is some advanced 3-D imaging to analyze a video and form a face out of it brushing up against the hood whenever he moves his head. Words don't even match up, that is some frame job to target Michael Anderson, chapter president of the St. Louis branch of Evolution Rocks! D'oh! The boy involved only recognized Tansy because he is a fan, images of various fashion shoots of her on his computer. Talked to someone at Goodkind International In New York, this gets more and more twisted the further they dig.
Another memory of Laneth's past for Lanie. Both awake and thinking over things which concern them. Only fears not dying well, different culture and time for sure. Oh boy, hoping the Kings reach an accord without blood being spilled, doubt they will be that lucky. Good grief, we see where Lanie gets some of that fire in the bedroom from.
Danny coming to Tansy, still Dump Truck is bullying him. Oh brother, Dump Truck feeling he has to beat Danny to prove himself after Wihinape cut him up so badly. Oh boy, Tansy tries to get Kayda to come over but she just leaves, right as Dump Truck and his two buddies show up.
Tansy shook her head in disbelief. "Oh...My...God...!" she declared in dumbfounded amazement. "It's like Peter Jackson called for more trolls, and central casting sent you three!"
Dang, Tansy can trash talk with the best of them. Broke one of his bones already and controlling Dump Truck like that, Tansy has definitely upped her game. And intimidating him by pointing out she did all that while sitting down, priceless. I agree with Danny, that was awesome.Tansy smiled an evil smile. "I'm considering it," she replied. "I wonder if you scream like a girl?"
Revealing what she did to Dump Truck, brutal. Tansy talking like that to Mrs. Carson, she has gotten a little cocky again. Doing all that to bring Danny back from the edge, poor boy has a crush on someone who sees him as a friend and little brother to protect and help. A literal slap on the wrist with just enough force to sting even Tansy, sometimes Carson reminds us why she is headmistress and we like her. She doesn't mind Tansy giving a bully his comeuppance, just don't be so obvious about it.
Tansy going to visit Louis Gentz, even wishing to talk to the real him, whoa. Breaking most of the Psychic Canon of Ethics, except for using it for personal gain. Telling Louis about her finding Kayda, the encounter, and everything involved. No wonder she was able to deceive Kayda, plus get into her mind like that, emotional mess at the time made it much easier than it should have been with her spirits' protection. Having Dr. Bellows or someone from his department determine if Brandon in Kayda's mind is a case of multiple personality disorder or not, that is going to be difficult.
Okay, wasn't expecting that answer from Louis, celibate his entire life but he wishes Tansy all happiness no matter who it is with. Knew he would be understanding about the sexuality, but celibate his entire life came out of left field. Darn, has to tell Dr. Bellows and Mrs. Carson about this but will advocate for Tansy, best she could hope for at this point. Ending it by escorting her back to her cottage and discussing Voltaire, cute.
Tansy at Mrs. Carson's office, but not about what she talked to FUBAR about. Revealing she knows about Kayda and changeling is a lot more common than Tansy might think. Ah, here about the class to help changelings adapt to their new gender. Yikes, without all those things Tansy could have been expelled, nice to have FUBAR on her side and Kayda doing better. Poor Tansy, does seem like God, or Fate, or the Universe keeps putting in these situations. *winks*
Ah, students in the past have done similar things just to fool her, no wonder Carson is having trouble believing Tansy has turned over a new leaf. Ouch, Tansy hating what she became more than she thinks Carson does. A legendary stare that even once meekly sent an extra dimensional terror back to its own dimension, it would take a student immune to any kind of fear to face that down and not flinch. Going to Mrs. Horton and one night a week for the rest of the semester teach a class on deportment. Doesn't seem like much of a punishment to me, I think Tansy would love to help out the changelings.
Dang, I knew Celia Rogers did good work, but not that good. I would buy her an assortment of jewelry if I could afford it after getting combat armor like that. And why even magic wielders fear ruthless lawyers, bankruptcy all just so he could buy the artifact necklace cheap. A simulation of going in to recover the necklace, this is going to be difficult. Ito and Hartford are putting her through the ringer, this doesn't seem to have anything to do with SMI2LE.
Working on Baby Girl with that tool chest, most mechanics would be so lucky to have that. Melvin Donner concerned for Lanie, she says she forgot what she came over there for, uh oh. Why is she so out of it, having to be taken to Doyle, hope it isn't anything serious.
Oh boy, Lanie like this because Laneth outside her now. The complete adventures of Sherlock Holmes, his famous expression helping lead her to the truth of what is going on. And realizing what is going on knows it is a much harder job now. Just tell Laneth what is happening to Lanie, she will want to fix the situation.
And the nameless lawyer preys on magic users, that is bound to bite him in the butt someday. Cracking a safe like that so easily, dang. Wait, it is Montana and he is ticked, is it really him or an ANT. Beating her up and intent on killing her, two ribs cracked, yikes. His hand around her throat, *eyes bug out*, and she killed him with a pistol, destroying his head with multiple shots. Crap, she was trying to use the force pistol to stop him and is traumatized by what she did. Hartford holding her body while in her dream space Mustang comforts her.
All those people at the Mead Hall, impressive structure and design. Drest is definitely a warrior I wouldn't want to cross. Talorc, son of Mordeleg, King of the Picts, is dead, uh oh. Need to elect a new king, that is something I didn't know happened in their culture, interesting. All those voices challenging the Prince's right to lay claim to the crown of the Picts, oh boy, even politics back then could be a headache.
All that for statecraft, Drest the Prince is cunning to do all this. And Laneth/Lanie figuring it out so well. Dishonest ways of killing a man, guess even honorable warriors have to learn those as well to lead.
The chieftain looked at his daughter sidelong. "Politics and honesty work at cross purposes, my daughter, never forget that. You may be honest on the battlefield, but on the field of this contest?" He gestured to take in the entire Mead Hall. "Honesty will cost you a very heavy price indeed."
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Malady wrote:
E. E. Nalley wrote: Tho I am curious, where is this taking place on TVTropes?
Somewhere An Equestrian Is Crying
... I removed it 'cause we had no indication it wasn't just Tansy, but with this, I'm citing as an Aversion, with Word Of God, so thank you!
There's so much wrong with that trope I don't even know where to begin. Wait... not... I do. Riding a horse is an athletic activity. It's an Olympic event. You can't just hop on a horse and ride... any more than you would ice skate or .... really? What about running? Running is an Olympic event. So is swimming, throwing a shotput and jumping. Surprisingly or not... people do things like this all the f'ing time. Do they do them as well as an Olympic athlete? Well no... but we don't on a usual basis respond to someone's invite to join them at the pool with "Sorry man, I can't compete with an Olympic swimmer so I'd just drown if I tried to swim."
That's what this person implies about riding a horse. Kids climb up on horses all the time, if you don't live in the city where there are no horses. And sometimes they fall off ... they may not ride that horse at paces that a professional jockey could get out of it. They may not jump obstacles as high or move with the same precision of movement that an equestrian can get from the animal... but they can ride. For hours. Over many miles. And so can almost anyone with a sense of balance and half a willingness to try.
And in fiction, especially fantasy, where riding horses is a fairly common mode of distance travel... basic care for both animal and tack/saddle or such things are going to be fairly common knowledge except among those too poor to have the experience.
So... ya... trope description written by someone who may or may not have a background with Equestrian riding/training... but with little clue about the reality outside of their snobby little expensive horse riding club.
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Do you mind if cite that, and possibly link to it? ... Which, if I am gonna ask now, I should have asked when citing you for the trope... *sigh*
... OH. You were quoting (Thanks, Kettlekorn.) How's it now?
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The page does actually acknowledge that characters from non-modern times are a lot more likely to have familiarity with horses, right after the bit you quoted. The writer got a bit carried away with that whole athletics analogy, but I don't think they were trying to say that it's impossible to ride a horse without instruction and practice. They were just grumbling about how some authors write a character who has literally never interacted with a horse before, then climbs on and rides off like it's second nature. Normally people would at least be observably clumsy.Kristin Darken wrote: And in fiction, especially fantasy, where riding horses is a fairly common mode of distance travel... basic care for both animal and tack/saddle or such things are going to be fairly common knowledge except among those too poor to have the experience.
I realize that this is a very different context from encrypted data and that a cute little number like 10^8 is totally sufficient for this purpose (assuming a cooldown is enforced), but I can't help but laugh. Even an eight character password has over 10^15 possibilities.The Bear, the Bitch, and Everything (Part 3) wrote: a 12 place keypad with hundreds of millions of possible lock combinations
It seems that Diebold is one of those very considerate companies who understands that the common thug does not have the time and patience for an interrogation or the cleverness to use the official backdoors. In recognition of this, they helpfully designed this model of safe so that the unconscious owner's fingers double as keys.The Bear, the Bitch, and Everything (Part 3) wrote: an electronic lock with a thumbprint reader for quick access
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So riding a horse isn't a mystical ability, but to do it well it is a skill you have to learn.
That page, and the Automon Horse page seem to sum up everything I dislike about TV Tropes. Which is everything is a Trope, unrelated things are Tropes, and many of the example are innacurate to the source material.
Don't Drick and Drive.
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Seriously, thank you for your time and effort. It is appreciated.
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Between Imp's stories, Kayda 10, and this, I'm really enjoying the expansion on the teachers and staff that sometimes felt a bit...thin? Like Mrs. Horton not being the perfect bastion of hugs, baked goods, advice, moral support, and preventer of accidental verbal slips. It's rather endearing watching her get into trouble with Carson when a rash attempt to help her charges went...just a bit awry. And her homemade stress ball!
Then Ms. Hartford...being nurturing at the end. There was the previous callbacks referencing that she spent a tremendous amount of time in Carson's office when she was at school, and Tansy really is her protégé in so many ways.
I do wonder if the sim was meant to push Tansy too far to see what she'd do, but judging from Hartford's reaction, I'm guessing it didn't go quite as planned.
I'm not sure what to say yet about the March of Dreams sequences. I love them, and I think we already know where it is going, but it is a slow burn to get there. When it is done, I assume a whole lot of things about the Lanie-Wyatt-Tansy-Kayda deeply rooted connection comes from will knit together.
I wonder if Kayda hadn't been in freak-out phase on the 9th, that Tansy's violently impressive display could have been prevented. From our perspective, it works out better, because Danny gets a different type of role model, and isn't always protected by his sister (which has to hurt his self-esteem). As their friendly relationship goes forward, perhaps Tansy will push him to Venus Inc. I know its not quite the right powerset, but it would be funny to see Danny (as Danica) taking Exemplar Grace after seeing what Tansy did here without even standing.
But most of all, I loved the psychic ethics walkthrough. No wonder Tansy was so alarmed when she was helping Kayda by brute force. I didn't even realize she had been doing so many of those things, and the implications they can mean!
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Don't Drick and Drive.
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Valentine wrote: That page, and the Automon Horse page seem to sum up everything I dislike about TV Tropes. Which is everything is a Trope, unrelated things are Tropes, and many of the example are innacurate to the source material.
Thank you. I (when I browse) really don't check if what I'm reading matches with what it's supposed to be, if it's supposed to be funny. The Parody Section is totally wrong.
If we're gonna be talking about TVTropes and Horses, perhaps we should move it elsewhere, but this might be the end of this topic? ... Also, SomewhereAnEquestrianIsCrying is an Artistic License trope, so it's a collection of "You did horses wrong". Very broad. Subtropes like AutomatonHorses are for specific ways that horses are done wrong.
Man oh man... Dramatic Irony for Laneth! So much!
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We have already seen Mrs. Dennon work her girl training on Knockoff. So seeing her do her magic with Danny wouldn't be too far off. And i honestly think Danny could benefit in the confidence boost that class could provide.If he took Exemplar Grace, Mrs. Dennon would probably make him take the final once for each of his forms.
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Ametros wrote: What's this - Bella's not able to summon Laneth back to the physical plane? I guess you could say that Coyote's exploiting a Loophole.
What loophole? You wanted her on the physical plane, you got her on the physical plane!
Oh, you mean right here?
Should've stated that before casting, eh wot?
However, for a small price - maybe a low down-payment with a steady repayment plan - maybe we could work something out?

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Ouch, Tansy feeling like some part of her deserved what happened with the Montana in the scenario due to what she did to the real Montana.Around a mouthful of eggs, Tansy replied, "I thought sarcasm was a part of my edgy and endearing personality."
Self-destructive behavior on an unconscious level and needs to talk to Dr. Bellows or one of his staff, finally she will get some help.
Ouch, not sure if was mentioned before, Tansy's mom suffers from Munchausen syndrome and hypochondria. And Hartford went through something similar, mom is an alcoholic and dad has remarried tons of times, she was Tansy, yikes."She's just as worried about you as I am," Hartford told her. "It's not an order, but consider it a strong request. You have worth, Tansy. Not as an operative, not as my protégé, but as a human being. And as a human being we all make mistakes, Dr. Bellows can help you come to grips with yours."
Mrs. Carson saved her from spending her life in jail and now is paying it forward with Tansy.
Tansy forced a smile. "Ms. Hartford? Do...do we bitch queens get happy endings?" Amelia Hartford smiled as she held up her left hand and showed off the magnificent ring that had recently begun to grace her ring finger. "If you work at it hard enough," she told her protégé. "We even get Prince Charming. Now go to sleep."
Lanie in that bad of shape in her dream space, it gets really bad before its better. Atlantis Amazons, hehehe. Grizzly manifesting like that, a lot of the girls and some of the guys would be looking, I know I would. Mrs. Horton left speechless by Grizzly showing up in the real world like this, priceless. And Grizzly finding out what Coyote did with Laneth, he is lucky she didn't tear him apart. Grizzly taking charge of the situation, about time.
Danny showing up to see Tansy's at her hospital room with a dozen rooms to help her feel better, boy has got it bad. Asking Tansy to have lunch with him and her teasing him so he blushes crimson red, then her saying it is a date, oh boy. If Tansy hadn't been called away for X-rays on her ribs again, I think Danny might have fainted.
Trying to use stuff from her past life incursions to write a story, not a good time to be using any energy. Oh boy, so that is what Laneth is, a piece of Lanie's soul with some of Laneth's personality in it running around separate from her. At least Lanie is able to sleep some, hope it wasn't because Grizzly bored her to sleep though.
Mr. Lewis and his people still trying to figure out who was behind the hood, seem to have, plus have someone who is a lip-reader due to hear-impairment. Poor boy was forced to read off a script by someone or be killed, then killed anyways, sickening. And nothing to go on with the mysterious phone calls to Goodkind International in New York, darn. All that to catch whoever is behind it and they never even came for the ransom, double darn.
And Drest mac Talorgan was crowned King of the Picts like Laneth's father predicted, now off to war with some large Brittonic gangs. Drest wants to send Laneth out to scout the enemy and her father is upset, thinking he is risking his child when Drest won't risk his own on such a mission. And we see more of where Lanie got that stubbornness, as she defies her father and goes off to scout the enemy for the king.
Seeing the video of Tansy in action in that black leather like armored outfit, now seeing it in person, poor Danny might overheat and faint if he isn't careful. Yikes! Seeing Tansy like that, he is very lucky to have not passed out. Catching him staring and teasing him like that, Danny doesn't have a pray. And telling him about the rules for guys staring at girls and such, who is Ian McDiarmid, reference I don't get I'm guessing. Ah, forgot that was the actor of the Emperor in Star Wars. A snowball that is more rocks and ice than snow, Murphy!
Oh boy, Tansy morose due to Lanie, Wyatt, and Kayda not showing up for lunch. Ah, sounds like Tansy is trying to build up Danny's confidence the old fashioned way, good. Tansy rendered speechless by what Mrs. Horton reveals about her history, another priceless moment. And finding Grizzly acting as Lanie's nurse, that would surprise anyone. Tansy wearing one of Lanie's shirts as a nightgown, if Lanie weren't such bad shape right now...
Oh boy, sent a flaming arrow up to signal the king and her father, but spotted and captured by the enemy. Tied to a bed like that, sick monsters. Algar, the Saxon Duke of North Umbra, sick little troll of a man. They took her to Lothian, there to expand his kingdom. She tells him she is a married woman, Christian baptized and oaths given under the eyes of God in his own church, yet his troll of a man doesn't care. Bastard is going to rape her! Hope this slime dies in agony.
Tansy is in an incredible place in Grizzly's dream space, a palace during the Five-Fold Courts' time from the looks of things. Atlantis, whoa, this is major. Letting Tansy see it so she can understand what was lost, heavy.
So worse than I originally thought based on past information.Time itself was shattered when the Bastard was imprisoned. The flow of manna stopped for nearly a century. Or 10 millennia, depending upon your point of view.
*eyes bug out*"Time, space, energy matter; these worlds describe concepts that are as mutable to me as changing the recipe of your favorite soup is to you. ...Your reality, Tansy, is harder. Things have substance, structure, and solidify, but you can still touch the astral world where things are what you make of it. Further along those worlds will be closed off and the universe will end, solid, cold, and unchanging."
Dream space can mess with a mind that isn't ready for such concepts. Tansy wants to give Lanie some of her energy, whoa. Wait, what? Tantric sex is involved somehow, oh boy.
Yikes, waking up from that nightmare, Lanie is already in rough shape, without Tansy there she might have hurt herself. And Tansy helping her out in that way, dang. Oh boy, Mrs. Horton is upset at what they did together. Loud magically, oh boy, wonder what that did to Fey if she is in the cottage right then. Awkward, Mrs. Horton knows exactally what Grizzly showed Tansy. Lanie with that silly grin on her face, every magically active boy and girl in the cottage who felt that isn't going to let them live it down if they know who was behind it.
Tango, glad Tansy has her mare to keep her company when her friends aren't around and in the past before she had true friends. Going out for a run on Tango, they have a special relationship I doubt most horse owners do. Tango injured in her right leg, this has all the smell of Murphy behind this trap, she has gone way too far, involving an innocent animal in her revenge schemes. Through Tango's memories, Tansy knows it was Murphy who did this, takes a bucket of manure and heads towards Crystal Hall, this won't end well.
Dumping the bucket of manure over Murphy's head while she is sitting with her friends, yikes. Calling Tango just a fucking animal, Murphy doesn't realize the connection Tansy and Tango has. Trying to make Tansy fall to her death, Murphy needs serious help to control her mental issues already. Landing from a fall from that height, ouch. This is a brutal fight, Tansy demanding to know what Murphy's problem is with her.
Tansy says she pranked her a few times, to get over it, Murphy counters with attempted rape and attempted murder. Yikes, spatial shock, then Murphy getting an elbow to the face, Tansy pinning down Murphy and finally seeing the memory of the incident Murphy is talking about. But Tansy didn't tell Hamper and Damper to do that, she told them to harass Lanie and Murphy and see that they get caught by security, but Murphy still blames Tansy for setting her dogs loose on them.
Tansy is going after those two idiot for this, but Murphy thinks it is still an act. Tansy counters that Murphy didn't stand with Lanie against Becky Corbin and the rest of those two-faced bitches as she calls them. Being told Wyatt, Kayda and Tansy are the only friends Lanie has left, Murphy demands to know what she is supposed to say to take back what happened. At least seeing Tansy break down and saying she can't hate her more than she hates herself makes Murphy realize she isn't faking it.
Murphy actually trying to comfort Tansy, Tansy seeing all those memories and the emotions involved, dang. Murphy back to her senses at least, even concerned about Tansy's horse. And Mrs. Carson shows up to deal with them, *cringes*. Tansy admits to what happened and her part in it, Mrs. Carson upset at Murphy for not revealing with Hamper and Damper tried to pull back in January.
9 months after the fact, much harder to prosecute those two, they might have even more victims, ugh. All that to hopefully have a case against those two, and proof from Fubar that those two acted beyond her mental suggestion by reading Tansy. And Murphy actually kept her mouth shut, I thought it would take an act of God or some high level supernatural being for that to happen. Mucking the stables for a week, they got off light.
Conceived a child by rape and stops herself from aborting it, mercy of the innocent. Domnall coming up, thankful she isn't a will-o-the-wisp deceiving him. She at least killed Algar herself, but says she is defiled and he is within his right to divorce her. He won't give them the pleasure, having slaughtered all their foes till the river ran red with blood. And she knows she is pregnant, the brew to cleanse her womb. Whoa, Domnall is a man of true honor, willing to raise the child of his wife simply because it is a part of his beloved, no matter what may come.
Dr. Bellows worries and wonders if he is truly making a difference, if only he knew how big of a difference he is making. Lanie showing up, needing help to come to grips with what happened with her and Laneth, Laneth thinking it is a complete waste of time. Hearing all that from Lanie and Dr. Bellows response is priceless. Knowing all those languages, would love to know so many languages myself. Oh boy, calling people soft because of the luxuries we have her people didn't, *rolls eyes*
Talking about rape like that, theirs was a very different culture from ours. Wah, that isn't what Lanie is bothered about. Having memories from another life is brutal to deal with, just seeing how Lanie is handling it. Ah, upset how she saw Laneth pretend to enjoy it, then kill the man by stabbing him in the head and twisting the knife. Very different worlds, Lanie has never killed anyone and experiencing it through Laneth's eyes, just traumatizing. And discussing it further over dinner, dedicated man who sometimes works way too hard without rest.
Melvin Donner frog-marching Hamper and Damper, I would pay to see pictures of that! Alan Ivers, assistant district attorney for the State of New Hampshire and Special Agent Derek Laughton, with the Department of Paranormal Affairs. These two are in deep s***. Lying and saying they were both in their rooms, they don't just rely on ID cards thankfully. And the cameras all failing when this happened, that is enough circumstantial evidence with testimony to get a trial, I think, not sure.
Idiots start to say they can't prove a thing, Carson stops them and the security tapes show they were in the same area as Lanie and Murphy at the time of the altercation. And affidavit from Tansy, plus these two idiots left their fingerprints on Murphy's pistol. They demand to have a lawyer, these two are toast, finally! Expelled and arrested, finally two of the worst creeps are gone, now just a few more left to go.
And Mr. Walcutt's best men aren't able to find out who was behind all this, darn. Even puts Mr. Lewis and his group on retainer to help flush out whoever did this, good. Insert an operate at Whateley to watch Tansy and find out who is trying to get to him through her, this isn't good, might mistake friends for threats or people manipulating her.
And a great end to a story with a huge number of twist and turns. How the situation with Lanie, Tansy, and Kayda worked itself out. How Laneth and her history were revealed and everything going on with her and Lanie. The search for whoever was behind the blackmail video. Murphy and Tansy working things out in their own unique way. And finally justice as Hamper and Damper are under arrest for the incident in January. Nice to see that wrapped up and them gone. Can't wait to read more of how Lanie deals with what she experienced of Laneth's past, Lanie, Kayda, and Tansy's continued friendship, and their continued adventures.
P.S. Sorry for no mention of any Easter Eggs if there were any, elrod. Either my brain isn't there tonight or they were from stuff I'm not familiar with.
Thank You for story comments appreciated and help me know me they are being read and liked.

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That being said, bravo on that dizzying fight scene. Between the raw difference in Tansy and Murphy's fighting styles, and the chilling "Yes." during the fight, I devoured the entire piece far faster then I expected.
- Katssun
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Loved it all.
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- Arcanist Lupus
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Lots of wows to go around. Loved Tansy with Danny.
I found the "Tonic of Tansy" to be ironically named. ('Ironically' is not the word I want, but it's late, and I think you know what I mean)
"Shared pain is lessened; shared joy, increased — thus do we refute entropy." - Spider Robinson
- Ahimsa
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One thing that does irritate me though, is the idea of "tantric sex" and energy transfer. Apart from the term "tantric sex" being completely nonexistent in classical Indian religious literature, the sexual aspect is only one part of tantra, and is related to overcoming desire and not succumbing to it:
'The disciplines of Tantra are graded to suit aspirants of all degrees. Exercises are prescribed for people with "animal", "heroic", and "divine" outlooks. Certain of the rites require the presence of members of the opposite sex. Here the aspirant learns to look on woman as the embodiment of the Goddess Kali, the Mother of the Universe. The very basis of Tantra is the Motherhood of God and the glorification of woman. Every part of a woman's body is to be regarded as incarnate Divinity. But the rites are extremely dangerous. The help of a qualified guru is absolutely necessary. An unwary devotee may lose his foothold and fall into a pit of depravity.' - Source
There is also another incongruity. Most accepted Indian philosophy states that everything is made up of only ākāśa (matter) and prāna (energy). Tantra (as a concept) deals with increasing of spiritual energy. As a rule, pursuit of physical pleasures results in a decrease/expenditure of this type of energy, whether it be purely prāna or something related like raising the kundalini . Hence, something like "tantric sex", instead of increasing prana would actually end up decreasing it. The only thing it might encourage is sexual euphoria, which has nothing to do with energy transfer.
sri-bhagavan uvaca | kalo 'smi loka-ksaya-krt pravrddho | lokan samahartum iha pravrttah | - "Lord Krishna said: I am terrible Time, the destroyer of all beings in all worlds, engaged to destroy all beings in this world." - Bhagavad Gita 11:32
- Esar
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How do you say it ? I will go down with this ship ?
Thanks for this.
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Ahimsa wrote: An interesting story, with a huge number of ideas. Thank you for all your hard work.
One thing that does irritate me though, is the idea of "tantric sex" and energy transfer.
The phrase you are objecting to does not have the same meaning in Western esoteric traditions as it does in Eastern traditions. "Tantric" was adopted in lieu of there being a better word in English, and at least conveys the notion that the physical practices and terminology are adopted from an outside tradition. Regardless, ekstasis does indeed have a valid existence as a spiritual experience and ritual tool.
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- Katssun
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Would Murphy have survived the fall before she went through the BIT Mangler?
The fight gives us a lot of insight into Tansy's true strength as well. Tansy gets slightly stunned where Murphy gets pretty hurt, though maybe that was because Tansy had her in a submission hold and could "land" more advantageously?
But then there's the line about Tansy hitting her harder than she intended because of confusion and the increasing fury of the fight. Tansy is holding back, a lot. That slip was enough to give Murphy flail-chest? I had to look that one up the first time through. 76% of them are from car crashes. True, Murphy isn't a brick, or have Kayda's running gag ribs, but if Tansy is holding back most of the time and can still produce that kind of injury with her bare hands?
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- Ahimsa
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null0trooper wrote: The phrase you are objecting to does not have the same meaning in Western esoteric traditions as it does in Eastern traditions. "Tantric" was adopted in lieu of there being a better word in English, and at least conveys the notion that the physical practices and terminology are adopted from an outside tradition. Regardless, ekstasis does indeed have a valid existence as a spiritual experience and ritual tool.
tl,dr: Whether the Tao or the Christ is your helper, the motorcycle still gets fixed.
I appreciate your trying to explain; however you are coming from the wrong starting point. While you are correct that ekstasis is a valid tool for spiritual experience, if you are referring to it in that context then it refers to connection to a spiritual being, regardless of its adoption in modern times to mean something more general. There have been many many experiments with ekstasis used as in the meaning that you have given, and all have shown only that in fact it leads to only the appearance of spiritual union with none of the benefits except for physical euphoria.
Also, with regards to the reason for "tantric" being adopted, it was used without any idea of its true meaning, kind of how the Nazis adopted the swastika. If one would like to use a better term, I would suggest the rather more straightforward and meaningful (and rather more steeped in the actual tradition) "sex magic".
Trying to use "tantric sex" for spiritual connection is rather like filling sawdust in a gearbox to hide its problems.
sri-bhagavan uvaca | kalo 'smi loka-ksaya-krt pravrddho | lokan samahartum iha pravrttah | - "Lord Krishna said: I am terrible Time, the destroyer of all beings in all worlds, engaged to destroy all beings in this world." - Bhagavad Gita 11:32
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Ahimsa wrote: Also, with regards to the reason for "tantric" being adopted, it was used without any idea of its true meaning, kind of how the Nazis adopted the swastika. If one would like to use a better term, I would suggest the rather more straightforward and meaningful (and rather more steeped in the actual tradition) "sex magic".
Unfortunately, about 90% of Anglo/European English speakers will understand the use of the phrase as intended. As it may grate on purists, such as your self, this is a fact of the English language, word meanings shift. This was not intended as a class on Indo-Spirituality or belief systems and by far most readers took the correct meaning as intended, rather than as should be used as you point out.
While I understand how you feel (I get upset when people use the phrase 'Pointe Blank' to mean extreme close range) this was not intended as a lesson, but rather entertainment. I hope this did not interfere with your enjoyment of the story, but you have my condolences if it did.
Katssun wrote: But then there's the line about Tansy hitting her harder than she intended because of confusion and the increasing fury of the fight. Tansy is holding back, a lot. That slip was enough to give Murphy flail-chest? I had to look that one up the first time through. 76% of them are from car crashes. True, Murphy isn't a brick, or have Kayda's running gag ribs, but if Tansy is holding back most of the time and can still produce that kind of injury with her bare hands?
(James Wood voice from 'Contact') Now that is very interesting, isn't it?(/Woods)

I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
- Ahimsa
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E. E. Nalley wrote: Unfortunately, about 90% of Anglo/European English speakers will understand the use of the phrase as intended. As it may grate on purists, such as your self, this is a fact of the English language, word meanings shift. This was not intended as a class on Indo-Spirituality or belief systems and by far most readers took the correct meaning as intended, rather than as should be used as you point out.
While I understand how you feel (I get upset when people use the phrase 'Pointe Blank' to mean extreme close range) this was not intended as a lesson, but rather entertainment. I hope this did not interfere with your enjoyment of the story, but you have my condolences if it did.
I did understand your use of the word for entertainment, and thank you for explaining. However, qualifying the issue as referring only to "purists" actually ignores the main problem. The word used is wrong in the first place. Hitler and the Nazis used the swastika for their own meaning, and hundreds of millions of Hindus, etc. have to suffer the effects of that as a result (because now swastika ≈ Nazi), only because "word meanings shift" and being correct is not as important as not hurting peoples' feelings. My intent in posting was to provide context and awareness, and hopefully a starting point for change and doing the right thing.
sri-bhagavan uvaca | kalo 'smi loka-ksaya-krt pravrddho | lokan samahartum iha pravrttah | - "Lord Krishna said: I am terrible Time, the destroyer of all beings in all worlds, engaged to destroy all beings in this world." - Bhagavad Gita 11:32
- mhalpern
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Ahimsa wrote: The word used is wrong in the first place.
Pointe Blank is a ballistic term meaning the point distance from the muzzle the shooter does not have to adjust his point of aim up or down to counteract the affect of gravity over distance, nor the ballistic tendency of a bullet to rise when leaving the barrel due to the effects of rifling on it. While this point will change based on factors such as bullet weight and powder load, on average it will remain close enough of a constant to only matter to long distance precision shooters. For example the Pointe Blank range of the M-16/AR-15 is 150 meters.
That is the 'correct' definition of the phrase Pointe Blank. For context, that distance is one and a half US Football fields. No one outside the shooter community knows that. Everyone understands Pointe Blank to mean 'extreme close range.' Now, I can be pedantic and insist on educating everyone of their mistake or I can shrug it off as 'language shift' and not get bent out of shape over it.
If you google Tantric Sex Defination this is what pops up:
Tantric sex is an ancient Hindu practice that has been going for over 5,000 years, and means 'the weaving and expansion of energy'. It's a slow form of sex that's said to increase intimacy and create a mind-body connection that can lead to powerful orgasms.
Along with About 392,000 results (0.97 seconds) website links that for the first 10 or so pages I saw link to websites that support that position.
Language shift happens. It's unfortunate, but it does. If you have an issue with this, kindly take it up with the folks at Merrian-Webster because as far as they are concerned YOU are wrong. Now, I have already offered my apologies if this interfered with your enjoyment of the story and I have to say I DO NOT TAKE KINDLY to being compared to NAZIs. If this is the language hill you want to die on, take it up with them. I've said all I intend to on this topic, please let the matter drop.
I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
- elrodw
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In the past, there have been readers who have taken it upon themselves to be extremely persistent in correcting stories about details which are largely irrelevant to the vast majority of readers. The Cabal does NOT take kindly to this behavior, and the "ban hammer" has been levied upon some. The reason is that the authors contribute out of their generosity and a sense of appreciation by the readers, but pedantic critics take away that enjoyment, to the point that in the past, authors have quit because of the level of petty criticism. As a result, the cabal is very, very protective of our authors' feelings.
Give it a rest. You made your point, and you are only going to invoke the wrath of the powers-that-be. Invoking Nazis is way beyond reasonable in this context. If you want to troll the authors, you WILL be banned. If you want to continue to make petty arguments over small details, you WILL be banned. If you wanted to make a point, that's accomplished, and now you have to accept the response from the cabal as to reasoning.
Never give up, Never surrender! Captain Peter Quincy Taggert
- Ahimsa
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I have not compared you to Nazis, I have compared abstract concepts to try and provide some context as to the kind of feelings it evokes in those affected. This issue is quite close to myself and the over 1 billion Hindus in the world. If one would like a greater audience to appreciate their work, then one should be aware of how their work would be perceived in the greater context of things. Also, it is "the language hill" that directly impacts how people understand each other among different cultures that may not have any other point of contact otherwise.E. E. Nalley wrote: Now, I have already offered my apologies if this interfered with your enjoyment of the story and I have to say I DO NOT TAKE KINDLY to being compared to NAZIs. If this is the language hill you want to die on, take it up with them. I've said all I intend to on this topic, please let the matter drop.
Well, if this was merely a question of something as mundane as a technical term then I would agree with you completely. However, this issue is something quite fundamental to Hinduism as a religion, and so I would argue that more thought needs to be given to the subject than just Google and use.E. E. Nalley wrote: Pointe Blank is a ballistic term meaning the point distance from the muzzle the shooter does not have to adjust his point of aim up or down to counteract the affect of gravity over distance, nor the ballistic tendency of a bullet to rise when leaving the barrel due to the effects of rifling on it. While this point will change based on factors such as bullet weight and powder load, on average it will remain close enough of a constant to only matter to long distance precision shooters. For example the Pointe Blank range of the M-16/AR-15 is 150 meters.
That is the 'correct' definition of the phrase Pointe Blank. For context, that distance is one and a half US Football fields. No one outside the shooter community knows that. Everyone understands Pointe Blank to mean 'extreme close range.' Now, I can be pedantic and insist on educating everyone of their mistake or I can shrug it off as 'language shift' and not get bent out of shape over it.
Exactly, "as far as they are concerned" and as far as Google is concerned as well, because that is all that people see on the surface. When one uses Google to find the definition of "swastika", Merriam-Webster says:E. E. Nalley wrote: If you google Tantric Sex Defination this is what pops up:
Tantric sex is an ancient Hindu practice that has been going for over 5,000 years, and means 'the weaving and expansion of energy'. It's a slow form of sex that's said to increase intimacy and create a mind-body connection that can lead to powerful orgasms.
Along with About 392,000 results (0.97 seconds) website links that for the first 10 or so pages I saw link to websites that support that position.
Language shift happens. It's unfortunate, but it does. If you have an issue with this, kindly take it up with the folks at Merrian-Webster because as far as they are concerned YOU are wrong.
Where in that definition is the thousands of years that the symbol was used (and is currently used very actively) for pure spiritual purposes? However, ask anyone who is part of that culture what the meaning is, and they will immediately tell you the correct meaning.Definition of swastika
1 : a symbol or ornament in the form of a Greek cross with the ends of the arms extended at right angles all in the same rotary direction
2 : a swastika used as a symbol of anti-Semitism or of Nazism
I do belong to the correct culture, and my intention was to educate you and others as to the truth, and hopefully to do the correct thing in future. Perhaps I initially approached the subject in the wrong manner, and for that I apologise, but the issue remains. It does not hurt to try and do the right thing, especially if it will ease cultural understanding.
sri-bhagavan uvaca | kalo 'smi loka-ksaya-krt pravrddho | lokan samahartum iha pravrttah | - "Lord Krishna said: I am terrible Time, the destroyer of all beings in all worlds, engaged to destroy all beings in this world." - Bhagavad Gita 11:32
- Ahimsa
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elrodw wrote: Ahimsa,
In the past, there have been readers who have taken it upon themselves to be extremely persistent in correcting stories about details which are largely irrelevant to the vast majority of readers. The Cabal does NOT take kindly to this behavior, and the "ban hammer" has been levied upon some. The reason is that the authors contribute out of their generosity and a sense of appreciation by the readers, but pedantic critics take away that enjoyment, to the point that in the past, authors have quit because of the level of petty criticism. As a result, the cabal is very, very protective of our authors' feelings.
Give it a rest. You made your point, and you are only going to invoke the wrath of the powers-that-be. Invoking Nazis is way beyond reasonable in this context. If you want to troll the authors, you WILL be banned. If you want to continue to make petty arguments over small details, you WILL be banned. If you wanted to make a point, that's accomplished, and now you have to accept the response from the cabal as to reasoning.
I hope that I have been able to bring across how this is not a petty argument, and in fact affects certain people very deeply. I have repeatedly stated that my intention is just to bring awareness so that people may not do the wrong thing in future because of merely not knowing. I am aware that many of the authors do not have access to enough cultural reference, and I do appreciate the effort that they put in. However, I would think that people would at least try to accept information given in good faith to ease understanding.
If I have to be banned, then so be it. What is the point of not standing up for something because one is afraid of censure?
sri-bhagavan uvaca | kalo 'smi loka-ksaya-krt pravrddho | lokan samahartum iha pravrttah | - "Lord Krishna said: I am terrible Time, the destroyer of all beings in all worlds, engaged to destroy all beings in this world." - Bhagavad Gita 11:32
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In the same vein... while "tantric" has a precise meaning for circa 1 billion Hindus... that still does not mean that you "own" the word. Usage defines its meaning, and outside the Hindu community (large as it is) usage gave it a different meaning.
- Ahimsa
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I agree, hence my saying in my post "Hindus, etc.".Sir Lee wrote: I just want to point out that neither the Nazis nor the Hindus "own" the swastika. It's a pretty common symbol in many cultures, including Native American ones that can't possibly have "appropriated" it from Hinduism.
"Tantric" comes from tantra, which is a Sanskrit word used in various circumstances to refer to various parts of Hindu spirituality. Hence, the concept of tantra does belong to Hinduism/Buddhism/other offshoots. Tantra's conjunction with "sex" came from Western misunderstanding of what tantra really is, and seems to have become popular because people seem to like to associate Hinduism with unbridled repressed sexuality. This is quite offensive to the vast majority of believers, hence my bringing up of the subject to increase awareness.Sir Lee wrote: In the same vein... while "tantric" has a precise meaning for circa 1 billion Hindus... that still does not mean that you "own" the word. Usage defines its meaning, and outside the Hindu community (large as it is) usage gave it a different meaning.
sri-bhagavan uvaca | kalo 'smi loka-ksaya-krt pravrddho | lokan samahartum iha pravrttah | - "Lord Krishna said: I am terrible Time, the destroyer of all beings in all worlds, engaged to destroy all beings in this world." - Bhagavad Gita 11:32
- JG
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1: Not used to intentionally piss off anyone.
2: The commonly-understood usage by most native english speakers
3: Without word equivalency in the english language.
Finally, since you insist upon berating everyone: Drop it. One more post in the accusative manner of provocation, and I'm terminating your posting privs. This is not the place where you get to badger and berate to get your way.
"This word does not mean what you think it means" is fine. leave it at that. But if you want to be offended and loud about it, take it somewhere else. And by invoking nazi germany, intended or not, in the manner of your bitch yes you did compare Nalley to Hitler. So right now, accept the fact that 99% of Americans are ignorant of certain things (this does, in fact include our characters, who are deliberately made imperfect and prone to the wrong conclusion like everyone else) and either let it go, or encourage steps to EDUCATE the majority.
And no, the people on the Whateley site do not qualify as "The majority."
- Ahimsa
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JG wrote: Finally, since you insist upon berating everyone: Drop it. One more post in the accusative manner of provocation, and I'm terminating your posting privs. This is not the place where you get to badger and berate to get your way.
"This word does not mean what you think it means" is fine. leave it at that. But if you want to be offended and loud about it, take it somewhere else. And by invoking nazi germany, intended or not, in the manner of your bitch yes you did compare Nalley to Hitler. So right now, accept the fact that 99% of Americans are ignorant of certain things (this does, in fact include our characters, who are deliberately made imperfect and prone to the wrong conclusion like everyone else) and either let it go, or encourage steps to EDUCATE the majority.
And no, the people on the Whateley site do not qualify as "The majority."
I have tried to be as civilised as possible about this issue, and have most definitely not personally attacked anyone and not compared any individual to Hitler or Nazis - if there is anything that is the "Nazi" in my comparisons it is the culture that appropriated the word "tantric" to add it to "sex". My only intention was to make people aware, in whatever small way that I am able to, of something that continues to be done that actually does hurt others (yes actually hurt them) because of ignorance on the part of the initiating party. I assumed that I somehow was part of this community and that it would appreciate insight from members that actually do have some insight to offer. Instead, I have only been attacked myself and effectively been told to shut up or be kicked out because effectively nobody cares because they all had fun anyway. Please do so if that is your wish.
sri-bhagavan uvaca | kalo 'smi loka-ksaya-krt pravrddho | lokan samahartum iha pravrttah | - "Lord Krishna said: I am terrible Time, the destroyer of all beings in all worlds, engaged to destroy all beings in this world." - Bhagavad Gita 11:32
- DanZilla
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It's that you KEEP telling us that AFTER we've acknowledged that you have a fair point and THIS THREAD isn't the place to have further discussions about it.
To you the comparison between the Nazi appropriation of the swastika and our current culture's appropriation of the phrase "tantric" may seem a valid equivocation... BUT to a lot of the people you're talking to it's a horrible insult to be compared to a Nazi. However innocently that comparison is made it will still really upset people.
If you'd like to start a discussion of Tantric PLEASE start a new thread for it and people can choose to participate or not... but, while you may educate our authors in the proper usage, they're not going to retroactively go back in and fix where they've used it before and may not change how they use it in the future... since the "pop culture" version of it is what they are using and not the "actual" definition.
- JG
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This knife cuts both ways.
The comparison to the nazis is not just offensive, for westerers, particularly those who have served in the military, comparison to nazis is direct insult.
Further norse and germanic tribes have been using the swastika as a symbol of strength in various forms since shortly after the Romans came to be AT LEAST. Hitler appropriated it from nordic usage as he was obssessed with the Norse Mythos, and encouraged by occultist retards in his inner circle.
The sharing of the swastika similarly in both cultures was one of the things that led Hitler to believe that the Hindu were also a part of his Aryan ideal.
It was not simply appropropriated from the Hindu, contrary to your assessment.
Further, you may not berate us for word usage. You spoke your piece, let it go. You have been asked to stop. So stop.
Do not claim innocence when you chose to use the most deliberately enraging topic here in the states. Godwin's Law is not respected here.
- Ahimsa
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I thank you for clarifying this. If someone had told me earlier to move the discussion, then I would have with no complaints. The only reason I started discussing this here was because of the usage in the story, and this section of the forum seemed to be the place to discuss the story.DanZilla wrote: Ahimsa... it's not that we don't appreciate that you want us to know that the word was misappropriated and doesn't mean what it was used for... and we DO appreciate the discussion that can arise from these distinctions...
It's that you KEEP telling us that AFTER we've acknowledged that you have a fair point and THIS THREAD isn't the place to have further discussions about it.
Thank you once again for your most civil and respectful response. I never asked anyone to change anything already done, merely to keep what I said in mind, because the term "tantric sex" is definitely hurtful to very many people as it totally misrepresents their religious beliefs and even makes fun of it. I also apologise for hurting anyone with mentioning Nazis and Hitler, I truly never meant any offense.DanZilla wrote: To you the comparison between the Nazi appropriation of the swastika and our current culture's appropriation of the phrase "tantric" may seem a valid equivocation... BUT to a lot of the people you're talking to it's a horrible insult to be compared to a Nazi. However innocently that comparison is made it will still really upset people.
If you'd like to start a discussion of Tantric PLEASE start a new thread for it and people can choose to participate or not... but, while you may educate our authors in the proper usage, they're not going to retroactively go back in and fix where they've used it before and may not change how they use it in the future... since the "pop culture" version of it is what they are using and not the "actual" definition.
sri-bhagavan uvaca | kalo 'smi loka-ksaya-krt pravrddho | lokan samahartum iha pravrttah | - "Lord Krishna said: I am terrible Time, the destroyer of all beings in all worlds, engaged to destroy all beings in this world." - Bhagavad Gita 11:32
- Kristin Darken
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The Forums and Moderation
The first rule of fight club is... no... wait...
The first rule of our Forums and Moderation policy is simple. It is even common sense. Unfortunately, the internet is not known for its copious numbers of people basing their lives on common sense. So let's break it down even more simply than it needs to be:
Respect
Show some respect when you discuss things with other readers and the authors of the stories. Even when you don't agree with them... or like them... maybe even especially then. No one is making money for doing what they do here. Readers, writers, artists... we're doing this because we enjoy it. Remember that when you have a different opinion that someone else and you want to correct them, or challenge their way of thinking. They're not here to learn. They're not here to become a better reader. Or a better writer. They're here because they enjoy doing what they do... and if you take away their enjoyment of it, they're not going to want to be here anymore.
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There are people who believe professional authors and artists should be thick skinned. Able to take criticism. Not insulted personally when someone tears into their work. To some degree, those people are right. But they are also usually wrong, because they believe that ANYONE is able to 'professionally' review and critique the work of an author. And I can assure you that there are far fewer professional critics than there are professional authors among web publications. If you don't know what you're doing, don't try to 'review' or 'critique' stories. Join a discussion about the story. Or make a simple comment about what you liked or what you didn't understand. Kicking the authors in the 'nads is not cool. Even if you think they should know to be wearing a cup.
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Our rules and policies are mostly pretty abstract. We want the community to enjoy their time here. We want to keep our authors protected so they go on writing the stories everyone loves. You may feel that something you are doing is completely ok and justified... and suddenly a moderator is telling you to stop. Just stop. Drop the conversation. If you don't understand what you did that resulted in being called out, PM the moderator... or better yet, PM a DIFFERENT moderator. Mostly, our moderators are also authors. That means they have inside details on the shitstorm hitting one of the other authors in real life that you know nothing about... and while you aren't aware of it, what you are doing it hurting someone, or at the very least, making them want to say "f--- it" and leave. We might not be able to explain... not our story/details to share. But we don't drop the hammer often or lightly. So just save everyone a lot of hassle and don't argue about it. More than likely, any punishment that we apply after you argue is going to be far more painful than one where you respond with a simple "Sorry, my bad. I'll PM you in a bit to figure out where I went off the rails" and take a little break.
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Don't snoop: It's not going to hurt anyone if you get access to stuff you shouldn't... unpublished stories, canon backstory, and so on. But it very well could ruin a lot of people's enjoyment of stories that have not yet been published... or even written... yet. So... don't.
Don't abuse the mail system or our bandwidth: Yes, you could theoretically subscribe to every thread and get hundreds of emails from the site every day... but please don't. We don't have to pay anything as long as we stay below 25000 per month... but it won't be long before we have 500+ registered members. And it won't take long for that many people to get a lot of notifications. Same with harassing our poor Google hosted VM... things should be relatively inexpensive to run, here... but if someone is uploading dozens of video clips and everyone's watching them, it could run up the bill quickly.
No flaming or trolling: For obvious reasons. The site is for our community, flaming and trolling are not a valid part of an intelligent community.
Ahimsa, the simple fact that you have been asked by an author / moderator to stop should have been the 'end' of it. These forums are not a democracy. They are, at best, a benevolent dictatorship. They serve one purpose - to provide a place for pleasant, enjoyable discussion and feedback to the authors about stories. The moment that value goes away, so does our need to maintain forums. Fortunately, when its just one person causing the problems, solutions can be made to apply to only that one person.
So, given that E.E. and Elrod's notifications were not taken as staff/moderator official statements... let me make a very clear official state. This is a warning. Drop it. Examine your attitude and reflect on how seriously you want to be a part of the Whateley community. If you seriously don't understand how you were over the line, PM me and we can discuss it. If you want to continue to post, you are welcome to send a draft post to me for approval before you post it publicly. If you continue without change, your forums privileges will be removed.
That said, I'm glad to see that Dan's clarification was received and solved some of the resistance you had to not stopping... but that doesn't change the fact that whether it was understood or not... whether it was agreed on or not... when a member of the staff says drop it, you do. You can appeal the decision from someone else on staff after the fact. But you don't continue pushing in the meantime.
Fate guard you and grant you a Light to brighten your Way.
- elrodw
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Never give up, Never surrender! Captain Peter Quincy Taggert
- annachie
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elrodw wrote: Now let's get back to talking about Tansy
Well Tansy would have been extremely new to the Picts, if it was there at all, and isn't recorded for abortion use until a few hundred years later .....
Ducks and runs

- Katssun
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...so, is Ms. Hartford admitting that she is far more than a technopath? She went to Whateley in the 80-90s. AOL time.When I attended this school, my reign as the Alpha Bitch Queen would put your exploits to shame.

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Laneth is a Pict, circa 784. Tansy is descendant from a Norman Princess, circa...1066. There is a possibility that Laneth is the ancestor of Tansy's ancestor...
- E!
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Katssun wrote: Would Murphy have survived the fall before she went through the BIT Mangler?
Is the BIT mangler the machine built by Thuban in the fall ?06? Or did I miss something big in Murphy's Law has Loopholes?
- Katssun
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The "BIT Mangler" is the contraption developed by persons unknown referenced in JG's "Murphy's Laws of Whateley" that is essentially the same as the BIT Slicer, operated by individuals currently unknown, without a single thread of ethics.Ebola wrote:
Katssun wrote: Would Murphy have survived the fall before she went through the BIT Mangler?
Is the BIT mangler the machine built by Thuban in the fall ?06? Or did I miss something big in Murphy's Law has Loopholes?
The BIT Slicer Team at least has the best interests of their subjects in mind.
- E!
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Katssun wrote:
The "BIT Mangler" is the contraption developed by persons unknown referenced in JG's "Murphy's Laws of Whateley" that is essentially the same as the BIT Slicer, operated by individuals currently unknown, without a single thread of ethics.Ebola wrote:
Katssun wrote: Would Murphy have survived the fall before she went through the BIT Mangler?
Is the BIT mangler the machine built by Thuban in the fall ?06? Or did I miss something big in Murphy's Law has Loopholes?
The BIT Slicer Team at least has the best interests of their subjects in mind.
AH ok! Thank You
- null0trooper
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annachie wrote:
elrodw wrote: Now let's get back to talking about Tansy
Well Tansy would have been extremely new to the Picts, if it was there at all, and isn't recorded for abortion use until a few hundred years later .....
Probably not new to the Picts. The herb is native to Europe, which Great Britain has been connected to time and again.
Forum-posted ideas are freely adoptable.
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- annachie
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First recording of it in the west is in Charlamaine's garden (sp?) in about Laneths time.
But then the key word there is recorded. Dark ages so named for the lack of written records.
Actually the only thing that jarred slightly was Laneth's huband recognising Cow Bitter as Tansy in what is basically second languages to him. But it was much better story flow, and pun, than him not so yeah. Nicely done that writer.
- E. E. Nalley
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I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
- elrodw
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Never give up, Never surrender! Captain Peter Quincy Taggert
- Phoenix Spiritus
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Katssun wrote: Laneth is a Pict, circa 784. Tansy is descendant from a Norman Princess, circa...1066. There is a possibility that Laneth is the ancestor of Tansy's ancestor...
Normans are from France and are descended from Vikings. Since the Normans moved in as the ruling class, and 1066 means they are the invading Normans at that, its unlikely the bloodlines of the Picts and Normans mixed.
- Sir Lee
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I once read a Playboy interview with one of the members of the (deposed) Brazilian royal family -- sorta the black sheep of the family -- and he remarked on how the number of the people in European nobility was way smaller than the recommended for a healthy gene pool, and thanked his adulterous female ancestresses for them all not being totally inbred idiots. Well, not as much as they could have become, that is.
- null0trooper
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It's not a mark of bastardy but an anglicization of 'fils', or 'son of' in that placement, parallel to 'mac' in Gaelic. The Norman French had adopted heritable surnames by the time of the invasion, while the Welsh were using unmarked patronyms (Andrew Williams' son John would be John Andrews, not John Williams) Many of the Irish soon were using heritable clan names based on a common ancestral name. Mix it all together and Sir Andrew Williams' progeny would become the Fitzwilliams family.
Laneth's descendants could marry into Scoto-Norman families and clans, once they arrived, no problem. Their surnames? Mileage will vary, as a person might adopt their step-parent's or wife's surname if they chose to.
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- Valentine
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Don't Drick and Drive.
- E. E. Nalley
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I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
- Otherself
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I find it hard to believe, the whole Star Wars universe takes place "A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away.", I won't go into speculating how long ago is 'a long time ago' but I have to say that it is in the past, so for Rey to be one of Laneth's descendants it was either an alien abduction or time travel..... or both.E. E. Nalley wrote: Yes! I'm found out! Awe, spolier alert! Laneth's descendant is Rey from Star Wars the Force Awakens !
Maybe Rey is actually one of Leneth's ancestors? Or did we have a Dragon Break and nobody noticed?
Anway, enough nonsenses. Let's get to what I really wanted to say: that was one hell of bonding that Tansy and Joanne had.
- JG
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- Valentine
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JG wrote: Given attention spans nowadays, "A long time ago" starts at the 23-minute mark.
23 minutes, that's not a... oooh shiny.
Don't Drick and Drive.
- Ametros
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Seriously, thank you for your time and effort. It is appreciated.
- Arcanist Lupus
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When I was little, my parents would begin stories with "Once upon a time, a long, long time ago in a galaxy far, far, away, about last Friday..." (Bonus points to anyone who can figure out where that last bit comes from)JG wrote: Given attention spans nowadays, "A long time ago" starts at the 23-minute mark.
Although with the Sundering sending time to pieces, it's not too impossible that Star Wars might be stitched in there too. Actually, that might explain a few things...

As far as Tansy and Murphy go, I guess that knowing that both of you screwed up royally makes for a decent bonding experience.
"Shared pain is lessened; shared joy, increased — thus do we refute entropy." - Spider Robinson