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Question The Bear, the Bitch, and Everything

8 years 1 month ago #1 by Sir Lee
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  • Sometimes I'm just too obsessive for words...

    I didn't even start reading the story yet (I was converting it for my ePub reader) when I noticed this tiny issue: some question marks in the middle of the Hawaiian song at the end.
    "Aha!" I thought, "this smells like diacritic conversion failure! No problem, I'll just google for a correct version of the lyrics and paste it in place, and that will satisfy my obsessiveness."

    Turns out that it's not so easy. Roughly speaking, I found two different versions of the song:
    - one that is widely tagged as coming from the Disney movie "Lilo & Stitch", and which I was able to find what appear to be, to my non-Hawaiian-reading eyes, fairly good copies and translations -- but which has MAJOR differences from the one E.E. used;
    - And one that seems very similar to the one in the story (even to the unnecessary, hyphenated line-break) -- but without all the diacritics.

    Now, in the interest of having the best possible story... can somebody point me to a version of the song which IS nearly the same as the one in the story, but WITH the diacritics? If you do so, I will figure out all the encoding things and make it available here as an in-place replacement.

    I might attempt to figure it out line-by-line, but not understanding more than two or three words of Hawaiian (and those would be "aloha", "wahine" and maybe "kapu"), it will be a lot of work.

    Don't call me "Shirley." You will surely make me surly.
    8 years 1 month ago #2 by E. E. Nalley
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  • The version that I used along with an English translation is available at the link below.

    kapalama.ksbe.edu/elementary/lilo_and_stitch/he_mele_trans.html

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  • SPOILER ALERT
    Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.


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    8 years 1 month ago - 8 years 1 month ago #4 by Malady
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  • Oh... Hey, it's Tansy's dad! ... Interesting POV choice! Nice! :)

    The redhead's hand went out and took the blonde by the chin and forced her to look her in the eye. "Ah don't think you really know what that word means, because if you did you would never use it to describe yourself. Ah might be called loose, 'cause Ah sure didn't wait for marriage. Ah might be called a slut and, being honest with myself, Ah've been a bit casual and fast, maybe more than a lady should be. But a whore? Tansy, a whore only cares about money, or status, or things; she trades her body for what she wants because she can't trade her love. A whore can't love, she's forgotten how; don't ever, ever call yourself that."


    The philosophical and such bits are always cool!

    ... Coyote... Well, that makes things a lot more interesting.

    Dang. Got spoiled for Murphy 'cause I read this first...

    ... Why don't I have as many interesting things saved for this as for Murphy's Laws?? Different attention levels, I guess...

    Hmm... Coyotes are wolves... No, wait, can't be the bitch 'cause Coyote's male... But, Lupine's related... And there might be a fem!Wolf spirit somewhere else??

    "past life incursion" just sounds so bad... I guess I've been reading too much SCP or something. ... Dimensional Incursions.

    Past Life Loophole had a brother too. Coincidence or not? How much of Elaine's family is reincarating?? 'Cause I'm thinking her mom might be one as well...

    ... How much of Banshee's life can be mapped onto Loophole's Life?

    Stomper = Mustang?

    Domnall = Kodiak?

    Aunt = Carson???

    The song was nice... And the info on how yacht racing works is informative, and shows Loophole being competitive as well. ... The Yacht race arc... That should be an interesting event to see conclude? It sets them so far away from Whateley, no?

    ...

    "… Yes," she replied. "She made it out like this was a big secret, but here's the thing. Being an engineer, if the faculty doesn't know about this place, Ah wonder who is balancing the chlorine levels in this water? Or keeping the heater working? Or washing and refolding those towels? All Ah can tell you is I've never been in here and seen anyone from the faculty or the staff working on it. There’s always towels, the water is always hot and clean and Ah don't really look into it much beyond that to be honest."


    Thinky think think! :lol:
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    8 years 1 month ago #5 by DanZilla
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  • Sir Lee wrote: Sometimes I'm just too obsessive for words...

    I didn't even start reading the story yet (I was converting it for my ePub reader) when I noticed this tiny issue: some question marks in the middle of the Hawaiian song at the end.
    "Aha!" I thought, "this smells like diacritic conversion failure! No problem, I'll just google for a correct version of the lyrics and paste it in place, and that will satisfy my obsessiveness."

    Turns out that it's not so easy. Roughly speaking, I found two different versions of the song:
    - one that is widely tagged as coming from the Disney movie "Lilo & Stitch", and which I was able to find what appear to be, to my non-Hawaiian-reading eyes, fairly good copies and translations -- but which has MAJOR differences from the one E.E. used;
    - And one that seems very similar to the one in the story (even to the unnecessary, hyphenated line-break) -- but without all the diacritics.

    Now, in the interest of having the best possible story... can somebody point me to a version of the song which IS nearly the same as the one in the story, but WITH the diacritics? If you do so, I will figure out all the encoding things and make it available here as an in-place replacement.

    I might attempt to figure it out line-by-line, but not understanding more than two or three words of Hawaiian (and those would be "aloha", "wahine" and maybe "kapu"), it will be a lot of work.


    I took the reference EE provided and have gone through and put in the correct letters where I could... it doesn't match the EXACT wording we have so I can't be sure of everything... I also stripped out the quotation marks from the start and end of each section as they were unnecessary in this context and fixed some spacing and line-endings and wrapping that had gone "off".
    8 years 1 month ago #6 by Sir Lee
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  • Minor nitpick: Tansy's dad's name is given as Theodore, while previously (in Ayla 1) it was given as Darryl, and his mother's as Marissa. Of course, it's entirely possible that he's named Theodore Darryl Walcutt or Darryl Theodore Walcutt.

    Note also that, while an ancestor of the Walcutts was a signatory of the Declaration of Independence, there's no one named Walcutt in our world's Declaration. There are a few possible explanations:
    (1) In the Whateley Universe, the list of signatures is slightly different
    (2) The ancestor was not named Walcutt, that is, the bloodline was not exclusively patrilineal.
    (3) There's no "Walcutt", but there's an "Oliver Wolcott," which is pretty close. The written form of the name changed at some point.

    Don't call me "Shirley." You will surely make me surly.
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  • Sir Lee wrote: (3) There's no "Walcutt", but there's an "Oliver Wolcott," which is pretty close. The written form of the name changed at some point.


    My own surname has changed spellings at least twice since then, so that's not too far-fetched.

    “Oh if only you knew…” Having to keep a secret about Poe was fine. She’d not cooperated with Horton trying to guide her through a promise that could be sealed with a Sorcerer’s Contract. Every instinct she had shrieked at her to never, ever make any promise, ever. Hanging out with Diamond and Caitlin told her the score.

    “And Horton says you have to put up with the spell.”

    “No, I don’t.” Monica shook her head. “I haven’t even told my twin sister about Poe’s secret.”

    “I’m just the messenger, not the one messaging.” She looked thoughtful. “I’m Lanie, by the way.”


    So we have a compulsion spell being made a condition of boarding at the school after it's too late for the student to be moved to another cottage, and after the school has accepted payment for the term. What happens if a student does refuse to be the target of a mind-altering spell that could incapacitate them at any time with no consequences for the caster? (If Marty had been flying when it kicked in and knocked her out, she could be dead instead of dating.)

    Suppose one of the bespelled students had to testify in a court case. How valid is the testimony of a witness who turns out to be under a magical compulsion that affects what they can or cannot say?

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    8 years 1 month ago #8 by Wrayth
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  • I might be remembering this from a non cannon source, but I thought the "no talking about Poe" spell was not incapacitating... It just prevents a person from talking or writing the secret. And it wears off after the student is done with the school.
    8 years 1 month ago #9 by E. E. Nalley
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  • ReCall that Marty was in hysterics at the time. She worked her self up and that's why she passed out, not because of the spell

    I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
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  • Wrayth wrote: I might be remembering this from a non cannon source, but I thought the "no talking about Poe" spell was not incapacitating... It just prevents a person from talking or writing the secret. And it wears off after the student is done with the school.


    To be honest, at that age I would not have believed that the spell would wear off on its own like that, so I would have been out the door, looking for a bed elsewhere.

    "Don't you see?" she wailed. "They hate us! They killed Jamie because he didn't fit in their little gender boxes and now they're going to kill us all! Every...!" her mouth snapped shut as she jerked trying to speak and unable.

    "Marty?" he asked, startled. "Marty!"

    She couldn't speak for the sobs and hiccups that wracked her. Finally, Mrs. Horton got up and pronounced a heavy sounding word while she touched Marty's forehead. The young blonde sagged as she lost consciousness so completely that her shell dissipated and the young, thin, mostly-androgynous boy underneath was exposed.


    You're right. It was Mrs. Horton that knocked her out - I misremembered that part. The spell did rob her of the capacity for speech, which does seem to have made matters worse, not better.

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    8 years 1 month ago - 8 years 1 month ago #11 by E. E. Nalley
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  • null0trooper wrote: . What happens if a student does refuse to be the target of a mind-altering spell that could incapacitate them at any time with no consequences for the caster?


    As a practical matter, the students don't have a choice. The school does have the power of loco parentis to act in the best interests of the child, which the spell meets the criteria of. This is Spelled out (no pun intended) in the contract the parents sign giving the school permission to treat them medically as needed which may or may not include the use of magic.

    As an interesting side note, it never ceases to amaze me as an author the things that I put into a story that I think will get lots of comments and laughs about that are frequently overlooked, or is things that I didn't pay that much attention to become matters of debate and great concern among the fans. Quite interesting of phenomena.

    One of the matters in which specific I am talking about, there's an Easter egg in the spell the Picts mother uses to heal Domnall. If you're not getting the gag try reading it out loud. ;)

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  • E. E. Nalley wrote: As an interesting side note, it never ceases to amaze me as an author the things that I put into a story that I think will get lots of comments and laughs about that are frequently overlooked, or is things that I didn't pay that much attention to become matters of debate and great concern among the fans. Quite interesting of phenomena.

    One of the matters in which specific I am talking about, there's an Easter egg in the spell the Picts mother uses to heal Domnall. If you're not getting the gag try reading it out loud. ;)


    I notice the same. Or people get things which I didn't intend (Freudian slip or misconstrual).

    As to this Easter egg - I got it INSTANTLY.

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  • When I was in the throes of obsessiveness regarding the Hawaiian song, I googled the spell to check if it the diacritics were correct. I saw in passing something about Merlin, but even from the Google search results page I could see that the quote was correct, so I moved on.

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  • Still, I get why Anomaly would be hostile to the idea of voluntarily agreeing to any deal, given how her promises have a tendency of turning into soul-imprinting Wizard Contracts... enter enough of that, and you can't get out of the bed in the morning because that would be some sort of violation.

    Basically, the school has to figure out a way to impose the restrictions on her without her agreement, so they don't imprint on her soul.

    Don't call me "Shirley." You will surely make me surly.
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  • E. E. Nalley wrote:

    null0trooper wrote: . What happens if a student does refuse to be the target of a mind-altering spell that could incapacitate them at any time with no consequences for the caster?


    As a practical matter, the students don't have a choice. The school does have the power of loco parentis to act in the best interests of the child, which the spell meets the criteria of. This is Spelled out (no pun intended) in the contract the parents sign giving the school permission to treat them medically as needed which may or may not include the use of magic.


    This spell was never intended as a medical charm, but the school's going to pretend otherwise because it has better lawyers than ethics. No redress through the courts. Got it. As a practical matter, most kids that age wouldn't bat an eye. I'm just not one of those kids, nor one that responds well to coercion.

    E. E. Nalley wrote: One of the matters in which specific I am talking about, there's an Easter egg in the spell the Picts mother uses to heal Domnall. If you're not getting the gag try reading it out loud. ;)


    Never saw the movie in full :-p Having a Briton (Merlin) speaking Gaelic is par for the course from what I have seen.

    On the other hand, explaining why the Pict's mother would know and use Gaelic in the story is a good catch. (IIRC, Lovecraft and company thought of Pictish as a language isolate, while the best current estimates are that it may have been a Brittonic dialect.)

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    8 years 1 month ago #17 by E. E. Nalley
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  • To be fair, most kids would probably think it cool and exciting. Magic is a real thing in this world, but it's still extremely rare. So as of today, 536 people of been in to outer space, from Yuri Gagarin on and while magic isn't that rare in this universe, the chance of actually meeting a real magician is horrifically small.

    And I thought Nicol Williamson did a fantastic job as Merlin! :)

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  • As soon as Anomaly was mentioned, I could practically see a hand waving in the air before me. :-p

    But as for the contracts and such, I wonder if there'd be a loophole for an agreement to come to pass without it being outright stated and therefore magically binding. Something along the lines of "I don't agree to you casting this spell on me, but I won't prevent you from doing so"? Assuming said spell is even able to function in one form or another without the express permission of the target, but I feel that it's a moral restriction on the part of Mrs. Horton and the rest of the staff more than anything. I could be wrong in this, of course.

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  • E. E. Nalley wrote:

    null0trooper wrote: . What happens if a student does refuse to be the target of a mind-altering spell that could incapacitate them at any time with no consequences for the caster?


    As a practical matter, the students don't have a choice. The school does have the power of loco parentis to act in the best interests of the child, which the spell meets the criteria of. This is Spelled out (no pun intended) in the contract the parents sign giving the school permission to treat them medically as needed which may or may not include the use of magic.

    As an interesting side note, it never ceases to amaze me as an author the things that I put into a story that I think will get lots of comments and laughs about that are frequently overlooked, or is things that I didn't pay that much attention to become matters of debate and great concern among the fans. Quite interesting of phenomena.

    One of the matters in which specific I am talking about, there's an Easter egg in the spell the Picts mother uses to heal Domnall. If you're not getting the gag try reading it out loud. ;)

    Do I need a small wooden board to read it out properly? If so I shale opt not to.

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  • For those who don't get the joke
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  • Where was this spell first mentioned? I do not recall it from any of the Kimba stories.
    And Sandra knows the secret, she learned it in Ill Winds.
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  • amratner wrote: Where was this spell first mentioned? I do not recall it from any of the Kimba stories.
    And Sandra knows the secret, she learned it in Ill Winds.


    Sandra doesn't know the secret. She knows that Toni and Nikki are Trans, but not about anything else. I think the spell is first mentioned in the scene with Marty and Steve.

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  • Valentine wrote:

    amratner wrote: Where was this spell first mentioned? I do not recall it from any of the Kimba stories.
    And Sandra knows the secret, she learned it in Ill Winds.


    Sandra doesn't know the secret. She knows that Toni and Nikki are Trans, but not about anything else. I think the spell is first mentioned in the scene with Marty and Steve.


    This is correct.
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  • Sir Lee wrote: Basically, the school has to figure out a way to impose the restrictions on her without her agreement, so they don't imprint on her soul.


    Bella Horton could accept the student's statement that they affirm without oath that they will not willingly betray the Poe Secret. But she won't, or she would have months before.

    Since it's taken this long to get her way, I'd bet that she knows there's a cost for imposing her will on one of the Fae, and has no intention of paying it herself.

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  • I don't know, maybe it's just me, but is there a reason you guys are obsessing over what is basically a small, unimportant piece of detail that's meant to give the universe a little bit more depth? I mean sure, we love to lay red herrings just to see how far you guys will chase a shadow, but this is really getting into the realm of asked and answered. I guess if you guys want to chase down this particular greeble start a new thread, okay? This doesn't really have anything to do with this story.

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  • Well, when a human and a dead horse love each other very much...

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  • I didn't recognize it from there (it's been long and long), but
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    Out, damnéd Spot! Bad Doggy!
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  • Hmmmn... I noticed it was Marty who was the tour guide for the Changelings, whereas In "A Tenuous Blade" it is mentioned that Alya took them. I was on the verge of stopping to go to ask about that, when you answered it indirectly by mentioning that Angel would guide any latecomers among the lesbian and bi girls, which leaves the question neatly closed without actually explaining it, just by the fact that Esoteric arrived three days later (meaning that she wasn't with the group, and would be given the tour by whoever was available that day). Well played.

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  • Nalley does have a knack for keeping the timeline in his head better than I do.

    I totally would have buggered that up
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  • Malady wrote: Hmm... Coyotes are wolves... No, wait, can't be the bitch 'cause Coyote's male... But, Lupine's related... And there might be a fem!Wolf spirit somewhere else??

    Excuse me. Coyotes are not wolves. Canines, yes. Wolves, no.

    (Why no, I'm not at all biased. What gave you that idea? :D)

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  • Fair old chance Diamond figgured it out by now anyway.

    She lied about being trans, got a gen female roomie.

    Nikki and Toni trans roomies.
    Same cottage as ayla.

    Now same cottage as her sister who she knows, or can know, admitted to being herm.
    Soon as she finds out that Murphy may be going herm, twigs that it's because Ayla's room mate is herm.

    Diamond will twig soon, like late 2007 at the latest.

    Still.
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  • annachie wrote: Fair old chance Diamond figgured it out by now anyway.

    She lied about being trans, got a gen female roomie.

    Nikki and Toni trans roomies.
    Same cottage as ayla.

    Now same cottage as her sister who she knows, or can know, admitted to being herm.
    Soon as she finds out that Murphy may be going herm, twigs that it's because Ayla's room mate is herm.

    Diamond will twig soon, like late 2007 at the latest.

    Still.


    We don't know if she lied about being trans, we don't know if Razor lied either. Considering the Outcast stories, it's fairly obvious that someone on campus knows, because they are together with 4 freshman GSD TGs.

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  • Valentine wrote:

    annachie wrote: Fair old chance Diamond figgured it out by now anyway.

    She lied about being trans, got a gen female roomie.

    Nikki and Toni trans roomies.
    Same cottage as ayla.

    Now same cottage as her sister who she knows, or can know, admitted to being herm.
    Soon as she finds out that Murphy may be going herm, twigs that it's because Ayla's room mate is herm.

    Diamond will twig soon, like late 2007 at the latest.

    Still.


    We don't know if she lied about being trans, we don't know if Razor lied either. Considering the Outcast stories, it's fairly obvious that someone on campus knows, because they are together with 4 freshman GSD TGs.


    when razor and diamond came to whateley there wasn't tunnel access from poe so the severe gsd kids would not of been put there but I don't see anything really stopping them or caitlen there now lol
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  • slapshots wrote: when razor and diamond came to whateley there wasn't tunnel access from poe so the severe gsd kids would not of been put there but I don't see anything really stopping them or caitlen there now lol


    Well, Caitlyn is a Thornie, and as such more important rooming considerations than her gender. But yes, I expect that Poe could open to more GSD students now. But Razor won't move, because it would mean splitting with Joe. Sandra could make a case for it, considering the fiasco that was her last roommate situation. But she doesn't really need to - the Outcasts provide her with the support she needs, and she's friends with a fair number of Posies already. So there's no point to moving her, and she does have friends in her cottage that she'd want to stick with.

    I'm still wondering how the dragon guy from Small Mercies was a Poesie considering I didn't see any indication that he could pass as a regular human.

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    slapshots wrote: when razor and diamond came to whateley there wasn't tunnel access from poe so the severe gsd kids would not of been put there but I don't see anything really stopping them or caitlen there now lol


    Well, Caitlyn is a Thornie, and as such more important rooming considerations than her gender. But yes, I expect that Poe could open to more GSD students now. But Razor won't move, because it would mean splitting with Joe. Sandra could make a case for it, considering the fiasco that was her last roommate situation. But she doesn't really need to - the Outcasts provide her with the support she needs, and she's friends with a fair number of Posies already. So there's no point to moving her, and she does have friends in her cottage that she'd want to stick with.

    I'm still wondering how the dragon guy from Small Mercies was a Poesie considering I didn't see any indication that he could pass as a regular human.


    Poe contains GSD students. The only ones who have to go in Hawthorn despite sexuality issues are ones who are unsafe.

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  • Poe contains GSD students. The only ones who have to go in Hawthorn despite sexuality issues are ones who are unsafe.


    My understanding was that that is only a recent change, though.

    The Wiki wrote: Originally, only the three farthest cottages, Hawthorne, Twain and Whitman, were accessible by tunnel. The reason is that those are the cottages that house students unable to pass for baselines, who therefore need the tunnels to avoid being seen on red flag days. In November 2006, a spur was built from the Hawthorne tunnel to Poe, which means Poe might receive GSD students in the future.


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  • Recall that Poe is the second farthest dorm and is hidden from the Quad by O Henry Hill and Doyle Hill and Hawthorne is further away so the GSD Poeses could walk to Hawthorne safely and get into the tunnel system.

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  • His GSD was slow developing.

    it really only manifested fully after adulthood so he could still hide under a hoodie.

    Spoiler: He's not a changeling.
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  • amratner wrote: Sorry, but the last few posts have confused me. Who are you talking about?


    They're talking about Daryl, they dragon avatar, introduced in Small Mercies .

    Now, as to GSD mutants in Poe, colored-flag days and GSD mutants needing to use the tunnels... everybody ASSUMES this is an original feature of the school. What if they just didn't let outsiders into the campus in the past?

    In addition, There's a GSD mutant in the Kimba stories pretty much from Day-one (at least in Diane's later written stories) and they didn't have the tunnel then.
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  • Not one, but at least three significantly GSD mutants I can name offhand in Poe -- Angel, Michelangelo and Verdant. The thing is, all three of them can pass for baseline humans with just minor effort -- Angel binding her wings under an overcoat, Michelangelo by wearing a hat and Verdant by hiding her lower arms under a coat and temporarily changing her color back to normal skin tone. So none of them really needs the tunnels to get around on Red Flag days.

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    amratner wrote: Sorry, but the last few posts have confused me. Who are you talking about?


    They're talking about Daryl, they dragon avatar, introduced in Small Mercies .

    Now, as to GSD mutants in Poe, colored-flag days and GSD mutants needing to use the tunnels... everybody ASSUMES this is an original feature of the school. What if they just didn't let outsiders into the campus in the past?

    In addition, There's a GSD mutant in the Kimba stories pretty much from Day-one (at least in Diane's later written stories) and they didn't have the tunnel then.


    While not letting outsiders on campus, except at certain times, may have been possible when the school had a very small student population. They would need so much food delivered now, that they would likely require deliveries many times a week. Plus deliveries to the campus bookstore/notWalmart, Mail, stuff being sent via all the shipping services. . It would be really hard to close the school to outsiders.

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  • annachie wrote: Fair old chance Diamond figgured it out by now anyway.

    She lied about being trans, got a gen female roomie.

    Nikki and Toni trans roomies.
    Same cottage as ayla.

    Now same cottage as her sister who she knows, or can know, admitted to being herm.
    Soon as she finds out that Murphy may be going herm, twigs that it's because Ayla's room mate is herm.

    Diamond will twig soon, like late 2007 at the latest.

    Still.

    I don't think think the presence of just six people makes it that obvious, actually. Everybody already knows that Poe is the cottage for people who need support for their psychological issues. LGBT folks are more likely than average to have psychological issues, and people who've had an unconsensual sex change are very likely to have psychological issues. Poe is the obvious place to put them. That's the beauty of Poe's cover story. And don't forget that to believe that Poe is secretly the LGBT+changeling cottage also means believing that the administration and dozens of new high school students per year have been successfully maintaining a long-running conspiracy .

    What would be really hilarious would be to find out that Poe really is the nuthouse, and they just tell the residents that it's the alternative sexuality cottage to put them at ease.

    Valentine wrote: While not letting outsiders on campus, except at certain times, may have been possible when the school had a very small student population. They would need so much food delivered now, that they would likely require deliveries many times a week. Plus deliveries to the campus bookstore/notWalmart, Mail, stuff being sent via all the shipping services. . It would be really hard to close the school to outsiders.


    Deliveries don't have to take place in the middle of campus. They could have had deliveries made to a warehouse in Dunwich rather than campus itself, and then had Whateley staff pick it up and bring it the rest of the way. Or (more likely) they could have had an out-of-the-way delivery zone on campus, with the GSD cases just avoiding that zone and the area around the road leading to it.

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  • I'm sure that there are ways that Whateley could keep the campus free of outsiders. But red flag days serve other purposes as well. It helps ground the students, and remind them that there is a world outside of Whateley, a world in which casual power use will be met with fear and fleeing, rather than casual nonchalance. Also, red flag days probably cut down on incidents, which could give the staff a little bit of breathing room.

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  • Kettlekorn wrote: I don't think think the presence of just six people makes it that obvious, actually. Everybody already knows that Poe is the cottage for people who need support for their psychological issues. LGBT folks are more likely than average to have psychological issues, and people who've had an unconsensual sex change are very likely to have psychological issues. Poe is the obvious place to put them. That's the beauty of Poe's cover story. And don't forget that to believe that Poe is secretly the LGBT+changeling cottage also means believing that the administration and dozens of new high school students per year have been successfully maintaining a long-running conspiracy .

    What would be really hilarious would be to find out that Poe really is the nuthouse, and they just tell the residents that it's the alternative sexuality cottage to put them at ease.

    In Gen1, there's no question that Poe is both the secret LGBT dorm and legitimately the crazy house. The majority of the POV characters anyways, "split personality" before and presently-depressed Nikki Riley, Wondercute's leader, redeemed villainess Vamp, Hippolyta now that Sara is missing, Spectacle of the Spring Kayda, but now perhaps most importantly, Downpour.

    There just really aren't that many "crazy" students elsewhere, unless you count the other Wondercute members, the ultraviolents, Jobe at her worst, Joe's taste in clothing, and Sandra and the rest of the Outcasts having PTSD.

    Gen 2, 'the crazy' is much more evenly distributed among the POV characters. The PTSD girls are in Poe, International TMZ celebrity Tia is in Melville, and Tanya's dorm is full of girls in most desperate need of acceptance, reassurance, and a firm hug.

    Given the other events that started in Gen2, there is much higher risk of the secret getting blown in 2016/2017 than back during Gen1.
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  • I would argue that there are plenty of crazy in other cottages, even on Gen1. All the Diedrick's cases, to start with. Migraine. The horribly abused and traumatized Cavalier and Skybolt. Most of the Outcasts. The delusional Unstoppable Three (plus Pucelle). Lifeline. Plenty of depression and low self-esteem cases. Jobe. Other sociopaths, like the Ultraviolent clique. Bloodwolf's clique. Worm.

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    Kettlekorn wrote: I don't think think the presence of just six people makes it that obvious, actually. Everybody already knows that Poe is the cottage for people who need support for their psychological issues. LGBT folks are more likely than average to have psychological issues, and people who've had an unconsensual sex change are very likely to have psychological issues. Poe is the obvious place to put them. That's the beauty of Poe's cover story. And don't forget that to believe that Poe is secretly the LGBT+changeling cottage also means believing that the administration and dozens of new high school students per year have been successfully maintaining a long-running conspiracy .

    What would be really hilarious would be to find out that Poe really is the nuthouse, and they just tell the residents that it's the alternative sexuality cottage to put them at ease.

    In Gen1, there's no question that Poe is both the secret LGBT dorm and legitimately the crazy house. The majority of the POV characters anyways, "split personality" before and presently-depressed Nikki Riley, Wondercute's leader, redeemed villainess Vamp, Hippolyta now that Sara is missing, Spectacle of the Spring Kayda, but now perhaps most importantly, Downpour.

    There just really aren't that many "crazy" students elsewhere, unless you count the other Wondercute members, the ultraviolents, Jobe at her worst, Joe's taste in clothing, and Sandra and the rest of the Outcasts having PTSD.

    Gen 2, 'the crazy' is much more evenly distributed among the POV characters. The PTSD girls are in Poe, International TMZ celebrity Tia is in Melville, and Tanya's dorm is full of girls in most desperate need of acceptance, reassurance, and a firm hug.

    Given the other events that started in Gen2, there is much higher risk of the secret getting blown in 2016/2017 than back during Gen1.


    Bwahahahaha, how about OC Dee, Olympia, Mega Death, Compiler, Montana, Frank, Nacht, Bomber, Geomancer, Peril, Psydoe, Reach, Skybolt, Cavalier, Stalwart, and none of those are on your list. That doesn't include the 7 other known Diedrick's sufferers on campus either. Or any of the 4 or 5 other known psychological afflictions that occur in mutants.

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  • Valentine wrote: Bwahahahaha, how about OC Dee, Olympia, Mega Death, Compiler, Montana, Frank, Nacht, Bomber, Geomancer, Peril, Psydoe, Reach, Skybolt, Cavalier, Stalwart, and none of those are on your list. That doesn't include the 7 other known Diedrick's sufferers on campus either. Or any of the 4 or 5 other known psychological afflictions that occur in mutants.


    More than half of these kids are either no more mentally ill than the average teenager, or they weren't when they originally showed up at Whateley.

    Not that Slapdash is anything close to being as disabled as Mega-Death, but putting all the Diedrick's cases in the same building? Yeah ... Let's move all the odds manglers and ragers in with them, and see how long before it ends up either vaporized or in orbit.

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    Valentine wrote: Bwahahahaha, how about OC Dee, Olympia, Mega Death, Compiler, Montana, Frank, Nacht, Bomber, Geomancer, Peril, Psydoe, Reach, Skybolt, Cavalier, Stalwart, and none of those are on your list. That doesn't include the 7 other known Diedrick's sufferers on campus either. Or any of the 4 or 5 other known psychological afflictions that occur in mutants.


    More than half of these kids are either no more mentally ill than the average teenager, or they weren't when they originally showed up at Whateley.

    Not that Slapdash is anything close to being as disabled as Mega-Death, but putting all the Diedrick's cases in the same building? Yeah ... Let's move all the odds manglers and ragers in with them, and see how long before it ends up either vaporized or in orbit.


    Montana, Reach, Skybolt and Cav are the only ones on that list that are having problems from stuff that happened to them at Whateley.

    OC Dee was on meds for her OCD before she arrived.
    Olympia has mental problems when she isn't Dricking.
    Mega Death's are solely from Deidricks.
    Compiler experimented on herself with untested technology to achieve a "perfect" body.
    Frank has severe emotional problems due to his mutation.
    Nacht has pretty bad emotional problems thanks to her "mother."
    Bomber is a psychopath.
    Geomancer has worse issues than Aquerna who is getting help.
    Peril is probably the best on this list, but anyone that does the stunts he does needs some counseling.
    Psydoe has a debilitating phobia that needs treatment.
    Stalwart doesn't even know what century it is, he is a bit delusional.

    Even if some of them are no worse off than average teenager, that doesn't mean that they still aren't a bit crazy and need help.

    No Slapdash isn't as bad off as MD, but isn't that a bit like saying "you've only lost a hand, that's not as bad as Ralph over there, he lost his arm?"

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    He can at least blast a hole in the ground or pynch concrete to take his focus off people
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  • To be fair, some of the people you guys are talking about are Thornies and therefor have a good excuse for not being in Poe, Twain and Whitman students also have an excuse, if not quite as good of one. Those two don't foster as supportive of an environment as Poe and Hawthorne, but they're still better than the other three.

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  • There is one thing I've always wondered about the whole "Poe is for the Crazy" coverup/excuse.

    What happens when you have clearly crazy students, with no sexual issues, in the other dorms? What is the excuse for them not being in Poe?
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  • peter wrote: There is one thing I've always wondered about the whole "Poe is for the Crazy" coverup/excuse.

    What happens when you have clearly crazy students, with no sexual issues, in the other dorms? What is the excuse for them not being in Poe?

    Huh. I think that the "Poe is for crazies" cover is spread as a rumor, rather than an official policy. If they're not publicly admitting that such a policy exists, it makes it difficult for anybody to questions the ins and outs of exactly how the policy works.

    That said, I went looking for where the cover was explained, and I can't find it. I searched the original introductory stories for the words "mental", "head case", and "craz" (for both 'crazy' and 'crazies'), and wasn't able to find any mention of the cover story. Does anybody know where it was first mentioned?

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  • Normally, the last thing a competent counsellor or therapist would want to do is to pull someone who's going through a rough patch out of whatever support network they have, unless it's the problem. For example, yanking Psydoe out of Whitman.

    Also, there's a hell of a lot more to a clinical mental illness than being different from everyone else, or "clearly crazy". For example, Peril, who's just another (stereotypical) Southern boy out to have some fun as long as he gets an adrenaline rush and it doesn't hurt someone else. He just happens to have regeneration, so "crazy" stunts for a baseline only rank at "yeah, I had to sit down for a while" for him.

    Not even counting the characters like Slapdash and Bomber who are functional, socially isolating someone (and tossing them into the "nut house" IS doing that) just because they have a diagnosed mental illness is often the worst thing you can do to them. However, someone having social anxiety symptoms might need less forced social interaction for a while.

    Tossing random people together just because they have a mental illness is also very high on the sliding scale of stupidity even if only because one person's symptoms can be another's trigger point. There's also the simple fact that many psychologists refuse to recognize: not every condition responds well, or at all, to any one type of therapy. Now throw powers into the mix.

    tl,dr,dc version: The response to a student who has a mental illness has to be tailored to the individual and their actual needs.

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  • Arcanist Lupus wrote: That said, I went looking for where the cover was explained, and I can't find it. I searched the original introductory stories for the words "mental", "head case", and "craz" (for both 'crazy' and 'crazies'), and wasn't able to find any mention of the cover story. Does anybody know where it was first mentioned?


    Not sure about the first mention, but it looks like most of the details are handled off-screen.

    In Ayla and the New School , it's clear that incoming Poe residents have been told about the cover story.

    Billie was just sitting down, and...

    OH MY GOD! She was deliberately sitting next to the werewolf! Was she nuts?

    Oh, wait. We were in Poe. We were supposed to be nuts.


    When the question comes about "not-crazy person X being in Poe", the "helper" cover story is in circulation (not so much a cover in Wallflower's case)

    Kismet immediately started in French, “Is it true that you are in the Lunatic House? Poe Cottage?”
    . . .
    Cytherea said, “Not all of the students in Poe are crazy. I hear that some are there merely for easier observation in case they need counseling, and some are there because they are natural helpers who would be good roommates with a lunatic.” Hmm, did she know some people in Poe?


    In A Simple Game , Carmilla is advised to keep it quiet.

    “Well, let me be the first to reassure you that Whately has a strict non-discrimination policy, which is why we have Poe cottage. Everyone here knows what they are, so there are no misunderstandings, just keep it quiet from the other cottages.


    In The Big Idea , it's clear that Admin is well aware of Poe's reputation among other students.

    “No Miss Kumler, Sawyer has already suffered enough, and will suffer even more before the dust settles. I have no intention of dropping him into the middle of Dickinson that way.” Carson paused … “So, where DO we put you two?”

    “Poe?” Hartford asked, over-casually.

    “No… I don’t think so… After all, it’s supposed to be a temporary measure… Hawthorne would be both embarrassing and too expensive. Melville.


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  • Arcanist Lupus wrote: Huh. I think that the "Poe is for crazies" cover is spread as a rumor, rather than an official policy. If they're not publicly admitting that such a policy exists, it makes it difficult for anybody to questions the ins and outs of exactly how the policy works.

    That said, I went looking for where the cover was explained, and I can't find it. I searched the original introductory stories for the words "mental", "head case", and "craz" (for both 'crazy' and 'crazies'), and wasn't able to find any mention of the cover story. Does anybody know where it was first mentioned?


    If you give a plausible explanation for something, most people will not think too hard about it.

    I will use Murphy as an example:

    She's, by her peers standard, completely cracked in the head. She is suffering from untreated ADHD, she's extremely aggressive when confronted in hostile fashion, and *spoiler* she is undiagnosed Schizoid Personality disorder. (I got the diagnosis after I made her and didn't know to filter that out)

    She doesn't really get on well with anyone save a very select few individuals. And she unintentionally burned one.

    She's a PRIME candidate for untreated crazy, and dragging her into Poe before she shows signs of Vamps fence-sitting gender just lends credibility to Poe. And I havent decided if she will. I plan to flip a coin when the time comes to do the reveal.

    Few in Whitman object because Murphy is difficult to get along with.

    But think about the behaviors of kids who dont want to be outted. There's going to be measurable and notable paranoia. There's going to be antsy and clannish behavior. There's going to be a certain level of logic no one else can parse who isn't similar.

    So people see what they expect to see.
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  • Arcanist Lupus wrote:

    peter wrote: There is one thing I've always wondered about the whole "Poe is for the Crazy" coverup/excuse.

    What happens when you have clearly crazy students, with no sexual issues, in the other dorms? What is the excuse for them not being in Poe?

    Huh. I think that the "Poe is for crazies" cover is spread as a rumor, rather than an official policy. If they're not publicly admitting that such a policy exists, it makes it difficult for anybody to questions the ins and outs of exactly how the policy works.

    That said, I went looking for where the cover was explained, and I can't find it. I searched the original introductory stories for the words "mental", "head case", and "craz" (for both 'crazy' and 'crazies'), and wasn't able to find any mention of the cover story. Does anybody know where it was first mentioned?


    The earliest "mentions" of it, are more of implications.

    Another Day, We Were Going Where? wrote: “Don’t worry guys. I understand. We have rules over at Poe too.” That last statement seemed to make Blot and Link a little nervous for some reason. Harry just looked relieved. I wondered what the other two had heard about Poe.


    Harry mentions rumors just after that.

    Just after Toni absconds with T-Bird

    Toni and the Tiger wrote: The kids at the tables near us took notice of this, and I heard someone mutter, “Yep, a Poe girl. Figgers.” Hey, screw ‘em.


    I'm not sure where the first blatant mention is.

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    I fail to see the humor here, but I am pleased to have brightened your day.

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  • Arcanist Lupus wrote:

    peter wrote: There is one thing I've always wondered about the whole "Poe is for the Crazy" coverup/excuse.

    What happens when you have clearly crazy students, with no sexual issues, in the other dorms? What is the excuse for them not being in Poe?

    Huh. I think that the "Poe is for crazies" cover is spread as a rumor, rather than an official policy. If they're not publicly admitting that such a policy exists, it makes it difficult for anybody to questions the ins and outs of exactly how the policy works.

    That said, I went looking for where the cover was explained, and I can't find it. I searched the original introductory stories for the words "mental", "head case", and "craz" (for both 'crazy' and 'crazies'), and wasn't able to find any mention of the cover story. Does anybody know where it was first mentioned?


    In an interesting situation, when becomes relative. In story chronology Ayla is told by Mrs. Horton on Tuesday September 5th just after breakfast, but that story wasn't published until three and a half years after the first story was published.

    So it becomes dependent upon how the stories are read.

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  • Arcanist Lupus wrote:

    JG wrote: BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA


    I fail to see the humor here, but I am pleased to have brightened your day.


    Joe just likes being called an authorlord. It's close to overlord, and he's really set on being one when he grows up. (notes that there IS a list of things JG isn't allowed to do... and it IS posted in the WA Universe section with our other important universe defining documents).

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  • Ah. I picked the term up from the Ilona Andrews fan community. This is where the term originates from. I think it fits well here, so I've started borrowing it.



    (The other piece of writing/fan terminology that I'm trying to get established here is RAFO (Read And Find Out), from the Robert Jordan/Brandon Sanderson fanbase. It's just such a handy response to any story question that you don't wish to answer.)
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  • Nancy Coolidge, AKA 'Nasty Nancy' AKA Flicker is an ex-minion of Tansy's who betrayed her. She is also Aries' girlfriend.

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  • While I'm sure that Jules Vern is a fine author, I am unaware of his or her works. Jules Verne would be a great name, but I thought the tradition was American Authors.

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  • Jules Vern could be called the grandfather of science fiction. He wrote Journey to the Center of the Earth, From the Earth to the Moon and the source of the Kirk Douglas Disney Epic, 20,000 Leagues Under the Sea.

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  • Good to know they weren't totally clueless about Kayda's growing weirdness and apprehension, they were just very distracted by the excitement of getting the sailing club going. Lanie and Tansy kept trying to let her know too, but she kept running off. I love the dual perspectives and almost 'unreliable narrator' aspect of it. Kayda glossing over all the times they were trying to include her, and Tansy and Lanie missing the really overt signs of her growing distress. Tansy's mistake was not being persistent and grabbing Kayda in the garage to find Lanie together.

    But Tansy toying with Danny, whether she realizes she's doing it or not, is a bit concerning.

    Is Kayda going to be the one who helps Tansy get over her guilt? Mustang is right. She can't ever tell Lanie she helped push Lifeline over the edge, going further than she intended.

    Edit: I wonder which picture of the Space Expansion members surprised her the most, Dr. Dad? Someone else we don't know? Somebody with business dealings or rivalry with her father?
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  • Katssun wrote: Good to know they weren't totally clueless about Kayda's growing weirdness and apprehension, they were just very distracted by the excitement of getting the sailing club going. Lanie and Tansy kept trying to let her know too, but she kept running off. I love the dual perspectives and almost 'unreliable narrator' aspect of it. Kayda glossing over all the times they were trying to include her, and Tansy and Lanie missing the really overt signs of her growing distress. Tansy's mistake was not being persistent and grabbing Kayda in the garage to find Lanie together.

    But Tansy toying with Danny, whether she realizes she's doing it or not, is a bit concerning.

    Is Kayda going to be the one who helps Tansy get over her guilt? Mustang is right. She can't ever tell Lanie she helped push Lifeline over the edge, going further than she intended.

    Edit: I wonder which picture of the Space Expansion members surprised her the most, Dr. Dad? Someone else we don't know? Somebody with business dealings or rivalry with her father?


    Either Ayla's father or uncle.

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  • More likely Ayla :D
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  • E. E. Nalley wrote: Not to worry Esar, you get a bit of your wish too! Carry on.

    :evil:


    If you had any doubt about it, you have delivered and I was not disappointed to say the least.

    (and If I remember correctly, she still has not seen him in his Danica form who has been described as being pretty much in Fey league.)

    Thanks a lot for this new part.
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  • "Elaine walked beside him, wearing a lovely, but also functional, dress of wool that had been dyed hunter green, and which had lovely knotwork designs hand-embroidered into the sleeves and neck-line."

    This seems to have a funny statement in it. Why was hand-embroidered mentioned. It couldn't be machine embroidered.
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  • Keep in mind you're seeing this through the eyes of a modern young woman. So while it could not of been machine embroidered, she was still struck by the detail of it and thus the expense.

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  • I am quite sure that Valentine was snarking about the spellar and gramming (since you dropped the trailing 'e').

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  • Indeed... Verne, with a second e. Also, potentially the more important clarification... Verne was a French author, so wouldn't be consistent with the Whateley naming convention of using American authors. Not quite as critical, given that they are putting it on a boat instead of a building... but worth mentioning.

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  • Given 20,000 leagues under the sea being classic nautical scifi, I think we can forgive adding a french name to the mix.
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  • Yes, that was why I mentioned it. Jack Lord London, Heinlein, or Bradbury came to mind as alternates. Depending on whether you were going for an adventure or scifi author.

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  • None of them strikes me as particularly 'nautical'.

    I mean nautical books you have:

    Jules Verne (20,000 leagues under the sea), French
    Patrick O'Brian (Aubrey/Maturin series), UK ('Master and Commander' for those who only know books by movies)
    C.S. Forester (Horatio Hornblower series), UK
    Robert Louis Stevenson (Treasure Island), UK
    Herman Melville (Moby Dick), American, but name already in use.
    Ernest Hemingway (The old man and the sea), American

    There is a list of the most popular nautically themed books , but these ones seem to be the most 'Named recognised' nautical stories to me.
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  • Phoenix Spiritus wrote: None of them strikes me as particularly 'nautical'.

    I mean nautical books you have:

    Jules Verne (20,000 leagues under the sea), French
    Patrick O'Brian (Aubrey/Maturin series), UK ('Master and Commander' for those who only know books by movies)
    C.S. Forester (Horatio Hornblower series), UK
    Robert Louis Stevenson (Treasure Island), UK
    Herman Melville (Moby Dick), American, but name already in use.
    Ernest Hemingway (The old man and the sea), American

    There is a list of the most popular nautically themed books , but these ones seem to be the most 'Named recognised' nautical stories to me.


    I noticed something else with that list. Do you really want to name your boat after the author of The Caine Mutiny, or Robinson Crusoe, or Mutiny on the Bounty, or any of the other 'disaster' on a boat books?

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  • Valentine wrote: I noticed something else with that list. Do you really want to name your boat after the author of The Caine Mutiny, or Robinson Crusoe, or Mutiny on the Bounty, or any of the other 'disaster' on a boat books?


    A lot of people don't realize that mutiny on the bounty was the first book of a trilogy, the other 2 books are Men Against the Sea and The Pitcairn Islanders.

    While The Pitcairn Islanders deals with Fletcher Christian and the other mutineers settling on Pitcairn Island, Men Against the Sea details one of the greatest feats of seamanship ever recorded in human history. After Lieut. Bligh and his loyalists are put into the open boat a few hundred miles from Fiji Lieut. Bligh with only a compass and his memory of his charts performed a feat of dead reckoning navigation taking the men to the only friendly port in the hemisphere the island of Timor, a journey of 3,618 nautical miles (6,701 km; 4,164 mi).

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  • For those who care about such things, The Bear, the Bitch, and Everything is at 50,000 words, which is 10,000 more than is needed for it to be considered a novel and is approximately 85% done. It is completely mapped out, for those who worry about it not being completely finished I expect it to happen shortly.

    I hope that Sir Lee will share the cover he comes up with for this, as I'm genuinely curious.

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  • E. E. Nalley wrote:

    Valentine wrote: I noticed something else with that list. Do you really want to name your boat after the author of The Caine Mutiny, or Robinson Crusoe, or Mutiny on the Bounty, or any of the other 'disaster' on a boat books?


    A lot of people don't realize that mutiny on the bounty was the first book of a trilogy, the other 2 books are Men Against the Sea and The Pitcairn Islanders.

    While The Pitcairn Islanders deals with Fletcher Christian and the other mutineers settling on Pitcairn Island, Men Against the Sea details one of the greatest feats of seamanship ever recorded in human history. After Lieut. Bligh and his loyalists are put into the open boat a few hundred miles from Fiji Lieut. Bligh with only a compass and his memory of his charts performed a feat of dead reckoning navigation taking the men to the only friendly port in the hemisphere the island of Timor, a journey of 3,618 nautical miles (6,701 km; 4,164 mi).


    Yeah, and almost straight after, as Governor of New South Wales, the New South Wales Corps rebel and depose him as Governor and send him back to Britain, so he has two successful mutinies against his name, not a great record.
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  • I don't think anyone is claiming William Bligh will win any congeniality contests, but that doesn't detract from his unparalleled feat of seamanship.

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  • One could argue the point with Heinlein (he graduated from Annapolis in 1929, but his career was cut short after he developed tuberculosis in 1934).

    However, for some reason the one I thought of was Ursula Le Guin - specifically regarding the Earthsea books, where sailing plays a significant role, though needless to say it was not really the focus. It is a rather tenuous connection, though, so it probably wouldn't work.

    I wonder what Fina's reaction would be if she heard about the yacht being named the Jules Verne. I am guessing that after a few moments of twitchy discomposure, she'd end up laughing her head off.

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  • One of the best pieces of advice I ever received about naming a boat was to say out loud, but not on the radio, a Mayday call using the boat's name. This tends to discourage people using puns like Knoti-Girl, etc...

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  • Phoenix Spiritus wrote: None of them strikes me as particularly 'nautical'.

    I mean nautical books you have:

    Jules Verne (20,000 leagues under the sea), French
    Patrick O'Brian (Aubrey/Maturin series), UK ('Master and Commander' for those who only know books by movies)
    C.S. Forester (Horatio Hornblower series), UK
    Robert Louis Stevenson (Treasure Island), UK
    Herman Melville (Moby Dick), American, but name already in use.
    Ernest Hemingway (The old man and the sea), American

    There is a list of the most popular nautically themed books , but these ones seem to be the most 'Named recognised' nautical stories to me.


    though used it could of been Mark Twain or his actual name Samuel Clemmens
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  • Jules Verne actually wrote a *bunch* of other adventure books taking place at sea. He's mostly remembered today for his books involving sci-fi and other fantastic elements, but in fact most of his books are travel adventures -- and at the time, that often was by ship.

    As for covers... sorry to disappoint, E.E., but I didn't get any particular inspiration yet. I have a "generic Whateley cover layout" that I use in most cases, with small variations (mostly replacing the Whateley crest with a pic of the protagonist), and so far that's what I'm using for this one. I mean, I can't draw worth a damn, so I have to work with whatever appropriate artwork or photo I can find online... and in the case of Whateley, well, finding appropriate artwork for 234 books is enough to discourage anyone. OK, not actually 234, maybe a dozen of those have cover artwork made available by the author or some fan... but in most cases, I simply don't have anything to work with. Thus the generic covers.

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  • No worries Sir Lee! If inspiration strikes do let me know, but otherwise no pressure. And for everybody else I just finished TBTBAE and from here I'll be uploading it for review by the rest of the cabal. (TINCC of course). For those who care about the stats, the rough final is 103 8 1/2" x 11" pages, and 55,034 words.

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  • So... someone on TVTropes just criticized the "the secret to good riding is gripping with your knees", and is saying that it's "exactly what you're not supposed to do"

    ... But, that's Tansy, and maybe she learned differently or something?? ... Actually since its just Tansy, I'm removing it 'cause its supposed to be for authors' mistakes, and there's nothing indicating author error.

    ... Most horse forums seem to agree with the other Troper...

    Also some claim about AutomatonHorses, but I have only vague guesses where to find that.

    ... What is really interesting now, is what it would mean about Tansy and her horse knowledge... She's a bit more knowledgeable than Wondercute, but (something...)

    Jade might be an even better rider, 'cause she can do Pseudo-ESP. ... ... Can Tansy do Psi on horses?

    We haven't gotten anything from Tansy's POV on horse-riding, have we...
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  • Malady wrote: So... someone on TVTropes just criticized the "the secret to good riding is gripping with your knees", and is saying that it's " exactly what you're not supposed to do "

    ... But, that's Tansy, and maybe she learned differently or something??

    ... Most horse forums seem to agree with the other Troper...

    Also some claim about AutomatonHorses, but I have only vague guesses where to find that.


    I thought it was to wear pantyhose under your uniform ...
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  • Malady wrote: So... someone on TVTropes just criticized the "the secret to good riding is gripping with your knees", and is saying that it's "exactly what you're not supposed to do"

    ... But, that's Tansy, and maybe she learned differently or something?? ... Actually since its just Tansy, I'm removing it 'cause its supposed to be for authors' mistakes, and there's nothing indicating author error.


    This is one of the most hotly debated topics in equestrian circles. The answer is...yes. If you're doing certain forms of advanced riding, dressage, steeple chase or barrel, knee gripping is something you loose points for because it damages your posture. But for new and inexperienced riders, as I learned, it's a great aid in maintaining your saddle because most horses are trained to SLOW DOWN when you grip them with your knees. Posture in my view is something you worry about once you've mastered staying on the horse.

    That's why it's the secret.

    Tho I am curious, where is this taking place on TVTropes?

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  • E. E. Nalley wrote: Tho I am curious, where is this taking place on TVTropes?


    Somewhere An Equestrian Is Crying

    ... I removed it 'cause we had no indication it wasn't just Tansy, but with this, I'm citing as an Aversion, with Word Of God, so thank you! :)
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  • Katssun wrote: Edit: I wonder which picture of the Space Expansion members surprised her the most, Dr. Dad? Someone else we don't know? Somebody with business dealings or rivalry with her father?

    Cheese.

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  • Malady wrote:

    E. E. Nalley wrote: Tho I am curious, where is this taking place on TVTropes?


    Somewhere An Equestrian Is Crying

    ... I removed it 'cause we had no indication it wasn't just Tansy, but with this, I'm citing as an Aversion, with Word Of God, so thank you! :)


    There's so much wrong with that trope I don't even know where to begin. Wait... not... I do. Riding a horse is an athletic activity. It's an Olympic event. You can't just hop on a horse and ride... any more than you would ice skate or .... really? What about running? Running is an Olympic event. So is swimming, throwing a shotput and jumping. Surprisingly or not... people do things like this all the f'ing time. Do they do them as well as an Olympic athlete? Well no... but we don't on a usual basis respond to someone's invite to join them at the pool with "Sorry man, I can't compete with an Olympic swimmer so I'd just drown if I tried to swim."

    That's what this person implies about riding a horse. Kids climb up on horses all the time, if you don't live in the city where there are no horses. And sometimes they fall off ... they may not ride that horse at paces that a professional jockey could get out of it. They may not jump obstacles as high or move with the same precision of movement that an equestrian can get from the animal... but they can ride. For hours. Over many miles. And so can almost anyone with a sense of balance and half a willingness to try.

    And in fiction, especially fantasy, where riding horses is a fairly common mode of distance travel... basic care for both animal and tack/saddle or such things are going to be fairly common knowledge except among those too poor to have the experience.

    So... ya... trope description written by someone who may or may not have a background with Equestrian riding/training... but with little clue about the reality outside of their snobby little expensive horse riding club.

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  • ^ ... Well, now I'm gonna ask for a description change. Tomorrow, though, 'cause I really should sleep.

    Do you mind if cite that, and possibly link to it? ... Which, if I am gonna ask now, I should have asked when citing you for the trope... *sigh*

    ... OH. You were quoting (Thanks, Kettlekorn.) How's it now?
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  • Kristin Darken wrote: And in fiction, especially fantasy, where riding horses is a fairly common mode of distance travel... basic care for both animal and tack/saddle or such things are going to be fairly common knowledge except among those too poor to have the experience.

    The page does actually acknowledge that characters from non-modern times are a lot more likely to have familiarity with horses, right after the bit you quoted. The writer got a bit carried away with that whole athletics analogy, but I don't think they were trying to say that it's impossible to ride a horse without instruction and practice. They were just grumbling about how some authors write a character who has literally never interacted with a horse before, then climbs on and rides off like it's second nature. Normally people would at least be observably clumsy.

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    I realize that this is a very different context from encrypted data and that a cute little number like 10^8 is totally sufficient for this purpose (assuming a cooldown is enforced), but I can't help but laugh. Even an eight character password has over 10^15 possibilities.

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  • I've been on a horse. Was given about 5 minutes of instructions, mostly don't annoy the horse. And I even managed not to fall off, which was my biggest concern being terrified of heights, and yes the top of a horse qualifies.

    So riding a horse isn't a mystical ability, but to do it well it is a skill you have to learn.

    That page, and the Automon Horse page seem to sum up everything I dislike about TV Tropes. Which is everything is a Trope, unrelated things are Tropes, and many of the example are innacurate to the source material.

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  • What's this - Bella's not able to summon Laneth back to the physical plane? I guess you could say that Coyote's exploiting a Loophole.

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    Between Imp's stories, Kayda 10, and this, I'm really enjoying the expansion on the teachers and staff that sometimes felt a bit...thin? Like Mrs. Horton not being the perfect bastion of hugs, baked goods, advice, moral support, and preventer of accidental verbal slips. It's rather endearing watching her get into trouble with Carson when a rash attempt to help her charges went...just a bit awry. And her homemade stress ball!

    Then Ms. Hartford...being nurturing at the end. There was the previous callbacks referencing that she spent a tremendous amount of time in Carson's office when she was at school, and Tansy really is her protégé in so many ways.

    I do wonder if the sim was meant to push Tansy too far to see what she'd do, but judging from Hartford's reaction, I'm guessing it didn't go quite as planned.

    I'm not sure what to say yet about the March of Dreams sequences. I love them, and I think we already know where it is going, but it is a slow burn to get there. When it is done, I assume a whole lot of things about the Lanie-Wyatt-Tansy-Kayda deeply rooted connection comes from will knit together.

    I wonder if Kayda hadn't been in freak-out phase on the 9th, that Tansy's violently impressive display could have been prevented. From our perspective, it works out better, because Danny gets a different type of role model, and isn't always protected by his sister (which has to hurt his self-esteem). As their friendly relationship goes forward, perhaps Tansy will push him to Venus Inc. I know its not quite the right powerset, but it would be funny to see Danny (as Danica) taking Exemplar Grace after seeing what Tansy did here without even standing.

    But most of all, I loved the psychic ethics walkthrough. No wonder Tansy was so alarmed when she was helping Kayda by brute force. I didn't even realize she had been doing so many of those things, and the implications they can mean!
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  • If he took Exemplar Grace, Mrs. Dennon would probably make him take the final once for each of his forms.

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    Man oh man... Dramatic Irony for Laneth! So much!
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  • If he took Exemplar Grace, Mrs. Dennon would probably make him take the final once for each of his forms.

    We have already seen Mrs. Dennon work her girl training on Knockoff. So seeing her do her magic with Danny wouldn't be too far off. And i honestly think Danny could benefit in the confidence boost that class could provide.

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  • Ametros wrote: What's this - Bella's not able to summon Laneth back to the physical plane? I guess you could say that Coyote's exploiting a Loophole.

    :twisted:


    What loophole? You wanted her on the physical plane, you got her on the physical plane!

    Oh, you mean right here?

    Should've stated that before casting, eh wot?

    However, for a small price - maybe a low down-payment with a steady repayment plan - maybe we could work something out?

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    Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.


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  • Damn... Tansy has had a horrible week. This, followed almost immediately by a liberal dose of Coyote brand conspiracy detangler makes for a wild ride emotionally. If all she has wrong next week is stable cleaning, (How many horses are there on campus anyway?) It'll probably be an upgrade.

    That being said, bravo on that dizzying fight scene. Between the raw difference in Tansy and Murphy's fighting styles, and the chilling "Yes." during the fight, I devoured the entire piece far faster then I expected.
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  • The fight was crazy, Ms. Hartford's warmth and openness was crazy, Laneth's blasé reaction to be raped was crazy, Murphy semi-forgiving Tansy is crazy...

    Loved it all.
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  • Yeah, the the forgiveness was a little left field, but it is, IMHO, in character. I sincerely doubt Joanne and Tansy will ever be besties, or anything close to forming a friendship, but they will at least be civil.
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  • I usually don't recognize the opening songs, but this one I did.

    Lots of wows to go around. Loved Tansy with Danny.

    I found the "Tonic of Tansy" to be ironically named. ('Ironically' is not the word I want, but it's late, and I think you know what I mean)

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  • An interesting story, with a huge number of ideas. Thank you for all your hard work.

    One thing that does irritate me though, is the idea of "tantric sex" and energy transfer. Apart from the term "tantric sex" being completely nonexistent in classical Indian religious literature, the sexual aspect is only one part of tantra, and is related to overcoming desire and not succumbing to it:

    'The disciplines of Tantra are graded to suit aspirants of all degrees. Exercises are prescribed for people with "animal", "heroic", and "divine" outlooks. Certain of the rites require the presence of members of the opposite sex. Here the aspirant learns to look on woman as the embodiment of the Goddess Kali, the Mother of the Universe. The very basis of Tantra is the Motherhood of God and the glorification of woman. Every part of a woman's body is to be regarded as incarnate Divinity. But the rites are extremely dangerous. The help of a qualified guru is absolutely necessary. An unwary devotee may lose his foothold and fall into a pit of depravity.' - Source

    There is also another incongruity. Most accepted Indian philosophy states that everything is made up of only ākāśa (matter) and prāna (energy). Tantra (as a concept) deals with increasing of spiritual energy. As a rule, pursuit of physical pleasures results in a decrease/expenditure of this type of energy, whether it be purely prāna or something related like raising the kundalini . Hence, something like "tantric sex", instead of increasing prana would actually end up decreasing it. The only thing it might encourage is sexual euphoria, which has nothing to do with energy transfer.

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  • Obviously I loved every scenes in which you have used Danny. I really like this relationship. Even if Tansy only sees it as a "project" currently (to redeem herself ? to boost his confidence ? because she currently does not really have many friends ?) I think her first reaction to Danica will be worth the wait.

    How do you say it ? I will go down with this ship ?

    Thanks for this.
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  • Ahimsa wrote: An interesting story, with a huge number of ideas. Thank you for all your hard work.

    One thing that does irritate me though, is the idea of "tantric sex" and energy transfer.


    The phrase you are objecting to does not have the same meaning in Western esoteric traditions as it does in Eastern traditions. "Tantric" was adopted in lieu of there being a better word in English, and at least conveys the notion that the physical practices and terminology are adopted from an outside tradition. Regardless, ekstasis does indeed have a valid existence as a spiritual experience and ritual tool.

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  • I reread this again yesterday (well, Hartford being caring and the fight again anyway), and some things came to mind.

    Would Murphy have survived the fall before she went through the BIT Mangler?

    The fight gives us a lot of insight into Tansy's true strength as well. Tansy gets slightly stunned where Murphy gets pretty hurt, though maybe that was because Tansy had her in a submission hold and could "land" more advantageously?

    But then there's the line about Tansy hitting her harder than she intended because of confusion and the increasing fury of the fight. Tansy is holding back, a lot. That slip was enough to give Murphy flail-chest? I had to look that one up the first time through. 76% of them are from car crashes. True, Murphy isn't a brick, or have Kayda's running gag ribs, but if Tansy is holding back most of the time and can still produce that kind of injury with her bare hands?

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    I guess so!
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  • null0trooper wrote: The phrase you are objecting to does not have the same meaning in Western esoteric traditions as it does in Eastern traditions. "Tantric" was adopted in lieu of there being a better word in English, and at least conveys the notion that the physical practices and terminology are adopted from an outside tradition. Regardless, ekstasis does indeed have a valid existence as a spiritual experience and ritual tool.

    tl,dr: Whether the Tao or the Christ is your helper, the motorcycle still gets fixed.


    I appreciate your trying to explain; however you are coming from the wrong starting point. While you are correct that ekstasis is a valid tool for spiritual experience, if you are referring to it in that context then it refers to connection to a spiritual being, regardless of its adoption in modern times to mean something more general. There have been many many experiments with ekstasis used as in the meaning that you have given, and all have shown only that in fact it leads to only the appearance of spiritual union with none of the benefits except for physical euphoria.

    Also, with regards to the reason for "tantric" being adopted, it was used without any idea of its true meaning, kind of how the Nazis adopted the swastika. If one would like to use a better term, I would suggest the rather more straightforward and meaningful (and rather more steeped in the actual tradition) "sex magic".

    Trying to use "tantric sex" for spiritual connection is rather like filling sawdust in a gearbox to hide its problems.

    sri-bhagavan uvaca | kalo 'smi loka-ksaya-krt pravrddho | lokan samahartum iha pravrttah | - "Lord Krishna said: I am terrible Time, the destroyer of all beings in all worlds, engaged to destroy all beings in this world." - Bhagavad Gita 11:32
    7 years 11 months ago #123 by E. E. Nalley
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  • Ahimsa wrote: Also, with regards to the reason for "tantric" being adopted, it was used without any idea of its true meaning, kind of how the Nazis adopted the swastika. If one would like to use a better term, I would suggest the rather more straightforward and meaningful (and rather more steeped in the actual tradition) "sex magic".


    Unfortunately, about 90% of Anglo/European English speakers will understand the use of the phrase as intended. As it may grate on purists, such as your self, this is a fact of the English language, word meanings shift. This was not intended as a class on Indo-Spirituality or belief systems and by far most readers took the correct meaning as intended, rather than as should be used as you point out.

    While I understand how you feel (I get upset when people use the phrase 'Pointe Blank' to mean extreme close range) this was not intended as a lesson, but rather entertainment. I hope this did not interfere with your enjoyment of the story, but you have my condolences if it did.


    Katssun wrote: But then there's the line about Tansy hitting her harder than she intended because of confusion and the increasing fury of the fight. Tansy is holding back, a lot. That slip was enough to give Murphy flail-chest? I had to look that one up the first time through. 76% of them are from car crashes. True, Murphy isn't a brick, or have Kayda's running gag ribs, but if Tansy is holding back most of the time and can still produce that kind of injury with her bare hands?


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  • E. E. Nalley wrote: Unfortunately, about 90% of Anglo/European English speakers will understand the use of the phrase as intended. As it may grate on purists, such as your self, this is a fact of the English language, word meanings shift. This was not intended as a class on Indo-Spirituality or belief systems and by far most readers took the correct meaning as intended, rather than as should be used as you point out.

    While I understand how you feel (I get upset when people use the phrase 'Pointe Blank' to mean extreme close range) this was not intended as a lesson, but rather entertainment. I hope this did not interfere with your enjoyment of the story, but you have my condolences if it did.


    I did understand your use of the word for entertainment, and thank you for explaining. However, qualifying the issue as referring only to "purists" actually ignores the main problem. The word used is wrong in the first place. Hitler and the Nazis used the swastika for their own meaning, and hundreds of millions of Hindus, etc. have to suffer the effects of that as a result (because now swastika ≈ Nazi), only because "word meanings shift" and being correct is not as important as not hurting peoples' feelings. My intent in posting was to provide context and awareness, and hopefully a starting point for change and doing the right thing.

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  • That point about Tansy's strength, its no secret that she is a medium to high level exemplar, I forget her actual ratings, add to that, horses are very strong and powerful creatures, and she hosts a horse spirit. There is a reason why our general use unit of power (particularly mechanical power) is based off the average power of a horse, mainly to compare the power output of steam engines to the primary pre-existing standard source of motive power and one of the only ones at the time that was even relatively constant from system to system, but never the less, when wind and water power wasn't available or at least sufficient, for most of human history, if you don't count human power in specific situations, horses, and other draft animals were the only economical providers of power. Thus horses are a near global symbol of physical strength and power, which in its self would make anyone hosting an equine spirit physically much stronger.

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  • Ahimsa wrote: The word used is wrong in the first place.


    Pointe Blank is a ballistic term meaning the point distance from the muzzle the shooter does not have to adjust his point of aim up or down to counteract the affect of gravity over distance, nor the ballistic tendency of a bullet to rise when leaving the barrel due to the effects of rifling on it. While this point will change based on factors such as bullet weight and powder load, on average it will remain close enough of a constant to only matter to long distance precision shooters. For example the Pointe Blank range of the M-16/AR-15 is 150 meters.

    That is the 'correct' definition of the phrase Pointe Blank. For context, that distance is one and a half US Football fields. No one outside the shooter community knows that. Everyone understands Pointe Blank to mean 'extreme close range.' Now, I can be pedantic and insist on educating everyone of their mistake or I can shrug it off as 'language shift' and not get bent out of shape over it.

    If you google Tantric Sex Defination this is what pops up:

    Tantric sex is an ancient Hindu practice that has been going for over 5,000 years, and means 'the weaving and expansion of energy'. It's a slow form of sex that's said to increase intimacy and create a mind-body connection that can lead to powerful orgasms.


    Along with About 392,000 results (0.97 seconds) website links that for the first 10 or so pages I saw link to websites that support that position.

    Language shift happens. It's unfortunate, but it does. If you have an issue with this, kindly take it up with the folks at Merrian-Webster because as far as they are concerned YOU are wrong. Now, I have already offered my apologies if this interfered with your enjoyment of the story and I have to say I DO NOT TAKE KINDLY to being compared to NAZIs. If this is the language hill you want to die on, take it up with them. I've said all I intend to on this topic, please let the matter drop.

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    In the past, there have been readers who have taken it upon themselves to be extremely persistent in correcting stories about details which are largely irrelevant to the vast majority of readers. The Cabal does NOT take kindly to this behavior, and the "ban hammer" has been levied upon some. The reason is that the authors contribute out of their generosity and a sense of appreciation by the readers, but pedantic critics take away that enjoyment, to the point that in the past, authors have quit because of the level of petty criticism. As a result, the cabal is very, very protective of our authors' feelings.

    Give it a rest. You made your point, and you are only going to invoke the wrath of the powers-that-be. Invoking Nazis is way beyond reasonable in this context. If you want to troll the authors, you WILL be banned. If you want to continue to make petty arguments over small details, you WILL be banned. If you wanted to make a point, that's accomplished, and now you have to accept the response from the cabal as to reasoning.

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  • E. E. Nalley wrote: Now, I have already offered my apologies if this interfered with your enjoyment of the story and I have to say I DO NOT TAKE KINDLY to being compared to NAZIs. If this is the language hill you want to die on, take it up with them. I've said all I intend to on this topic, please let the matter drop.

    I have not compared you to Nazis, I have compared abstract concepts to try and provide some context as to the kind of feelings it evokes in those affected. This issue is quite close to myself and the over 1 billion Hindus in the world. If one would like a greater audience to appreciate their work, then one should be aware of how their work would be perceived in the greater context of things. Also, it is "the language hill" that directly impacts how people understand each other among different cultures that may not have any other point of contact otherwise.

    E. E. Nalley wrote: Pointe Blank is a ballistic term meaning the point distance from the muzzle the shooter does not have to adjust his point of aim up or down to counteract the affect of gravity over distance, nor the ballistic tendency of a bullet to rise when leaving the barrel due to the effects of rifling on it. While this point will change based on factors such as bullet weight and powder load, on average it will remain close enough of a constant to only matter to long distance precision shooters. For example the Pointe Blank range of the M-16/AR-15 is 150 meters.

    That is the 'correct' definition of the phrase Pointe Blank. For context, that distance is one and a half US Football fields. No one outside the shooter community knows that. Everyone understands Pointe Blank to mean 'extreme close range.' Now, I can be pedantic and insist on educating everyone of their mistake or I can shrug it off as 'language shift' and not get bent out of shape over it.

    Well, if this was merely a question of something as mundane as a technical term then I would agree with you completely. However, this issue is something quite fundamental to Hinduism as a religion, and so I would argue that more thought needs to be given to the subject than just Google and use.

    E. E. Nalley wrote: If you google Tantric Sex Defination this is what pops up:

    Tantric sex is an ancient Hindu practice that has been going for over 5,000 years, and means 'the weaving and expansion of energy'. It's a slow form of sex that's said to increase intimacy and create a mind-body connection that can lead to powerful orgasms.


    Along with About 392,000 results (0.97 seconds) website links that for the first 10 or so pages I saw link to websites that support that position.

    Language shift happens. It's unfortunate, but it does. If you have an issue with this, kindly take it up with the folks at Merrian-Webster because as far as they are concerned YOU are wrong.

    Exactly, "as far as they are concerned" and as far as Google is concerned as well, because that is all that people see on the surface. When one uses Google to find the definition of "swastika", Merriam-Webster says:

    Definition of swastika

    1 : a symbol or ornament in the form of a Greek cross with the ends of the arms extended at right angles all in the same rotary direction

    2 : a swastika used as a symbol of anti-Semitism or of Nazism

    Where in that definition is the thousands of years that the symbol was used (and is currently used very actively) for pure spiritual purposes? However, ask anyone who is part of that culture what the meaning is, and they will immediately tell you the correct meaning.

    I do belong to the correct culture, and my intention was to educate you and others as to the truth, and hopefully to do the correct thing in future. Perhaps I initially approached the subject in the wrong manner, and for that I apologise, but the issue remains. It does not hurt to try and do the right thing, especially if it will ease cultural understanding.

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    In the past, there have been readers who have taken it upon themselves to be extremely persistent in correcting stories about details which are largely irrelevant to the vast majority of readers. The Cabal does NOT take kindly to this behavior, and the "ban hammer" has been levied upon some. The reason is that the authors contribute out of their generosity and a sense of appreciation by the readers, but pedantic critics take away that enjoyment, to the point that in the past, authors have quit because of the level of petty criticism. As a result, the cabal is very, very protective of our authors' feelings.

    Give it a rest. You made your point, and you are only going to invoke the wrath of the powers-that-be. Invoking Nazis is way beyond reasonable in this context. If you want to troll the authors, you WILL be banned. If you want to continue to make petty arguments over small details, you WILL be banned. If you wanted to make a point, that's accomplished, and now you have to accept the response from the cabal as to reasoning.


    I hope that I have been able to bring across how this is not a petty argument, and in fact affects certain people very deeply. I have repeatedly stated that my intention is just to bring awareness so that people may not do the wrong thing in future because of merely not knowing. I am aware that many of the authors do not have access to enough cultural reference, and I do appreciate the effort that they put in. However, I would think that people would at least try to accept information given in good faith to ease understanding.

    If I have to be banned, then so be it. What is the point of not standing up for something because one is afraid of censure?

    sri-bhagavan uvaca | kalo 'smi loka-ksaya-krt pravrddho | lokan samahartum iha pravrttah | - "Lord Krishna said: I am terrible Time, the destroyer of all beings in all worlds, engaged to destroy all beings in this world." - Bhagavad Gita 11:32
    7 years 11 months ago #130 by Sir Lee
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  • I just want to point out that neither the Nazis nor the Hindus "own" the swastika. It's a pretty common symbol in many cultures, including Native American ones that can't possibly have "appropriated" it from Hinduism.

    In the same vein... while "tantric" has a precise meaning for circa 1 billion Hindus... that still does not mean that you "own" the word. Usage defines its meaning, and outside the Hindu community (large as it is) usage gave it a different meaning.

    Don't call me "Shirley." You will surely make me surly.
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  • Sir Lee wrote: I just want to point out that neither the Nazis nor the Hindus "own" the swastika. It's a pretty common symbol in many cultures, including Native American ones that can't possibly have "appropriated" it from Hinduism.

    I agree, hence my saying in my post "Hindus, etc.".

    Sir Lee wrote: In the same vein... while "tantric" has a precise meaning for circa 1 billion Hindus... that still does not mean that you "own" the word. Usage defines its meaning, and outside the Hindu community (large as it is) usage gave it a different meaning.

    "Tantric" comes from tantra, which is a Sanskrit word used in various circumstances to refer to various parts of Hindu spirituality. Hence, the concept of tantra does belong to Hinduism/Buddhism/other offshoots. Tantra's conjunction with "sex" came from Western misunderstanding of what tantra really is, and seems to have become popular because people seem to like to associate Hinduism with unbridled repressed sexuality. This is quite offensive to the vast majority of believers, hence my bringing up of the subject to increase awareness.

    sri-bhagavan uvaca | kalo 'smi loka-ksaya-krt pravrddho | lokan samahartum iha pravrttah | - "Lord Krishna said: I am terrible Time, the destroyer of all beings in all worlds, engaged to destroy all beings in this world." - Bhagavad Gita 11:32
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  • Ok, the concept has been explained half a dozen times. And bluntly yes, the English language is bitchtastic about word misappropriation. No this is not a forum to complain about it. The usage is legitimate because of the fact that it is

    1: Not used to intentionally piss off anyone.

    2: The commonly-understood usage by most native english speakers

    3: Without word equivalency in the english language.

    Finally, since you insist upon berating everyone: Drop it. One more post in the accusative manner of provocation, and I'm terminating your posting privs. This is not the place where you get to badger and berate to get your way.

    "This word does not mean what you think it means" is fine. leave it at that. But if you want to be offended and loud about it, take it somewhere else. And by invoking nazi germany, intended or not, in the manner of your bitch yes you did compare Nalley to Hitler. So right now, accept the fact that 99% of Americans are ignorant of certain things (this does, in fact include our characters, who are deliberately made imperfect and prone to the wrong conclusion like everyone else) and either let it go, or encourage steps to EDUCATE the majority.

    And no, the people on the Whateley site do not qualify as "The majority."
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  • JG wrote: Finally, since you insist upon berating everyone: Drop it. One more post in the accusative manner of provocation, and I'm terminating your posting privs. This is not the place where you get to badger and berate to get your way.

    "This word does not mean what you think it means" is fine. leave it at that. But if you want to be offended and loud about it, take it somewhere else. And by invoking nazi germany, intended or not, in the manner of your bitch yes you did compare Nalley to Hitler. So right now, accept the fact that 99% of Americans are ignorant of certain things (this does, in fact include our characters, who are deliberately made imperfect and prone to the wrong conclusion like everyone else) and either let it go, or encourage steps to EDUCATE the majority.

    And no, the people on the Whateley site do not qualify as "The majority."


    I have tried to be as civilised as possible about this issue, and have most definitely not personally attacked anyone and not compared any individual to Hitler or Nazis - if there is anything that is the "Nazi" in my comparisons it is the culture that appropriated the word "tantric" to add it to "sex". My only intention was to make people aware, in whatever small way that I am able to, of something that continues to be done that actually does hurt others (yes actually hurt them) because of ignorance on the part of the initiating party. I assumed that I somehow was part of this community and that it would appreciate insight from members that actually do have some insight to offer. Instead, I have only been attacked myself and effectively been told to shut up or be kicked out because effectively nobody cares because they all had fun anyway. Please do so if that is your wish.

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  • Ahimsa... it's not that we don't appreciate that you want us to know that the word was misappropriated and doesn't mean what it was used for... and we DO appreciate the discussion that can arise from these distinctions...

    It's that you KEEP telling us that AFTER we've acknowledged that you have a fair point and THIS THREAD isn't the place to have further discussions about it.

    To you the comparison between the Nazi appropriation of the swastika and our current culture's appropriation of the phrase "tantric" may seem a valid equivocation... BUT to a lot of the people you're talking to it's a horrible insult to be compared to a Nazi. However innocently that comparison is made it will still really upset people.

    If you'd like to start a discussion of Tantric PLEASE start a new thread for it and people can choose to participate or not... but, while you may educate our authors in the proper usage, they're not going to retroactively go back in and fix where they've used it before and may not change how they use it in the future... since the "pop culture" version of it is what they are using and not the "actual" definition.
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  • My problem is the "I'm offended, so the words I use that offend you in turn are perfectly acceptable because I did not intend offense."

    This knife cuts both ways.

    The comparison to the nazis is not just offensive, for westerers, particularly those who have served in the military, comparison to nazis is direct insult.

    Further norse and germanic tribes have been using the swastika as a symbol of strength in various forms since shortly after the Romans came to be AT LEAST. Hitler appropriated it from nordic usage as he was obssessed with the Norse Mythos, and encouraged by occultist retards in his inner circle.

    The sharing of the swastika similarly in both cultures was one of the things that led Hitler to believe that the Hindu were also a part of his Aryan ideal.

    It was not simply appropropriated from the Hindu, contrary to your assessment.

    Further, you may not berate us for word usage. You spoke your piece, let it go. You have been asked to stop. So stop.

    Do not claim innocence when you chose to use the most deliberately enraging topic here in the states. Godwin's Law is not respected here.
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  • DanZilla wrote: Ahimsa... it's not that we don't appreciate that you want us to know that the word was misappropriated and doesn't mean what it was used for... and we DO appreciate the discussion that can arise from these distinctions...

    It's that you KEEP telling us that AFTER we've acknowledged that you have a fair point and THIS THREAD isn't the place to have further discussions about it.

    I thank you for clarifying this. If someone had told me earlier to move the discussion, then I would have with no complaints. The only reason I started discussing this here was because of the usage in the story, and this section of the forum seemed to be the place to discuss the story.

    DanZilla wrote: To you the comparison between the Nazi appropriation of the swastika and our current culture's appropriation of the phrase "tantric" may seem a valid equivocation... BUT to a lot of the people you're talking to it's a horrible insult to be compared to a Nazi. However innocently that comparison is made it will still really upset people.

    If you'd like to start a discussion of Tantric PLEASE start a new thread for it and people can choose to participate or not... but, while you may educate our authors in the proper usage, they're not going to retroactively go back in and fix where they've used it before and may not change how they use it in the future... since the "pop culture" version of it is what they are using and not the "actual" definition.

    Thank you once again for your most civil and respectful response. I never asked anyone to change anything already done, merely to keep what I said in mind, because the term "tantric sex" is definitely hurtful to very many people as it totally misrepresents their religious beliefs and even makes fun of it. I also apologise for hurting anyone with mentioning Nazis and Hitler, I truly never meant any offense.

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  • Now let's get back to talking about Tansy and Murphy and all things relating thereto. (Note - since I have moderator powers, any posts I see on the topic of the misuse of the term tantric sex WILL be deleted.)

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  • elrodw wrote: Now let's get back to talking about Tansy


    Well Tansy would have been extremely new to the Picts, if it was there at all, and isn't recorded for abortion use until a few hundred years later .....


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  • When I attended this school, my reign as the Alpha Bitch Queen would put your exploits to shame.

    ...so, is Ms. Hartford admitting that she is far more than a technopath? She went to Whateley in the 80-90s. AOL time. :ohmy:

    edit:
    Laneth is a Pict, circa 784. Tansy is descendant from a Norman Princess, circa...1066. There is a possibility that Laneth is the ancestor of Tansy's ancestor...
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  • Katssun wrote: Would Murphy have survived the fall before she went through the BIT Mangler?


    Is the BIT mangler the machine built by Thuban in the fall ?06? Or did I miss something big in Murphy's Law has Loopholes?
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  • Ebola wrote:

    Katssun wrote: Would Murphy have survived the fall before she went through the BIT Mangler?


    Is the BIT mangler the machine built by Thuban in the fall ?06? Or did I miss something big in Murphy's Law has Loopholes?

    The "BIT Mangler" is the contraption developed by persons unknown referenced in JG's "Murphy's Laws of Whateley" that is essentially the same as the BIT Slicer, operated by individuals currently unknown, without a single thread of ethics.

    The BIT Slicer Team at least has the best interests of their subjects in mind.
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  • Katssun wrote:

    Ebola wrote:

    Katssun wrote: Would Murphy have survived the fall before she went through the BIT Mangler?


    Is the BIT mangler the machine built by Thuban in the fall ?06? Or did I miss something big in Murphy's Law has Loopholes?

    The "BIT Mangler" is the contraption developed by persons unknown referenced in JG's "Murphy's Laws of Whateley" that is essentially the same as the BIT Slicer, operated by individuals currently unknown, without a single thread of ethics.

    The BIT Slicer Team at least has the best interests of their subjects in mind.


    AH ok! Thank You
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  • annachie wrote:

    elrodw wrote: Now let's get back to talking about Tansy


    Well Tansy would have been extremely new to the Picts, if it was there at all, and isn't recorded for abortion use until a few hundred years later .....


    Probably not new to the Picts. The herb is native to Europe, which Great Britain has been connected to time and again.

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  • Native to eastern europe (Greece)

    First recording of it in the west is in Charlamaine's garden (sp?) in about Laneths time.

    But then the key word there is recorded. Dark ages so named for the lack of written records.

    Actually the only thing that jarred slightly was Laneth's huband recognising Cow Bitter as Tansy in what is basically second languages to him. But it was much better story flow, and pun, than him not so yeah. Nicely done that writer.
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  • This is not much of a spoiler, and the eagle eyed of you would likely notice, but for clarity's sake I will go ahead and spoil myself and state that in an upcoming episode Laneth states that a Viking trader once put in to Morlock who claimed to have sailed all the way around the pillars of Hercules to the holy land and they are seen Ethiopians and Nubians with his own eyes. Draw from that your own conclusions.

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  • Katssun wrote: Laneth is a Pict, circa 784. Tansy is descendant from a Norman Princess, circa...1066. There is a possibility that Laneth is the ancestor of Tansy's ancestor...


    Normans are from France and are descended from Vikings. Since the Normans moved in as the ruling class, and 1066 means they are the invading Normans at that, its unlikely the bloodlines of the Picts and Normans mixed.
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  • Not immediately, no, but well... over hundreds of years, there's a lot of opportunities for things happening. In both directions -- many noblemen having mistresses on the side (besides the acknowledged bastards who got "fitz" surnames and even "bar sinister" shields, how many went unacknowledged?) and noblewomen who entertained themselves with the male help...

    I once read a Playboy interview with one of the members of the (deposed) Brazilian royal family -- sorta the black sheep of the family -- and he remarked on how the number of the people in European nobility was way smaller than the recommended for a healthy gene pool, and thanked his adulterous female ancestresses for them all not being totally inbred idiots. Well, not as much as they could have become, that is.

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  • IIRC, the "fitz" construction is a symptom of trying to force Norman naming customs down Welsh throats (in Ireland, no less),

    It's not a mark of bastardy but an anglicization of 'fils', or 'son of' in that placement, parallel to 'mac' in Gaelic. The Norman French had adopted heritable surnames by the time of the invasion, while the Welsh were using unmarked patronyms (Andrew Williams' son John would be John Andrews, not John Williams) Many of the Irish soon were using heritable clan names based on a common ancestral name. Mix it all together and Sir Andrew Williams' progeny would become the Fitzwilliams family.

    Laneth's descendants could marry into Scoto-Norman families and clans, once they arrived, no problem. Their surnames? Mileage will vary, as a person might adopt their step-parent's or wife's surname if they chose to.

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  • It would be possible that a decendent of Laneth's married a Viking/was captured and made their way to what becomes Normandy.

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  • Yes! I'm found out! Awe, spolier alert! Laneth's descendant is Rey from Star Wars the Force Awakens !

    :evil:

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  • E. E. Nalley wrote: Yes! I'm found out! Awe, spolier alert! Laneth's descendant is Rey from Star Wars the Force Awakens !

    :evil:

    I find it hard to believe, the whole Star Wars universe takes place "A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away.", I won't go into speculating how long ago is 'a long time ago' but I have to say that it is in the past, so for Rey to be one of Laneth's descendants it was either an alien abduction or time travel..... or both.

    Maybe Rey is actually one of Leneth's ancestors? Or did we have a Dragon Break and nobody noticed?

    Anway, enough nonsenses. Let's get to what I really wanted to say: that was one hell of bonding that Tansy and Joanne had.
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  • JG wrote: Given attention spans nowadays, "A long time ago" starts at the 23-minute mark.


    23 minutes, that's not a... oooh shiny.

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  • Very interesting to see Murphy and Tansy get along now, at least when under threat of Carson. I foresee future interactions involve any hate fading away, but the back and forth between them remain. Snowballs will still feature, just with less rocks in them.

    Seriously, thank you for your time and effort. It is appreciated.
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  • JG wrote: Given attention spans nowadays, "A long time ago" starts at the 23-minute mark.

    When I was little, my parents would begin stories with "Once upon a time, a long, long time ago in a galaxy far, far, away, about last Friday..." (Bonus points to anyone who can figure out where that last bit comes from)

    Although with the Sundering sending time to pieces, it's not too impossible that Star Wars might be stitched in there too. Actually, that might explain a few things... :D

    As far as Tansy and Murphy go, I guess that knowing that both of you screwed up royally makes for a decent bonding experience.

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