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Question Blood-Sister, Blood-Brother
- DanZilla
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Topic Author
- Malady
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Oh Bloody Gods. ... Okay, stopping with the puns now....
That title makes sense now...
Wondering if multi-fusions are possible... Like fusion 3/4+ at once, instead of the normal Fury 2/3.
Terra. She's slumbering or something... Reminds of me of Sailor Moon Metaria.
Who knows that the Center Court is Earth Court. I mean... That's not super-classified, is it??
Well, I guess not many know how much the Five Fold is expressed in current religion-stuff.
Reveal of what Fury actually is! That's really interesting. ... I guess the idea of finding an ESP dampener or something didn't occur or something?
I wonder if Fury could be given a body of her own, instead of only coming out when fused... Then again, if it's like Steven Universe, it's not like they find it sad?
We learn more about Wulfin! ... Precisely who Eviadne is, I wonder...
- Jarjaross
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My dreams take me to far off lands and times of distant past and future. They tell what has been done, what will happen and who I am. They show me things beyond the machinations of any man. Tell me, what are dreams to you?
- mhalpern
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Any Bad Ideas I have and microscene OC character stories are freely adoptable.
- slapshots
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- Valentine
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slapshots wrote: oh please tell me gunny was talkin about hiring the rest of the dragonslayers , aka worm,
prison bitchlt. dom, heckle and jeckle
I do believe that Caitlin would kill Prison Bitch, and whomever suggested hiring him. Besides, I believe that Mrs. Carson already knows what is up with him.
Don't Drick and Drive.
- slapshots
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Valentine wrote:
slapshots wrote: oh please tell me gunny was talkin about hiring the rest of the dragonslayers , aka worm,
prison bitchlt. dom, heckle and jeckle
I do believe that Caitlin would kill Prison Bitch, and whomever suggested hiring him. Besides, I believe that Mrs. Carson already knows what is up with him.
maybe but she did just agree to give England a pass so who knows lol
- Dreamer
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Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.
Blood-Sister, Blood-Brother comments
Dang, Johann truly cares for his daughter, confess every crime he committed and hand each of them a blade. At least he feels true guilt over what he has done and remorse for what has happened to his daughters. Fight to the death to protect their own, that is an understatement. More like they would go to hell and back if they thought it would bring back Phobos.
Ah, interesting details about mages and the better you understand something, the more effective they are at affecting it. Interesting way Caitlin channels essence. Dang, firing and reloading a machinegun like that, impressive. Noms and Dimes for Anomaly and Deimos, cute nicknames. And got Diamondback on the line, Phobos and Deimos were two halves of the same person in a lot of respects, yikes.
Powers linked them constantly, feeling the other's emotions perfectly, to have such a thing torn from you, I can't imagine what she is going through. And they were that tightly bound, yet no one else knew. Having Sandra have to move in with Deimos and loaned the music box, that isn't a nightmare, that is living hell to have a part of you torn away.
Pity the poor fool who tries to stop Anomaly trying to help a friend. Love Caitlin's response to Carson about Janine's dad.They're already here. Noms exact words are 'I'm going or someone's getting bulldozed.'
Thinking Caitlin just thinks she is tough shit, until he sees her sidearm and blood-red rager band. And she gets down to business, demanding to know where Janine is. Yeah, when the Outcasts come to help a friend, don't stand in their way or slow them down. Seeing Razorback come through a portal shortly after seeing Caitlin, you know she has some true friends.
Darn it, making me want to just reach out and huge poor Janine, that is worse than I've ever seen anyone. And so out of it she can hardly believe when Caitlin shows up and carries her. Taking her out to see the others, overwhelmed by their emotions and concern, she finally begins to cry and also feel hunger, thank you. Trying to merge with Caitlin and become something whole again, ouch.
Hehehe, when Monica states she will force-fed you if you don't eat, you better do it. Tough love. And staying with Janine as long as she needs to recover, making me tear up. 3 days to start breaking through the depression that much, at least she is on the road to recovery. Watching Monica and Caitlin sparring, people in Hollywood would pay for such action. Jack and Joe sparring with Aikido moves, Jericho would probably attract a lot of girls attention if he didn't wear those outfits at school.
All those emotions helping comfort her, she sees they all carry the burden, the pain of Adrienne's loss. Finally coming out of the worst of her depression. Only seeing Janine, not the GSD, if only more people could do that. Loving his daughters no matter what, hating himself because he taught them to hate themselves because of their GSD before they even changed. Nice to see a love conquering hate.
"Slap-hands" like that between Janine and Monica, cute and probably awesome to watch. Bwahahahaha, that song, just too funny. Teaching how to become as good with her other hands as her main hand, plus dancing, she has cheered up a lot. Bwahahaha, getting Caitlin to bellydance along with them, priceless.
Evadne certainly sees the Outcasts for who they are after a couple weeks. Worrying how she has lost Janine, only to be hugged from behind by Janine.
Ouch, hard for Janine to see Evadne or her father in her head, to sense their emotions like she does with the Outcasts. Ah, visualization, rough if you don't have practice with it."I'm sorry for making you worry about me, Momma."
Having to sense with all senses, including the sixth sense Empaths and Psychics have. Flicked off by Sandra and Janine, Evadne chuckling at it, Caitlin knows her friends. Dang, have me tearing up again, projecting all those emotions she has for her mother for everyone to sense. And feeling what she senses from Caitlin, yeow. Suppressing her emotions blinds Janine to her existence, double ouch. Monica teasing Caitlin like that and getting the finger, ah, friends.
Locked out of the bathrooms and house keys missing, what is going on. Pranked by Razorback, oh brother. Bwahahahaha, painted blue with black spots, a Stitch impersonation from Lilo and Stitch, Jake knows how to pull a prank and be kind at the same time. Even did everything Stitch was stated he would do, such a silly thing to do. All to remind Janine they are family.
So due to Joe Jack went from raging as much to pranking people, good trade-off like Carson says. The Outcasts are some of the most unique individuals at Whateley, that is for sure. Johann learning about how the stronger the empathic talent, the less people who suppress their emotions seem real to them when they are fighting their own emotional highs and lows, yikes.
Outcasts being hard to read who leads, outside sims and actual combat they are just friends. Talk of being proud of the children under her care growing and becoming more than they think they or others think they can be. Even the ones she wants to spank sometimes, which is more than a few. Poor Carson has a hard job.
Hearing the nightmare they went through in Darwin, 8 hours of fighting to protect people and not everyone making it, even hardened soldiers would be traumatized by that situation. Hearing what they went through, he is right, no child should have to do what they have done, yet they had no choice. At least Johann is learning and changing. And Gunny in that golfing outfit, broke the serious mood just from the description. Pictures of him in that could be used for blackmail.

Referring to his outfit like he is Jericho, ouch. Telling Gunny about Johann, yikes, no wonder she hates him, top Bio-Devisor for Wulfin the Purifier for nearly 30 years. Okay, that is shocking, the Fury Twins the twin daughters of Wulfin the Purifier. Great, Wilson upset about hiring or even prospect of Imp as art history teacher. Ouch, Wilson's baby sister has GSD and turned villainess, then juvie mutant facility, all just to have shelter and be fed. I would have clocked Williams for his GSD freak comment myself.
Oh ****, Wulfin would try to kill her own daughter for having GSD if she found out, that is sickening. Don't tell me Smythe and Delarose put in some of the Dragonslayers into the resumes, based on what Gunny said and how Carson is reacting I think they did.
Janine and Sandra trying to do a ritual without telling the others, only for them to show up thanks to Caitlin seeing the magical currents Sandra is pulling. Jack acting like a scolding grandmother, another priceless mental image.
Blood-brother rite, should have expected that with the knife."Close your jaw, sis, you'll catch flies."
What the! Caitlin knows how to do the ritual with her and Razorback's blood without risk to the others. Hehehe, Joe saying he is going to smack Diamond, ah, this just keeps getting better and better. All of the Outcasts doing the ritual together, needing an essence crystal for each of them, sharing essence that way.
Seeing all that in Cait's crystal, whoa. Monica's essence having a perceivable weight, Jack's a musical savagery, Joe's essence having overtones of protection, and healing with a touch of a leader's determination, Janines' all emotions with a twinge of bittersweet sorrow, and Sandra's life and sorrow, pain and renewal, dual-natured but in harmony with itself.
Tattoos on the top of their right hands with all their essence infused into the ink, epic. Then crossing their arms like that and tapping even more essence, Janine feeling all that as the essence is channeled. Dang, doing all that to become blood-sisters and blood-brothers, they are truly a family in every sense of the word.
Finding out about 3 changelings she never knew of, yet she doesn't waver, Janine has strength others can only wish for. Hearing all those things from Caitlin, you know if the Outcasts can know those things and accept her they won't judge you for anything. She knows who gave birth to her and Adrienne, dang. Offering all that, including Fury, wonder what that part could mean for the group.
All of them having a different color for the permanent symbol, interesting. Whoa, blessing the ritual like that from a presence like that. Sharing all that with each other in ways most people can only imagine, I'm surprised they weren't drained by the experience more. Feeling each of the Outcasts as she and Adrienne had felt each other, now that is something amazing. What the what!?! Caitlin and Deimos merged together into a new Fury, at least appearance wise. How does the voice sound like Phobos and Deimos, with the steel edge of Caitlin's voice behind it. This is the most shocking thing in the whole story.
That voice messed with the ritual and allowed Fury to come back through Caitlin and Deimos, traumatizing them both in the process.
Okay, that is some serious stuff. And Sandra trying to figure out if they somehow accidently invoked something that has latched itself onto them."Either Fury is her own person, wholly separate that merely needs two people who are linked to exist, or Adrienne's consciousness isn't completely gone, and she's still part of Janine."
And Caitlin thinks it involved Terra-Kashaly, Thirdborn. And Janine thinks she knows what happened, to call Fury but not with Caitlin this time. Evadne knows how to sneak around without being noticed in her own home, nice to see Caitlin freak out for once about not spotting others. Oh god, she can merge with any of the other Outcasts now to form Fury due to the interference in the ritual. Taking on the traits of whoever helps become Fury, dang.
And calm, good, a calm Fury is good. And from the way she talks to Evadne, Adrienne is in Fury still. And I agree with Jericho, she is family and I pity anyone who finds out and tries to use Fury for their own ends.
Family joining the kids and paid for by Johann to repay what the Outcasts have done for Janine. Dang, able to sense the others from that far away, that is a powerful connection. Fury might be the most unique being we have sense so far. Hartford saying she would never call a marker in for the DFAs, just ask she leave Englund alive until Carson is through with him.
"Hello shitlord, Amelia just saved your life. Run."
And Carson figures out the Blood-Brother circle and is upset, Caitlin saying it was a declaration of family, nothing more and no one else's business. Dang, Caitlin standing up to Carson like that. And Caitlin pays attention Basic Mystic I, snarky about it as ever. And she gets the best answer she is going to about Fury with names being named.
Carson snorted. "When will you ever stop being a smartass?" "When it stops being funny. Now what's going on with the ordnance drop?"
Helping Kaylan Carter to find her twins, due to Johann's agreement with Mrs. Carson. Hopefully this works out and their mother realizes they aren't the 'monsters' that pastor has brainwashed her into believing, that Sandra and Monica can be reunited with their mother and she can love them again. This was an emotional ride, hit hard in a lot of areas and added some new mysteries to the Whateley Academy Universe as well. Glad Janine is going to be okay and Adrienne seems to still be around somehow in Fury.
Thank You for story comments appreciated and help me know me they are being read and liked.

- GrimGrendel
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And the ending promises yet another emotional chapter for the eventual reunion of Monica and Sandra with their parents. Can't wait to see how that goes.
At the moment Caitlin told the others her previous identity, Dragonslayer + Erik Marhen + Connor = blows everyone's mind

Up for review: Magpies 1 - Flock (Part 1)
- konzill
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- JG
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konzill wrote: My reading has been a bit spotty in places, so which story did one of the Fury Twins die in?
Murphy's Laws of Whateley
- Sir Lee
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Re Evadne... she's Richter's second wife, and the twins' stepmother. Did Johann meet her before or after leaving the service of his first wife? Does it really matter?
So Janine's birth name was Greta Jager. I wonder what was Adrienne's birth name? And Johann Richter's for that matter? Does Wulfin still uses the "Jager" surname?
Also, trying to reconstruct the timeline... Johann was a Nazi agent in WWII, so he's about what, eighty-plus years old? He defected from Wulfin sometime after 1995, since Bardue was involved in his WP thing. But not that much later, since the twins were probably still little -- Johann does not think Janine remembers enough of her birth mother to figure out she's Wulfin's daughter. Anyway, by the mid-sixties he was working for Wulfin as one of his top bio-devisors. So Wulfin appears to be at the very least... sixty-five now, since she was already leading an organization in the mid-sixties? Anyway, even if she inherited her organization, it appears that she was born before the end of WWII. They eventually married or whatever, and Wulfin had twins in the early Nineties, when she was... pushing fifty? Not impossible for a baseline, but rather risky. But then, she's known to not be a baseline -- she has some sort of mystical powers at the very least. So she is likely to have extended her life and fertile years, in a manner similar to Ms. Carson's. So she could be even older than the minimum ages I calculated. Maybe she even saw action as a "Theme Agent" in WWII.
Re the Dragonslayers... it sure seems from the scene that Gunny is talking about hiring the rest of them. And, since he mentions six people, that almost certainly would include Prison Bitch. How that guy passed background check, I have to wonder...
Heckle and Jeckle, at the very least, seem a good idea. I mean, they are even Whateley alumni, so they are already in the loop. It might do a world of good for Worm, who is sorta suicidal. Lieutenant Dom and God's Messenger seem OK people. But Bitch... well, keeping him in line might be a full-time job. OTOH, Whateley already deals with people like Ultra-Violents and the Payola Platoon; on his own, a baseline rat like Bitch might not be deemed too dangerous. But he would have been useful as part of the team in a situation such as, oh, Halloween. Or the Voodoo Wolves.
Or maybe the sixth name is Heckle's (or was it Jeckle's? Cant remember which of them is married...) wife.
- konzill
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It seemed pretty clear that he is a serial rapist.
- annachie
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- Dreamer
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Carson only got upset at the first 3 of the 6 mentioned, so not all six have to be Dragonslayers, just 3. So I highly doubt Prison Bitch will get within even 200 miles of Whateley without getting in trouble.Carson looked at the first three dockets, eyes widened, and she turned and glared bullets at Bardue.
Thank You for story comments appreciated and help me know me they are being read and liked.

- Katssun
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It's always nice to be reminded that while the Outcasts are perhaps one of the most mature groups for their age, outside of Caitlin, they really are teens.
The oath scene was quite moving, as was the general progression of healing Janine and the scene of teaching her mom, but the part the stood out to me the most was this:
Jericho making it clear to anyone, including the audience, that this new thing was for them. Their new family alone. Cutting any speculation that they'd use it for personal gain, or in the sims to become unstoppable, not used unless absolutely needed in the real world, to not tarnish this gift they'd been given for anyone or anything. Making Fury family, not an asset. Whatever this thing is to them, it really is special and redemption for the twin's legacy.“No one gets to know about Fury, unless they absolutely have to.” Jericho’s voice was clear, certain. “She’s not a weapon, no one gets to pull leverage to use her. She’s not a Simulator wild card, and she’s not a vehicle to whup a deserving ass. She’s one of us, and she’s no one’s business.”
And then Caitlin even told off Carson about it, and forced her to accept it. Damn, the Outcasts never mess around when in involves their own.
- JG
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annachie wrote: I doubt Prison Bitch would be allowed to work at Whateley as a cadaver, let alone anything else.
Poor Prison Bitch, so very misunderstood.
- Katssun
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She just has to tell Kayda.
- annachie
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- Arcanist Lupus
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Immediate reaction: The blood brothers/sisters rite turns them all human, and then sends them back in time to bother Fey during her first week at Whateley.Diamond handed each a small crystal.
Ooh, look! Richter is starting an Assholes Anonymous group! I love the double-speak in his promise to "lead the lost to their loved ones"
"Shared pain is lessened; shared joy, increased — thus do we refute entropy." - Spider Robinson
- mhalpern
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Any Bad Ideas I have and microscene OC character stories are freely adoptable.
- JG
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Prison Bitch is not a rapist. None of the other DS crew would have let him live through his first op if he was.
He's a con man, a thief and a specialist in misappropriation. He was the guy in the corps whou could offload 30,000 dollars in equipment, make an amazing profit and never have the books come up short even with an in-depth audit.
Bitch got sent to the Pendleton Penal Battalion on a technicality, not because Uncle Sam could make anything stick to him.
- Valentine
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JG wrote: On a more serious note:
Prison Bitch is not a rapist. None of the other DS crew would have let him live through his first op if he was.
He's a con man, a thief and a specialist in misappropriation. He was the guy in the corps whou could offload 30,000 dollars in equipment, make an amazing profit and never have the books come up short even with an in-depth audit.
Bitch got sent to the Pendleton Penal Battalion on a technicality, not because Uncle Sam could make anything stick to him.
In Parkour Jam Hooligans he comes across as some sort of sexual predator. The sort of person that may not cross the line, but certainly will bend it into interesting shapes.
Don't Drick and Drive.
- JG
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But he's not part of Blood-Sister, Blood-Brother.
He WILL be a part of Siblings & Savages. In what role, I'm not saying.
- Darkmuse
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- Yolandria
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That line. OMG. That is sooo messed up.Would these Outcasts be willing to come to her?”
“Maybe. For her, likely, but as I said they are all GSD except Jericho and he’s black.”

Mistress of the shelter for lost and redeemable Woobies!
- konzill
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JG wrote: On a more serious note:
Prison Bitch is not a rapist. None of the other DS crew would have let him live through his first op if he was.
The Way that Eric sepciacally warns Aquerna and Zenith about him certainly makes it sound like he is. IIRC he basically tells them to use lethal force if he tries anything.
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- mhalpern
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Sir Lee wrote: Maybe not full "rapist", but "creepy pervert guy with no notion of boundaries or Statutory Rape laws." He hasn't raped anyone, but he probably does plenty of creepy things like stare at girls' butts or breasts, maybe "accidentally" copping a feel, inserting sexual innuendo into every
thirdsecondword, things like that. I mean, Mahren kicked his ass after he managed to make his fiancée -- his SUPERPOWERED fiancée, who had nothing to fear from a baseline rapist -- uncomfortable.
So basically a baseline Peeper aged to an adult who never had the fear of half or more of the high school populous put into him...
Any Bad Ideas I have and microscene OC character stories are freely adoptable.
- Arcanist Lupus
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"Shared pain is lessened; shared joy, increased — thus do we refute entropy." - Spider Robinson
- NJM1564
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Sir Lee wrote: Maybe not full "rapist", but "creepy pervert guy with no notion of boundaries or Statutory Rape laws." He hasn't raped anyone, but he probably does plenty of creepy things like stare at girls' butts or breasts, maybe "accidentally" copping a feel, inserting sexual innuendo into every
thirdsecondword, things like that. I mean, Mahren kicked his ass after he managed to make his fiancée -- his SUPERPOWERED fiancée, who had nothing to fear from a baseline rapist -- uncomfortable.
Possible spoiler here folks but it could be just that PB is hyper compensating about being gay. After all, at the time, that was a big nono in the military and even now he might be reluctant in the extreme to let anyone know about it.
- konzill
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- Phoenix Spiritus
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- Valentine
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Phoenix Spiritus wrote:
konzill wrote: so what happens if they combine all their powers ?
Parkour Jam Hooligans
Speaking of which, does Eldritch need to go kill Lamplighter to keep Eric's promise?
Don't Drick and Drive.
- Sir Lee
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- JG
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Besides, Caitlin has to find out about it. Plus he got his ass kicked by teenagers
- Cryptic
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I am a caffeine heathen; I prefer the waters of the mountain over the juice of the bean. Keep the Dews coming and no one will be hurt.
- JG
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But, the angst bucket hath overflowed. it is time for the Outcasts to go back to their roots of chuckleheaded mayhem.
Although you will learn the ultimate cause of Caitlin's dive into lifelong anger, and get to see her confront that issue.
But as a special teaser treat...
Razorback meets... the Imp.
- Valentine
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JG wrote: Thanks.
But, the angst bucket hath overflowed. it is time for the Outcasts to go back to their roots of chuckleheaded mayhem.
Although you will learn the ultimate cause of Caitlin's dive into lifelong anger, and get to see her confront that issue.
But as a special teaser treat...
Razorback meets... the Imp.
Razorback and the Imp. Hmm, possibly two of the most well adjusted (sort of) GSD cases around. They may have other problems, but both are beyond their problems with GSD.
It would have been interesting to see Eric meet the Imp.
Don't Drick and Drive.
- elrodw
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Never give up, Never surrender! Captain Peter Quincy Taggert
- Cryptic
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JG wrote: Thanks.
But, the angst bucket hath overflowed. it is time for the Outcasts to go back to their roots of chuckleheaded mayhem.
Although you will learn the ultimate cause of Caitlin's dive into lifelong anger, and get to see her confront that issue.
But as a special teaser treat...
Razorback meets... the Imp.
I say Woot!!! to the coming chaos.
I am a caffeine heathen; I prefer the waters of the mountain over the juice of the bean. Keep the Dews coming and no one will be hurt.
- jmhyp
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elrodw wrote: Just as a further teaser, JG has worked with me on some scenes for one or more of my characters. They may be dramatic, tear-jerking, hilarious, or some combination thereof. There may or may not be one or more of JG's characters appearing with my characters. The appearance count ranges anywhere from zero to eight times.
Clear as mud. Perfect.
- Malady
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jmhyp wrote:
elrodw wrote: JG has worked with me on some scenes for one or more of my characters. ... There may or may not be one or more of JG's characters appearing with my characters. The appearance count ranges anywhere from zero to eight times.
Clear as mud. Perfect.
Well, the limit is eight times... And JG has... How many characters? ... Well, the whole Outcast Corner is ~6/7 characters, and then there's Murphy.
... Might someone outside of OC see Fury? ... Wouldn't that be interesting?!

- Dpragan
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mhalpern wrote:
Sir Lee wrote: Maybe not full "rapist", but "creepy pervert guy with no notion of boundaries or Statutory Rape laws." He hasn't raped anyone, but he probably does plenty of creepy things like stare at girls' butts or breasts, maybe "accidentally" copping a feel, inserting sexual innuendo into every
thirdsecondword, things like that. I mean, Mahren kicked his ass after he managed to make his fiancée -- his SUPERPOWERED fiancée, who had nothing to fear from a baseline rapist -- uncomfortable.
So basically a baseline Peeper aged to an adult who never had the fear of half or more of the high school populous put into him...
Peeper looks on in awe Jerry Mendez...."MASTER!"
konzill wrote: so what happens if they combine all their powers ?
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO*DROWNING out some whiny cyborg on the opposite side of the Universe)OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
My revenge might have to be a Jericho pic...in color!
In the end reality is only consensual! It means that Al Gore is causing "Global Warming" by his rhetoric alone! Fortunately, there are enough Global Warming "Deniers" still about to keep him from boiling the planet.
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- Dpragan
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In the end reality is only consensual! It means that Al Gore is causing "Global Warming" by his rhetoric alone! Fortunately, there are enough Global Warming "Deniers" still about to keep him from boiling the planet.
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