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Question Murphy's Laws of Spirits
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Now I just have find the patience to calmly wait for the next installment.
PS A great laying of groundwork. I really want to see where this goes.
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Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will be details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.
Murphy's Laws of Spirits Part 1 comments
Maggie screaming, Grizzly rushing to the forefront and in Nurse's scrubs as she goes to work checking out Murphy, and yelling for Kodiak. Crap! Murphy is completely brain dead, with her movements at first I had some hope. Grizzly trying to demand what Maggie did but Hartford says for everyone to back away and calls in Bluejay. Please let him be able to do something Kodiak and Grizzly can't.October 31st, 2007
Fixer's Patio, Schuster Hall next to the Crystal Hall, Whateley Academy
Dang, takes Mrs. Carson demanding Grizzly put Maggie down for her to listen, Chief Delarose taking custody of Maggie, good. Kodiak can't do anything, her soul is gone, arrgh! Life support spells to keep her heart beating and lungs breathing, but she is gone, no, it can't end like this. Carson ordering Kodiak to go to Doyle with Murphy, keep her body alive, just what is she planning?
I haven't seen Carson this serious since drilling into Lanie and Kayda the dangers of dealing with spirits.Keep her body alive and if any of the doctors have issue with you, tell them to come see me with their resignation letters in hand!”
Eep, Carson that angry at Maggie, I would get to a minimum 500 yard safe distance at that point. An elixir of banishment to drive out a possessing spirit, Maggie, you idiot. What happens if there is no possessing spirit to banish? I hope Maggie's Book of Shadows gives a clue on how to get Murphy's spirit back. And Lanie going with Mrs. Carson to tell her exactly what happened, oh boy. Banned Aids, yeah, Carson is right about this one.
Room 308, Whitman Cottage, Whateley Academy
Good law, always have at least 5 back-up plans. And Maggie frantically looking for her Book of Shadows, believing the elixir shouldn't have harmed Murphy. And of course the last pages are now blank, she got played by TWFKAH's former master.Murphy’s Law #55: Never sink all of your resources into your Ultimate Plan. If it fails, you are Ultimately Screwed.
And sent to a warded lock-up, mystical diagrams or chemicals to be taken by Messenger for study, this just got a whole lot more complicated. Delarose reads Maggie her rights, Mrs. Savage shows up stating all the girls are occupied, the Cottage isolated, I hope they catch the HM's part in all this. Good, no Kayda incident this time, keep quiet again until the investigation is complete.
Thank you for an official showing common sense, give the suspect a chance to prove their innocence. Delarose proves why he is the chief of security once again, too clean, too open and shut to be a teenager's crime. Hhm, Delarose hit on something there, did Murphy's strange luck make her take the potioned drink or did HM somehow gave her a compulsion to?The House Mother nodded. “Most of the lit Chix have near-perfect recall of just about anything they have written or read.”
“Perfect. Get with Elyzia or Earth Mother, find a blank Grimoire that is unprepped and unwarded for student use, two hundred pages, Eighteen inches vertical, by twelve horizontal, or as close to it as you can. Lifeline claims she had a grimoire filled with spells and incantations to exorcise deadly spirits from possessed hosts. It’s gone, and the sheer number of times I have seen evidence removed from a site suggests that I should give her a chance to try.”
Oh crud, didn't even think of that, HM could have booby-trapped the text itself.“And Trish?” Delarose said as he watched his once-Dragonslayer minion obliterate anything resembling feng-shui in the room dispassionately, “Once Lifeline finishes her re-creation of this book I want it examined by Eldritch before anyone made of actual meat and blood touches it.”
“A Student? Why?”
“Same reason Pejuta was tasked working on plucking Skybolt’s body modifications. When you have a native expert, you USE the native expert. That and Eldritch can look at the nastier wards around campus and only suffer a skull-splitting migraine for her trouble.”
Mrs. Savage showing up with Circe to see Maggie, the panic in Maggie's voice is real, the poor girl was a pawn in another of HM's plans. Maggie submits to having her magic sealed with a necklace by Circe, and yikes! The sensation she gets from just touching it, is that what all Wiz-type mutants feel touching something which seals their magic? And it is an artifact even, dang.November 1st, 2007
Warded Cell #1, Security HQ, Kane Hall
*eyes bug out* I know we saw Kayda go through this with such a sealing necklace, but dang is that brutal. And Maggie is ready and willing to do what they ask to prove she didn't try and murder Murphy. I just wonder if memory is enough, or if HM somehow tainted the very text so she can't write it exactly the way she remembers it.
When dealing with a supernatural threat, keep shooting until you run out of ammo. Dr. Raul Tennant explaining what is going on with Murphy, how Grizzly and Kodiak are keeping her body stable, and she was poisoned.ICU 1, Doyle Medical Center
Murphy’s law #27: If it’s dead, shoot it again, just to make sure. Sometimes dead ain’t dead enough.
Mandrake! Maggie's elixir had mandrake in it, what kind of stubborn idiot doesn't ask for outside help right then and there?“We found hyoscyamine and scopolamine in her system. They were highly concentrated, but the chemical chains point to an organic, rather than a refined chemical process source. Most likely harvested mandrake root. We've already flushed that from her system with physostigmine, and in any event, even at the levels in her system, it wasn't enough to have killed her this quickly. What's worse, since she has been here the albino scarring has begun creeping across her body. Gunnarson’s other eye has been blacking out visibly over the last hour. Whatever happened, her mangled BIT incident is coming fully to the fore, and fast. It’s like whatever resistance there was to it has been completely removed.”
6 hours before the physical changes from the BIT imposition is complete, ouch. Mandrake root shouldn't have done this to Murphy, great, Mystic always complicates things. Carson is going to try and find her own answers, if you look in the dictionary under stubborn you will find her picture. Earth Mother and her examining until they both agree, this will take a while. And having to get Lanie and Wyatt to go and eat, those two are about as stubborn as Carson.
All those incidents which left Murphy with more changes from healing each time and this is worse. Filled out like a light weightlifter, but keeping all the curves, black orbs for eyes, not much changes to the face, good. Now to get her soul back. Whoa, nice description, so Murphy's soul is in the Astral right now, that means there is hope to get her back.
Oh crud, this doesn't bode well for Murphy.Murphy’s spirit was somewhere in the astral, somewhere in a realm where the mind manifests power, and imagination and will could alter the very fabric of creation. It was a place that required an ordered, disciplined, and calm mind, one that could, and more importantly, would resist the temptation of the power that was the trap it offered.
I have a feeling the Astral is going to keep repairs after Murphy is done.It was hard to imagine which was worse, the damage the Astral could do to Murphy, or the damage Murphy could do to the Astral.
Adam leading Prue back to Dickinson, couples making out, Sahar standing by Mrs. Nelson's apartment. Ah, Mrs. Neslon over at Whitman covering for Mrs. Savage, Mrs. Selkirk took the night off, and Mrs. Nelson left Sahar in charge. That explains all the couples, Sahar relaxing the rules while the House Mothers are away. And Prue asking Adam to escort her to her dorm room, oh boy.Foyer, Dickinson Cottage, Whateley Academy
Trish Savage not the only one getting creeped out watching Maggie right in the blank spell book. Circe says it is like she is writing under a compulsion, it is worse than I thought, Maggie wasn't just a pawn, she was practically a slave. And Trout shows up with Caitlin in tow.Interrogation Room 1, Kane Hall
Bwahaha. And Caitlin is actually concerned about what is going on with Lifeline, you know it is serious when Caitlin takes it seriously.The Chief of Security smiled a very false smile. “That's why you're so popular on campus, Cait! That sunny disposition of yours!”
Ouch, Lanie having to suffer through the Doyle cafeteria food. 'Air' fried potatoes and they undercooked them, good grief. And Lanie finally breaks down, blaming herself for what happened to Murphy. All because of having Kayda bind Grizzly to her, driving Maggie away, that the elixer had been ment for her, *sigh* Wyatt trying to take the blame, Lanie still blaming herself.Cafeteria, Doyle Medical Center
Tansy and Kayda show up, Wyatt commanding Tansy to help her, Kayda not knowing what happened to Murphy so far. At least Tansy is able to calm down Lanie.
Kayda going into Dream Space and Wyatt just has to make that joke in bad taste, groan.“It's a long story,” Wyatt replied, falling into the one role he felt comfortable in, the Leader. “Wakan Tanka can show you the details. Get into Dream Space and find out what became of Jo Gunnarson's spirit. If you can, hold onto it so we can try and reintegrate it with her body.” Her mouth opened, but Wyatt shook his head. “Seconds count, Kayda!”
Kayda in her combat Costume for her Coyote identity Tansy helped her make, now I want a description of it.Dream Space of the Ptesanwi
I agree with Wakan Tanka, Coyote is going to be such a pain about this. Kayda explains what Kodiak has planned and Wakan Tanka sounds horrified."You started this whole thing, remember?" Kayda reminded her. "And you got Tatanka to introduce me to the animal spirits - who all frequently reminded me to disguise myself and my capabilities, remember?" When Wakan Tanka nodded grudgingly, Kayda continued. "The administration thought that was a prudent precaution, and decided to carry it a bit further."
Ugh, Wakan Tanka is being arrogant and judgemental right now, calls putting Murphy's soul back into her body unnatural.
Doesn't know all the details, yet thinks she has the right to judge.“Do you believe that I would allow my shaman to tread the dark paths of evil?” she thundered. “This is forbidden! The dead are gone! Grieve your friend and ...”
Finally! Kayda has been needing to stand up to Wakan Tanka for a while now.“You can help me, or you can watch,” Kayda snarled at her. “Because I will!" For a moment, Kayda wondered if she was pushing too hard, too far. " I have had it up to here with your mooning and your mysteries and the Trickster himself appearing in my Bedroom! Where I sleep! To lecture me about how I haven't followed my own rules! You made me a shaman, you told me it is my place to heal, then by God I will heal Joanne Gunnarson or I will die in the attempt of it and to blazes with the lot of you!”
All the things Wakan Tanka has taught her about religion and beliefs, yet she still won't listen to Kayda as on this matter and believes it is the path to evil.
Nice to see Kayda call out Wakan Tanka on her bullshit, always talking like that and didn't think Kayda would tire of it. And with how Wakan Tanka reacts it sounds like she tried this and failed in the past, ouch.“Her body is alive!” Kayda shot back. "How is it evil to bind a spirit to its own body? If this isn't the job of a shaman, to guide a lost spirit home, to be healed, what is?”
The Spirit's face was drawn and sour, at having her logic turned back on her. She crossed her arms and almost petulantly declared, “You are well named, Coyote. You have tasted deeply of the Trickster's Fire Water and are drunk with it!”
"Knock off the bullshit logic!" Kayda retorted sharply. "Why is it you're really objecting? Is it jealousy because the Kodiak can do it and you can't? Or because maybe once you tried and it failed? What's the real reason?"
Ooo, we get to learn about the spirit realms alongside Kayda, fun. Just how deep within the spirit realms could Murphy's spirit have gone?
And Mrs. Carson's warnings to Lanie and Kayda seem a lot more ominous than before."And Kayda, we must hope that she hasn't gotten too high in the spirit planes. At a certain point, it will be impossible for any spirit, no matter how powerful, to bring her spirit back to the physical."
"Why?" Kayda asked, not looking up from her preparations.
"Some of the planes may have ... things ... like Unhcegila's son in them. Evil things that would capture and torture or destroy the girl's spirit. We will need to be prepared for battle." The spirit gave a soft sigh as she stood and laid her hand on the girl's shoulder. Somewhat startled from the touch, Kayda turned and looked up into the older woman's face. “That is the worst that can happen. The best is that the spirit of your friend will find its way to the...” she paused, almost as if unsure how to form the thought into words.
Interesting, one place with so many different names. No Spirit knows what lies beyond, whoa. The departed drawn to it and will never return, no! That place and the thought of Kayda entering it, never thought I would see Wakan Tanka that scared.“There is a place,” Wakan Tanka told her softly. “It has many names. Valhalla. Folkvang. Hel. Sheol. Tien. Xibalba. Hades. Tian or Diyo. Most religions have the same concept - a place of eternal reward or eternal punishment. In the Tradition of your Headmistress it is called the Tabula Rasa.”
In one of Tansy's favorite fantasies in Lanie's mind, Lanie still blames herself for what happened to Murphy.Mind Space of Tansy Penelope Walcutt
Tansy wondering if they can bring Murphy's soul back. Mustang saying it has never been done in any tale or song he's heard, just means they need to find a way.From behind them, Grizzly ambled up, pausing to reach down and gently caress the head of her host. “Don't be so quick to fill out the death certificate,” the spirit warned her. “Kodiak is a stubborn bastard.”
I love the mind space, so many looks they can have.“It would be an adventure for the ages,” Mustang declared, now on all fours and liveried as a New York Mounted Police Horse. He turned and looked over his shoulder at Police Woman Grizzly on his back. “I'm up for the challenge if you are, Grizzly.”
Elaine's sense of responsibility represented by her father, and her mother, talk about guilt. Tansy promising to never leave Lanie, after all that has happened she needs everyone around her. And going to find Mrs. Carson, since she always knows what to do. I hope that is the case this time.
Carson faking her look with magic for the meeting, ouch, just how badly did the examinations go? And Mrs. Carson hasn't slept since this whole mess started, ouch.Secure Conference Room, Kane Hall
I like Carson's look without the illusion. A window to save Murphy's soul, Louis checked the Astral.Amelia smirked. “I have to get you to teach me that,” she told her friend around her smile. Carson's expression changed to much put upon horror.
“And grant you magic in the mortal realm to go with the electronic one? Heaven forbid!” The two friends shared a chuckle, before Amelia put a hand on Carson's arm.
Sideways, that might be a clue on where to check in the spirit planes.The dapper looking shade sighed and nodded. “At the risk of sounding flippant, there is a great disturbance, right at the time Miss Gunnarson consumed the tainted punch. It was not the same as someone dying, though, not that instant departure through Astral Space of the person's presence. Indeed, it felt like Miss Gunnarson went...sideways...for lack of a better metaphor.”
If the rules don't allow the saving of an innocent soul, then the rules need an addendum. Yikes, could cost Mrs. Carson her license to practice magic if the Mystic Court sees it differently than her.“This is a dangerous game you play, Dr Carson,” Doctor Al-Feyez declared from his seat. “You are skirting the edge of both the Codus and the Contract. Ethically...”
The loyalty which Mrs. Carson inspires is awe-inspiring. Fubar going to need Fey's help to strengthen the wards around the school, this is going to be worse than when Caitlin finally did the tattoos, isn't it?Hakim humphed and crossed his arms. “No need to martyr yourself, Liz,” he told her. “As if any of us would stand by, let alone stand in your way.”
Bwahaha, an Addams Family references, too good. The fact Mrs. Carson made it only makes it all the better.“I'm coming with you,” Grimes declared. “Knowing you, these 'experts' are going to be students and you'll need more than your bon vivant to ride herd on who I think you have in mind.”
Elizabeth smiled a cockeyed smile at her friend. “Why Elyza, Querida Mia that's French!”
“Kiss my ass, not my arm,” Grimes shot back, sulking at walking into an Addams joke. “Let's get this show on the road, it's not getting any earlier.”
Murphy experiencing all this in spirit form, intense.Date Irrelevant
Somewhere in the Void
She just reshaped part of a spirit plane with ease, dang. Like Alaska, yet warping and dream-like in nature, trippy.The nothing was too much and eyes snapped shut again at the void of potentia as her mind began forcing the madness of not into something that made sense. She never saw the things that uprooted and tried to flee her presence as she felt the familiar sensation of being face-down in dirt and spruce-needles, a biting chill in the air gave hints of snow.
Just walking a maddening experience, this is worse than any dream I've experienced.
And that horror, yikes, did that come from her mind or somewhere else? Shaping the world around her, forced to conform where Joanne walks, planning to fight back against it, uh oh. Time enforced on timelessness, strange.It made sense, because Joanne Gunnarson didn’t have to trust her eyes. Her spatial sense told her where everything actually was in the not-directional insanity. She didn’t question the madness around her because despite her eyes being open, Joanne Gunnarson was not fully awake.
The cabin her family lives in formed by her, yet inside, yikes! Calling for her mom, Kayla, Brett, the photo of her family face down and forgotten, uh oh. Murphy vanishing like that, concerned now.
Oh crud, everyone needs to work fast to find Murphy, before this thing does.Another part of the Astral “screamed” in horrified outrage as reality was imposed upon it. The Moose/bear abomination tore through the walls in pain-maddened fury, charging across the nothing of potential to slaughter one of the Namers it had fled long ago for catching it in their hated existence.
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Dreamer wrote: Kayda in her combat Costume for her Coyote identity Tansy helped her make, now I want a description of it.
Huh, I went to quote the description of her outfit from its first appearance in Tears and Fears, but found it wasn't there. In all the heavy rewrites it underwent, that description got lost on the editing room floor. So, here it is:
There were only three normal looking human beings in the compartment, herself, her good friend Kayda Franks, currently dressed in outfit that would be more at home on the prairie of over a hundred years ago, what appeared to be a set of buckskin trousers and a simple tunic, both elaborately decorated in geometric patterns which meant nothing to Tansy. It was crowned by what looked like the skinned head of a wolf whose mouth opened to show a war painted face and a domino mask and the fur ran down to the tunic, but Tansy wasn't fooled. Everything was really made of Kevra and would stop most handgun rounds and a fair number of rifle ones.
I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
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Dreamer wrote: Ouch, the lyrics at the beginning, that is pain.
Meanwhile, I was looking up:
Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ] [ Click to hide ]"This ain't no temporary, typical, tearful good-bye, uh uh uh
This ain't no breakin' up and wakin' up and makin' up
One more time, uh uh uh
This is gone (gone) gone (gone) gone (gone) gone
Gone like a freight-train, gone like yesterday
Gone like a soldier in the civil war, bang bang
Gone like a '59 Cadillac
Like all them good things that ain't never coming back
She's gone (gone) gone (gone) gone (gone) gone, she's gone"
--Bob Dipietro, Jeffrey Steele "Gone"
Hartford says for everyone to back away and calls in Bluejay.
Haven't seen Jay in a long time. I wonder how the rest of his senior year is going.
Dreamer wrote: I hope Maggie's Book of Shadows gives a clue on how to get Murphy's spirit back.
There's an original copy, somewhere.
Then there's Lifeline's copy, known to be missing.
Eldritch's comment leads me to suspect that Maggie's reproduction won't match either one. HM is sure to know as much about exemplar memory as he does about subtle misdirection.
Dreamer wrote: And Maggie frantically looking for her Book of Shadows, believing the elixir shouldn't have harmed Murphy. And of course the last pages are now blank, she got played by TWFKAH's former master.
The last pages left are blank, but:
All Hallows Ball wrote: He couldn't read it, but that didn't matter, Nimbus had shown him what it would look like. He found the pages of the book of shadows that matched what he had memorized. It wasn't exact, of course, it had been done in her handwriting, but the required symbols were exactly as Nimbus had shown him, from the original he had arranged for her to find. Ed smiled as he ripped them out of the book, then he put it back in the hidden compartment and closed it.
Let's see how long it takes for them to realize there are missing pages torn from one of the folios. They've probably been destroyed already, but it's one of those details - a deviance from expected practice - that should point to there being a third party involved. One of the adults should have realized by now that Lifeline couldn't have cooked her brew up in the bathroom sink.
Dreamer wrote: Hhm, Delarose hit on something there, did Murphy's strange luck make her take the potioned drink or did HM somehow gave her a compulsion to?
Betting on the late Irish Optimist, myself.
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Oh crud, didn't even think of that, HM could have booby-trapped the text itself.That and Eldritch can look at the nastier wards around campus and only suffer a skull-splitting migraine for her trouble.”
If that had happened, Maggie would already be pushing up daisies from opening the book up to her latest working.
Delarose does have reason to be worried that Maggie might booby-trap the spell that she's writing in the completely new book that Nimbus has never been in contact with.
Dreamer wrote: Maggie submits to having her magic sealed with a necklace by Circe, and yikes! The sensation she gets from just touching it, is that what all Wiz-type mutants feel touching something which seals their magic? And it is an artifact even, dang.
It didn't strike me as the sort of thing a student normally slaps together for a class credit. I'm hoping she gets it back to Circe in time for a certain other student to wear it!
Dreamer wrote: 6 hours before the physical changes from the BIT imposition is complete, ouch. Mandrake root shouldn't have done this to Murphy, great, Mystic always complicates things.
Tropane alkaloid poisoning usually gives the victim plenty of time for psychotropic nightmares and regret.
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Adam leading Prue back to Dickinson, couples making out, Sahar standing by Mrs. Nelson's apartment. Ah, Mrs. Neslon over at Whitman covering for Mrs. Savage, Mrs. Selkirk took the night off, and Mrs. Nelson left Sahar in charge. That explains all the couples, Sahar relaxing the rules while the House Mothers are away. And Prue asking Adam to escort her to her dorm room, oh boy.Foyer, Dickinson Cottage, Whateley Academy
That was pretty shrewd on Semi's part: none of those couples can be expected to be gossiping and starting wild rumors about what did or didn't go down.
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Interesting, one place with so many different names. No Spirit knows what lies beyond, whoa. The departed drawn to it and will never return, no! That place and the thought of Kayda entering it, never thought I would see Wakan Tanka that scared.“There is a place,” Wakan Tanka told her softly. “It has many names. Valhalla. Folkvang. Hel. Sheol. Tien. Xibalba. Hades. Tian or Diyo. Most religions have the same concept - a place of eternal reward or eternal punishment. In the Tradition of your Headmistress it is called the Tabula Rasa.”
If no Spirit knows what lies beyond, how can she be so sure it's only one place?
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Discussion Thread
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One of you three on the byline have become quite familiar with health care facilities of some kind...Even on Chef Marcel's worst day his cooking was preferable to the bland, humorless hospital food of Doyle Medical Center's cafeteria.
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They were poking at pair of unimaginative sandwiches and under cooked potatoes that had been 'air' fried within an inch of their lives.
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XaltatunOfAcheron wrote: Nice start. I wonder what Mrs. Carson is going to do when she finds that Kayda is already on the hunt. And is that blank spell-book going to be any use - it almost looks like (probably) Nimbus anticipated it and has a dummy prepared.
If you catch the end of the previous story, you'll see that Nimbus had a catspaw remove the spell pages from Finson's storage.
ie. Nimbus was preparing for this eventuality.
It'll be interesting to see what else they had prepared as traps for the unwary...

Measure Twice
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Even Circe is freaked, though... So, hmm... But she's still not an EX...
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Malady wrote: Mmm... Yeah, is Lifeline's super-concentrated writing, mystical, or just an high-level Exemplar at the real top of their game, and freaking out the norms?
Even Circe is freaked, though... So, hmm... But she's still not an EX...
Also remember that she's a member of the Lit-Chix, so working with text, and languages, would be one of her personal specialities.
Measure Twice
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I am a caffeine heathen; I prefer the waters of the mountain over the juice of the bean. Keep the Dews coming and no one will be hurt.
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Cryptic wrote: Who's with me on the "Murphy is going to come back WRONG! if she comes back at all ."?
You think Murphy now is RIGHT?

I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
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Murphy comes back physically as a BIT Mangled horror...but her dream journey on the Astral plane resolves most of her mental scars and she is brought back to realm of the living as a model student and the embodiment of Sweetness and Light.Cryptic wrote: Who's with me on the "Murphy is going to come back WRONG! if she comes back at all ."?
Helpful, caring, follows the rules and encourages others to do so as well. For the remainder of the school year, she is frequently seen at the entrance of Administration, rebuffed by Ms. Hartford and Mrs. Shugendo for constantly volunteering to help them with whatever they need.
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Another passing thought on the topic of Mythos compulsion is a possible cause for the failure that TWFKAH had when attempting to enslave Fey. What if the ritual that places the compulsion requires exactly 3 people to be involved in the ritual ('rule of three'), but HM neglected to inform TWFKAH of that fact when he gave her the ritual? It has been established that HM enslaved someone else at the start of the semester, so it's not a great stretch of imagination to suppose that Lifeline could have been enslaved at the same time.
Was the real target of HM's meddling Grizzly/Eleine or Joanne? On first blush, Grizzly is an obvious target. However, the reveal of Murphy as a Namer, combined with the observation that it was expected that Joanne would take the glass (though I can't find the exact line at the moment) suggests that HM could have had deeper plans. I'm almost certain the official answer to is
E. E. Nalley wrote: That would be telling.
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Another option is that the target was unimportant. HM could be testing the school's reponse to a student having their spirit stolen. Whether they can detect the astral impact of the spell and whether they can track a stolen spirit are probably useful things to know rather than assume.cprime wrote: Was the real target of HM's meddling Grizzly/Eleine or Joanne?
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- Murphy had to be in talking terms with Loophole again
- Lifeline had to finish preparing the potion at the right time -- neither too early nor too late
- Murphy had to be nearby when Lifeline offered Loophole the drink
- Loophole had to be willing to accept the drink
- Murphy had to be manipulated into stealing the drink
and, oh, right, the manipulation had to be at once VERY precise and VERY subtle so nobody noticed it.
Nimbus would have to place his pieces in the right place long before the denouement, and trust that EVERYTHING went pretty much as planned, requiring only minor nudges to keep the plan on track, DESPITE the number of odds manglers on campus, INCLUDING Murphy herself. This is Arisian-level visualization of the Cosmic All. If Nimbus is that good, then there's no point keeping on with the Atlantean League, he already won.
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Namer = human
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- E. E. Nalley
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Don't loose hope. Nimbus is good, but he's not that good...
I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
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JG wrote: Hint:
Namer = human
So, that "twisted, calcified and reshaped into some semblance of order" is basic Human ability.
It's the Warping away / vanishing, that's her own power?
"The Moose/bear abomination" is some now sentient agglomeration of spirit-stuff that was created by being Named / defined / whatever, that, well, hates humans for its pain...
Now wondering if that pain is normal, which is sad, that a uncontrollable human action exists which can only cause pain?
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XaltatunOfAcheron wrote: We have a conflict. In "To Seal Our Happiness," Lifeline is in room 316. In this story, she's in room 308. Which one is correct?
Crap, let's go with 316 and I'll amend the story.
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I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
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Makes sense, as in a quote to Genesis, where God gave Adam the right to name things. And, as a Brazilian humorist (Millôr Fernandes) put it, "he was so good at this that all the names he invented caught on"JG wrote: Hint:
Namer = human
The real point being: naming is a way of imposing order into chaos. Murphy ended up in some chaotic place, but by her own human nature, she started imposing her definitions of things onto the chaos, making it a little less chaotic. Which apparently displeased things that were there (saying they "lived" there may be to stretch the boundaries of language too much).
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Who's to say it is less chaotic? You could also say that a void has absolute order. [Being] of the void is to be nothing and also monolithic. By establishing [Identity], Murphy has caused [Difference] to be.Sir Lee wrote: The real point being: naming is a way of imposing order into chaos. Murphy ended up in some chaotic place, but by her own human nature, she started imposing her definitions of things onto the chaos, making it a little less chaotic. Which apparently displeased things that were there (saying they "lived" there may be to stretch the boundaries of language too much).
The moose/bear describes it as the "nothing of potential." The void is [Everything] and anything while being nothing. By identifying portions of the void as [Something], Murphy has ruined that potential and created chaos. The void that is now [Something] is no longer [Everything].
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- Katssun
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Cosmic horror is all about that kind of stuff. Headaches means you made out pretty well.
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Katssun wrote: Whateley has Lovecraftian influences, no?
Cosmic horror is all about that kind of stuff. Headaches means you made out pretty well.
Usually, only the survivors have headaches. One's own mileage may vary.
As far as existential questions go: the clock is ticking.
Forum-posted ideas are freely adoptable.
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- Cryptic
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For Whateley, yes.E. E. Nalley wrote:
Cryptic wrote: Who's with me on the "Murphy is going to come back WRONG! if she comes back at all ."?
You think Murphy now is RIGHT?
I am a caffeine heathen; I prefer the waters of the mountain over the juice of the bean. Keep the Dews coming and no one will be hurt.
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Katssun wrote:
Murphy comes back physically as a BIT Mangled horror...but her dream journey on the Astral plane resolves most of her mental scars and she is brought back to realm of the living as a model student and the embodiment of Sweetness and Light.Cryptic wrote: Who's with me on the "Murphy is going to come back WRONG! if she comes back at all ."?
Helpful, caring, follows the rules and encourages others to do so as well. For the remainder of the school year, she is frequently seen at the entrance of Administration, rebuffed by Ms. Hartford and Mrs. Shugendo for constantly volunteering to help them with whatever they need.
This is JG writing here....
He might do that.
I am a caffeine heathen; I prefer the waters of the mountain over the juice of the bean. Keep the Dews coming and no one will be hurt.
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Cryptic wrote:
Katssun wrote:
Murphy comes back physically as a BIT Mangled horror...but her dream journey on the Astral plane resolves most of her mental scars and she is brought back to realm of the living as a model student and the embodiment of Sweetness and Light.Cryptic wrote: Who's with me on the "Murphy is going to come back WRONG! if she comes back at all ."?
Helpful, caring, follows the rules and encourages others to do so as well. For the remainder of the school year, she is frequently seen at the entrance of Administration, rebuffed by Ms. Hartford and Mrs. Shugendo for constantly volunteering to help them with whatever they need.
This is JG writing here....
He might do that.

*wishes we were XenForums with its more varied responses so I could tag this as Funny*
*'Cause just thanking you is inadequate*
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In other thoughts. What is Moosebear called? And why is it a weird amalgam of creatures? It was Named / defined by a hallucinating person or something??
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Maggie screamed in horror as she stared down at the dead girl.
Because you truly thought separating Elaine from her spirit would have had a different outcome, salope?
Grizzly stood and grabbed a large handful of Maggie's jacket and shirt. “What did you do?” she snarled, hauling her up to eye level. Before Maggie could answer, Ms Hartford's voice rang through the speakers.
Tried to backstab her best friend beccause she thought she knew better. Again.
“Everyone remain calm and back away! Bluejay, come here!”
Oh, nice. The last real mention of Bluejay I remember were the stories with Petra, a long time ago.
The ancient healer looked up from what he was doing and shook his head. “There's nothing I can do,” he admitted with great despair. “Her soul is gone!”
Welp, there was no other soul to expel...
“Not on my watch,” Carson declared. “Kodiak go with the EMTs and get her into Doyle. Keep her body alive and if any of the doctors have issue with you, tell them to come see me with their resignation letters in hand!” She stood and wheeled on Maggie, her face as angry as anyone had ever seen it and was even more terrifying with the demonic makeup and horns she was wearing. The crowd shrank away a bit from the fierceness of her gaze. “Miss Finson, what have you done?”
Served as guinea pig for Nimbus to test his Avatar Removal formula. I swear to Gygax, if that story ends without you connecting these dots, Astarte...
Ms Hartford made her way up to the pair as best she could in a ball gown. “Liz, I have Bluejay on his way to get Banned Aids from Purdue...”
“I don't think Banned Aids can fix this, Amelia,” she whispered as she led the way to Doyle in her purposeful stride.
Lies! Banned Aids can fix everything! ...As long the problem is only physical.
Murphy’s Law #55: Never sink all of your resources into your Ultimate Plan. If it fails, you are Ultimately Screwed.
Someone has been reading the Evil Overlord List, or something equivalent.
Maggie “Lifeline” Finson almost flew into her room in a frantic, tear-wracked panic, barely aware of the three stone-faced men who filtered in behind her, two of whom were armed, and all of whom were wary of this seeming attempted murderer who frantically maintained that she was innocent of poisoning and that the concoction given her trouble-magnet once-friend was not, in fact something that was supposed to harm anyone other than a spirit needing exorcism.
Sorry, but I don't think even the original of that one would save you, Lit Bitch.
Franklin Delarose watched warily as the frantic teenager ripped through her belongings, desperately unlocking the box where she’d hidden the grimoire, triumphantly opening it and flipping to the last used pages to find them...blank.
Eh, had Nimbus' goon anything to camouflage ripped off pages by the way? that sort of things leave traces.
It was an expression Trish Savage had learned meant doom for someone when she served in the military. “Franklin, it happened in front of the entire school at a party! What do you expect...?” She sighed and focused herself. “What else can I do?”
You said it yourself, that little mask is doom. Just... try your best.
“Perfect. Get with Elyzia or Earth Mother, find a blank Grimoire that is unprepped and unwarded for student use, two hundred pages, Eighteen inches vertical, by twelve horizontal, or as close to it as you can. Lifeline claims she had a grimoire filled with spells and incantations to exorcise deadly spirits from possessed hosts. It’s gone, and the sheer number of times I have seen evidence removed from a site suggests that I should give her a chance to try.”
“You think Lifeline has been framed?”
“I think I need to explore all avenues to determine what happened. This reeks, the crime is too clean, it’s too obviously open and shut.” He didn’t say This isn’t a teenager’s crime.
Thanks Gygax and Philemon the staff is allowed to be competent this time... Where all of that skill went in G2 (Looking at you and your 'cover-up', Jacob, Head Loser of the Pit), or when Kigabidule wanted to make a snowball battle?
“All Avenues, Trish. Can you coax Lifeline into re-creating this Grimoire from memory?”
Trish Savage nodded. “I can certainly try. What good will it do?”
“It’ll tell us what the hell got into that damn girl’s head, and if her formula is as harmless as she thought.”
“I’ll work on it, but I swear, Franklin if this is used to railroad…”
“Trish, Murphy is functionally dead. By all appearances she drank a poison meant for Loophole and her bear spirit. Lifeline was handing Loophole the poison when Murphy snagged it to screw with them, as I am told might as well be clockwork behavior on her part.” Delarose stopped her. “I want to know if this was willful, dementia, or compulsion before I begin anything.”
Do you know how much I like you right now, Delarose?
“And Trish?” Delarose said as he watched his once-Dragonslayer minion obliterate anything resembling feng-shui in the room dispassionately, “Once Lifeline finishes her re-creation of this book I want it examined by Eldritch before anyone made of actual meat and blood touches it.”
“A Student? Why?”
“Same reason Pejuta was tasked working on plucking Skybolt’s body modifications. When you have a native expert, you USE the native expert. That and Eldritch can look at the nastier wards around campus and only suffer a skull-splitting migraine for her trouble.”
That, and you gotta remember the 'Angel In Dickinson''s explanation of why Mystics at Whateley didn't spot Cavalier and Skybolt's enthrallment: If the magic is dark and corrupt enough, mages can't detect it, because even the knowledge allowing to do so is corrupting enough to be highly bad news.
With a hesitant, jerking motion, she nodded. Circe held up the box and Maggie reached out, her arm tingling as it passed the ward and felt the natural flow, but that did not continue up her arm due to the ward line. That feeling was instantly gone as she touched the necklace. It was as cold as death and set her skin to crawling. It was all she could do to not snatch her hand back as if it had been scalded. With a great effort of will, she picked it up and drew it to her. As her hand crossed the ward line, most of the feeling vanished as she was closed off from the natural world. But the necklace was still inordinately cold. Some part of her remembered a lesson in magic, that certain, powerful charms and artifacts could cross a ward line and be unhindered by it. Clearly, this was such an artifact.
Swallowing, she put the necklace around her neck and instantly she felt like someone had punched her in the chest. She was nauseous and had to be steadied by the guard or she might have fallen as the feeling flowed through her that something important had been taken. The cold left the necklace, but it seemed inordinately heavy against her skin and even as she bent over in reaction to the feeling of imminent sickness, it did not leave her skin as if it had been glued in place.
Feels like a lot of yikes.
Murphy’s law #27: If it’s dead, shoot it again, just to make sure. Sometimes dead ain’t dead enough.
Good Old Dresdenverse Wisdom: Overkill doesn't exist.
“Yes,” Raul continued. “We found hyoscyamine and scopolamine in her system. They were highly concentrated, but the chemical chains point to an organic, rather than a refined chemical process source. Most likely harvested mandrake root. We've already flushed that from her system with physostigmine, and in any event, even at the levels in her system, it wasn't enough to have killed her this quickly. What's worse, since she has been here the albino scarring has begun creeping across her body. Gunnarson’s other eye has been blacking out visibly over the last hour. Whatever happened, her mangled BIT incident is coming fully to the fore, and fast. It’s like whatever resistance there was to it has been completely removed.”
Now, I'm not a Whateleyverse scientist, but I can say that last part is bad.
“Yes I do. Joanne was one of my students. She was attacked on my watch, and half a year later we have no culprits, no suspects. Her parents had to be convinced, I convinced them that Whateley was the best place for her to control the mangling and the channeling that caused the dead animals to follow her around and they allowed her to come back. Now this.”
“You won’t find real answers if you have this in your head.”
Maybe, but for some reason I don't see that slowing her down any.
Joanne’s face had changed, subtly, her figure filling out even in the hospital bed. There was no resemblance to Vamp in the quiescent face, nor in build. The waifish Poe troublemaker’s BIT had been the template, but only the skin and hair color was being mimicked. Murphy had never been “small” and the body in the bed followed the trend. Where Vamp was slight and waifish, Murphy’s taller-than-average body was filling out like a light weightlifter, one with solid tone, but keeping all of the curves. Vamp’s red eyes weren’t mirrored in the glassy, black orbs set in Murphy’s head. The face didn’t change much at all, seeming to be a more idealized version of Murphy than her unwilling BIT-donor. It looked like she, and her family, would still recognize her face, despite the changes.
Small Mercies.
...And now I'm wondering if she will end up getting Vamp's hermaphrodism or not.
Joanne was extremely ADD, was seemingly impulsive, and often uncaring of consequence. She was also vividly imaginative, often vividly vindictive, a warper who considered three-dimensional space a polite suggestion, a mangler of odds and fate and carried a disturbing and elusive connection to the energies of death and the underworld.
It was hard to imagine which was worse, the damage the Astral could to to Murphy, or the damage Murphy could do to the Astral.
Does the second could hopefully mean that once Murphy's mind is found it will be while she's 'partying' accross the Astral?
The Kurdish girl smirked. “Mrs Nelson is over at Whitman, covering for Mrs Savage. She's wrapped up in this thing with Lifeline and Murphy.”
“Where's Mrs Selkirk?”
“Took the night off, of course,” the other replied, rolling her eyes. “Mrs Nelson left me in charge.”
“Thus all the...?” Prue asked, making a gesture about the room and the amorous nature of the visits.
“While the cat's away,” Semi declared. “If the two of you plan on...anything...keep it discreet and make sure Mr Lambert is back in his own Cottage before it gets too much later.”
Eh, with all the sneaking in she and Zenith probably did for that very purpose...
“Am I the only one that gets the creeps watching her write?” Trish Savage asked softly as she, Circe and Chief Delarose watched the teen through the two way mirror that looked into the next room. At a table, Maggie Finson sat, hunched over the blank spell book Trish had given her. She was using a regular ball point pen, and none of the materials had been properly prepared. As a spell book, it would be worthless, but it was hoped by looking at the formula it could be deciphered as to what the young girl had done, and if they were lucky, why.
“It's not just you,” Circe replied. “She looks like she is writing under a compulsion. There is no hesitation, no struggling to remember. Something is very wrong here.”
Bordel de merde, Nimbus had that one covered too. At least it is a bleedingly obvious cover-up. Don't try to sneak one through a half-goddess with millenia of practice in magic, ducktard.
The metallic eyes rolled and suddenly the mystic, living statue's posture became one of annoyance and it became an annoyed teenage girl. “Oh, anything for you, Frank,” she growled, sarcasm dripping from her tone.
Remind me again, how many people on the staff are aware about Mahren already?
The Chief of Security smiled a very false smile. “That's why you're so popular on campus, Cait! That sunny disposition of yours!”
“Fu...hang the campus pecking order,” Bardue growled. “What do you want?”
Pure wisdom, that first part of her answer.
Even on Chef Marcel's worst day his cooking was preferable to the bland, humorless hospital food of Doyle Medical Center's cafeteria.
Don't tell that around Phase, because you'd be at it for hours if he had his way on that subject. Evils of a palate spoiled rotten.
“It is,” she insisted. “Ah had Kayda bind Grizzly to me! Ah chased Maggie away! If Ah hadn't...”
Euh, Lifeline's mess of a reaction is on her alone. And the Lit Bitches were the ones doing the chasing away, after very plubicily backstabbing you, leaving you to twist in the wind rather than reasonably mediate between you and Lifeline, and had the fucking nerve of complaining about how you reacted to that, as if they intended to use your tears to spice up a cocktail before you ran away. And they also failed Lifeliine as a friend by letting her pull off that shit. Still have that Murphy story scene in the throat. Friends. Are. Not. Supposed. To. Behave. Like. THAT!
“It's a long story,” Wyatt replied, falling into the one role he felt comfortable in, the Leader. “Wakan Tanka can show you the details. Get into Dream Space and find out what became of Jo Gunnarson's spirit. If you can, hold onto it so we can try and reintegrate it with her body.” Her mouth opened, but Wyatt shook his head. “Seconds count, Kayda!”
Euh, not to take a piss at how necessary and noble this is, but I do think something that massive could use a little bit more planning.
Wyatt sighed and looked at the girls around him. Out loud to himself, he said, “Maybe I should go to sleep, then I can truthfully say I slept with three girls at once!”
Don't quit your day job, Kodiak told his host drolly.
With the current circumstances, I'd give it an A+. At the same time, lame jokes are a speciality of mine.
Wakan Tanka looked up from the fire circle she was tending, an eyebrow raised as she did so. “How may I help you, Coyote?” she asked, her tone somewhere between annoyed and sarcastic.
Yes, making anyone wear that costume is at least a war crime, WT. But is it necessary to take it on the victim?
Wakan Tanka's jaw dropped at Kayda's stern, even angry, rebuttal. "How is this my doing?" she demanded.
"You started this whole thing, remember?" Kayda reminded her. "And you got Tatanka to introduce me to the animal spirits - who all frequently reminded me to disguise myself and my capabilities, remember?" When Wakan Tanka nodded grudgingly, Kayda continued. "The administration thought that was a prudent precaution, and decided to carry it a bit further."
"But ... Coyote?" Wakan Tanka complained, gawking. "You know that mangy mutt is never going to let either of us hear the end of this!" she grumbled angrily.
Factually true, but taking Wile E Coyote's appearance as a basis is still a war crime.
Wakan Tanka crossed her arms. "Then ... she is dead," she declared firmly.
Not the expert opinion people wanted, WT. Care to explain how to make her undead? ... On second thought, just how to fix that.
The spirit woman gawked at Kayda, as though she had declared some horrific falsehood to be absolute truth. "We don't ... we can't do that!" she stammered in disbelief. “We cannot allow...”
Come on, it's just the natural order. It sees worst abuse everyday with any Device.
“Do you believe that I would allow my shaman to tread the dark paths of evil?” she thundered. “This is forbidden! The dead are gone! Grieve your friend and ...”
Care to explain that more accurately please? Just tells why it is impossible.
The Spirit's face was drawn and sour, at having her logic turned back on her. She crossed her arms and almost petulantly declared, “You are well named, Coyote. You have tasted deeply of the Trickster's Fire Water and are drunk with it!”
Okay, '''Great Spirit''', fun is fun and all that jazz, but that sort of extremely crass and repugnat insults are just unbecoming of anything having even only an academic knowledge of decency! Besides, Kayda's line of thinking was very much logical.
Wakan Tanka gawked, and though her jaw moved, no sound came out. Finally, with an anguished cry, she turned away from Kayda, and the girl realized that she'd stumbled onto something which really hurt her spirit mentor. Finally, Wakan Tanka lowered her gaze, still faced away from Kayda. "We will have to meditate to find holes, or the remains of holes, in the barriers between the physical and different layers of the spirit realm," she avoided the question and acquiesced to the girl's logic. She gestured for Kayda to sit by the fire. "Brew some tea while I prepare. And explain more of the intricacies of the spirit realms." She sat down cross-legged next to the girl, still avoiding looking directly at the girl. "I saw something unnatural tear a hole from the physical realm to somewhere in the spirit realms. But it's very unlikely she's in this dream space on what you call the Astral plane."
You know, moments like this ones are why I tolerate most of Whateley's named aetheric bastards, and why I actually like WT. And their compete and utter abscence is why I hold nothing but deep hatred and disgust for Wile E. Coyote, It Which Is As Much Of A Fucking Plot Device Than Jacob Meatpuppet And His Shard Plot Device, third rate-knock-off of the Joker never allowed to be hurt or lose in any meaningful way while he leads his pack of murderhobos through Worm. Now granted, if Wile E. Coyote were to suffer a moment like this in the future, the only thing I'd felt would be schadenfreude. Intense schadenfreude.
"Some of the planes may have ... things ... like Unhcegila's son in them. Evil things that would capture and torture or destroy the girl's spirit. We will need to be prepared for battle." The spirit gave a soft sigh as she stood and laid her hand on the girl's shoulder. Somewhat startled from the touch, Kayda turned and looked up into the older woman's face. “That is the worst that can happen. The best is that the spirit of your friend will find its way to the...” she paused, almost as if unsure how to form the thought into words.
“The what?” Kayda asked, taken aback by the behavior of her spirit. She had never seen Wakan Tanka act this way before. “Tell me,” she pleaded.
The hand on Kayda's shoulder gripped harder. “There is a place,” Wakan Tanka told her softly. “It has many names. Valhalla. Folkvang. Hel. Sheol. Tien. Xibalba. Hades. Tian or Diyo. Most religions have the same concept - a place of eternal reward or eternal punishment. In the Tradition of your Headmistress it is called the Tabula Rasa.”
Let's call it more simply: Afterlife.
A fire lit behind the Spirits eyes and her other hand took Kayda's other shoulder and for the first time, Kayda saw fear in her spirit's face. “Swear it, Shaman! You must not enter the Tabula Rasa! Swear it or I will aid you no further!”
I smell someone important to her didn't do that in the past...
A flash of autumn sunlight heralded one of the fantasies that was Tansy's favorite. She was in jeans and an angora sweater against the chill of the coming winter. She was sitting against a high, proud oak that was ablaze in crimson. Elaine was leaning against her as they sat and watched Wyatt in the glade below them, rough housing with a gaggle of children of indeterminate ages. “Joann is dead because of me,” Elaine whispered and Tansy hugged her lover.
Again, nope. Lifeline snapped hard, Nimbus used her as a guinea pig, the Lit Bitches failed extra hard at being any sort of friend...
Music swept through the glade, washing away the park to a English tavern, the wide grin of Mustang shaking his head as he tuned his mandolin over his knee. “It's never been done,” he declared. “Not in any tale or song I've ever heard.”
Speaking of music, how true is Orpheus' story here? Because that looks like someone who suceeded... Until he couldn't keep it at the very last step.
“It would be an adventure for the ages,” Mustang declared, now on all fours and liveried as a New York Mounted Police Horse. He turned and looked over his shoulder at Police Woman Grizzly on his back. “I'm up for the challenge if you are, Grizzly.”
Yeah, happy you think that's a nice adventure, Bronco... Just make sure Wile E. Coyote isn't mooching a ticket on that ride.
“Trusts her to mind her studies,” Mrs Nalley declared. “That's why she's at that school, not to go tearing off, leave that to Mrs Carson!” New York washed away and in the blackness, only Elaine was with Tansy now, the two girls kneeling and facing each other.
You mean even in the Dream World, parenting can happen, if your spirit thinks you need it? Ask for a refund.
Tansy brought Elaine into her arms and kissed her, deeply. In her mind, as their tongues danced, Tansy felt their minds come ever closer and she began to understand what Shakespeare had meant when he talked about knowing the bottom of someone elses soul. To her lover, she swore, Never, my love. I will always come for you.
Euuuuh... Do I tell them about G2, or someone is biting that particular bullet?
A brief expression of annoyance flashed across the older woman's face, but it was quickly washed away to chagrin. “As long as it's been for anyone else,” she admitted, then she spoke a heavy sounding word and her Armani skirt suit became a pair of worn jeans and plaid 'lumber jack' shirt, the make up vanished and her face seemed worn and a bit tired and her hair was back in a simple pony tail. “There, not quite so in your face?”
Amelia smirked. “I have to get you to teach me that,” she told her friend around her smile. Carson's expression changed to much put upon horror.
Magic, the instant wardrobe. Might want to tell Jadis how to perfect it to that point though.
“And grant you magic in the mortal realm to go with the electronic one? Heaven forbid!” The two friends shared a chuckle, before Amelia put a hand on Carson's arm.
But magic can't be used inisde the Matrix, and the cyberware Hartford would need mean her Magic Score will be quite low because of her Essence rating... What?
The dapper looking shade sighed and nodded. “At the risk of sounding flippant, there is a great disturbance, right at the time Miss Gunnarson consumed the tainted punch. It was not the same as someone dying, though, not that instant departure through Astral Space of the person's presence. Indeed, it felt like Miss Gunnarson went...sideways...for lack of a better metaphor.”
Well, Nimbus wants to nail these Avatars he gets them out, after all.
Ms Grimes stood, still in her Morticia Addams costume. “Liz, you're talking about necromancy. That's...”
Some flippant aetheric bastards doesn't seem to agree, Miss. Also, it reminds me that you shouldn't trust that ''Fate''' gibberish, because G2 shows you alive long after that stupid gravestone said you shold be dead. In your beak, Black Chicken!
“Well within is your opinion, Doctor,” Hakim rebutted sharply. “The Mystic Court may not agree with you!”
Well, if these wankers wanted a voice in, they should've appeared in-story earlier.
Circe stood and joined Ms Grimes next to the Headmistress. “No one here questions your devotion to these children, Elisabeth. But, are you sure your actions are as spotless as you claim? Are you sure you're not desperate to not have to live through another Heyoka incident?”
Lady Circe? With all respect due to a millenia old sorceress and a daughter of Helios, shove it where the sun never shines, and help with this. I want to know how true is that bit in the Odysse wheere you point Odysseus in the direction of Hades for asking questions to some dead dudes.
“Hey, back off...!” Amelia started, but Mrs Carson quelled her objection with a soft gesture.
That's adorable, she thinks Carson needs the help.
“Certainly,” she declared softly, staring down her fellow mages, “there are some who may take issue with my conclusions. All of us, at one point or another, have made this choice when we took up the cape, or swore the Oath to the Contract. I have done both. If there are consequences, I will face them. But I cannot stand idle when there is a chance by attempting this Joann Gunnarson's life might be spared. Do any of you dispute my logic?”
“It could cost you your license,” Circe warned.
“Then I will cease the practice of magic,” Carson declared firmly. “If your consciences will not allow you to assist me, then I ask only that you stand by and not actively hinder me.”
See what I mean?
“I'm coming with you,” Grimes declared. “Knowing you, these 'experts' are going to be students and you'll need more than your bon vivant to ride herd on who I think you have in mind.”
Euuuuh... Who's gonna tell them the 'experts' already ran for it on their own?
When she drifted awake, she felt nothing, like she was suspended in… something, everything, nothing all at once. She hurt, she felt good, blissful even, in a confusing simultaneous way. It was too much, and she opened her eyes.
Murphy, the Astral. The Astral, Murphy. Please ruin it bad girl, so it send you back ASAP.
Joanne opened her eyes, but didn’t fully, and saw a pile of moose nuggets lying on the ground not ten feet away. As she pushed herself to her feet, gravity seemingly re-asserted itself as she looked around at the landscape her mind had created out of the chaos, and like a dreamer, didn’t question that the land wrapped and twisted itself, the squirrels darting around in impossible-to-track paths as the land curved up and trees hung down from stalactites on the ground above as they did around her.
Why am I feeling like I'm getting an insight on Pinkie Pie's mind here?
The once-nameless, murderously hateful thing that stirred in the cold that she sensed had fled her kind before. The pain of calcification into reality awoke it fully from it’s long, drifting joy of unawareness. The deranged, pain-maddened abomination of antler, claw, hoof, fur and fang. Something between bear and moose, but neither and other stirred and twisted. It could feel the land itself writhe as everything that was NOT got caught within the grasp of the Namer’s sight and was twisted, calcified and reshaped into some semblance of order. The pain of limitation ripped through them as potential became dirt, or tree, unshaped concept became mundane chill, or air. Glorious nothing became squirrel.
No place is safe from adventurers... Mr. Owlbear.
Another part of the Astral “screamed” in horrified outrage as reality was imposed upon it. The Moose/bear abomination tore through the walls in pain-maddened fury, charging across the nothing of potential to slaughter one of the Namers it had fled long ago for catching it in their hated existence.
Okay, guess Mr. Wildkin, like the Warcraft ones, is more appropriated... Won't save from becoming XP fodder though. I mean, you fled the two-legs little buggers before, remember?
And so, on the wagon, once again...
And yup, that thing is totally a Wildkin which fled Warcraft to not become XP fodder. Poor dumb little critter underestimated Humans' greed for XP here, thinking mere Nothingness would hold them back....
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Ms Hartford made her way up to the pair as best she could in a ball gown. “Liz, I have Bluejay on his way to get Banned Aids from Purdue...”
“I don't think Banned Aids can fix this, Amelia,” she whispered as she led the way to Doyle in her purposeful stride.
Lies! Banned Aids can fix everything! ...As long the problem is only physical.
Time to break out the astral duct tape!
Hardric wrote:
The metallic eyes rolled and suddenly the mystic, living statue's posture became one of annoyance and it became an annoyed teenage girl. “Oh, anything for you, Frank,” she growled, sarcasm dripping from her tone.
Remind me again, how many people on the staff are aware about Mahren already?
Delarose is high up on that list, given some of the very odd things added to Eldritch's files.
Hardric wrote:
“Seconds count, Kayda!”
Euh, not to take a piss at how necessary and noble this is, but I do think something that massive could use a little bit more planning.
Or one of the three students who took a class on navigating to and negotiating terrestrial planes could have reminded the pompous ass that time rolls its own joints where they're going.
Hardric wrote: Let's call it more simply: Afterlife.
Prince wrote a song about that .
Hardric wrote:
“I'm coming with you,” Grimes declared. “Knowing you, these 'experts' are going to be students and you'll need more than your bon vivant to ride herd on who I think you have in mind.”
Euuuuh... Who's gonna tell them the 'experts' already ran for it on their own?
Who do you think the first set of knuckleheads they'll have to save first will be?
Forum-posted ideas are freely adoptable.
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- Cryptic
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Don't go for permanent solutions to temporary problems. OK so the Doc/Griz thing looks pretty dang permanent, bu to jump to poison, even if her mind was screwed with?
I didn't get the hysterical girl mind set when I was a teen, and I still don't.
I am a caffeine heathen; I prefer the waters of the mountain over the juice of the bean. Keep the Dews coming and no one will be hurt.
- null0trooper
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Cryptic wrote: Show of hand for Maggie getting a new code-name of Deadline?
She can also take lifeforce from a person using her power, so that's one of the nicer options.
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- DesiArcy
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Kettlekorn wrote: I suppose you can view MooseBear through the lens of cosmic horror. Personally though, I just see them as a special snowflake who is upset at having the complex totality of their unique existence boiled down into a single little ill-fitting label.
I would take it as a lens of reverse cosmic horror: Murphy's spirit presence in these 'layers' of the Astral is unnatural to the point where she's literally mangling and driving to gibbering insanity everything she sees and perceives, in exactly the same manner that a Lovecraftian horror does when it's on Earth by imposing knowledge of the unknowable on anyone who sees it.
cprime wrote: Lifeline's compulsive writing is quite suspicious. I could see Mythic Arts testing to see if she was under a compulsion and finding nothing. However, the Mythic Arts department is now aware of the Mythos compulsions after the experience with Skybolt and Cavalier.
I would suggest that Lifeline might also be compelled by the terms of her own Blood Oath from the Combat Finals. There's a reason you don't make magical oaths lightly, and that one was a really broadly worded oath motivated by rage and hate. It's going to have some serious consequences along the lines of magically compelling (or dovetailing with anything else that compels) her to advance that goal at all costs and with no regard to morals or consequences.