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Question Dorms of our lives Season 5!

5 years 7 months ago #1 by Yolandria
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    5 years 7 months ago #2 by XaltatunOfAcheron
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  • Nice start. By the way, Dunwich is the nearest town - unless they've put in a new road, you have to go through Dunwich to get to Berlin.
    5 years 7 months ago #3 by Dreamer
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    5 years 7 months ago #4 by null0trooper
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  • Dreamer wrote: Adrienne le Floc'h, also known as Fleuve Noire

    Interested why she called herself River Black, or would it be Black River? [/quote]

    "Black Tide", if one goes by the movie title's translation.

    Dreamer wrote: Pantagruel, so supervillain named himself after a giant in a French story, interesting. Gouyasse's part in revealing Cally's secret, he is going to come to regret ever being involved in that group of idiots. Ugh, Wahnsinnig thinking of Erica as a Nazi and Cally as a sexual deviant, this girl needs a brutal lesson. Fortenbras, I wonder who his cousin his. Wahnsinnig, you need to let this go or it is going to end up ruining you.


    Meanwhile, In Castle Groenwald ....

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    "I asked a colleague of mine at ARC that exact same thing," said Claudio. "His reply was that in a worst-case scenario, at least the trigger-happy students could get some target practice. I, ah, hope he was joking."

    I don't think his colleague was joking.


    Or that his colleague realized that Belle, Nikki, Sara, and Chou weren't the most trigger-happy students, merely available.

    Dreamer wrote: So close to figuring out that clue as to who Erica was before, Hiram is going to be trouble for Erica if this keeps up.


    Especially if he replays Eric's voice and accent to see if his judgement of the accents is on-track.

    Dreamer wrote:

    At the cinema, they caught an early afternoon showing of the latest massive action blockbuster, based loosely on the events that had resulted in a small Central Asian city turning into an impressive crater.

    And once more reminded of how dangerous life in the Whateley Universe can be.


    What are the odds that Hikaru could give a full accounting of where the movie got things right or wrong?

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    5 years 7 months ago #5 by Wasamon
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  • On the subject of Fleuve Noire... I don't think it'd be a spoiler to mention that her younger brothers' code names are Sphinx-des-glaces (Jean-Marie) and Passepartout (Laurent).
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  • We got confirmation that Val and the Amazon's didn't use anything on Nef, just normal evil high school girl manipulation. And this is pure speculation, but I'm beginning to wonder if the sluggers of M3 aren't going to be the ones to bring the Amazons low, but unassuming Calliope. I had the impression from Dorms 4 she was just starting to have a major mental breakdown, which, she was, but, from the diner scene and her own grateful memories of being knocked out by Miss Plimsoll her siren powers are a lot more dangerous in a physical sense if they need to be.

    I'm glad the Wahnsinnig situation is getting closer and closer to exploding. It should be a fun showdown.

    Overall, a great start and I'm ready for more! It's nice to see a story showing that the fallout of something like Cally being outed can also deeply affect her friends and defenders, because bigots are never satisfied. It's still early as well, but Cally not ready to forgive and also being selfish about putting herself back in order is a nice touch as well.
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  • XaltatunOfAcheron wrote: Nice start. By the way, Dunwich is the nearest town - unless they've put in a new road, you have to go through Dunwich to get to Berlin.


    They're Italians.
    Probably driving too fast to notice Dunwich :dry:

    I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
    5 years 7 months ago #8 by Wasamon
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  • Might as well note this for Dreamer, since they commented:

    Fortenbras appeared alongside both his cousins (French and German) and Pantagruel in the flashback section of "Meanwhile at Castle Groenwald."

    Also, in regards to the Exemplars sans BIT thing, we have at least one actual example in canon: Jello, from Gen 1.
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  • Not everybody has the same definitions for what makes a town, a city, etc. Dunwich might be too small to qualify as anything but a glorified rest-stop in Calliope's schema.

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  • Good Jack in the box is going to get what's coming

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    5 years 7 months ago #12 by Dreamer
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    5 years 7 months ago #13 by konzill
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  • Callopie's surname should be Bonasera. That's a significant favour that Ms Plimsoll is offering her. One day she may ask for a favour in return...
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  • Dorms of Our Lives, Season 5 (Part 2) wrote: "Friend Franchesko! You are being the okey and the dokey!"

    This right here was my favorite part. I've got no beef with Myra, but when it comes to improving Arsi's English, I'm rooting against her.

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    5 years 7 months ago #15 by Wasamon
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  • I confess that he's a lot of fun to write. Unfortunately that means I'll probably avoid writing anything from his PoV, just so I never have to show him speaking proper English (even if only as a translation from fluent Mongolian).
    5 years 7 months ago #16 by XaltatunOfAcheron
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  • konzill wrote: Callopie's surname should be Bonasera. That's a significant favour that Ms Plimsoll is offering her. One day she may ask for a favour in return...


    I'm not reading it as a favor; it's more that Patience has lost patience with Jack, and has selected a couple of interested people to deliver her displeasure. Vic is already on the Mastermind's track. What she sees in Calliope isn't clear yet, but I don't think she'd make that offer as a favor.
    5 years 7 months ago #17 by XaltatunOfAcheron
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  • Does the Card Sharps Detective Agency have anything to do with George R. R. Martin's Wild Cards shared universe?
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  • XaltatunOfAcheron wrote:

    konzill wrote: Callopie's surname should be Bonasera. That's a significant favour that Ms Plimsoll is offering her. One day she may ask for a favour in return...


    I'm not reading it as a favor; it's more that Patience has lost patience with Jack, and has selected a couple of interested people to deliver her displeasure. Vic is already on the Mastermind's track. What she sees in Calliope isn't clear yet, but I don't think she'd make that offer as a favor.


    In the case of Calliope, I think it's something a bit more basic. Calliope is the person who was most wronged by what Patience sees as a mistake that she made. Therefore, Calliope is the person who is most suited to enact revenge for the line that was crossed. While the accords prevent Patience from acting directly, the sort of indirect assistance she might provide is more of a grey area that she is happy to exploit. Vic was likely selected as another tool, not only because he is on the Mastermind track, but also because he is Calliope's teammate. This sort of mutual support is what helps to build a strong team out in the real world, and she would be remiss if she didn't try to ingrain such beneficial behaviors in potential future Syndicate members. The possibility of another recruit is just icing on the cake.

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    5 years 7 months ago #19 by XaltatunOfAcheron
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  • cprime wrote:

    XaltatunOfAcheron wrote:

    konzill wrote: Callopie's surname should be Bonasera. That's a significant favour that Ms Plimsoll is offering her. One day she may ask for a favour in return...


    I'm not reading it as a favor; it's more that Patience has lost patience with Jack, and has selected a couple of interested people to deliver her displeasure. Vic is already on the Mastermind's track. What she sees in Calliope isn't clear yet, but I don't think she'd make that offer as a favor.


    In the case of Calliope, I think it's something a bit more basic. Calliope is the person who was most wronged by what Patience sees as a mistake that she made. Therefore, Calliope is the person who is most suited to enact revenge for the line that was crossed. While the accords prevent Patience from acting directly, the sort of indirect assistance she might provide is more of a grey area that she is happy to exploit. Vic was likely selected as another tool, not only because he is on the Mastermind track, but also because he is Calliope's teammate. This sort of mutual support is what helps to build a strong team out in the real world, and she would be remiss if she didn't try to ingrain such beneficial behaviors in potential future Syndicate members. The possibility of another recruit is just icing on the cake.


    Vic was one of the victims of Jack's mind control devises.
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  • Not quite. Jack also used it on Neff. That's the crime that he obtained immunity for in handing over the tech to the Syndicate.

    Ms. Plimsoll fulfilled her duty, but now she's upset because she didn't know the whole picture at the time. In accepting the deal, the fallout was Jack is immune from formal Admin prosecution for what he also did to Vic, and the result of which ultimately lead to Cally being outed. She's more than happy to correct this oversight.


    Cally and Electrodyne making peace put a big smile on my face because I completely didn't expect the outreached hand. Electra is a good person, but egos do tend to flare in music circles, so she's easy to forgive.
    5 years 7 months ago #21 by Yolandria
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  • Part 3 now up and running!

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  • I know I have mostly lurked this year, but just had to say : Thank you.

    While the entire story is great and explore interesting elements (the meddling of the syndicate, the amazons, the consequence of the way poe's secret has been handled etc), the noah/nina scenes stole the show for me. I loved all the interactions and can only look forward to reading more about them.
    5 years 6 months ago #24 by XaltatunOfAcheron
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  • Part 4 is up.

    Interesting twist at the end.
    5 years 6 months ago - 5 years 6 months ago #25 by Schol-R-LEA
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  • Someone got what they deserved, someone got what they were searching for in a way that's bad for everyone else, and... someone we know got parole, it seems. Good luck to her and her apex husband, then, not to mention her parent/not-daughter. One hopes that the Quad survives the oncoming hav... er, mayhem.

    Does extirpation involve simulated walnuts, by any chance (but not skee-ball, that beeachfront wasn't supposed to be there)?

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    Does extirpation involve simulated walnuts, by any chance (but not skee-ball, that beeachfront wasn't supposed to be there)?

    I looked up the word, it is another term for extermination.

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  • Schol-R-lea gets the joke, that it's a reference to the webcomic Skin Horse, a mad-science series focused on black-ops social services for non-human sapients.

    In that one, members of the enigmatic shadow government conspiracy are regularly threatened with extirpation for disloyalty, mistakes, losses, or failure to understand the byzantine mess of regulations running the system. No one's exactly sure what extirpation actually entails, but it's rumored to involve walnuts.

    It's a running joke from practically the beginning (maybe first major story arc?) and the details of extirpation were only revealed a few months ago, after years of updates.

    And walnuts are, in fact, involved. Sort of.
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  • Wasamon wrote: It's a running joke from practically the beginning (maybe first major story arc?) and the details of extirpation were only revealed a few months ago, after years of updates.


    Meh, not quite that long. So far as I recall, Anasigma Corp. wasn't even introduced until "I Can Fly" (this link is to their first mention I could find, but it's in the middle of the arc so possible spoilers), and while I am pretty sure Dr. Lee mentions extirpation fairly early on
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    the walnut thing came a good deal later, probably not until "Railway Children" (the story involving St. Charlie, the Mobile City of Mad Science) and or even "My House is Me" (the story involving Dr. Whimsy's Little House, the Disneyland expy).

    However, what I will say is that A-Sig is very, very naughty, just like Little Jimmy . Fortunately, our favorite crossdressing psychologist knows how to handle someone like Virginia Lee . At least long enough for U.N.I.T.Y. to cause a lot of trouble .


    OK, I am officially taking things too seriously, aren't I?

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  • For a moment there I thought Saumer was going to invite Kirsten to the game of Das Schwarz Auge that Erica's trying to get going. :lol:

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  • Wasamon wrote: Schol-R-lea gets the joke, that it's a reference to the webcomic Skin Horse, a mad-science series focused on black-ops social services for non-human sapients.

    In that one, members of the enigmatic shadow government conspiracy are regularly threatened with extirpation for disloyalty, mistakes, losses, or failure to understand the byzantine mess of regulations running the system. No one's exactly sure what extirpation actually entails, but it's rumored to involve walnuts.

    It's a running joke from practically the beginning (maybe first major story arc?) and the details of extirpation were only revealed a few months ago, after years of updates.

    And walnuts are, in fact, involved. Sort of.

    Dang, I read that webcomic but it's been so long since they referenced that detail I forgot it. ::oops:

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  • Yeah the Order of the Worn Wrench has standards, its built on the premise of "you've got my back, I've got yours", which is why their protection sometimes extends to non tech track students, Jack in the Box has made it clear that he sees other peoples backs as knife practice.

    It does seem not all the Amazons are unrecoverable TERF, which is good. It does make sense that most of the Masterminds don't go the villain route come to think of it, not only is there maturation, but they also get to learn how the system works and how much work it is to game the system.

    One thought, after the broadcast, people are going to look Danielle Greenwood up, Erica's past is very well protected from direct research, but can the same be said of her mother?

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  • I wonder how many Diedrick's cases have teeth sharp enough to be described as sawblades, and whether there are enough for Mrs. Hastings to reasonably not be Lady Havoc. After all, the latter had begun working with Whateley last we saw in Gen 1, and was getting close to Pinnacle whose surname we don't know.

    Continuing to really enjoy Dorms, and what an end to this fourth part. Big public reveal, interesting exchanges with StahlFaust and more.

    One nuanced aspect I really like about Erica is her lack of physical reactions to many things - indeed the very inability in many cases, such as blushing. It must be rather confusing even to oneself when there's the complete absence of the physical reactions to one's emotions and would make it difficult at times for even Erica to read herself.

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  • There's a Gen1 Ms. Hastings...

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    Lol if Vic's stepsister, Ronnie Silver, goes to the college that Hunger is set in. Hunger is set in a College, right?
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  • Yes, Hunger takes place at a college in Lincoln, Nebraska. It's most likely the University of Nebraska-Lincoln, given that Robert's dorm is named Pound Hall.

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  • I just realized how similar "Groundpounder" and "Tidestriker" are... Noun [Hitting Verb]-er.

    Now thinking of the silly "Flameslapper".

    ...

    Also, their real names reference their elements too... Claude / Clod, and Rivera.
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  • Schol-R-LEA wrote: I stand corrected, walnuts were indeed mentioned from the outset as part of extirpation .


    Well, you saved me a few hours of re-reading the entire archives.... :(

    But yay, my memory's just as weirdly specific as ever.

    And to Dreamer, I know exactly how weird it is to have a regular flow of random music going through my head, because that's a normal day for me. Occasionally some pop music ear worm will drive me nuts for a month or two, but I eventually train my brain to switch over to some Santana or Weird Al or Finnish/Lappish joik music if it pops up.
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  • Dreamer wrote:

    "She will be amused at how the legend grows. But no, Val is perceptive, and a strong empath, but her ability to suggest directly with her power is limited. But you would be amazed at what people can be convinced into doing when they believe they can blame it on outside control... But alas, no. She can sense interest and encourage you to act on it, but she cannot create that interest in the first place."

    If that is the truth of how Val's power works, then I've have been wrong about her brainwashing girls.


    Nah, the Screeching Bitch has been oozing a 'Brainwashing Bitch' aura from every inch of her skin from the moment of her first apparition on-screen, with nicities like 'never before the second date' amongst crowners.

    And even if Attack Bitch Alpha Stale Farce wasn't lying there to protect her premier recruitment tool, this form of empathy can totally brainwash you faithful mindslaves recruits. Demonstration with Nefertiti, aka "A brainwashing so obvious that abducting loving hetero girls for dragging them to a Brainwashing Booth for mental rewriting would actually be a subtler approach. Even accounting for the fact the Booth is right on front of Kane, and Hive gets audio and video feed of every second the entire debacle":

    1) Calliope and Nefertiti are left reeling after the Pit's Losers and the Attack Bitches get them. Screeching Bitch take the hurt, the sadness, the everything negative from that experience to keep it very much alive, so they don't forget how sucky it was all. Could be also heigthening the hurt Nefertiti feels about not knowing the truth about Calliope (standard reaction to love interest hiding big secrets), because it can't be separated, or because she prefers isolated preys to tailor her approach more. Of course, in that sea of bad feelings, the Amazons stand like a beacon of 'feel good' and 'comfort', especially if she amps up these feelings too. Jack-In-A-Cage (no, i'm not calling him Dick-In-A-Box, my professional pride forbids me of using Attack Bitches' nicknames) planted the seeds, Screeching Bitch is definitely watering them for her benefits.
    2) After the big campus revelation, Nefertiti is jumped again and in the 'care' of the Attack Bitches. Time to do it again, except this time Screeching Bitch is definitely amping up that seed of resentment against Calliope, and going overdrive because Stale Farce is a Sisterhood Bitch in the pure Sinfest vein. And why should Nefertiti question that hurt and anger after such an traumatic, intense, and emotionaly amplified experience? Especially while it is confronted to all the 'comfort' and 'feel good' rising up to match during this whole week-end between Screeching Bitch's claws. Anger against Jack-In-A-Cage and the losers become hatred by sheer contamination once the first association is done and generously fed by empathic powers, while anger at Calliope is also festered, until the 'transgender man' link between these two hatred is reached, while the trauma is just not going away. And all the while, the Attack Bitches are the only place where she is feeling good, or at least feels good enough when confronted to this constant hurt, anger, trauma...

    Vanilla Brainwashing of emotional manipulation of surroundings with a helping of Pavlovian conditionning of 'Attack Bitches Good, Everything Else Bad'. With Screeching Bitch using the empathy to catalyze the changes. Now I guess if Jack-In-A-Cage hadn't accelerated thing sfurther, it would have been addiction to the feel-good moment of being ith the Attack Bitches and the still lingering hurt leading to always more visits to feel that good, with Screeching Bitch slowly rewriting their brains with each new visit. Little fucktard just offered an opportunity of working faster.

    And I can imagine it would help tremendously with the hetero couples too. Lovely New Thing is having one of these ordinairy lovers' spat peppering love life, especially for some mutants here? Amp up the issues on both sides for critical meltdown, and pick up the sobbing pieces of Lovely New Thing and get to work.

    And all of that is only if Screeching Bitch strictly sticks to 'Vulture Mode'. There are myriads of little hurts and dark feelings within the mind, all little seeds to exploit with emotional manipulation, especially super-powered one. Or to plant yourself for later use.

    (And as PS regarding 'manipulation of sexuality'... Kayda shows that enough trauma can have effects. Before she remembered the collective rape, her narrative could briefly wander on how some guys could look hot before her subconscious definitely backed away due to the trauma. And once it was in the open, nope to any man became the answer. Screeching Bitch has a power allowing her to more or less slowly rewrite the brains. Might not be easy, but I'm sure the possibility of inducing enough lingering trauma is within her wretched reach.)
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  • Hardric wrote:

    Dreamer wrote:

    "She will be amused at how the legend grows. But no, Val is perceptive, and a strong empath, but her ability to suggest directly with her power is limited. But you would be amazed at what people can be convinced into doing when they believe they can blame it on outside control... But alas, no. She can sense interest and encourage you to act on it, but she cannot create that interest in the first place."

    If that is the truth of how Val's power works, then I've have been wrong about her brainwashing girls.


    Nah, the Screeching Bitch has been oozing a 'Brainwashing Bitch' aura from every inch of her skin from the moment of her first apparition on-screen, with nicities like 'never before the second date' amongst crowners.

    And even if Attack Bitch Alpha Stale Farce wasn't lying there to protect her premier recruitment tool, this form of empathy can totally brainwash you faithful mindslaves recruits. Demonstration with Nefertiti, aka "A brainwashing so obvious that abducting loving hetero girls for dragging them to a Brainwashing Booth for mental rewriting would actually be a subtler approach. Even accounting for the fact the Booth is right on front of Kane, and Hive gets audio and video feed of every second the entire debacle":

    1) Calliope and Nefertiti are left reeling after the Pit's Losers and the Attack Bitches get them. Screeching Bitch take the hurt, the sadness, the everything negative from that experience to keep it very much alive, so they don't forget how sucky it was all. Could be also heigthening the hurt Nefertiti feels about not knowing the truth about Calliope (standard reaction to love interest hiding big secrets), because it can't be separated, or because she prefers isolated preys to tailor her approach more. Of course, in that sea of bad feelings, the Amazons stand like a beacon of 'feel good' and 'comfort', especially if she amps up these feelings too. Jack-In-A-Cage (no, i'm not calling him Dick-In-A-Box, my professional pride forbids me of using Attack Bitches' nicknames) planted the seeds, Screeching Bitch is definitely watering them for her benefits.
    2) After the big campus revelation, Nefertiti is jumped again and in the 'care' of the Attack Bitches. Time to do it again, except this time Screeching Bitch is definitely amping up that seed of resentment against Calliope, and going overdrive because Stale Farce is a Sisterhood Bitch in the pure Sinfest vein. And why should Nefertiti question that hurt and anger after such an traumatic, intense, and emotionaly amplified experience? Especially while it is confronted to all the 'comfort' and 'feel good' rising up to match during this whole week-end between Screeching Bitch's claws. Anger against Jack-In-A-Cage and the losers become hatred by sheer contamination once the first association is done and generously fed by empathic powers, while anger at Calliope is also festered, until the 'transgender man' link between these two hatred is reached, while the trauma is just not going away. And all the while, the Attack Bitches are the only place where she is feeling good, or at least feels good enough when confronted to this constant hurt, anger, trauma...

    Vanilla Brainwashing of emotional manipulation of surroundings with a helping of Pavlovian conditionning of 'Attack Bitches Good, Everything Else Bad'. With Screeching Bitch using the empathy to catalyze the changes. Now I guess if Jack-In-A-Cage hadn't accelerated thing sfurther, it would have been addiction to the feel-good moment of being ith the Attack Bitches and the still lingering hurt leading to always more visits to feel that good, with Screeching Bitch slowly rewriting their brains with each new visit. Little fucktard just offered an opportunity of working faster.

    And I can imagine it would help tremendously with the hetero couples too. Lovely New Thing is having one of these ordinairy lovers' spat peppering love life, especially for some mutants here? Amp up the issues on both sides for critical meltdown, and pick up the sobbing pieces of Lovely New Thing and get to work.

    And all of that is only if Screeching Bitch strictly sticks to 'Vulture Mode'. There are myriads of little hurts and dark feelings within the mind, all little seeds to exploit with emotional manipulation, especially super-powered one. Or to plant yourself for later use.

    (And as PS regarding 'manipulation of sexuality'... Kayda shows that enough trauma can have effects. Before she remembered the collective rape, her narrative could briefly wander on how some guys could look hot before her subconscious definitely backed away due to the trauma. And once it was in the open, nope to any man became the answer. Screeching Bitch has a power allowing her to more or less slowly rewrite the brains. Might not be easy, but I'm sure the possibility of inducing enough lingering trauma is within her wretched reach.)


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  • You say that as if Neff x Cally could be defeated once the brainwashing is dealt with as the Attack Bitches.

    Also, dang do I hate fat-fingering posts. Still, C&C:

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  • mhalpern wrote: One thought, after the broadcast, people are going to look Danielle Greenwood up, Erica's past is very well protected from direct research, but can the same be said of her mother?

    But Castle Groenwald deliberately had Danielle announce her name was von Groenwald. The same investigations that Kirsten has done on Erica will only bring up those same links. I very much doubt they're even considering Erica, more to legitimize the links Green Cross has with the Nazi Theme Agent. The fallout just looks very bad for Erica. She was claiming they're distant cousins. Now it is super obvious she's her daughter, and it makes it look like she was lying about that too.

    A very bad pairing given the accusations against Cally. Now they're both liars, and it will take even longer for the furor over Cally to go away too.

    The real Green Cross is using Miene to be her stand-in, while she continues to run for the government as, "Lillian Richards-Greenwood."

    I guess the next question is why? Certainly to remove any chance that Lillian could be associated with actually being the super villain, but to what other end? Does she intend to use "Danielle von Groenwald" as someone to campaign against? A more extreme example so that she can easily slide into the congressional seat?
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  • Dreamer wrote:

    "It's the Class of 2010, all over again."

    "Oh dear, I hope not," said Tabby. "I fear so, but I hope not. As it is..."


    We know the Class of 2010 has had their issues, but how bad will it get for the TG kids that Tabby hopes it isn't that all over again?

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    One after another? Good idea; it would wear her down, but... Section 1, paragraph 8, a student can only be challenged a certain number of times in a week, and not by members of the same training team successively. And this is assuming she's registered as personally open to challenges. Not all students are, even in the upper grades."


    Dang, the staff have had this happen before.


    You might have gotten your answer as to how bad it gets that these rules get put in place.

    Part of it could be tied to the training regimens (and peer pressure wielded to get people into those regimens) that would be needed for a motley group of students to face The Bastard's minions and have any chance of success. The Class of 2010 might bear the brunt of the 2008-2010 effort, but the effects of being trained as child soldiers can't be expected to disappear once The Bastard is locked away for a few years.

    Heck, that might be one of the dodges used to ramp up the training tempo without sounding alarms immediately,

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  • As the three girls rounded the path towards him, a boy with Emerson pips on his school uniform dashed past with what looked to be a cantelope in hand.


    Would that by any chance be an Emerson pin (pinned on) or a badge (sewn on) on his blazer?

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  • Today's offering? Very nice!

    And I'm not just saying that because there's been a wee bit of a drought, but it was very well written, I thought.

    One part did make me go; "Okay, whatever", but the rest of the story was engaging and interesting.

    Well done!
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  • Hmm. If I imagine colors as sounds, I find that blue is a sine wave, soft and round. Frequency depends on shade; lighter = higher, obviously. Green is more of a triangle wave. Red's a square wave with a bit of crackly static thrown in; fire-like. Orange is like red, but brighter and a little bent; funky. Purple sounds like orange, but no crackle. Yellow sounds like a coin flip if it's a bright shade in a context that calls to mind gold; otherwise it's a sawtooth wave.

    Also, thanks for that link to The Hu; these guys are fucking awesome. Clearly Callie should ditch the venerable but cliche genre of hip-hop and instead write her diss tracks as heavy metal Mongolian throat singing. Her enemies will be feeling of the burning.

    Dorms of Our Lives, Season 5 (Part 5) wrote: verpiss dich, du Fickfehler!

    My first guess about what that might translate to was "Drink piss, dickgargler!" I was a little disappointed when I looked it up and found that it was more of a bland "Fuck you, you fuck-mistake!" Oh well.

    Dorms of Our Lives, Season 5 (Part 5) wrote: "There are blind spots in the Security camera network," Laura pointed out, her face all post-box shaped.

    I don't understand this one. Is it a blue joke? A reference to the D: emoticon? Both? Something entirely different? Did a lab accident Elrod hasn't written yet leave Laura with an amorphous skull that reconfigures based on her mood?

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  • The scene of Ratel sneaking up to their table because she could tell from their gestures and body language they were discussing a beatdown got me to fully laugh out loud, earning me a funny look or three because I was reading that section in public on my phone.

    She's such a good friend to them...Tanya's openness to brawling her the first week really must have made an impression.

    But the fact that Ratel could just slip in there isn't a good sign for our heroes' level of awareness. They should be watching out for Spy Kids bugs among others!
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  • I have to wonder how Kristen will react to learning the subject of her ire was raised by her favorite Nazi hunter?

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  • mhalpern wrote: I have to wonder how Kristen will react to learning the subject of her ire was raised by her favorite Nazi hunter?


    You and me both, I have been waiting for that one since Wahnsinnig began her little circus, which is by now pretty much spitting on everything her heroine fought for and incarnated. hopefully the shock makes her at least pass out on the spot, and still hopefully maybe more. Would be interesting to see her try to switch to servility and flattery after that one, to try to win back back her idol's good graces... But unless the woman herself arrives to dress her down, I expect fierce, demented denial to the idea she talked shit to her beloved Eisenmädel's granddaughter. Or that her idol is married to a son of Abendritten, or the mother of the (fake) Green Cross. And breakdown when denial becomes impossible.
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  • Hardric wrote:

    mhalpern wrote: I have to wonder how Kristen will react to learning the subject of her ire was raised by her favorite Nazi hunter?


    You and me both, I have been waiting for that one since Wahnsinnig began her little circus, which is by now pretty much spitting on everything her heroine fought for and incarnated. hopefully the shock makes her at least pass out on the spot, and still hopefully maybe more. Would be interesting to see her try to switch to servility and flattery after that one, to try to win back back her idol's good graces... But unless the woman herself arrives to dress her down, I expect fierce, demented denial to the idea she talked shit to her beloved Eisenmädel's granddaughter. Or that her idol is married to a son of Abendritten, or the mother of the (fake) Green Cross. And breakdown when denial becomes impossible.


    or that 3/4ths of the Shadow Hunters, including Eisenmädel had parents that were Nazis

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    mhalpern wrote: I have to wonder how Kristen will react to learning the subject of her ire was raised by her favorite Nazi hunter?


    You and me both, I have been waiting for that one since Wahnsinnig began her little circus, which is by now pretty much spitting on everything her heroine fought for and incarnated. hopefully the shock makes her at least pass out on the spot, and still hopefully maybe more. Would be interesting to see her try to switch to servility and flattery after that one, to try to win back back her idol's good graces... But unless the woman herself arrives to dress her down, I expect fierce, demented denial to the idea she talked shit to her beloved Eisenmädel's granddaughter. Or that her idol is married to a son of Abendritten, or the mother of the (fake) Green Cross. And breakdown when denial becomes impossible.


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  • mhalpern wrote: I have to wonder how Kristen will react to learning the subject of her ire was raised by her favorite Nazi hunter?


    She will live up to her nickname.
    Well, she already does, but she will live up to the common translation as well

    'Wahnsinnig' is commonly translated as 'crazy' but if you translated the component words literally you would arrive at 'delusional'
    A Wahn is a delusion or a fantasm and sinnig translates to sensing. Being wahnsinnig thus means being afflicted with seeing or sensing things that are not real (and the implication is of refusing to accept the word of all others to the contrary).
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  • I too can't wait for Erica to drop the mike ol that one. Honestly I'm expecting it to happen at the end of the challange match. Its a moment that just deserves the largest possible audience.
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  • null0trooper wrote:

    Dreamer wrote: Ngaire can play a rondo with herself, what is a rondo? I tried looking it up but found nothing.

    From the context, that could be a double typo for ronda or rota. Ngaire played in round with herself.


    Try googling "music form rondo" for more of an explanation, but basically it is a music form with repetitions of the primary theme. a canon is a kind of rondo.
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  • joreymay wrote:

    null0trooper wrote:

    Dreamer wrote: Ngaire can play a rondo with herself, what is a rondo? I tried looking it up but found nothing.

    From the context, that could be a double typo for ronda or rota. Ngaire played in round with herself.


    Try googling "music form rondo" for more of an explanation, but basically it is a music form with repetitions of the primary theme. a canon is a kind of rondo.


    Good thing that a round is "... (also called a perpetual canon [canon perpetuus] or infinite canon) is a musical composition, a limited type of canon in which a minimum of three voices sing exactly the same melody at the unison..."

    I doubt Cally would find a canon that unusual, but Ngaire would be playing it by herself. Pulling off three voices, or the impression thereof, i.e., playing it with herself as the accompanying voices, is likely far more impressive.

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  • No added commentary on the final note at the end? ;)

    And again, a big thank you goes to Polk Kitsune for letting me borrow Noelle for these scenes.
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  • Wasamon wrote: No added commentary on the final note at the end? ;)

    Sorry, Bad migraine messing with my ability to remember details right now, wasn't able to think of any added commentary. :(

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  • Don't worry, you'll be seeing more of Noelle.
    And hearing more from her spirit... :)

    I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
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  • Tanya is my heart.

    Immediately against the others using an allergy as an exploit, in a huge contrast to Gen 1 behavior and fiercely protesting against the others looking for any edge at any cost. When she was using the Garbage Can of Guilt afterwards, I felt for her even more. I'm going to guess due to her reaction in the locker room and the subsequent one-on-one interview, that Tanya will get a little more leniency than the other three even if she was the one who ultimately threw it.

    I am a little surprised Erica wasn't more aggressive in this segment. Was it because Kirsten did herself in over the public broadcast from Cally's rap? Or did Erica get a lot of the frustration out just fighting with Fortenbras?

    Is Vic more powerful than he thinks? Adrienne got worried awfully quick.

    It is highly disturbing that Ratel is now acting as a battle coach.

    Nina's arc was great. She really blossomed from what felt like a flavor-only character in the Poe Intro to someone with struggles that I'm invested in as a reader.
    I only realized now, looking back to IDTWIKA 2 that her sparkly "manifested combat outfit" was foreshadowed back then!

    Looking forward to seeing more of Nina, Erica, Cally, and the build up of the Alliance against the Amazons!

    Edit: I forgot. Morgana is officially the wardrobe malfunction mascot of Gen 2, isn't she?
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    Not EVERY time....

    I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
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  • Astrodragon wrote: Oh come now, it's not as if Morgana has a costume malfunction every time she fights!!

    Not EVERY time....


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    Lose the battle again!

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  • On one hand, I had relatives going through nasty allergies, so mixed opinion here, on the other, that's Bouillasse from the Pit... Let's call it a one-time performance and stay at that. Still happy the Kimboids 2.0 managed so well until that point though. And hoping for more Wahnsinnig breakdown.

    And more importantly, that Calliope's confession performance can provide them some insight about how the Attack Bitches work their brainwashing tactics.
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  • I love the mix of optimism, camaraderie, and aggression this ended with and the way it drives home Calliope's character growth. It's also got this great sense of... not the calm, but the energy before a storm. It's an ending that really conveys that the story is only just getting started.

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  • I can't help but feel that the info they got provided could have been doctored to push an agenda. Considering how extreme that reaction was, and how vague the mention of the allergy was, it just makes sense to me.

    Seriously, thank you for your time and effort. It is appreciated.
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    I really like what you are doing with Noah.

    My memory is a bit fuzzy, I recall having read about Noelle somewhere (probably a whatif ?), even if I am not sure if it was the same character (Same name, Avatar, Ice spirit, French-Canadian, changelin as a result of hosting said spirit ...). I look forward to reading more about her and the relationships that will ensue.
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    Ametros: I couldn't find a good way to cram all this detail in naturally, but the thing with Gouyasse and rubbing alcohol isn't exactly an allergy, but rather the chemical interfering with the same physical processes his muscles use to metabolize ethanol into super-fuel. The reaction to rubbing alcohol was noted by the power testers, but at that time it was simply a short-lived, ugly rash. Standing procedure for power-testing is that aspects which cause / require direct harm to the person can't be tested past a certain point, because no one wants to test someone's regenerative powers only to discover that oh, they weren't Regen 5 after all... And in any case, Whateley being Whateley, Doyle Hall would eventually provide all the necessary data anyway.

    So while the reaction had been noted, no testing was done to reveal that the strength of the reaction increased based on both the area of exposure and the degree to which Gouyasse's booze-boosting power was active. The purpose of the note was to prevent medics from using isopropanol on him post-fight, when his power effect would have already subsided. No one had (up to this point) actively tested the limit of the reaction when he was at full power, and you'd better believe that the warning notes are going to be larger, brighter, and listing the relevant codicils of the school fight code to explain what will happen to whomever tries this trick again.

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    Esar: Noelle / Cold Snap is Polk Kitsune's author character, used with permission and in the expectation of her having a canon Whateley tale of her own soon enough. You're certainly remembering the original story.
    5 years 2 months ago - 5 years 2 months ago #75 by Malady
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  • Wondering who the antagonists are gonna be now that Kirsten, the Leader, of her team has been Psych-d out... So a retaliation is unlikely?

    Gouyasse doesn't seem leader-y...

    ... The Amazons and the ODS. Riiight.

    How successful do they seem, right now??

    Does M3 have more, or less enemies on campus than the Kimbas? I think less??
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