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Do we have any of the info to make good guesses about M??
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Lols if Bergamot is the way out from her "friend's" thumb. Because at least their deal is more even than the one she's got right now?
I forget how much authors share groups, so I'm thinking about Advent and others, instead of the primary Vanguard guys...
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Good that she's tiptoe-ing around the idea of things being her fault, instead of not getting it.
If Tia meets her during the logical Diedricks comedown period, Jamie might be more receptive to a better path and clearer thinking??
I really can't remember ever seeing the comedown that the Wiki says should happen... Which came from an Author post, so hmm...
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She made a deal with someone to get out, and it sounds like the man who approached her wants the tech she used to transform Tia. *bangs head in frustration* That is far past slippery slope. At least Jamie doesn't like taunting of kids with GSD, though I have to wonder how much she will witness of it before she snaps and acts despite the consequences.
Ugh, idiots yelling at her because she is a criminal and think they are heroes, thus she should be locked up, no middle ground. I don't even want to know what her self defense option is, do I? Sees Tia jogging and once more she thinks she is in her own personal Hell, good grief.
Flashback to the incident from her perspective, seeing Luke kiss that bitch and not realize she forced herself on him, ouch. Uh oh, not able to accept an apology from Luke right then. Yikes, Mom was half convinced she wasn't even her daughter anymore, not good for Jamie's already fragile mental health.
Jeff trying to defuse the situation and Jane has to go and say she saw tongue, that Luke kissed Amy, not the other way around, idiot. Jamie runs off crying, left with her thoughts as they spiral. Jamie plans to make out in front of Luke with other people, and calls her Mom for a ride, situation spiraling further out of control.
Oh crap, Jamie's mental issues are worse than I previously thought.She'd do it - if she knew what was good for her. I'm sure she didn't want a repeat of last time.
A revenge-focused devisor is terrifying to watch. She knows this guy but doesn't remember his name right now, plus he is willing to help her get the parts she wants.
Jamie should have gotten psychological help a lot sooner. And the next paragraph makes this point terrifying, to think her family has had to live with this since she manifested.Mom dug her credit card out at the not to subtle hint; I had her trained well. I bagged everything up.
Locking herself in a room to work once they got home, her mother should have contacted the authorities then and there. She was using a Kickstarter to get funding!! And her Mom goofed, instead of calling the authorities she called Luke over to reason with her, in this state she isn't up to being reasoned with.
Luke is very agile, dodging her first and second shots while maneuvering out of the house. 3rd shot misses as well, Jamie is acting more frustrated. How did the fourth bolt discolor the paint on the car a little? He is trying to reason with her and she doesn't even hear him, just taking aim and firing. *sigh* Green and blue flames rising off Luke unexpected by Jamie, that devise is a lot more dangerous if its inventor can't predict even half of what it can do.
At least Mr. Howe is smart, using a blanket to put out the flames. EMTs show up, take Luke off in a rush, while another EMT wishes to check Jamie's hands. Two police cars show up, Jamie isn't thinking clearly at all, doesn't remember the name of one of the police officers, nor hear what he says, just knows he said something. Now responding to police questions, but more concerned her devise wasn't supposed to do what it did, oh oh.
And she wants them to ask her devise why it set Luke on fire, I want to know what her mental issues are already, hard to figure out with all the different symptoms and reactions she is having. Bag the devise, Jamie under arrest and in cuffs, but she wishes to make sure Luke is okay, yikes, the shift in attitude towards Luke.
Her next line, it sounds like paranoia or one of the mental health problems which twist perception. *eyes bug out* So Luke now Tia gets Jamie's patents and Jamie is so far gone she thinks Tia killed Luke. And she thinks karma means Tia will 'get hers' someday, good lord, insight into her mental process is scary.My nails were in palms again; I’d have to use the skin knitter. The skin knitter I’d made first thing, after being booked and thrown in a cell awaiting bond. The device made to make sure Luke healed quickly with no scars. The police wouldn’t let me use it on him, of course; they said it was because there was nothing physically wrong with his skin by the time it was ready.
Whateley Academy, where normal is a daydream for most. So they take apart her devises to clear them as safe for her to use, even a lightbulb, good. Plus I can think of several ways a gadgeteer could weaponize a lightbulb, let alone a devisor. And Jamie thinks referring to her file is a method for messing with her head, persecution complex or paranoia.She shrugged and held her perfectly manicured hands up. “Who is to say what normal is? Certainly not me.”
This idiot. This total airheaded blonde. “Isn’t that your job?”
Her smile changed to something more genuine. “Not even remotely. You’ve seen where I work – does normal even come close to describing it?”
Well I had to concede that point at least. “No.”
Jamie made a 15th devise which destroys several security camera signals before it self-destructed, very bad. Jamie's attitude towards the psychological, serious issue.
Well, at least that part comes across as normal snarky teenager when given such advice. Great, she knows how to play her psychologist. And messing with the poor woman like that, calling it is a small victory, she is coming across more and more like a sociopath, except her caring about Luke once she hurt him doesn't fit.“Sure. Just be yourself, and be patient.”
Of course. My day was barely started, and already it was complete. What a load of unicorns and rainbows.
She considers this Sharon more trustworthy because of that... A drone which jammed the security camera signals and Sharon knows what Jamie did, that she is a criminal who is basically on probation as long as she behaves, but doesn't report her. This won't end well for Sharon once administration finds out.She wasn't one of those 'profess undying loyalty' types that didn't actually mean it; instead her friendship was based more on what I could do for her, which weirdly meant she was more trustworthy. There was probably a word for that sort of thing somewhere, but I couldn't be bothered with to learn it.
*blinks* Jamie perving out on a boy, thinking she isn't even as attractive as Sharon, seesh. So some do know who Jamie is at Whateley, threatening note stating she is a traitor to mutantkind, original with security and Jamie has a digital copy. Sharon wants to track down whoever sent it, not a good idea, Jamie could have done it herself and forgotten with how her mind works.
Ugh, Jamie thinks Tia is just trying to turn people against her, make is her diagnosis, it is driving me up the wall trying to figure it out. She can tell which cameras are working and when, bet the school doesn't know she is a technopath of some sort. Shows the note to Pete and he states she won't be left alone today. This girl is highly manipulatively.
A shy guy who owes Pete a few favors to watch over Tia, I wonder who it could be. So, she thinks those with more severe GSD are all in Evo Rocks! and one of them sent her the note, just what no one needs.
Trying to narrow down who Jamie's mysterious boss could be, but drawing a blank. Bad news, either way."Build a handheld DNA scanner and sequencer." It said. The signature was a letter: a stylized M.
Flashback to her time in prison. Good thing they didn't give her a pen, just the thought she might have escaped is bad. Taken to conference room 2, but not for what she expects.
Says to call him James. Trying to say she is being railroaded due to certain coverage by some in the press, sounds like he is feeding on her paranoia to manipulate her. And Jamie still blaming Tia for the transformation she caused, believing her devise should have worked the way she expected and anything else isn't her fault but someone else's.Instead there was a guy, mid twenties, handsome, with slick backed hair and stylish sunglasses peeking out from the front pocket of his sky blue shirt. The same sky blue shirt that was surrounded by a pinstriped suit that looked very expensive and well tailored to the man, and was capped off with a darker blue striped tie.
And full-on delusional about what she did to Nick it is.Instead, there was someone new in Luke's place, holding him hostage, stealing his life, and trying to play the victim to ruin mine. I had to get out of here so at least that much of her plan failed. Without some help, there was no way I could reverse whatever it was that bunny thing had done.
Crud, this guy works for someone who wants a 'cure' for mutants and is manipulating Jamie towards that goal.In exchange, should everything go well, you work a number of years for my employer, working on solutions to faulty genetics and unusual DNA, as you have before.
Heh, and there are those who see mutation as a 'certain kind of disease' to cure. At least Jamie knows the fix is in, clear-minded enough to see that. Figures, take the deal or get jailhouse beatings, the guard has seen it before and is trying to warn Jamie away from the deal."My employer is interested in innovative solutions to certain kinds of disease, and believes that your approach holds promise in combating it," James replied.
James driving her home and trying to avoid the media. Weird mask to hide her face, but still in prison orange and the head guard wishing Jamie luck, oh boy. Those reporters trying to cut them off, want to bet that James informed them and used them to scare Jamie even more so she will take the deal. Dropped off with a police car at her home plus both parents there, Jamies giving her a business card before taking off, Jamie is in a mess now.
So the M was red herring for us, rats. Wait, one of her two new friends has a similar deal, is it Sharon? Her devising isn't relaxing, she can't get it to what she wants, hmm. Thinking everyone seems happy, I'm going with an unreliable narrator for Jamie whenever I read her thoughts.
Trouble drawing up professional blueprints, she could get help for that. Home ec. and survival, at least in home ec. you can eat some of your assignments.
Okay, why can't normal schools have home ec. stuff like that for the lesson, I would have taken the class if they did.I now knew how to make two different kinds of smokescreens with household chemicals, as well as how to make homemade pepper spray.
So like her devise, but passive so it doesn't break her parole, rats.
How can she be so manipulative and sneaky, yet so naive at the same time?There was also no way anyone, even James's shadowy boss, could use a DNA scanner for ill.
So members of ER have been helping out Jamie, curious.The other alternative was worse - that the ER crowd on campus was less split than they appeared. It had not escaped my mention that my lawyer, PR agent, and other help thrown my way since James posted my bail were card-carrying, pin wearing members of Evolution Rocks. They had done right by me so far, but here on campus, things were less clear.
The fact you might be able to do it in years would make you a threat in many people's perceptions. Spinach casserole, I have to agree with Jamie on this one. Dang, all that food going to waste, just seems so wrong.That my specialty was a direct threat to what made mutants special, and that I would be able to give anyone powers. Or even, that I could take powers away somehow. Which was stupid really, both ways. I could diagnose genetic conditions, but that was all. It would be some time before I was ready to do anything more; years, really.
Joking about the food they made in home ec., heh. Admiring the crystal dome, hope it doesn't inspire her to build something in similar shape or design. Calling the table of her friends a losers table, Jamie, you seriously have an ego problem. She thinks Tia's ears wilting at you waving at her just to get a rise is Tia mocking you, arrggggh!
I knew Whateley Universe had advanced farther than us, but dang."Well, the latest one found is multiple sclerosis, across several different places in the chromosome, not just HLA-DRB1. Nothing definitive yet of course, more study required (that seemed to be Nature's catch phrase) but the early report from the first analysis was suggestive."
And this is what I fear her mysterious boss is having her work towards. Irma is a sophomore, looks like that and can take on two or three empowered kids herself, dang. Ack! She is trying to be more like Jamie.It was easy to understand the concern in her voice; the concern for many was that once mutation would be understood, it would be reversed by the public at large; that unborn kids would be aborted for bearing the markers. Some feared that the reverse would happen as well, but either one was bad from a genetic point of view.
Well, I like Irma, no excuse not to learn just because you don't have the gifts others do. Okay, how does Irma eat that fast, yet with such finesse?
Well, she isn't wrong.Irma muttered some suspicious words before speaking up. "You have no idea. But you'll learn. This school is not safe. Not at any time. Not even your room is one hundred percent safe, and some of the people in this school are easily crazy enough to attack you right in the middle of campus and in broad daylight."
Paintball, survival class style and she thinks Imp is creepy, ugh. World history and Jamie thinks it is worthless to learn, figures. Who is this stone guy, don't tell he is one of those ER types who see her as a threat to their 'uniqueness' or something. And he calls Jamie guilty, I wonder if he heard from Tia the whole tale of what happened or not. Molten, a freshman in ER, thought so.
Sharon taking a calm pace, but Jamie wishing to get to the safety of her lab and work on the project her boss wants to be finished. Irma sticking around to keep an eye on Jamie, at least she loyal friends, maybe they can steer her away from bad ideas, I hope.
I suggest her boss though would have no problem exploiting such an invention.Yes, I had just made a way to further genetic mapping. But because I was a devisor, Nature would never accept my findings without independent confirmation years in the making. Devisors were not well regarded in the scientific community - to the point of being laughingstocks.
Yikes, dinner time and Sharon let Jamie work even though she is hungry. Airys Reynolds, Jamie is going to try and turn her against Tia, nooo! And it backfires on her, Airys gets pissed at how she is insulting Tia and trying to manipulate her. Jamie's delusions about Tia are going to cause her to blow this chance at Whateley she was given at this rate.
I just hope Pete, Sharon, and Irma aren't hurt by Jamie when one of her plans backfires or one of her delusions makes her think they did something they didn't. Jealous of gadgeteers and bashing them because of it, par for the course with her. Sharon is definitely working for the same boss as Jamie, how much of being nice to her is true friendship and how much is keeping an asset viable?
Irma has to tutor her on world history, poor girl. Pete is a big goofball, so cheesy. Studying at Whitman, this will be interesting. Tables outside of Whitman instead, good thing Sharon is there.
Jamie, you need to learn not to pull pranks.I wondered if I could arrange a little 'Whitman welcome' on quick notice for the interlopers; the laughs would be hilarious.
Warning, warning, danger! Kieran, Kenny, and Edward, if that is Irma frazzled I wonder what she is like in a panic. Kenny must have rich parents or some patents to be able to afford that phone.I was beyond sure that the correlation between DNA and BIT information existed - I'd proven it! All that really needed to be done was mapping and cross-referencing genes to BIT information, and a simple comparison of exemplars should go a long way toward filling that in... if I could get samples of their DNA. The theory was sound at least.
Can she really feel the unease grow behind her, or is it all in Jamie's head? Hard to tell with her. Melissa glowing like that, handy but lack of control would make her a literal target, easy to spot. Wonder how bad the bullies have messed with her about it.
Jamie back in jail, 6 years in jail, she even said it wasn't meant to be permanent, a mistake. Starting to sound like James was right, she is being railroaded for a mistake she couldn't predict, her mental state probably didn't help. James there and says it isn't over until sentencing, why do I feel he and his employer fixed the case to force her to work for them?
Oh crud, Jamie is one of those with severe mental health issues who refuse to accept they need help, at least by her reaction to stating she needs mental health care. Tells her don't cause any trouble, don't make any waves, and she doesn't think she's in charge of that happening or not.
Wonder how long it will take her to accept it was her fault.Stupid bunny bitch.
It was all her fault. All of this was.
She had stolen Luke from me, and done all this, and ruined my life.
....it had to be her fault.
Because if it wasn't....
if it wasn't her fault... then it was mine.
1 minute before 10 PM and Sharon is in a section of the tunnels, making sure she isn't being monitored and activates a device with a projection.
Someone is a Star Wars fan.The projection was a hologram, all blue, and this time it showed a man in a concealing robe, with only his chin giving the game away. "You're late."
I wonder which offer club uses that room and could someone from it stumble onto one of these meetings accidentally. Sharon reporting to James now.The device on the table was still giving the all clear, but Sharon knew this little safe room could be burned at any time. The only thing it had going for it was it supposedly belonged to another club, who had no idea as to its true purpose.
Does that us include Pete and Irma, I would hate to think they are all false friends just using her for their boss. "Devisor soda machine", well, there is an ice cream machine."Operation mud fall was a complete success. The target is now bound tightly to us, even as others are pushed away. Some level of trust has been obtained, and the next phase of the operation can commence at any time."
Interesting story and look into Jamie Howe's mindset. She is even more messed up than I thought, but at least those last thoughts from her give hope she might realize what she's done. I liked seeing her have friends, stabilizing influences who can help her. I should have expected someone from a branch of ER was behind the threat to Jamie, curious how that will play out. And the most heartbreaking past is Sharon's report to James, it sounds like all of her new close friends are just others working for this boss and being put into a position to manipulate her for his goals.
It does show that Jamie isn't a monster, just a deeply disturbed young woman in need of a lot of help whose own mind is messing with her where she can't see truth from the fictions she has come up with to explain things. I hope the staff at Whateley are able to get her sorted out, I know she will probably never be friends with Tia, but it would be nice if she stopped taunting her and realizes the harm she's done to Luke/Tia's life with her actions.
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Nagrij wrote: Malady... this isnt diedricks. Jamie is not sane. At least, not entirely.
I thought she dricks and has an inferiority complex / shizo...
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It almost sounds as if all of this - including Luke/Tia's transformation, or at least Jamie attacking Luke - was a setup from word one.
The whole story of how she just happened to get brought on to the DNA project so quickly, as a high school freshman and an unproven devisor, is sounding pretty suspicious (TBH, it already did, and I seem to recall that Luke even said so), especially if she was basing the 'faulty' BIT imposition ray primarily on data she was given by the ones in the development group, rather than other outside sources.
But that would be a lot of work to put a single devisor in your pocket... especially since it sounds as if the 'attack' was set up in a way so as to kill Luke, and leave Jamie in even deeper trouble/debt... if this isn't just me spinning paranoid ideas, then someone must have already been anticipating that either Jamie or Tia (or both) would be incredibly valuable assets after all this work was put into them, for some reason. Or else M or someone he's working with is a precog who is using them as pawns in some long-term gambit.
My money is on this WAG being entirely off the mark, but it is fun to theorize, innit?
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Jamie's main mental illness appears to be Narcissistic Personality Disorder potentially combined with Psychopathy.
1. She lacks empathy for others. They are useful at best and evil incarnate at worst.
2. She is flippant with rules and authority. If she can get away with it, she'll do what she wants.
3. She believes she is the smartest, kindest, just generally best human on the earth. And she can't fathom why others don't like her. To her, semi-threatening people is her way of warning them about Tia.
-3a. To her, everyone else is too pathetic, stupid, etc to live without her. The fact that she felt the study group immediately began mourning her absence is an example of this.
4. She wants to win at all costs, even if the victory means nothing except to her. If someone slights her, she "has" to get even. Otherwise, to her, the bad guys win.
5. Nothing can EVER be her fault. Its always someone else's fault or *they* wanted her to fail, etc.
The exception to any of these was Luke. Luke was her rock. He helped Jamie feel normal, especially after she manifested (which may or may not have worsened her condition). With him around, she felt like a better person. Because, secretly, she knows she isn't well. She knows that she isn't a *good* person. That's why she has to constantly put on the "wholesome good girl" act. But to ask for help would mean admitting that she isn't perfect and she can't bring herself to do it.
As a side note, I think the scene with her telling the police to ask her devise why it hurt Luke was more due to her being in shock then anything else. Well, that combined with her Narcissistic Psychopathy. She watched her creation almost kill her boyfriend as well as suffer burns of her own. It probably didn't help that she was also just coming down from a Diedricks episode, which meant she lost all that adrenaline she was running on. Even being caught red-handed, she still can't admit it was her fault, so she just said something to shift the blame. And the only thing left was the devise.
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cprime wrote: One passing thought is that the mysterious 'M' might be the enigmatic Hugo Butler from Laura and the Village (among others). Having a Devi[cs]e that can quickly identify a person with an active MGC would be the dream of the MCO, Gen 1's triangle, or Gen 2's Adventists. For the MCO, imagine the ability to perform a mass scanning of all passengers at an airport to detect all mutants (and detain those who are attempting to sneak past the checkpoint without being properly screened). For the triangle, a similar mass screening could be put to their own ends as demonstrated in Shenanigans - particularly if the scanner can identify what powers any given mutant has . In the case of the Adventists, the motives would be a bit more sinister. As Jamie demonstrated, it's only a small jump from a devise that can scan someone's DNA to a devise that can mutate it. And as Dr. Speers explained in Quantum Suicides, they would have an incentive to induce mutations in a controlled (or uncontrolled) manner.
Well, the actual uses do sort of jump out at one, don't they? Inducing mutation in a controlled or directed manner might save many lives. And removing the ability removes the chance for resistance. However, I do disagree a bit... the jump from detection to mutation is much bigger than it seems.
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Granted that we haven't seen how the full societal side-effects have played out in Gen1 yet, and, that the spell itself requires a unspecified amount of essence to cast, an unspecified level of skill in magic to cast, and, an unspecified level of knowledge of genetics to use the results effectively, which means that the ability to make full use of the spell would be a relatively rare skill-set.
One work-around would be an institute-level organisation set up to use it, but that role could possibly be taken up by Arc.
Barring some form of that work-around, the use of that spell would be relatively uncommon, so a Devise/Gadget-based solution, would be more usable/more "easily effective".
As for the jump from detection of the MGC, to controlled manifestation of the MGC, it would depend upon how incomplete the MGC is for each individual, for the MGC to be able to manifest safely.
Chewy and interesting reading.

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The combination of Diedricks on top of an existing(?) mental condition, is always going to be messy.
Nice take on the inside of the head of someone who is suffering from Diedricks.

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Mister D wrote: It is also interesting to read what's happening from the pov of someone who is neurotypical.
The combination of Diedricks on top of an existing(?) mental condition, is always going to be messy.
Nice take on the inside of the head of someone who is suffering from Diedricks.
Thanks. That part took awhile to get 'right', as you well know.
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Nagrij wrote: Well, the actual uses do sort of jump out at one, don't they? Inducing mutation in a controlled or directed manner might save many lives. And removing the ability removes the chance for resistance. However, I do disagree a bit... the jump from detection to mutation is much bigger than it seems.
Removing the ability to manifest might save the lives of those with mutated MGCs and those who inherit any anti-manifestation alterations. It also might be critical in treating victims of transgenic diseases.
Depending on how much positive pressure there is on the MGC, there would eventually be uses for detecting those who lack a copy of it.
Forum-posted ideas are freely adoptable.
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Nagrij wrote: Malady... this isnt diedricks. Jamie is not sane. At least, not entirely.
I had a working theory that Sharon, Pete, and Irma were imaginary until the encounter with Molten. I listen on text2speech app during my commute so can't always catch all the details.
But darn, I was a bit sad to have that bubble burst.
Thanks for the out-of-the-box backstory. I'd love to read more but don't really enjoy spending time in Jamie's head.
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marie7342231 wrote:
Nagrij wrote: Malady... this isnt diedricks. Jamie is not sane. At least, not entirely.
I had a working theory that Sharon, Pete, and Irma were imaginary until the encounter with Molten. I listen on text2speech app during my commute so can't always catch all the details.
But darn, I was a bit sad to have that bubble burst.
Thanks for the out-of-the-box backstory. I'd love to read more but don't really enjoy spending time in Jamie's head.
Nice take.
I hadn't even thought of that.

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marie7342231 wrote:
Nagrij wrote: Malady... this isnt diedricks. Jamie is not sane. At least, not entirely.
I had a working theory that Sharon, Pete, and Irma were imaginary until the encounter with Molten. I listen on text2speech app during my commute so can't always catch all the details.
But darn, I was a bit sad to have that bubble burst.
Thanks for the out-of-the-box backstory. I'd love to read more but don't really enjoy spending time in Jamie's head.
Jamie's head is an interesting place, but not a fun one.
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She knows, deep down, that it is all her fault. She set her favorite person in the world on fire. It really was an accident, it shouldn't have burned anything, including herself which she disturbingly didn't notice at all. It was supposed to be a temporary condition, although that might have been pure delusion on her part. She wanted to help him immediately after coming out of her bout of mania.
@FlynnDanger: Love the analysis! We know her condition existed well before she manifested to add Diedricks on top of it, so Luke being her sole source of stability make sense too.
Jamie needs the amalgamation of Tia and Amy to take all the blame or she will drown herself in her own guilt. So I think there is a strong hint of Depression (with a capital D) lurking there too. Depression manifests in just as many ways as mutation does.
What I found truly horrifying is she's not even eating, to "keep up" with the Exemplars even as she loathes them, and the people who are using her are manipulating her further away from sanity. It didn't dawn on me until the end with Sharon, but they're reinforcing her alienation/isolation and ramping up her mania to exploit it for their own end. She's constantly "in danger" that they need to guard her from. Sure, some of the threat is probably real, but she doesn't need bodyguards every time she's outside her room. No worse than Tia's. Public opinion was equally split. Evolution Rocks was presented as siding with Jamie, not Tia, but suddenly they're all against her? Very suspicious.
She desperately needs real help. Hopefully someone can break through to make her realize it and finally get her over that hurdle. Tia was equally hurt and traumatized by the "betrayal" and even something like a projection or disguise back to being Luke for a minute or so is way too risky.
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Yeah. The end left me wondering whether Sharon might be the one responsible for sending those death threats in the first place, just to spice up the whole "you need protection" thing.Katssun wrote: and the people who are using her are manipulating her further away from sanity. It didn't dawn on me until the end with Sharon, but they're reinforcing her alienation/isolation and ramping up her mania to exploit it for their own end. She's constantly "in danger" that they need to guard her from. Sure, some of the threat is probably real, but she doesn't need bodyguards every time she's outside her room.
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Kettlekorn wrote:
Yeah. The end left me wondering whether Sharon might be the one responsible for sending those death threats in the first place, just to spice up the whole "you need protection" thing.Katssun wrote: and the people who are using her are manipulating her further away from sanity. It didn't dawn on me until the end with Sharon, but they're reinforcing her alienation/isolation and ramping up her mania to exploit it for their own end. She's constantly "in danger" that they need to guard her from. Sure, some of the threat is probably real, but she doesn't need bodyguards every time she's outside her room.
Why whatever could that operation previously mentioned in the last act be? <.<
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OOOH! Erica's Nano-stuff, is a way to Exemplar without MGC Activation!
Like, how many ways to Exemplify are there without an MGC? There's Spark's XSI... Which is Tech... And then there's all the Magic...
Jobe's Drow Serum...
Jamie could remake her BIT Gun and shoot herself?
We dunno how deep Dr. Bergamot's research went or goes...
Options, options...
- Katssun
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edit: I guess the aspect that she's not entirely sane in the first place might play into her breakthrough in the field.
- Nagrij
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- Mister D
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Nagrij wrote: Jamie has not figured out how BITs work, but she has a theory. A theory which seems to make sense given what she knows of science, and is made from both data and observations. Her tech is based somewhat on that theory, and seems just as much miss as hit... make of that what you will.
She's a Devisor.
'Nuff said.

Measure Twice
- marie7342231
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Nagrij wrote: Jamie has not figured out how BITs work, but she has a theory. A theory which seems to make sense given what she knows of science, and is made from both data and observations. Her tech is based somewhat on that theory, and seems just as much miss as hit... make of that what you will.
I smell a Gen2 authors plan to build a BIT-altering story similar to Gen1 BIT-slicer. Who would line up for the procedure in Gen2's main characters and who would trust Jamie enough to do it? She seems like a Gen2 Jobe just without the success rate and funding.
- Rose Bunny
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marie7342231 wrote:
Nagrij wrote: Jamie has not figured out how BITs work, but she has a theory. A theory which seems to make sense given what she knows of science, and is made from both data and observations. Her tech is based somewhat on that theory, and seems just as much miss as hit... make of that what you will.
I smell a Gen2 authors plan to build a BIT-altering story similar to Gen1 BIT-slicer. Who would line up for the procedure in Gen2's main characters and who would trust Jamie enough to do it? She seems like a Gen2 Jobe just without the success rate and funding.
If she got a BIT changer made, she would be her own first client, as her inferiority complex about her own self-image would demand it.
High-Priestess of the Order of Spirit-Chan