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Question Rain on a Sunny Day
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- mhalpern
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- Malady
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She's leaning sooo far into it she can't see anything good, that it makes me feel like she's a conspiratorial idiot.
All I'm waiting for is her psych eval so we can see her get taken down a notch or something.
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Shipping her with Cody, and hoping that'll mellow her out.
I'm thinking YouNeedToGetLaid applies soo much, maybe.
- mhalpern
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Malady wrote: Wow. I didn't know how much I'd hate Riley's stupidly high levels of mistrust.
She's leaning sooo far info it she can't see anything good, that it makes me feel like she's a conspiratorial idiot.
All I'm waiting for is her psych eval so we can see her get taken down a notch or something.
...
Shipping her with Cody, and hoping that'll mellow her out.
I'm thinking YouNeedToGetLaid applies soo much, maybe.
I dont blame her paranoia, but I am shipping her with Jenny
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Rain on a Sunny Day Part 1 comments
Someone annoyed by a boy staring at them, bored by the train ride, thinks life sucks, good grief, this kid isn't going to have an easy time, are they. Started a blog saying hurtful things just in the hope something cool or interesting would happen, definitely has issues. MCO thugs questioning them, then Epsilon, talk about getting your wish in the worst possible way. Trust Clara, doesn't trust their Mom or Summer, Abbie the cousin who dragged them to go to Whateley, an unusual family from the sounds of it.Sept. 6th, 2016
And the guy who has been looking at her is cute, attracted to him but not interested.
*eyes bug out* Good grief, talk about a rough start. And the guy, Cody, can't take a hint she isn't interested, just sitting down by her. Seeing a Dr. Chambers, hhm, the name sounds familiar but not sure from where.I’d almost been incarcerated, killed and kidnapped. All within a day or so. I had some crazy “Think Tank” chomping at my heels and now I was on a train going to “Mutant High”. I didn’t need to add a boy into the mix.
Tells him she isn't interested and he makes a joke out of it, tells her where he is from and she says she doesn't care, so he says she is rude. No, rude is continuing a conversation when the other person is obviously not in the mood for it. Jerk just shift to be closer to her, I'm really not liking this guy right now. The smell she is getting off of him, I bet he has pheromone-based power and knows it, uses it to manipulate girls like. Ouch, jealous of her sister Summer and all the attention she got because of her looks. And now having to deal with something similar herself it seems.
Yikes, Summer manifested at 11 and it ruined the good relationship she and Summer had. Crap! Her blog ranting about Summer attracted Brody, a kid from a mutant hater family. Bringing her into a group at school called "Liberation", oh brother. This girl is Riley from Business as Usual, the mention of Brody and the "job" sparked my memory. No wonder she is working through the anger with a therapist.
Cody needs to be hit with a clue-by-four to get him to realize Riley wishes to be alone right now. Low-level regen so no more piercings for her, oh well, could be worse. With a family history like that, especially how her parents met and her grandfather part of a heroic heritage as the 3rd Grand Zephyr, Riley not manifesting earlier must have felt like an outsider in her own family.
Ah, the New York incident with the future M3 against Octo-idiot and his goons.
Using snark on a guy like Cody fails 9 out of 10 times in my experience. 6 siblings! I hope some of Cody's siblings were twins or triplets. Riley's grandfather on her mom's side was a criminal, talk about the black sheep of the family. *hits head on desk* Never compare one child to another, it leads to resentment and pushes them away from you. Her mother needs a good lecture about this.“I would love to be a hero!”
I smirked. “I’m sure you’d look great in spandex.”
He smiled big.
Shit.
That wasn’t supposed to be a compliment.
Damn my snark.
And damn it, why am I blushing now?
At the train station in Dunwich and the place reminds Riley of the city outside of the farm, interesting. *blinks* Riley can't sweat anymore, bet the power testers are going to have fun trying to figure out why. Riley, trying to sneak off from Whateley staff is never a smart thing. And the DPA sent Special Agents Carter and Grace because they knew she would pull something like this, Tony sent them, good man.
Bwahaha, Mom thinks someone at Whateley will help curve Riley's rebellious streak, she don't know this school well, do she. Riley sure is underestimating what a good fog can do in the right situations.
Seesh, this family sounds messed up, that is some royalty level BS, trying to shape their lives to be perfect superheroes from the moment they manifest, not even asking them if it is what they want.In my family, it was like you weren’t a person anymore as soon as you manifested.
I now had no say in my own future.
Its the chief reason why I ran away.
No one ever asked me what I wanted.
Just avoid the Spy Kids at school.A debrief? Was this a spy flick?
The name is Spencer, Riley Spencer.
Doo doo doo.
Great, a mind reader with a sense of humor, just what a teen like Riley doesn't need to deal with right now.Agent Grace raised an eyebrow, almost as if she could read my mind.
“Of course I can’t” she deadpanned.
Holy shit.
She smirked and gave me a wink.
I have to wonder what Clara forgot to question Riley about. An unofficial visit, just what is going on here? I would be ready to bolt once I saw that car myself, they could have learned about Tony from various sources and be lying to her. An attractive Asian girl who makes Riley question dating her who has golden eyes, and named Jenny. Is this Clara's little brother Jimmy turned Jenny?
Jenny run into a bit of trouble and has a DPA escort to Whateley, sure sounds like Clara's little sibling. Summer ratted Riley out to their mom that she had manifested, figures.
Good to know the runes will disappear when she has more control. Too exposed there, so Jenny, Riley, or both of them are targets. Don't tell me Jenny also has Epsilon after her.A few days before I ran away, Mom drew the runes all over my arms. She called them channeling runes and told me they’d help center my mind and make it easier to focus. They were temporary, meant to disappear when I had more control. I would have complained but they were kind of cool looking, not that I told her that of course.
Tina Royce in the safehouse, someone Riley met when Gretchen arrived on their farm 10 years ago. Uh oh, when Tina says they need to have a chat it can't be about anything good. Curiouser and curiouser, Tina is Clara's boss so who are they working for?
Darn, leave me curious as to who they work for.“I can’t tell you who I work for but rest assured we’re not your enemy and we do have your best interests at heart. We know the basics of your situation but in order to truly help you, we need to know everything about Epsilon and the deal you made with them.”
Brody Phelps is dead, Epsilon had him killed for breaking the "deal", psychopaths.
At least Riley knows now Epsilon doesn't play around. And cleaners sent in to cover up the truth about what happened at the MCO safe house, rats.“He hung himself in his cell. At least that’s what we were led to believe.”
Suicide?
“You think he was murdered?”
She nodded. “There were telltale signs of a struggle. The timeline fits too. It happened minutes after that Epsilon lawyer left the two of you in that motel room.”
D'oh! Fugitive at large when not at Whateley, disguise including a wig to wear when not at school, just great. The MCO pulling even more crap now, I wish between Gen 1 and 2 when they were weakened the military would have thought to finish them off. Great, Riley doesn't know what Epsilon wants with mutants and nor does Tina or the organization she and Clara work for. I hate mysteries with little or no clues, hope more clues show up soon.
Impossible to lie to Tina, I pity her future children. Dang, able to calm someone's anger, wonder how useful that is if she can get in range to use it on a rager.
I hope somehow the relationship between Riley and Summer can be repaired.“Also, forgive your sister, she was just trying to help...”
Yeah right!
Sit still for the rest of the day, wonder why they got those new orders. Shoot, wish I had a kitchen this nice. And read Riley's aura so knows she is grumpy, hhm. Fast reflexes on Jenny.
Eep, an Avatar with a Spirit who thinks she can just use Jenny whenever she wants, this is trouble waiting to happen.She sighed. “Mǎo, what did I say about talking through me!”
Mau, who was Mau?
“Sorry, Gōngzhǔ” she said again.
The Great Tiger of the West, one of the 4 great spirits of Japan, Jenny has a powerful spirit in her. Jenny Fairchild, very pretty name. And Clara's sister, was it her spirit which made her a changeling?“Allow me to properly introduce myself” she said, after swallowing. “I am Jiaying Wu, Avatar of the Great Mǎo Bái Hǔ.”
Sept. 7th 2016 4am
Having information about something and experience in the situation are two different things, Riley. And planning to try and find Gretchen in New York and stay with her, greatly underestimating the difficulty of the task.My mother would often tell me that my sister needed more attention because she “couldn’t get dressed without falling down” and I need a therapist because I couldn’t control my anger. I needed the runes on my arms because I couldn’t control my powers. I needed to go to Whateley because I would be safe there. It was all a load of shit. I learned a long time ago to take care of myself. I knew the risks too. Besides, its not like I didn’t know what to do. Gretchen used to tell me what it was like on the streets and I’m pretty sure I could handle it.
Trying to sneak off again and stopped by Jenny, you aren't a good lier, Riley.
Hey, listen to Mao, he speaks with wisdom and from experience.It sighed. “Running from your problems never solves anything. I should know, I have done my fair share of running. No matter how far you run, you will eventually be caught.”
I like Mao, he could teach some students at Whateley important things. Hehe, poor Riley blushing while looking at Jenny.She smiled. “There are many kinds of warriors in this world. Some wield swords, other words. Some are strong and some have a different kind of strength.”
“I’m not strong...”
“You’re wrong” she said, walking slowly toward me.
*jaw drops open alongside Riley* Just how old is Mao? Ouch, no wonder Riley is obsessed with finding Gretchen, someone who is like her big sister just up and disappears from their lives, cutting all contact.“I told her that no matter how hard you think the world is, there’s always a light at the end of your path, sometimes that light leads you where you want to go and sometimes it leads you back to where you came from.”
“So you’re saying that Whateley is my path?”
“That is not for me to say. This is your path. All I can do is give you wisdom on your journey.”
I laughed. “Sounds like Buddha stuff”
She smiled. “He was my prized pupil.”
Man, we've met wise characters in the Whateley stories before but Mao might just be at the top right now.“You are still very young, you have the rest of your life to live. Don’t try to live it all in one moment, savor time like a friend. The path before you is long and though I do not know where it leads, I can tell you that the journey is worth the wait.”
Aww, poor Jenny doesn't remember what happens when Mao is in control, waking up like that sucks. Aww, poor Jenny embarrassed to be in front of Riley in such a state of dress. Sticking around to help out Jenny, there are worse reasons to go to Whateley.
Carter grumpy due to "babysitting" duty, don't tell me the MCO was monitoring the train to Dunwich and that is why they had to hold for the day. Agent Grace needs to learn not to read people's thoughts without their permission so much. Going to Whateley doesn't mean you have to become a hero, wait 'til you learn the truth about the school, Riley. We have seen several spirits who are powerful, but even when Aunghadhail took control over Fey she still remembers what Aunghadhail does and says. Mao is a true mystery in that aspect.
Crud, the campgrounds or the bridge on the way to Whateley would be the perfect places to set up an ambush. Ack! Riley having to endure a girly girl sister like Summer forcing her to shop and buying her clothes she doesn't want. And Jenny didn't grow up a girl, doesn't know what most of the stuff her mom bought is, should get along with Riley well.
Agent Carter needs anger management classes. And Agent Grace got what she deserved for reading Riley's mind without her permission once again, that image, yikes.
And another who can sense such things has come to Whateley in the new generation. No moisture in the air despite it having just rained, okay, gone from creepy to mental alarms going off.“This weather is unnatural and there is something here, something that does not belong.”
“They say its Eldritch in origin” said Agent Grace with a chuckle as she stepped past us.
“Demons” growled the Tiger spirit.
Hhm, the weather and atmosphere changing like that, do the wards of Whateley have an effect this far out?
Okay, very curious what Jenny was like before. Doesn't trust Mao because he is hiding something, good, ancient spirits tend to have plans and secrets that screw with mortal lives. Coming upon the main gate into Whateley and no ambush along the way, guess the MCO is too scared of what Whateley would do if they acted so close to the school.She scoffed. “No one’s perfect. Before all this” she said, waving at her body. “I was a bit of an asshole too. I was arrogant and thought the world revolved around me. I did and said some pretty stupid things. Some very wise people helped me put things into perspective. Its not easy and it will take time but I’ll help if you want it?”
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Malady wrote: Wow. I didn't know how much I'd hate Riley's stupidly high levels of mistrust.
She's leaning sooo far info it she can't see anything good, that it makes me feel like she's a conspiratorial idiot.
All I'm waiting for is her psych eval so we can see her get taken down a notch or something.
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Shipping her with Cody, and hoping that'll mellow her out.
I'm thinking YouNeedToGetLaid applies soo much, maybe.
You don't like Riley

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Other than that, she seems to have a good fashion sense, be smart, and have a good sense of the world, among other things.
She isn't taking the fact that she apparently requires guarding against mysterious entities as sufficiently worrying, I feel.
I also think I'd like her combat prowess, if I remember enough about it.
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Malady wrote: I dislike her constant mistrust.
Other than that, she seems to have a good fashion sense, be smart, and have a good sense of the world, among other things.
She isn't taking the fact that she apparently requires guarding against mysterious entities as sufficiently worrying, I feel.
I also think I'd like her combat prowess, if I remember enough about it.
That's one of the issues that she'll have to talk about with Dr. Bellows.
When you are deep inside a psychological frame of reference, then that is what is real.
It may just be your personal flavour of reality, or, it may be that you have noticed something that other people haven't seen yet.
Riley definiiely needs some form of external "Reality Check", which in this instance was provided by Miao.
There's also hints of depression there, written from the inside looking out.
Nice work.

Looking forward to the next episode.

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mhalpern wrote:
Malady wrote: Wow. I didn't know how much I'd hate Riley's stupidly high levels of mistrust.
She's leaning sooo far info it she can't see anything good, that it makes me feel like she's a conspiratorial idiot.
All I'm waiting for is her psych eval so we can see her get taken down a notch or something.
...
Shipping her with Cody, and hoping that'll mellow her out.
I'm thinking YouNeedToGetLaid applies soo much, maybe.
I dont blame her paranoia, but I am shipping her with Jenny
I think its a bit too early for that lol.
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Enemyoffun wrote:
mhalpern wrote:
Malady wrote: Wow. I didn't know how much I'd hate Riley's stupidly high levels of mistrust.
She's leaning sooo far info it she can't see anything good, that it makes me feel like she's a conspiratorial idiot.
All I'm waiting for is her psych eval so we can see her get taken down a notch or something.
...
Shipping her with Cody, and hoping that'll mellow her out.
I'm thinking YouNeedToGetLaid applies soo much, maybe.
I dont blame her paranoia, but I am shipping her with Jenny
I think its a bit too early for that lol.
Its never too early for shipping provided the characters are old enough to be thinking about relationships, take the RWBY FNDM for instance not only do ships start as soon as a character is introduced, but BMBLB started with the RED trailer...
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I'm NOT happy that your comments about Riley are worded the way they are. I know people don't like some characters, but I also know that I'm not about to let comments like that run off an author. We dealt with too much of that crap with Gen1 authors. It's not going to happen again. There are ways to indicate your issues with a story without sounding hateful. As mothers used to say, "if you can't say something nice, don't say anything". Think about applying that here.
On another issue, how many of you commenting about Riley have read "Business as Usual", where Riley was introduced in that bad situation that goes a long way to explain her paranoia? If you haven't, you should.
Again, I am NOT going to stand for comments or anything that discourage our authors.
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ElrodW wrote: ...
Uh... You're talking to me, right?
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mhalpern wrote:
Enemyoffun wrote:
mhalpern wrote:
Malady wrote: Wow. I didn't know how much I'd hate Riley's stupidly high levels of mistrust.
She's leaning sooo far info it she can't see anything good, that it makes me feel like she's a conspiratorial idiot.
All I'm waiting for is her psych eval so we can see her get taken down a notch or something.
...
Shipping her with Cody, and hoping that'll mellow her out.
I'm thinking YouNeedToGetLaid applies soo much, maybe.
I dont blame her paranoia, but I am shipping her with Jenny
I think its a bit too early for that lol.
Its never too early for shipping provided the characters are old enough to be thinking about relationships, take the RWBY FNDM for instance not only do ships start as soon as a character is introduced, but BMBLB started with the RED trailer...
Riley is about 15. Jenny looks older but she's the same age. I'm assuming Cody is about that age too. I think that's too young for teenagers to get laid in my opinion.
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Enemyoffun wrote: Riley is about 15. Jenny looks older but she's the same age. I'm assuming Cody is about that age too. I think that's too young for teenagers to get laid in my opinion.
Huh. Well, I'm surprised. *shrugs*
Hmm... *Wonders whose the youngest couple we have in canon...*
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Malady wrote:
Enemyoffun wrote: Riley is about 15. Jenny looks older but she's the same age. I'm assuming Cody is about that age too. I think that's too young for teenagers to get laid in my opinion.
Huh. Well, I'm surprised. *shrugs*
Hmm... *Wonders whose the youngest couple we have in canon...*
Well to be fair, Cody was added for one reason and one reason only

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Enemyoffun wrote:
Malady wrote:
Enemyoffun wrote: Riley is about 15. Jenny looks older but she's the same age. I'm assuming Cody is about that age too. I think that's too young for teenagers to get laid in my opinion.
Huh. Well, I'm surprised. *shrugs*
Hmm... *Wonders whose the youngest couple we have in canon...*
Well to be fair, Cody was added for one reason and one reason only

Well, they don't have to get in bed together. A plain romance is nice too.
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Enemyoffun wrote:
mhalpern wrote:
Enemyoffun wrote:
mhalpern wrote:
Malady wrote: Wow. I didn't know how much I'd hate Riley's stupidly high levels of mistrust.
She's leaning sooo far info it she can't see anything good, that it makes me feel like she's a conspiratorial idiot.
All I'm waiting for is her psych eval so we can see her get taken down a notch or something.
...
Shipping her with Cody, and hoping that'll mellow her out.
I'm thinking YouNeedToGetLaid applies soo much, maybe.
I dont blame her paranoia, but I am shipping her with Jenny
I think its a bit too early for that lol.
Its never too early for shipping provided the characters are old enough to be thinking about relationships, take the RWBY FNDM for instance not only do ships start as soon as a character is introduced, but BMBLB started with the RED trailer...
Riley is about 15. Jenny looks older but she's the same age. I'm assuming Cody is about that age too. I think that's too young for teenagers to get laid in my opinion.
They are going to a school where a significant portion of the population has much higher than average (for teenagers) hormone production...
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The reaction to the character is understandable, Rikey is a complicated angsty teen. A lot of Grainne's writing is focused on her -rage- and how she's trying to deal with it. It's no difference than Ayla's detached indifference. Maybe one thing we should remember is that when we are using hard emphatic words "like bitch" it's not what we mean. Riley to me comes off a bit bratty and likely dealing with her own shit. She's likely going to make stupid decisions cuz 'tool tip' kids don't understand the full consequence of their decisions.
Just some food for thought.
"I can only conclude that I'm paying off karma at a vastly accelerated rate."
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ShadowedSin wrote: So as someone who ships her own characters hardcore I can say that there is a definite reason why some of the authors may not do so. First, these kids are underage - that's squick territory right there. So I can easily see where EOF is coming from.
The reaction to the character is understandable, Riley is a complicated angsty teen. A lot of Grainne's writing is focused on her -rage- and how she's trying to deal with it. It's no difference than Ayla's detached indifference. Maybe one thing we should remember is that when we are using hard emphatic words "like bitch" it's not what we mean. Riley to me comes off a bit bratty and likely dealing with her own shit. She's likely going to make stupid decisions cuz 'tool tip' kids don't understand the full consequence of their decisions.
Just some food for thought.
The angst in Riley was all I was trying to convey. I guess I didn't really do a good enough job on it. She's a girl who feels her mother abandoned her for her prettier sister. She's a typical angry teenager. I find that I got the anger across well enough but apparently I made her a little unlikable in the process

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I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
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Enemyoffun wrote: The angst in Riley was all I was trying to convey. I guess I didn't really do a good enough job on it. She's a girl who feels her mother abandoned her for her prettier sister. She's a typical angry teenager. I find that I got the anger across well enough but apparently I made her a little unlikable in the process
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Typical? Not so much for the crowd I was with when I was 15. However, long-standing resentment is rarely likable, and since she's 15, not 51, she shouldn't know how to handle it.
If there are people disappointed that they can't comfortably project themselves into Riley's place, EOF and Riley are doing their job well. No one should be obligated to be be a carbon copy of the reader.
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Astrodragon wrote: Its only been one story, giver her a while to become a more settled character.
This is her second story, fwiw.
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null0trooper wrote:
Enemyoffun wrote: The angst in Riley was all I was trying to convey. I guess I didn't really do a good enough job on it. She's a girl who feels her mother abandoned her for her prettier sister. She's a typical angry teenager. I find that I got the anger across well enough but apparently I made her a little unlikable in the process
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Typical? Not so much for the crowd I was with when I was 15.
Then you were lucky. Or simply unaware. Such angry teenagers were not uncommon in the 50s/60s when I was in that age range, nor were they uncommon around the First Gen time frame, when my nieces and nephews went through that age range.
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joreymay wrote:
Astrodragon wrote: Its only been one story, giver her a while to become a more settled character.
This is her second story, fwiw.
First story, 2nd part
I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
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Astrodragon wrote:
joreymay wrote:
Astrodragon wrote: Its only been one story, giver her a while to become a more settled character.
This is her second story, fwiw.
First story, 2nd part
Technically, its her second story but first one as the POV.
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Wavehead wrote: I can confirm that I have known more than one person behave just like Riley and my honest opinion is that the Author is doing a very fine job of showing just how mixed up, irrational and just down right stupid they can be. Life experiences can make or break young people much more often than those, who have never experienced the level of trauma Riley has had, ever realise !
I know I've had quite a few life experiences that have helped shame and mold me to who I am today. Most of them NOT very good ones I'm sad to say.
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And her clear intelligence to be able to do it, but just unapplied, is really sad...
So, yeah... Really waiting for the psychotherapy for things to get better.
I don't think I said that before?
... And now I'm wondering what the inside of Summer's head is like...
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Riley is an unreliable narrator. She's telling a story based on her own thoughts and beliefs. Its not paranoia, its the angry ravings a teenage girl who feels like her family has pushed her aside in favor of her much prettier older sister. The whole story is clearly not being told here because we're only getting it from Riley's point of view and honestly, we're NEVER going to get it from anyone else in her family. Riley's words are the window into her world. She might appear as a character in other stories written by me but her family will never be the main characters in their own story. That's not to say that they won't appear, they're definitely going to appear...especially Summer.
So take anything she has to say about her family with a half truth. There's more to the story then she knows...
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Enemyoffun wrote: I didn't think I needed to explain this anymore but I guess I don't have any choice.
Riley is an unreliable narrator. She's telling a story based on her own thoughts and beliefs. Its not paranoia, its the angry ravings a teenage girl who feels like her family has pushed her aside in favor of her much prettier older sister. The whole story is clearly not being told here because we're only getting it from Riley's point of view and honestly, we're NEVER going to get it from anyone else in her family. Riley's words are the window into her world. She might appear as a character in other stories written by me but her family will never be the main characters in their own story. That's not to say that they won't appear, they're definitely going to appear...especially Summer.
So take anything she has to say about her family with a half truth. There's more to the story then she knows...
To repeat my comments from the other thread,
This sort of early reaction is always going to be a problem, when you are sharing stories in an episodic manner.
The smallest incidents in the early episodes will be blown out of proportion in comparison to the later episodes.
Add in the Unreliable Narrator trope for the reasons of Incomplete Information on the part of the character, due to their limited viewpoint, and, the Incomplete Information on the part of the readers, due to them not knowing the full story, and this sort of dance appears.
It's called the communication breakdown.
Normally i try not to comment upon Work-In-Progress, but I'm looking forward to the next part of the tale.
The full story is not published yet, so any comments are just speculation.
Patience makes the arrival sweeter.

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Now, I'm wondering if we'll ever see a family friend or someone else close to both parties, to corroborate, Riley's POV...
Or if we'll always be wondering about the presence of possible in accuracies in Riley's retelling of events due to relying on her and only her.
But, given how much Riley doesn't even like her family's friends, the Good Neighbors... And ugh, that name gives me Fair Folk vibes so bad.
Anyways, don't think we'll be hearing anything from the GNs... So, the only sympathetic POV might be a family villain, that intimately knows you like the best arch-enemies, or something.
As compared to an empathetic POV of a friend who cares about you, but doesn't really "know".
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I had a feeling Samantha was going to be at Whateley but did not expect Riley to encounter her just yet so that has created quite a cliff hanger for me lol
Firefly and Jenny are both intriguing characters, I’m hoping we will get to see more of Firefly in future chapters as well as Jenny.
Hoping the next part is soon

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Wavehead wrote: I’ve been looking forward to part two for some time, greatly enjoyed this second part
I had a feeling Samantha was going to be at Whateley but did not expect Riley to encounter her just yet so that has created quite a cliff hanger for me lol
Firefly and Jenny are both intriguing characters, I’m hoping we will get to see more of Firefly in future chapters as well as Jenny.
Hoping the next part is soon
Firefly is actually not my character. She's Elrodw's character. She's appeared in other stories, it a small role

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Rain on a Sunny Day Part 2 comments
Riley's thoughts about Whateley due to not manifesting sooner, yikes, hope it doesn't mar her interactions with other students. Sending there as her punishment, Riley, you need some therapy to work out your issues. Your Mom sent you there to get help in controlling your powers.Sept. 7th, 2016
Oh boy, thinking about dealing with security as a challenge, Riley is going to be seeing the headmaster or assistant headmaster sooner rather than later at this rate. Has me curious too, what aren't they telling Riley? What makes Agent Marcus' falter for a moment when looking at Jenny? Some connection we don't know about yet or is it something else? Possibly something to do with Mao, hhm.
Looking at someone with disappointment like that, if Carson was still around Agent Marcus would have gotten chewed out, Whateley is a place for second [and third, and fourth...] chances. Gretchen tried to get expelled, now what is that all about?
Officer Daniels, so young, so eager, so going to learn the hard way what being in security at Whateley is like. Oh, Riley, you naive girl, you can't control if you like someone, life is what happens when you make plans and the universe laughs at you. Gets sick if cut off from fresh air for too long by being indoors, now that is harsh. Officer Daniels really wants to do his job, I would just let Jenny carry her own luggage since she is that strong.
Oh boy, Riley seeing Jenny getting praise and treated nice, while she gets scolded, despite thinking to herself she didn't care this could be bad. Riley, always pay attention to the tour, you don't want to get lost on campus. Crystal Hall, impossible not to be impressed by that structure. And Riley stating those things about Jenny in her thoughts, hhm.
They both have to be seen by the Headmaster, okay, this seems a lot more important than first expected. This is Riley being happy, *eyes dart back and forth*, do we want to see her unhappy? Okay, Daniels isn't that new at Whateley if he is calling the Headmaster's office a no-fun place.
To hear about Mrs. Carson and not get to meet her, poor Riley. Gah! Their own mother spelled the house like that just so they wouldn't get into their Christmas presents early or if she knew they were guilty of something, that is so wrong. Doing that to the hallway before the Headmaster's office at Whateley Academy is just cruel.
And Riley recognizes Mazarin because her Grandfather used to fight him when he was still an active supervillain, heh.He looked more like a supervillain than a principal, though both tended to go hand-in-hand. Yet, there was something about him, something I couldn’t place. He seemed awfully familiar to me, like a face just on the corner of your memory.
Her Grandfather was part of the Glorious Aces and fought against the Syndicate, and Mazarin was a thorn in his side. Those must have been fun tales to her growing up. Mazarin used to run the Syndicate, dang. And a scar on his neck from his one and only encounter with Riley's Grandfather, that is some Golden Age level tale there.
I want to know Jenny's circumstances, so curious right now. A good assessment of Mao, most spirits are dangerous to deal with, even the good ones. Agent Marcus being here was a coincidence, sure, and the universe plays dice.
Gretchen's lessons have served you well, Riley. A Cult is connected to Jenny somehow, oh boy. And Mazarin a little scared of Mao, now that is something to ponder.Mazarin was a Master Bullshitter.
Oh crud, trying to put Riley in Dickinson with Summer, talk about bad ideas, they should find out the relationship between siblings before placing them in the same dorm. Oh god, her mother and her shrink think it would do her good, her shrink isn't that good to suggest such a thing at this stage. Going to Whitman and Jenny wishes to go with her and be her roommate, this just got a lot better for Riley.
The campus rules and regulations, I suggest reading it front to back as soon as possible. A package for Jenny at the security office, don't tell me Mao has some artifacts which belong to Jenny now.
Dying from a terminal illness, ouch, guess even mutants have to worry about that.He chuckled again. “We’re friends, well not enemies anymore. After we fought and it ended, life took its course. I eventually retired and went legit. Henry helped me do that. We used to keep in touch but...”
Okay, Eclipse might make a play for Riley while she is at Whateley, this is bad, they are either that powerful or that foolish. Report anything out of the ordinary, great, give her a hard job to do at a school like Whateley until she learns what is and isn't normal for the school.
Wanting friends but having that attitude, Riley has chosen a hard path. Jenny's package has raised some questions, good grief, what is it? There so early most are settling in or sleeping, that is really early in the morning for Whateley.
Now I want to smack her parents upside the head that she is reacting like this to everyone having her best interests at heart.Everyone here had my best interests at heart and it freaked me out.
Connected to the weather and more control of her powers when it rains, whoa. If this is hinting at her true potential, that is major. Bwahaha, Riley's snark, and sass are perfect. And yes, Downward Spiral does sound like the name of a band, be surprised if it hasn't been used as such yet.
Bwahaha, too good. One way to get Riley motivated to move fast, tell her the nearby building is Dickinson. Ah, Whitman, can't wait for Riley to meet the other students inside. Nice that it reminds her a lot of her grandfather's home.I’ve been told on more than one occasion that I’m an acquired taste. I’ve never really understood that phrase to be honest. Did it mean that someone was going to try licking me?
Alina Everette, Assistant House Mother, wonder if the girls try to give her a fashion makeover sometime. Wait, almost 20 years ago, yet looks to be in mid-20s, definitely an Exemplar or some form of slowed aging.
Nice view of the courtyard at least. This is Mischief's old room, wonder if she left any surprises behind to discover."Here it is, room 215” she said with a happy smile. “This is Wing number 1, Janette is your RA”.
Mao taking over Jenny like that is a huge red light warning to me, not the kind of spirit to be trusted completely ever, how far might Mao go in protecting Jenny? Firefly, first name Linette, the poor girl is so nervous. A tour of the school, pay attention this time, Riley, be nice to Linette.
Braided pigtails on someone who already looks so young, anyone who picks on Linette will probably have to deal with more than a few students acting as her big brothers and sisters. Oh boy, Riley meeting Shisa and assuming she is a cat.
Yeah, finding that out is a bit of a shock. Boy, when Ayla upgraded all the dorms years ago she went all out. *hits head on desk* Her mother is the one who needs therapy, you don't compare children like that! Lost concentration equals fog billowing from her body, eep. Riley being nice to Linette, aww. To think Gretchen taught Riley all those things.Linette giggled again. “Shisa is not a pet...”
I blinked.
Holy shit.
Ouch, Gretchen just leaving without a goodbye changed Riley, started shutting people out. Aww, Linette reminds Riley of herself when younger, poor girl is scared around crowds it seems. Linette's roommate is Darcy aka Clobberizer, wonder if she can help Linette come out of her shell. Learning about Whateley from Gretchen and seeing it now, you have to wonder how much has changed in the years since Gretchen went there.
And Riley knowing Poe's secret, wonder how Mrs. Horton is going to take it when she learns of this development. Huh, Mom had a friend in Poe who told her the secret years later, so that is why she helped Gretchen out. Uh oh, anyone badmouths a changeling when Riley is around and a fight is going to happen, high odds with some of the students right now.
I can relate to Riley, never liked the school cafeteria, the crowds, and especially the noise level. That whole incident with Samantha Ridley, what Brody and his crew did and tried to do, still can't believe what Riley's family did to keep her out of trouble, stuff like that seems so corrupt. Riley, sometimes teens do things for reasons they don't understand, you did the right thing when it truly counted and that's what matters.
Why does Riley remember her mother starting to choke when she didn't before? Is something messing with her memories and thoughts? Riley snapped out of it by Jenny's presence, crying and stops, dang, just what all happened back then? *blinks* Jenny doesn't know where the package came from so security is holding onto it, did the Cult send it?
No! Not Summer, not this soon. Darn it, Jenny, you should have let Riley run. Having to introduce Jenny to Summer, Summer is the kind of girl who is so perky it is obnoxious. Breeze, her codename is Breeze, gag me. Summer already rubs me the wrong way, but their mother even more for playing favorites. Their cousin Abbie ratted Riley out to Summer, she could have lasted at least a few days before Summer found out if not for Abbie, arrgggh!"What is it?”
"I sense something, something that I have not sensed...”
Ok, it was a Star Wars reference but it fit well.
Except it wasn’t Obi Wan coming toward me.
It was Darth Vader.
*hits head on desk* Summer's way of talking is like nails on a chalkboard to be, using totes is painful. You just know "Perfect Daughter" Summer is going to tell their mother about Riley switching to Whitman, their mother needs to not try and force things like this. Now I truly understand why Riley didn't want to come to Whateley, Summer is just too much.
The strange long wooden box, don't tell me that is the package that should be with security still.
Aww, youngest of 3 and feeling like an outsider, poor Jenny. Why did Jenny make that face at the mention of hand-me-downs from Clara, is Jenny a changeling and was originally going to Poe?She laughed. “Not always. I’m the youngest by quite a few years. Clara and Brian had this connection when I showed up. I always kinda felt like the outsider looking in. Then I tried to be like them, doing what they do. Its not easy living in their shadow, especially Clara.”
Jenny has stripes on her arms, huh, interesting. And all that before 3 in the afternoon, busy day indeed. Of all the luck, Samantha is her neighbor in the hallway, and she bolts before Riley can even say anything. I hope they are able to talk things over in the future.
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mhalpern wrote: A lot of issues need to be addressed
I'm not sure what that means? Grammar issues? Story issues? Riley's issues?
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Mister D wrote: I'm guessing Riley's issues, which will make for some interesting scenes with her counsellors. but also her family's issues with control, that come from running the superhero-ing as a business.
Just because someone is a little crazy does not mean that they are wrong.
Eventually I will explore her family issues more. Especially the dynamic between her and her sister. Yes, she defiintely NEEDS a counselor too

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Enemyoffun wrote:
mhalpern wrote: A lot of issues need to be addressed
I'm not sure what that means? Grammar issues? Story issues? Riley's issues?
Riley's issues, sorry
Any Bad Ideas I have and microscene OC character stories are freely adoptable.
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mhalpern wrote:
Enemyoffun wrote:
mhalpern wrote: A lot of issues need to be addressed
I'm not sure what that means? Grammar issues? Story issues? Riley's issues?
Riley's issues, sorry
Yes, she has PLENTY of those to work out

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SDom
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SDom111 wrote: Riley isnt the first teen to have these issues. But when you throw in all of the family issues that she with her Mom and sister with what turns out to be the true enemy of the one family member she gets along with that is a potential ticking mess. I look forward to seeing where you take not only Riley in this story but also how you bring in her family especially her mom. Riley is by no means innocent here but neither are her paretns, especially her mom. I wonder which so call Therapist you are going to assign to her. I hope the next chapter isnt too far off.
SDom
Technically Riley's Mom has appeared in a story, so has Riley and Summer

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Enemyoffun wrote:
SDom111 wrote: Riley isnt the first teen to have these issues. But when you throw in all of the family issues that she with her Mom and sister with what turns out to be the true enemy of the one family member she gets along with that is a potential ticking mess. I look forward to seeing where you take not only Riley in this story but also how you bring in her family especially her mom. Riley is by no means innocent here but neither are her paretns, especially her mom. I wonder which so call Therapist you are going to assign to her. I hope the next chapter isnt too far off.
SDom
Technically Riley's Mom has appeared in a story, so has Riley and Summer. Just not this generation. As for the rest of her family, you might see them more in a bit.
Hint to direct our search?
Any Bad Ideas I have and microscene OC character stories are freely adoptable.
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mhalpern wrote:
Enemyoffun wrote:
SDom111 wrote: Riley isnt the first teen to have these issues. But when you throw in all of the family issues that she with her Mom and sister with what turns out to be the true enemy of the one family member she gets along with that is a potential ticking mess. I look forward to seeing where you take not only Riley in this story but also how you bring in her family especially her mom. Riley is by no means innocent here but neither are her paretns, especially her mom. I wonder which so call Therapist you are going to assign to her. I hope the next chapter isnt too far off.
SDom
Technically Riley's Mom has appeared in a story, so has Riley and Summer. Just not this generation. As for the rest of her family, you might see them more in a bit.
Hint to direct our search?
Look at the end of Hit and Run part 1

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Rain on a Sunny Day part 3 comments
Riley is woken up by such a noise and Jenny is already awake and dressed for a run. Riley is rooming with a...morning person. Soccer player before manifesting, Riley isn't going to be sleeping in if that noise happens every morning. Arrgh, the suspense hasn't been broken yet, Jenny still hasn't opened that box.Sept. 8th, 2016 (5:20 am)---Whitman
Yikes, growth spurt upon manifesting, Riley sporting a small C cup and hates it, she is, unfortunately, going to get a lot of attention. Jenny is all flustered, so cute, whoever she ends up dating is lucky. Ouch, doing farm work actually made her feel useful and cousin Brent showing up and taking them all over, Riley has had it rough since Gretchen left. An hour run to check out the surrounding area, just remember the rules about not going into certain areas.
All that anger Riley has to deal with, glad she has Dr. Chambers to help her.
One, I think Samantha might have run away for a different reason. Two, the school won't go advertising her past like that, so unless Samantha knows about it I doubt it will come out.I deserved every bit of fear and hate that girl had toward me too. After she ran off, I seriously considered bailing. It was only a matter of time before my part in her incident was exposed. I was an H1 sympathizer in a school of mutants.
At least Jenny got Riley not to sulk in their room, though Samantha's friend glaring like that, I wonder what Samantha has told about Riley already. Yikes, to fall asleep and the next thing wakes up to an alarm so loud, good thing Riley doesn't have enhanced hearing beyond her exemplar nature.
So early only she and Jenny are the only ones awake in the cottage, 5:20 am is way too early to wake up imo. Ouch, this "disorder" sucks, sounds a lot like a form of social anxiety. *gags* What Riley's mom does to her, not even mentioning her to others unless she has to, makes me sick to my stomach. Any child would be a mess being treated this way. A natural defense against water so doesn't feel hot or cold from it, very useful.
Guess she hasn't learned how to use it to remove water from her hair yet.If I wanted, I could make it so not a single bit of water ever touched my skin. Combine that with my ability to generate fog and pull water from the air, it was easy to see how I was labeled a TK.
Wait, her mother won't let Riley see old videos of her father, now that is just cruel to a child. Tidal Wave, her father died a hero before she even got to know him.
Instead of cherishing the children the man you loved left you, Riley's mom just sees her as a source of pain, her mother needs counseling past-tense.Aunt Jessica once told me that Mom was different after Dad was gone. Now she didn’t imply that Mom resented either me or Summer but I could see it sometimes. I think we reminded her of him. In a way, we were a piece of him. Now a sane person would cherish that but I think it pained my mother to look at us. Me, more so than Summer. More than once, I was told how much I resembled Dad. Sure Summer got his blonde hair but I had his eyes. At least I did before they turned their current color. According to Uncle Will, Dad’s brother, I got his stubbornness too. That little bit made me proud.
Oops, she can't feel hot from water but can feel cold, getting angry at her mom and venting made her cause the water to become ice cold. Ooo, she figured out the trick of removing the water from herself already, nice. And Tanya sees her do that, seems Riley met her years ago at a Bar B Que party her family hosted, even remembers Tanya. Friends at 7 and not see each other again until 14, yet Tanya recognizes Riley after a moment. Both in Whitman too, fate arranged this, Riley needs more friends at Whateley.
No wonder Riley considers Tanya a good friend, growing up as she did in that family, starved for positive attention. Ah rats, can only do the water trick on herself. Oh no, Riley hasn't gone through power testing yet, I wonder what she will think of it. Darn, Riley has no resistance to Tanya's roommate's power. Tanya in room 229, Riley is in 215, just how many rooms are in each cottage?
I really hope they can be friends.Perhaps there was a new friendship with her waiting in the future. Perhaps not. I shrugged.
Bwahahaha, just a cafeteria, considering the waterfall and other things inside, plus the quality of food, Riley has made, imo, a poor early evaluation. A normal, sensible breakfast, the description is making me drool, shouldn't comment when hungry. Her mom shames her for being 5'7" and a size 4! Okay, I want to smack this b, you don't do that shit to your kids!7am-ish---Crystal Hall
No sign of Jenny, an hour late for meeting for breakfast, I hope she is okay. And of course, her Mom calls right now, that woman.
Okay, at this point I'd like to call child services for child abuse in the form of mental and emotional abuse for years. Ask her mom what she wants, mom says she is being rude now, sees faults in everything Riley does. *tries to calm down before I type something I will regret*"What the hell do you think you’re doing?” said a voice on the other end as soon as I answered.
I sighed. “Well seeing as its morning, I’m getting breakfast like normal people.”
"Don’t get smart with me young lady!”
Oh, Mom is mad Riley switched to Whitman rather than being in the same cottage as her "too perfect" sister.
*can't hold back* THIS ISN'T ABOUT YOU, MA'AM!"Well do you know how embarrassed I was to get a call from the school telling me that I sent your things to the wrong room? Then to have your sister call, not you, to tell me that you’ve decided to change our plans and move into another cottage.”
STOP TRYING TO CONTROL YOUR CHILD'S LIFE IN EVERY DETAIL!"Be that as it may, you’re now stuck in Whitman apparently. I called this morning and they’ve already given your room away and there’s no more vacancies. See what you’ve done now.”
"You mean make a decision for myself? Perish the thought!”
"Well it ends now, I’ve made...”
Destroy her phones, only way to stop her mom's harassment, great idea, Riley, I support this. Jenny shows up and isn't told about the call from Riley's mom, no need to sour Riley's mood more. And of course, Jenny guessed who the call was from, intuitive and smart girl.
Oh good grief, she probably will have set Riley up at the same college she went too upon graduating Whateley, or try to.“She’s got this thing where she has to control every aspect of everyone’s lives, like she thinks its her responsibility to do so. Do you know that before coming here, she never once asked me what I wanted. She decided I was going to go to Whateley, that I was going to stay at Dickinson because its where she stayed when she was here.”
Just how bad are things at home for Jenny? Oh yeah, forgot about the cult for a moment, seesh, the authorities need to crack down on cults more.She sighed. “Clara made the decision for me. Said I’d be safer here then at home. I’d like to say she was wrong but...”
Hurt when Riley gets angry, has to work hardier containing her powers or another way for her mother to try and control her?"A gift from my mother” I said, holding up my arm. “They’re runes, one of her specialty spells. According to her, they’re for my protection. The thing is, I didn’t exactly ask for them. She put them there when I was sleeping, said I had an incident during the night.”
At least they can laugh about it, I think she won't need them anymore when she gains better control over her power. A blue-haired girl Summer's age and a couple of other girls, wonder who this is, it isn't Venus Envy come to rush Jenny, is it? Oh, Janette, Riley's RA, and having a wing meeting tonight, huh. Janette's hand is cold enough to make Riley shiver, hint to her powers I bet.Apparently they’ll come off when I don’t need them anymore.”
"When is that?”
I shrugged. “Probably when I stop being angry.”
"So basically, they’re on for life.”
Jenny wasn’t trying to be a smart ass but it didn’t stop us both from laughing.
So that is how Jenny met Janette, and Mao brings up why Riley left the movie night, oh boy. Mao needs to learn more about interacting with humans.
Just what has Samantha told this girl about Riley?"I have upset you then. I fail to see why it is such a big deal. The taller of the two clearly meant you ill will. Had you not left, she planned on confronting you.”
"How do you know that?”
"Body language.”
"You can get intent out of body language?”
"She was agitated and was perspiring heavily as well. Given the way she stared in your general direction, having no prior contact with Jiaying, I assumed she meant you harm. Given how well you interact with others, I drew the conclusion that you must have insulted her and she wished retribution from said insult.
Thinks about all that, respond to Mao, and it is Jenny back in control, this could lead to some seriously bad communication at this rate. I wonder who Riley got as her advisor, hope they can handle her without being pushy. Oops, misremembered her as Exemplar, physical changes threw me. Fog generation and ability to pull water from the air, heat resistance, and tiny healing ability, I wonder if her fog generation is part of a bigger power that needs the training to unleash her potential.
Genetics, even mutant ones, can be cruel. Heh, no clue if girls go to the bathroom together, their unique upbringings have sure left them clueless about certain things, or at least stereotypes. Pain worsening, okay, that doesn't seem like a power control issue anymore, but her mother trying to control her temper by force. And no makeup, aww, I bet a lot of guys would like that look. And her power isn't lame, just don't fully understand it yet.
Ugh, cornering someone alone in a bathroom, no matter what issue you have with them, is a huge bully move. At least 6'7" if not taller, high-level Exemplar or PK brick, not good. Not moving and picking a fight like this, whoever this girl needs an attitude check. Gretchen a boxer and taught Riley, good, have something to work with. No fight, huh.
If not for Jenny this girl could have killed Riley, she saved them both. Metallic tink, cat ears, stripes, just who is Mao?"She doesn’t need this shit, you know. Not after what you and your friends did to her. She had a rough time you know. She was almost better then you showed up. She was opening up again, she was smiling again. Then she saw you and you...”
She was getting angrier with every word.
That’s when the fist came.
It happened so fast that I didn’t have time to react.
There was a rush of air behind me and suddenly, Jenny was there.
And Jenny becomes ruthless when protecting a friend, this girl better back down or end up with a broken hand in Doyle or worse. Forced to apologize before Jenny lets go, yikes. Calling them Puta before leaving, this girl needs to have her temper checked, protecting a friend is noble, but this went too far. So glad Jenny followed Riley into the bathroom, though with how fast she moved when Mao was in control I think she isn't telling the whole truth here.
Lost in Schuster Hall, 2 minutes late for meeting with her advisor, let's see how the advisor responds. Chastizing her for being 2 minutes late.9:32am---Schuster Hall/The Quad
I don't like this guy, I'm betting her mom had him assigned to Riley."Now then” he continued, looking back at his computer and typing. “It would appear you arrived a day late.”
"Unforeseen circumstances, I was...”
He interrupted me again. “Your tardiness appears to be a habit I see.”
Okay, I hate this guy now. And yup, her mom set up her class schedule over the summer with the hardest classes possible, leading this guy to blame Riley for him having to fix "her" mistakes, ugh."Like I said, it was beyond my control...”
"Problem with authority as well.”
This guy is the trigonometry teacher, great. Bringing up transcripts on Riley, I hope it humbles this man a little.
At least she gets one class she wants so far, I hope she fixes the mess her mother made of the rest.I’d always been a bit of an overachiever. It was one of the things that I had and Summer didn’t. She wasn’t an idiot but she wasn’t as smart as me either. When I started school, Mom immediately tried to drive a wedge between the two of us. Once again, she favored my sister. She tried to push the two of us against one another academically. So that only pushed me harder. I wasn’t a super genius by any means but I wasn’t an idiot like the other kids around me. It wasn’t all subjects either, mainly Math and reading. Mom tried to ignore it, the school didn’t. I was in advanced Math classes starting in about fifth grade or so. So yes, I really was taking trigonometry as a freshman.
Who is this mystery woman who saved Riley from having to hear all that typing? Good grief, how many poor boys saw this woman walking around the school before she ended up here? Olivia DuBois and she is Riley's advisor now, I like her already. Hehe, how Olivia manipulating this man, love it. Even got to loan her his office, she is good.
Calling Riley famous, read Riley's file, who is this woman? A bit photosensitive, she turns off the lights with a snap of her fingers, and her eyes purple shine actually glows in the dark, impressive already.
I knew her mother would pull that, but how does Olivia know all this about Riley?"I was able to rearrange some things. It seems your mother consulted with Mr. Ding Dong and tried to work your schedule around your sister’s. We both know you don’t want that.”
Okay, I want to know more about Olivia's history now, sounds like she lost her mother and misses her dearly and something horrible happened to a sibling of hers worse than death.She wasn’t wrong though. “My mother is a pain in the ass.”
She frowned “Cherish her, you only get one.”
I raised an eyebrow. “And my sister?”
"Well as much as you’d probably like to kill her---trust me on that one---there are fates worst than death.”
Class schedule in order and going for a walk, with her energy and attitude why do I suspect she is connected to Gretchen somehow.
Okay, we haven't met an Olivia DuBois in Gen 1, I wonder."They never are” chuckled my companion as the two of us headed for the stairs. “My roomie and I were like oil and water at first. We had a bit of a rocky start but she’s my best friend now. We did everything in school together.”
Wait, we haven't seen more of Gretchen's story yet or who she ends up as roommates with when she finally gets to Whateley, could Olivia have been her roommate?She smiled. “We talk pretty much everyday. We formed this unbreakable bond here. There isn’t anything I wouldn’t do for her, you know?”
Olivia knows about the incident, Riley believes it is because it is in her file.
Bwahaha, oh, Olivia is good. And Riley thinks she is a 'shrink' using ambush therapy on her, oh boy, I hope she is wrong about Olivia. Shadow manipulation and Riley can't run further than 20 feet before being caught, rats. Still have five minutes, darn, Riley was right.She smiled coyly. “I didn’t. I’m not a teacher, I’m a Grad student.”
A file with blank papers inside, tricky.
Whoa, they got the perfect kind of psychiatrist to handle Riley and her issues."To be fair though, I did read your file but I didn’t really need to. You’re an open book, Riley. Parental issues, authority issues, sister issues. Angry, stubborn, Me against the world. Classic misanthrope, blah, blah, fucking blah. I get it, trust me, I lived it. You think the world is against you, you think EVERYONE hates you! More blah and blah and blah.” She paused for dramatic effect. “ I’m not going to tell you you’re wrong because what kind of advice would that be. I am going to tell you one thing though” Another pause, this time with a breath. “Grow up and stop whining.”
Blunt and to the point, sometimes it is the only method that works.“No, I can’t but I will because you need to hear it. Yes, your mother is probably a bitch. She probably does favor your sister more. Trust me, been there, done that. Yes, you’re a loner and you hate everyone around you. You’re horrible to them, blah and blah and shit. Tough break, the world isn’t perfect. We can’t change that. We can however learn to deal with that shit. If you let me, I think I might be able to help you. If you’re interested?”
Ask why she should trust Olivia and doesn't get an answer because time is up, dang, she is a bitch.
She reminds you of Gretchen I bet, such close friends tend to rub off on each other. And late again, good grief, hope the powers testing guys are still busy with someone else so they aren't annoyed too.She was the most insufferable woman I’d ever met, I HATED people like that. Yet, there was something about her that I just couldn’t quite place. Something almost familiar. Sure I’d never met her before but there was still something.
Thinking about it made me smile.
I’m not sure why.
The time to get to the lab for testing, plus navigating to it, they need to give the freshmen maps of certain buildings. Dang, she has a map and the tunnels are still confusing, that sure says something about the tunnels. Girl wearing a hoodie like that and calling her Laura, don't tell me it is Tia. Guessed right even before reading it, nice to see Tia again. At least Tia helped Riley go in the right direction.10am-ish---K Lab
At least the woman doesn't say anything after Riley admits she is already late, even maps only help so much in the tunnels, yikes. Yeah, even being told about Whateley can't prepare you for seeing it in person or experiencing life there. Ooo, the testing suit, I don't think anyone likes wearing those. Okay...do I even want to ask about Summer's roommate?
Riley hates drawing attention, her new bust, and the testing suit, yikes, at least she has a female tester. Oh, so there are more testers, forgot that is common. Brutal power testing later and Riley learns it isn't hydrokinesis, I suspected as much. At least the next woman is friendlier to Riley. Taken to Lab W, Dr. Martin is the nice woman and Dr. Phelps is there. Wait, Lab W, as in Warping?
So the Spencer family even defy the Whateley staff's understanding, dang. Wait, the more she pushes her power the more the runes increase the intensity of the burning, so when she gets angry her powers flair up stronger than usual.Scientists all over the world have been trying to figure out my family for years. It wasn’t unheard of for families to have multiple mutants but for them to all manifest the same powers, over and over again. Things like that didn’t happen. As far back as my great-great grandfather, people have been trying to figure out why and how it was possible. There were many theories, most seemed to think that one of my ancestors made a pact with a powerful spirit but of course that was a bunch of crap if you ask me. Personally I think we were just lucky.
I've been saying it, Riley's power is far more impressive than she realizes. More testing...great."That was amazing, I’ve never seen anyone create fog like that before. It was so thick, I couldn’t even two inches in front of my face.”
I huffed. “That’s me, Riley Spencer, Subpar Party Favor.”
She chuckled. “Nothing about you is subpar, far from it in fact.”
This is a power, that with use to build up tolerance and experience in use, will be a lot more impressive than hydrokinesis, imo.The breaks between getting shorter and shorter. It turns out the more I use my power, the more tolerance I built up to the debilitating after-effects. After three or four times of the fog alone, they started adding different factors to the environment. Making it hotter or colder for instance. That apparently changed the density of the fog. Working in the heat was a lot easier for me too. When it got colder, I found it harder to control things. When they added water into the mix, things took a different turn. Not only did I start to feel less pain but I was able to control the water around me as it fell. Much like what I could do with the water from the shower.
Woohoo, when the testers say they have seen nothing quite like your power before it means big things."I have seen some truly remarkable things in this lab over the years but nothing quite like that.”
"So I was right then?”
He nodded excitedly, finally looking up from his screen. “You Miss Spencer are not a hydrokinetic, you’re a Warper.”
Holy...I knew her power was more impressive than she thought but not by this much, that is a lot of power.“Its simple really. You’re not controlling the water, you’re changing it. The fog is just the start. With practice and training, no doubt you will be able to change the very density of the air itself. It’s incredible. What’s more, right at the beginning, the sensors picked up hydrostatic pressure fluctuations.”
"That’s not possible!”
"As impossible as it is, it was there. No mistake about it.”
"What’s hydrostatic pressure?”
I was so confused.
"Its the pressure exerted onto an object underwater” explained Dr. Martin “the further you go down, the more pressure you feel. It’s what happens when you swim and pop your eardrums.”
"This type of pressure should not be experienced outside of the water” explained Dr. Phelps “Yet, somehow, you’re able to generate it in the air.”
"What about the atmospheric pressure?”
"She was controlling that too...”
That just bumped it up to potentially one of the most dangerous powers I've ever read about. And a new codename to go with this revelation, nice.As soon as they did, they explained that my control of pressure apparently did not exist outside of the fog I created. The stronger my fog, the more pressure I was able to control and even change.
Hydrostatic, perfect codename, those who don't know what it means will underestimate her, those who do will be afraid of getting on her bad side. MID with a picture of her smiling, much better.12:45pm---The Quad/Crystal Hall
Aww, you look cute, besides when you have your regular look and show someone your MID and they try to say that isn't you, you can confidently state it is. Warper 4, TK 2, now there is a potent combo, especially with the nature of her Warper powers.I still looked weird without my makeup and as soon as possible, I was going to pierce my lip again. I looked a bit doe-eyed in the photo though, a deer caught in the headlights too frightened to move. I wonder if they’d allowed me to retake it?
Hating Warpers because a Warper killed her father, Riley's mom is a piece of work. If she lashes out at Riley over being a Warper, says she is disowning her, I hope the authorities deal with her. Oh, and a new detail about Gretchen's time before Whateley we have yet to see, can't wait to read and learn more in the future.Gretchen would often tell me about Mistress Zodiac, the Warper she had some trouble with before coming to Whateley. The very same one who also killed Mom’s Dad. Mom always detested them after that, even if she tried to hide it. There used to be a Warper in The Good Neighbors, called Motormouth, he could talk so fast that he actually gave people headaches. Summer and I used to love it but Mom hated it. Eventually, he retired from the bizz. He lives in Florida now, living the easy life. Uncle Jeff---his civilian ID---still sends us cards and presents every year for Christmas and Birthdays.
Always forget about the annoying parts of Regen, at least Riley doesn't have it anymore as she wants. Saw Sam in the hallway, seems like Sam wishes to talk, but her friend stopped that, darn it. And now the guy Riley's nicknamed Brad Pitt Jr. is coming over, even an out of the way bench in the quad is still easily seen.I was still a bit bummed about the regen bit. Apparently, it wasn’t actually one of my powers but an after effect of the runes that were used to heal me. After manifesting I was unconscious for a couple of hours and was covered in cuts and bruises. Mom broke some rules when she used runes to heal me. A small part of me was glad to see the Regen gone too.
Darn that smile of his, now Riley is stuck chatting with him and his friend. Cody and his friend Parker, and Cody wouldn't shut up about Riley, uh oh.
A devisor with a codename like that, bet he makes some interesting concoctions.“I’m Parker Danes, Cody’s roommate, you can call me Crowd Control.”
Riley's emotions are going to get her in trouble if she doesn't keep them reigned in. Heading to lunch in the Crystal Hall with them, and Cody brings up how Riley said she was going on a bathroom break the last time he saw her. Cody holding the door for her makes Riley blush, oh boy, she has it bad. Sitting on the 2nd floor and being part of a training team, if Cody knew all that entails he might be reluctant about joining a training team any time soon.He was looking for me?
My heart fluttered.
No, stop that!
Hehe, hormones are a hell of a thing to deal with. Poor Parker, that shy and having a crush on Jenny at first sight.She dropped into the seat next to me, without a care in the world. It was such a graceful, fluid motion that it left Parker with his mouth hanging open. It hung that way for a few seconds too before Cody pushed it shut. That didn’t stop him from staring though. I’m not going to lie, Jenny was something to stare at. If I wasn’t careful, I might go gay for her. Well, bi at the very least. I wonder if I would be able to juggle both her and Cody at the same…
No, BAD brain!
Uhm, don't tell me Jenny is a changeling and used to be a guy, but didn't note this in her Whateley paperwork? Or she is a lesbian and just uncomfortable by attention from a guy?Parker got over his shyness pretty quickly and started exclusively talking to her, much to my roommate’s discomfort. It was weird because she acted almost like she never got this kind of attention before. Especially from a boy. How was that possible? She was gorgeous, unless she wasn’t always so. It made sense I suppose. Some of her behavior didn’t quite fit. She had a great body but she always covered it, every inch of skin. She was shy and demure around everyone but me too? Almost as if she wasn’t comfortable in her own skin? Parker wasn’t helping either. Every time he spoke, he moved a bit closer to her and she moved a bit back. Parker didn’t notice. Jenny’s body language was enough to tell me that she didn’t like it one bit.
Non-lethal grenades, good idea.
Okay, Sam is going to be picked up by one of the spy agencies when she graduates, because I don't think they were that focused to have missed her, some part of her powers maybe?"Well I think it’s neat” said a voice from the other side of me.
I jumped.
I think we all did.
I snapped around and sitting next to me was Sam.
Where in the hell did she come from?
"Sam! Where did you…?”
She giggled. “I’ve been here for a while now actually, you four were so engrossed in talking that I just thought I’d wait for an opening.”
Sam doesn't hate Riley, glad that Riley saved her, all a big misunderstanding, glad that was the case. Amaya, a nice name for her friend.“Amaya’s in power testing right now. She’s real sorry by the way, even if she’ll never admit it. She got it into her thick head that I hated you but...”
Pink hair and blushes the same shade, cute. Samantha Ridley aka Void, cool, I wonder what her powers are unless I'm forgetting them."You were crying earlier?”
"Not because I was scared...just happy to see you and angry at what my parents tried to do...”
I wonder what she means by this."I can’t show you because we’re not supposed to use our powers that way...”
Electricity from his hands, learn how to regulate it and so many uses.“I’m Cody Jenkins but you folks can call me Cattle Prod”.
Jenny talking with Sam to avoid talking with Parker, I know Parker came on strong, but I wish to know why it seems Jenny has no experience chatting with guys.
At least she has friends in each of the classes and Amaya can be a potential friend now that she knows the truth about how Sam feels. Polar Vortex, so that is Jan's codename. And the wing meeting is after lunch, don't tell me, the near fight earlier pushed it sooner.Strangely enough, Jenny was in most of mine. Cody and I shared two, Parker and I four. Lucky me. I was only in one of Sam’s sadly. She did announce that I was in at least five classes with Amaya though. Apparently she’d seen her roommate’s schedule. Fate must hate me.
Ah, the community room on each floor, nice to know more details about it. Riley and Jenny show up first, followed by Ratel who is making a lot of noise, Ratel goes up to introduce herself to Jenny only for Mao to say she smells like vermin, oh boy. Water Lily aka Bonnie is Ratel's roommate in 213, nice to see they get along. Uh oh, the reaction to Jenny's handshake means Ratel wants to fight her. More girls, one with wings and one with intense red hair and barefoot, I love Whateley for the diversity of the characters. The next 3 girls stand out as well, with such interesting looks.1:05pm---Whitman
Well, there is trouble waiting to happen. Native American girl has it hard, especially with the QB giving her that glare. Sam needs to get used to many eyes upon her, Amaya isn't always going to be there to shield her.The pair that followed her seemed fairly normal but they definitely screamed Queen Bitches. The one with the white blonde hair went to the table and sat at the head of it, looking with contempt at the rest of the room. I took an instant dislike of her and that stupid sliver streak in her hair.
Okay, I like Jan, anyone who can suggest being called the Idiot with a sense of humor is good in my books.
Arrgh, it grates on my nerves, such ego.The Queen Bee didn’t wait. “I’m Silvertongue, Jessica Roth, I’m a Siren and I’m happy to be here!”
Interesting bunch already.Her friend was Goldrose, Alexis Wallace.
The other two girls at the table were Agateno (the Cherokee girl who didn’t give a name) and Nyx, aka Claire Marshall.
Hhm, Firestep, wild guess but speedster who creates flames when she runs.The winged girl was Russet, her barefooted friend was Firestep. The girls on the couch were Jamie and Flicka. Flicka said her first name, I think it was Melissa but Jamie interrupted her. She had more to say about herself but I ignored it. The really short girl was Pullaparte, call me “Barb”, the girl next to her with the black scales was Hexplate. The room shifted to Sam and Amaya. Sam introduced herself as Void, giving a few quizzical looks before Amaya spoke up. Who the hell calls themselves Stellar?
Heh, the shock of Mao talking and learning there are some spirits who can talk like that, that is minor compared to some of the things you will learn and experience at Whateley. And Riley makes an enemy of Silvertongue by just saying her name and nothing else, eep. Silvertongue giving Riley attitude but she isn't having any of it, goes to walk off, and Silvertongue was going to say something until Amaya put her hand on Silvertongue's shoulder.
Oh, Silvertongue is one of those kind of idiots. If you are white you are an immigrant or a descendant of an immigrant. Ratel wants to get in on the brewing fight, Goldrose isn't going to back up Silvertongue so the b just storms off. SIlvertongue is going to be a real pain."Back the fuck off, Barbie!”
Amaya.
I was not expecting that.
"How dare you touch me, you Immigrant.”
Amaya was hispanic but she was at least six foot four and by the look on her face, that was probably the wrong thing to say. Suddenly she was getting taller, a lot taller. Her head almost touched the ceiling. The muscles in her bare arms started to bulge too.
Nice way to apologize by Amaya. Ugh, Ratel, don't go picking a fight with Amaya. Duffle and suitcase of stuff her mom bought for her and forced her to pack, donate it to someone else I say. Oh god, if Jenny wears those yoga pants and does a morning routine outside she will get an audience of guys and girls much like Taka.
I wonder, did Gretchen have Olivia hand-deliver her old motorcycle jacket to Riley?While she was droning on, I noticed something not mine sitting on the bed between my bags. Walking close, I saw it was a black motorcycle jacket. It wasn’t new either, it was scuffed up and worn.
A patch of a pink flower, yup, has Riley shaking as she realizes whose jacket this is and who is it is from. Riley thinks Gretchen had been in their dorm room, was here, and didn't see her, ouch.
Oh crap, don't tell me whoever sent her group of old "friends" after Sam somehow knows where she is and is keeping an eye on her?It was her handwriting.
A warning that sent chills up my spine:
BE CAREFUL LITTLE BUG, THEY’RE WATCHING YOU.
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From first meeting Riley, learning about her family life, and the mess she got caught up in, it has been a wild ride. Epsilon, the mysterious organization, just what is its reach, its purpose in sending a bunch of thugs after a mutant girl, the kind of threats it can send after Riley are still a mystery. How Summer manifesting at 11 ruined their relationship, how their mother treats each of them, it is sickening a parent can do this to a child. Riley's attempts to run away, to get out from under her mother's thumb and control, you just want to yell at her mother for such emotional and mental abuse to a child for years.
At least Agents Carter and Grace of the DPA helped her out, even if she didn't want it. Rereading my comments from part 1, forgot it was confirmed Jenny is Clara Fairchild's little brother turned sister, they have the same last name and how Jenny acts is a huge clue. My memory isn't what it used to be. Never learned who Tina Royce worked for as I recall, another mystery. Riley's ex Brody's murder, will it ever be proven it was murder?
And rereading comments, can't believe I forget Mao is The Great Tiger of the West, one of the four great spirits of Japan. Riley wishing to find Gretchen in New York, living on the streets until she did, her stubbornness could have cost her life. Mao's words of wisdom to Riley are some of the best advice a spirit has ever given someone. All the staff and other people who helped her and Jenny along the way.
And another reminder of how badly Riley's mom controls her children's life, spelling their home those ways. Her grandfather had fought Mazarin as part of the Golden Aces, I love Golden Age style tales, wonder what Mazarin was like in his younger days.
I'm glad all of Riley's mom's attempts at controlling her life were adverted, Jenny being her roommate in Whitman made me happy. All the hints at Riley having more power than she believed could not have prepared me for the reveal of the true nature of her powers. Those can be dangerous, even lethal if applied right. Heh, reading my comments on part 2 show my memory has issues, we learned Riley and Jenny's dorm room number and their RA's name then.
Firefly aka Linette, little cutie and loved how Riley learned about Shisa too. Heh, forgot Riley knows about Poe's secret due to Gretchen. Learning how Summer acts towards Riley, sisters should support each other, what Summer does in the name of obeying their mother is wrong.
So glad that Samantha isn't upset with Riley and the whole thing with Amaya was a huge misunderstanding. I hope they can all be friends because Riley is going to need a lot of them. And Olivia is the perfect counselor for Riley. I can't wait for the next story with Riley and/or Jenny, such a fun read and so many new things to learn alongside them.
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Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ] [ Click to hide ]Riley is woken up by such a noise and Jenny is already awake and dressed for a run. Riley is rooming with a...morning person. Soccer player before manifesting, Riley isn't going to be sleeping in if that noise happens every morning. Arrgh, the suspense hasn't been broken yet, Jenny still hasn't opened that box.Sept. 8th, 2016 (5:20 am)---Whitman
Yikes, growth spurt upon manifesting, Riley sporting a small C cup and hates it, she is, unfortunately, going to get a lot of attention. Jenny is all flustered, so cute, whoever she ends up dating is lucky. Ouch, doing farm work actually made her feel useful and cousin Brent showing up and taking them all over, Riley has had it rough since Gretchen left. An hour run to check out the surrounding area, just remember the rules about not going into certain areas.
All that anger Riley has to deal with, glad she has Dr. Chambers to help her.One, I think Samantha might have run away for a different reason. Two, the school won't go advertising her past like that, so unless Samantha knows about it I doubt it will come out.I deserved every bit of fear and hate that girl had toward me too. After she ran off, I seriously considered bailing. It was only a matter of time before my part in her incident was exposed. I was an H1 sympathizer in a school of mutants.
At least Jenny got Riley not to sulk in their room, though Samantha's friend glaring like that, I wonder what Samantha has told about Riley already. Yikes, to fall asleep and the next thing wakes up to an alarm so loud, good thing Riley doesn't have enhanced hearing beyond her exemplar nature.
So early only she and Jenny are the only ones awake in the cottage, 5:20 am is way too early to wake up imo. Ouch, this "disorder" sucks, sounds a lot like a form of social anxiety. *gags* What Riley's mom does to her, not even mentioning her to others unless she has to, makes me sick to my stomach. Any child would be a mess being treated this way. A natural defense against water so doesn't feel hot or cold from it, very useful.Guess she hasn't learned how to use it to remove water from her hair yet.If I wanted, I could make it so not a single bit of water ever touched my skin. Combine that with my ability to generate fog and pull water from the air, it was easy to see how I was labeled a TK.
Wait, her mother won't let Riley see old videos of her father, now that is just cruel to a child. Tidal Wave, her father died a hero before she even got to know him.Instead of cherishing the children the man you loved left you, Riley's mom just sees her as a source of pain, her mother needs counseling past-tense.Aunt Jessica once told me that Mom was different after Dad was gone. Now she didn’t imply that Mom resented either me or Summer but I could see it sometimes. I think we reminded her of him. In a way, we were a piece of him. Now a sane person would cherish that but I think it pained my mother to look at us. Me, more so than Summer. More than once, I was told how much I resembled Dad. Sure Summer got his blonde hair but I had his eyes. At least I did before they turned their current color. According to Uncle Will, Dad’s brother, I got his stubbornness too. That little bit made me proud.
Oops, she can't feel hot from water but can feel cold, getting angry at her mom and venting made her cause the water to become ice cold. Ooo, she figured out the trick of removing the water from herself already, nice. And Tanya sees her do that, seems Riley met her years ago at a Bar B Que party her family hosted, even remembers Tanya. Friends at 7 and not see each other again until 14, yet Tanya recognizes Riley after a moment. Both in Whitman too, fate arranged this, Riley needs more friends at Whateley.
No wonder Riley considers Tanya a good friend, growing up as she did in that family, starved for positive attention. Ah rats, can only do the water trick on herself. Oh no, Riley hasn't gone through power testing yet, I wonder what she will think of it. Darn, Riley has no resistance to Tanya's roommate's power. Tanya in room 229, Riley is in 215, just how many rooms are in each cottage?I really hope they can be friends.Perhaps there was a new friendship with her waiting in the future. Perhaps not. I shrugged.
Bwahahaha, just a cafeteria, considering the waterfall and other things inside, plus the quality of food, Riley has made, imo, a poor early evaluation. A normal, sensible breakfast, the description is making me drool, shouldn't comment when hungry. Her mom shames her for being 5'7" and a size 4! Okay, I want to smack this b, you don't do that shit to your kids!7am-ish---Crystal Hall
No sign of Jenny, an hour late for meeting for breakfast, I hope she is okay. And of course, her Mom calls right now, that woman.Okay, at this point I'd like to call child services for child abuse in the form of mental and emotional abuse for years. Ask her mom what she wants, mom says she is being rude now, sees faults in everything Riley does. *tries to calm down before I type something I will regret*"What the hell do you think you’re doing?” said a voice on the other end as soon as I answered.
I sighed. “Well seeing as its morning, I’m getting breakfast like normal people.”
"Don’t get smart with me young lady!”
Oh, Mom is mad Riley switched to Whitman rather than being in the same cottage as her "too perfect" sister.*can't hold back* THIS ISN'T ABOUT YOU, MA'AM!"Well do you know how embarrassed I was to get a call from the school telling me that I sent your things to the wrong room? Then to have your sister call, not you, to tell me that you’ve decided to change our plans and move into another cottage.”
STOP TRYING TO CONTROL YOUR CHILD'S LIFE IN EVERY DETAIL!"Be that as it may, you’re now stuck in Whitman apparently. I called this morning and they’ve already given your room away and there’s no more vacancies. See what you’ve done now.”
"You mean make a decision for myself? Perish the thought!”
"Well it ends now, I’ve made...”
Destroy her phones, only way to stop her mom's harassment, great idea, Riley, I support this. Jenny shows up and isn't told about the call from Riley's mom, no need to sour Riley's mood more. And of course, Jenny guessed who the call was from, intuitive and smart girl.Oh good grief, she probably will have set Riley up at the same college she went too upon graduating Whateley, or try to.“She’s got this thing where she has to control every aspect of everyone’s lives, like she thinks its her responsibility to do so. Do you know that before coming here, she never once asked me what I wanted. She decided I was going to go to Whateley, that I was going to stay at Dickinson because its where she stayed when she was here.”
Just how bad are things at home for Jenny? Oh yeah, forgot about the cult for a moment, seesh, the authorities need to crack down on cults more.She sighed. “Clara made the decision for me. Said I’d be safer here then at home. I’d like to say she was wrong but...”
Hurt when Riley gets angry, has to work hardier containing her powers or another way for her mother to try and control her?"A gift from my mother” I said, holding up my arm. “They’re runes, one of her specialty spells. According to her, they’re for my protection. The thing is, I didn’t exactly ask for them. She put them there when I was sleeping, said I had an incident during the night.”
At least they can laugh about it, I think she won't need them anymore when she gains better control over her power. A blue-haired girl Summer's age and a couple of other girls, wonder who this is, it isn't Venus Envy come to rush Jenny, is it? Oh, Janette, Riley's RA, and having a wing meeting tonight, huh. Janette's hand is cold enough to make Riley shiver, hint to her powers I bet.Apparently they’ll come off when I don’t need them anymore.”
"When is that?”
I shrugged. “Probably when I stop being angry.”
"So basically, they’re on for life.”
Jenny wasn’t trying to be a smart ass but it didn’t stop us both from laughing.
So that is how Jenny met Janette, and Mao brings up why Riley left the movie night, oh boy. Mao needs to learn more about interacting with humans.Just what has Samantha told this girl about Riley?"I have upset you then. I fail to see why it is such a big deal. The taller of the two clearly meant you ill will. Had you not left, she planned on confronting you.”
"How do you know that?”
"Body language.”
"You can get intent out of body language?”
"She was agitated and was perspiring heavily as well. Given the way she stared in your general direction, having no prior contact with Jiaying, I assumed she meant you harm. Given how well you interact with others, I drew the conclusion that you must have insulted her and she wished retribution from said insult.
Thinks about all that, respond to Mao, and it is Jenny back in control, this could lead to some seriously bad communication at this rate. I wonder who Riley got as her advisor, hope they can handle her without being pushy. Oops, misremembered her as Exemplar, physical changes threw me. Fog generation and ability to pull water from the air, heat resistance, and tiny healing ability, I wonder if her fog generation is part of a bigger power that needs the training to unleash her potential.
Genetics, even mutant ones, can be cruel. Heh, no clue if girls go to the bathroom together, their unique upbringings have sure left them clueless about certain things, or at least stereotypes. Pain worsening, okay, that doesn't seem like a power control issue anymore, but her mother trying to control her temper by force. And no makeup, aww, I bet a lot of guys would like that look. And her power isn't lame, just don't fully understand it yet.
Ugh, cornering someone alone in a bathroom, no matter what issue you have with them, is a huge bully move. At least 6'7" if not taller, high-level Exemplar or PK brick, not good. Not moving and picking a fight like this, whoever this girl needs an attitude check. Gretchen a boxer and taught Riley, good, have something to work with. No fight, huh.If not for Jenny this girl could have killed Riley, she saved them both. Metallic tink, cat ears, stripes, just who is Mao?"She doesn’t need this shit, you know. Not after what you and your friends did to her. She had a rough time you know. She was almost better then you showed up. She was opening up again, she was smiling again. Then she saw you and you...”
She was getting angrier with every word.
That’s when the fist came.
It happened so fast that I didn’t have time to react.
There was a rush of air behind me and suddenly, Jenny was there.
And Jenny becomes ruthless when protecting a friend, this girl better back down or end up with a broken hand in Doyle or worse. Forced to apologize before Jenny lets go, yikes. Calling them Puta before leaving, this girl needs to have her temper checked, protecting a friend is noble, but this went too far. So glad Jenny followed Riley into the bathroom, though with how fast she moved when Mao was in control I think she isn't telling the whole truth here.
Lost in Schuster Hall, 2 minutes late for meeting with her advisor, let's see how the advisor responds. Chastizing her for being 2 minutes late.9:32am---Schuster Hall/The Quad
I don't like this guy, I'm betting her mom had him assigned to Riley."Now then” he continued, looking back at his computer and typing. “It would appear you arrived a day late.”
"Unforeseen circumstances, I was...”
He interrupted me again. “Your tardiness appears to be a habit I see.”Okay, I hate this guy now. And yup, her mom set up her class schedule over the summer with the hardest classes possible, leading this guy to blame Riley for him having to fix "her" mistakes, ugh."Like I said, it was beyond my control...”
"Problem with authority as well.”
This guy is the trigonometry teacher, great. Bringing up transcripts on Riley, I hope it humbles this man a little.At least she gets one class she wants so far, I hope she fixes the mess her mother made of the rest.I’d always been a bit of an overachiever. It was one of the things that I had and Summer didn’t. She wasn’t an idiot but she wasn’t as smart as me either. When I started school, Mom immediately tried to drive a wedge between the two of us. Once again, she favored my sister. She tried to push the two of us against one another academically. So that only pushed me harder. I wasn’t a super genius by any means but I wasn’t an idiot like the other kids around me. It wasn’t all subjects either, mainly Math and reading. Mom tried to ignore it, the school didn’t. I was in advanced Math classes starting in about fifth grade or so. So yes, I really was taking trigonometry as a freshman.
Who is this mystery woman who saved Riley from having to hear all that typing? Good grief, how many poor boys saw this woman walking around the school before she ended up here? Olivia DuBois and she is Riley's advisor now, I like her already. Hehe, how Olivia manipulating this man, love it. Even got to loan her his office, she is good.
Calling Riley famous, read Riley's file, who is this woman? A bit photosensitive, she turns off the lights with a snap of her fingers, and her eyes purple shine actually glows in the dark, impressive already.I knew her mother would pull that, but how does Olivia know all this about Riley?"I was able to rearrange some things. It seems your mother consulted with Mr. Ding Dong and tried to work your schedule around your sister’s. We both know you don’t want that.”
Okay, I want to know more about Olivia's history now, sounds like she lost her mother and misses her dearly and something horrible happened to a sibling of hers worse than death.She wasn’t wrong though. “My mother is a pain in the ass.”
She frowned “Cherish her, you only get one.”
I raised an eyebrow. “And my sister?”
"Well as much as you’d probably like to kill her---trust me on that one---there are fates worst than death.”
Class schedule in order and going for a walk, with her energy and attitude why do I suspect she is connected to Gretchen somehow.Okay, we haven't met an Olivia DuBois in Gen 1, I wonder."They never are” chuckled my companion as the two of us headed for the stairs. “My roomie and I were like oil and water at first. We had a bit of a rocky start but she’s my best friend now. We did everything in school together.”
Wait, we haven't seen more of Gretchen's story yet or who she ends up as roommates with when she finally gets to Whateley, could Olivia have been her roommate?She smiled. “We talk pretty much everyday. We formed this unbreakable bond here. There isn’t anything I wouldn’t do for her, you know?”
Olivia knows about the incident, Riley believes it is because it is in her file.Bwahaha, oh, Olivia is good. And Riley thinks she is a 'shrink' using ambush therapy on her, oh boy, I hope she is wrong about Olivia. Shadow manipulation and Riley can't run further than 20 feet before being caught, rats. Still have five minutes, darn, Riley was right.She smiled coyly. “I didn’t. I’m not a teacher, I’m a Grad student.”
A file with blank papers inside, tricky.Whoa, they got the perfect kind of psychiatrist to handle Riley and her issues."To be fair though, I did read your file but I didn’t really need to. You’re an open book, Riley. Parental issues, authority issues, sister issues. Angry, stubborn, Me against the world. Classic misanthrope, blah, blah, fucking blah. I get it, trust me, I lived it. You think the world is against you, you think EVERYONE hates you! More blah and blah and blah.” She paused for dramatic effect. “ I’m not going to tell you you’re wrong because what kind of advice would that be. I am going to tell you one thing though” Another pause, this time with a breath. “Grow up and stop whining.”
Blunt and to the point, sometimes it is the only method that works.“No, I can’t but I will because you need to hear it. Yes, your mother is probably a bitch. She probably does favor your sister more. Trust me, been there, done that. Yes, you’re a loner and you hate everyone around you. You’re horrible to them, blah and blah and shit. Tough break, the world isn’t perfect. We can’t change that. We can however learn to deal with that shit. If you let me, I think I might be able to help you. If you’re interested?”
Ask why she should trust Olivia and doesn't get an answer because time is up, dang, she is a bitch.She reminds you of Gretchen I bet, such close friends tend to rub off on each other. And late again, good grief, hope the powers testing guys are still busy with someone else so they aren't annoyed too.She was the most insufferable woman I’d ever met, I HATED people like that. Yet, there was something about her that I just couldn’t quite place. Something almost familiar. Sure I’d never met her before but there was still something.
Thinking about it made me smile.
I’m not sure why.
The time to get to the lab for testing, plus navigating to it, they need to give the freshmen maps of certain buildings. Dang, she has a map and the tunnels are still confusing, that sure says something about the tunnels. Girl wearing a hoodie like that and calling her Laura, don't tell me it is Tia. Guessed right even before reading it, nice to see Tia again. At least Tia helped Riley go in the right direction.10am-ish---K Lab
At least the woman doesn't say anything after Riley admits she is already late, even maps only help so much in the tunnels, yikes. Yeah, even being told about Whateley can't prepare you for seeing it in person or experiencing life there. Ooo, the testing suit, I don't think anyone likes wearing those. Okay...do I even want to ask about Summer's roommate?
Riley hates drawing attention, her new bust, and the testing suit, yikes, at least she has a female tester. Oh, so there are more testers, forgot that is common. Brutal power testing later and Riley learns it isn't hydrokinesis, I suspected as much. At least the next woman is friendlier to Riley. Taken to Lab W, Dr. Martin is the nice woman and Dr. Phelps is there. Wait, Lab W, as in Warping?
So the Spencer family even defy the Whateley staff's understanding, dang. Wait, the more she pushes her power the more the runes increase the intensity of the burning, so when she gets angry her powers flair up stronger than usual.Scientists all over the world have been trying to figure out my family for years. It wasn’t unheard of for families to have multiple mutants but for them to all manifest the same powers, over and over again. Things like that didn’t happen. As far back as my great-great grandfather, people have been trying to figure out why and how it was possible. There were many theories, most seemed to think that one of my ancestors made a pact with a powerful spirit but of course that was a bunch of crap if you ask me. Personally I think we were just lucky.
I've been saying it, Riley's power is far more impressive than she realizes. More testing...great."That was amazing, I’ve never seen anyone create fog like that before. It was so thick, I couldn’t even two inches in front of my face.”
I huffed. “That’s me, Riley Spencer, Subpar Party Favor.”
She chuckled. “Nothing about you is subpar, far from it in fact.”This is a power, that with use to build up tolerance and experience in use, will be a lot more impressive than hydrokinesis, imo.The breaks between getting shorter and shorter. It turns out the more I use my power, the more tolerance I built up to the debilitating after-effects. After three or four times of the fog alone, they started adding different factors to the environment. Making it hotter or colder for instance. That apparently changed the density of the fog. Working in the heat was a lot easier for me too. When it got colder, I found it harder to control things. When they added water into the mix, things took a different turn. Not only did I start to feel less pain but I was able to control the water around me as it fell. Much like what I could do with the water from the shower.
Woohoo, when the testers say they have seen nothing quite like your power before it means big things."I have seen some truly remarkable things in this lab over the years but nothing quite like that.”
"So I was right then?”
He nodded excitedly, finally looking up from his screen. “You Miss Spencer are not a hydrokinetic, you’re a Warper.”Holy...I knew her power was more impressive than she thought but not by this much, that is a lot of power.“Its simple really. You’re not controlling the water, you’re changing it. The fog is just the start. With practice and training, no doubt you will be able to change the very density of the air itself. It’s incredible. What’s more, right at the beginning, the sensors picked up hydrostatic pressure fluctuations.”
"That’s not possible!”
"As impossible as it is, it was there. No mistake about it.”
"What’s hydrostatic pressure?”
I was so confused.
"Its the pressure exerted onto an object underwater” explained Dr. Martin “the further you go down, the more pressure you feel. It’s what happens when you swim and pop your eardrums.”
"This type of pressure should not be experienced outside of the water” explained Dr. Phelps “Yet, somehow, you’re able to generate it in the air.”
"What about the atmospheric pressure?”
"She was controlling that too...”That just bumped it up to potentially one of the most dangerous powers I've ever read about. And a new codename to go with this revelation, nice.As soon as they did, they explained that my control of pressure apparently did not exist outside of the fog I created. The stronger my fog, the more pressure I was able to control and even change.
Hydrostatic, perfect codename, those who don't know what it means will underestimate her, those who do will be afraid of getting on her bad side. MID with a picture of her smiling, much better.12:45pm---The Quad/Crystal Hall
Aww, you look cute, besides when you have your regular look and show someone your MID and they try to say that isn't you, you can confidently state it is. Warper 4, TK 2, now there is a potent combo, especially with the nature of her Warper powers.I still looked weird without my makeup and as soon as possible, I was going to pierce my lip again. I looked a bit doe-eyed in the photo though, a deer caught in the headlights too frightened to move. I wonder if they’d allowed me to retake it?
Hating Warpers because a Warper killed her father, Riley's mom is a piece of work. If she lashes out at Riley over being a Warper, says she is disowning her, I hope the authorities deal with her. Oh, and a new detail about Gretchen's time before Whateley we have yet to see, can't wait to read and learn more in the future.Gretchen would often tell me about Mistress Zodiac, the Warper she had some trouble with before coming to Whateley. The very same one who also killed Mom’s Dad. Mom always detested them after that, even if she tried to hide it. There used to be a Warper in The Good Neighbors, called Motormouth, he could talk so fast that he actually gave people headaches. Summer and I used to love it but Mom hated it. Eventually, he retired from the bizz. He lives in Florida now, living the easy life. Uncle Jeff---his civilian ID---still sends us cards and presents every year for Christmas and Birthdays.
Always forget about the annoying parts of Regen, at least Riley doesn't have it anymore as she wants. Saw Sam in the hallway, seems like Sam wishes to talk, but her friend stopped that, darn it. And now the guy Riley's nicknamed Brad Pitt Jr. is coming over, even an out of the way bench in the quad is still easily seen.I was still a bit bummed about the regen bit. Apparently, it wasn’t actually one of my powers but an after effect of the runes that were used to heal me. After manifesting I was unconscious for a couple of hours and was covered in cuts and bruises. Mom broke some rules when she used runes to heal me. A small part of me was glad to see the Regen gone too.
Darn that smile of his, now Riley is stuck chatting with him and his friend. Cody and his friend Parker, and Cody wouldn't shut up about Riley, uh oh.A devisor with a codename like that, bet he makes some interesting concoctions.“I’m Parker Danes, Cody’s roommate, you can call me Crowd Control.”
Riley's emotions are going to get her in trouble if she doesn't keep them reigned in. Heading to lunch in the Crystal Hall with them, and Cody brings up how Riley said she was going on a bathroom break the last time he saw her. Cody holding the door for her makes Riley blush, oh boy, she has it bad. Sitting on the 2nd floor and being part of a training team, if Cody knew all that entails he might be reluctant about joining a training team any time soon.He was looking for me?
My heart fluttered.
No, stop that!
Hehe, hormones are a hell of a thing to deal with. Poor Parker, that shy and having a crush on Jenny at first sight.She dropped into the seat next to me, without a care in the world. It was such a graceful, fluid motion that it left Parker with his mouth hanging open. It hung that way for a few seconds too before Cody pushed it shut. That didn’t stop him from staring though. I’m not going to lie, Jenny was something to stare at. If I wasn’t careful, I might go gay for her. Well, bi at the very least. I wonder if I would be able to juggle both her and Cody at the same…
No, BAD brain!
Uhm, don't tell me Jenny is a changeling and used to be a guy, but didn't note this in her Whateley paperwork? Or she is a lesbian and just uncomfortable by attention from a guy?Parker got over his shyness pretty quickly and started exclusively talking to her, much to my roommate’s discomfort. It was weird because she acted almost like she never got this kind of attention before. Especially from a boy. How was that possible? She was gorgeous, unless she wasn’t always so. It made sense I suppose. Some of her behavior didn’t quite fit. She had a great body but she always covered it, every inch of skin. She was shy and demure around everyone but me too? Almost as if she wasn’t comfortable in her own skin? Parker wasn’t helping either. Every time he spoke, he moved a bit closer to her and she moved a bit back. Parker didn’t notice. Jenny’s body language was enough to tell me that she didn’t like it one bit.
Non-lethal grenades, good idea.Okay, Sam is going to be picked up by one of the spy agencies when she graduates, because I don't think they were that focused to have missed her, some part of her powers maybe?"Well I think it’s neat” said a voice from the other side of me.
I jumped.
I think we all did.
I snapped around and sitting next to me was Sam.
Where in the hell did she come from?
"Sam! Where did you…?”
She giggled. “I’ve been here for a while now actually, you four were so engrossed in talking that I just thought I’d wait for an opening.”
Sam doesn't hate Riley, glad that Riley saved her, all a big misunderstanding, glad that was the case. Amaya, a nice name for her friend.“Amaya’s in power testing right now. She’s real sorry by the way, even if she’ll never admit it. She got it into her thick head that I hated you but...”
Pink hair and blushes the same shade, cute. Samantha Ridley aka Void, cool, I wonder what her powers are unless I'm forgetting them."You were crying earlier?”
"Not because I was scared...just happy to see you and angry at what my parents tried to do...”I wonder what she means by this."I can’t show you because we’re not supposed to use our powers that way...”
Electricity from his hands, learn how to regulate it and so many uses.“I’m Cody Jenkins but you folks can call me Cattle Prod”.
Jenny talking with Sam to avoid talking with Parker, I know Parker came on strong, but I wish to know why it seems Jenny has no experience chatting with guys.At least she has friends in each of the classes and Amaya can be a potential friend now that she knows the truth about how Sam feels. Polar Vortex, so that is Jan's codename. And the wing meeting is after lunch, don't tell me, the near fight earlier pushed it sooner.Strangely enough, Jenny was in most of mine. Cody and I shared two, Parker and I four. Lucky me. I was only in one of Sam’s sadly. She did announce that I was in at least five classes with Amaya though. Apparently she’d seen her roommate’s schedule. Fate must hate me.
Ah, the community room on each floor, nice to know more details about it. Riley and Jenny show up first, followed by Ratel who is making a lot of noise, Ratel goes up to introduce herself to Jenny only for Mao to say she smells like vermin, oh boy. Water Lily aka Bonnie is Ratel's roommate in 213, nice to see they get along. Uh oh, the reaction to Jenny's handshake means Ratel wants to fight her. More girls, one with wings and one with intense red hair and barefoot, I love Whateley for the diversity of the characters. The next 3 girls stand out as well, with such interesting looks.1:05pm---Whitman
Well, there is trouble waiting to happen. Native American girl has it hard, especially with the QB giving her that glare. Sam needs to get used to many eyes upon her, Amaya isn't always going to be there to shield her.The pair that followed her seemed fairly normal but they definitely screamed Queen Bitches. The one with the white blonde hair went to the table and sat at the head of it, looking with contempt at the rest of the room. I took an instant dislike of her and that stupid sliver streak in her hair.
Okay, I like Jan, anyone who can suggest being called the Idiot with a sense of humor is good in my books.Arrgh, it grates on my nerves, such ego.The Queen Bee didn’t wait. “I’m Silvertongue, Jessica Roth, I’m a Siren and I’m happy to be here!”
Interesting bunch already.Her friend was Goldrose, Alexis Wallace.
The other two girls at the table were Agateno (the Cherokee girl who didn’t give a name) and Nyx, aka Claire Marshall.Hhm, Firestep, wild guess but speedster who creates flames when she runs.The winged girl was Russet, her barefooted friend was Firestep. The girls on the couch were Jamie and Flicka. Flicka said her first name, I think it was Melissa but Jamie interrupted her. She had more to say about herself but I ignored it. The really short girl was Pullaparte, call me “Barb”, the girl next to her with the black scales was Hexplate. The room shifted to Sam and Amaya. Sam introduced herself as Void, giving a few quizzical looks before Amaya spoke up. Who the hell calls themselves Stellar?
Heh, the shock of Mao talking and learning there are some spirits who can talk like that, that is minor compared to some of the things you will learn and experience at Whateley. And Riley makes an enemy of Silvertongue by just saying her name and nothing else, eep. Silvertongue giving Riley attitude but she isn't having any of it, goes to walk off, and Silvertongue was going to say something until Amaya put her hand on Silvertongue's shoulder.
Oh, Silvertongue is one of those kind of idiots. If you are white you are an immigrant or a descendant of an immigrant. Ratel wants to get in on the brewing fight, Goldrose isn't going to back up Silvertongue so the b just storms off. SIlvertongue is going to be a real pain."Back the fuck off, Barbie!”
Amaya.
I was not expecting that.
"How dare you touch me, you Immigrant.”
Amaya was hispanic but she was at least six foot four and by the look on her face, that was probably the wrong thing to say. Suddenly she was getting taller, a lot taller. Her head almost touched the ceiling. The muscles in her bare arms started to bulge too.
Nice way to apologize by Amaya. Ugh, Ratel, don't go picking a fight with Amaya. Duffle and suitcase of stuff her mom bought for her and forced her to pack, donate it to someone else I say. Oh god, if Jenny wears those yoga pants and does a morning routine outside she will get an audience of guys and girls much like Taka.I wonder, did Gretchen have Olivia hand-deliver her old motorcycle jacket to Riley?While she was droning on, I noticed something not mine sitting on the bed between my bags. Walking close, I saw it was a black motorcycle jacket. It wasn’t new either, it was scuffed up and worn.
A patch of a pink flower, yup, has Riley shaking as she realizes whose jacket this is and who is it is from. Riley thinks Gretchen had been in their dorm room, was here, and didn't see her, ouch.Oh crap, don't tell me whoever sent her group of old "friends" after Sam somehow knows where she is and is keeping an eye on her?It was her handwriting.
A warning that sent chills up my spine:
BE CAREFUL LITTLE BUG, THEY’RE WATCHING YOU.
----G
From first meeting Riley, learning about her family life, and the mess she got caught up in, it has been a wild ride. Epsilon, the mysterious organization, just what is its reach, its purpose in sending a bunch of thugs after a mutant girl, the kind of threats it can send after Riley are still a mystery. How Summer manifesting at 11 ruined their relationship, how their mother treats each of them, it is sickening a parent can do this to a child. Riley's attempts to run away, to get out from under her mother's thumb and control, you just want to yell at her mother for such emotional and mental abuse to a child for years.
At least Agents Carter and Grace of the DPA helped her out, even if she didn't want it. Rereading my comments from part 1, forgot it was confirmed Jenny is Clara Fairchild's little brother turned sister, they have the same last name and how Jenny acts is a huge clue. My memory isn't what it used to be. Never learned who Tina Royce worked for as I recall, another mystery. Riley's ex Brody's murder, will it ever be proven it was murder?
And rereading comments, can't believe I forget Mao is The Great Tiger of the West, one of the four great spirits of Japan. Riley wishing to find Gretchen in New York, living on the streets until she did, her stubbornness could have cost her life. Mao's words of wisdom to Riley are some of the best advice a spirit has ever given someone. All the staff and other people who helped her and Jenny along the way.
And another reminder of how badly Riley's mom controls her children's life, spelling their home those ways. Her grandfather had fought Mazarin as part of the Golden Aces, I love Golden Age style tales, wonder what Mazarin was like in his younger days.
I'm glad all of Riley's mom's attempts at controlling her life were adverted, Jenny being her roommate in Whitman made me happy. All the hints at Riley having more power than she believed could not have prepared me for the reveal of the true nature of her powers. Those can be dangerous, even lethal if applied right. Heh, reading my comments on part 2 show my memory has issues, we learned Riley and Jenny's dorm room number and their RA's name then.
Firefly aka Linette, little cutie and loved how Riley learned about Shisa too. Heh, forgot Riley knows about Poe's secret due to Gretchen. Learning how Summer acts towards Riley, sisters should support each other, what Summer does in the name of obeying their mother is wrong.
So glad that Samantha isn't upset with Riley and the whole thing with Amaya was a huge misunderstanding. I hope they can all be friends because Riley is going to need a lot of them. And Olivia is the perfect counselor for Riley. I can't wait for the next story with Riley and/or Jenny, such a fun read and so many new things to learn alongside them.
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