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Question Wolves Bane Feedback/Discussion

7 years 7 months ago - 6 years 8 months ago #1 by E!
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    • This is the thread for Wolves Bane Feedback / Discussion
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    7 years 7 months ago #2 by Malady
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    • Seems to be a lot of setup, but speculation gives me things to think about.

    And Link Back so other people can easily look back:

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    7 years 7 months ago #3 by Cryptic
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    • So far it is a smooth read, good set up underway. current 'cliffhanger' leaves me wanting more. I'm looking forward to the next installment.
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    7 years 7 months ago - 6 years 8 months ago #4 by E!
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    • Cryptic wrote: So far it is a smooth read, good set up underway. current 'cliffhanger' leaves me wanting more. I'm looking forward to the next installment.


    then you're in luck because part 4 is up!:cheer:
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    • part 7 is up

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    whateleyacademy.net/index.php/forum/fabr...lab/1295-wolves-bane
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    7 years 1 week ago - 6 years 8 months ago #6 by E!
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    • Part 8 is here
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    • So yea..Wolves Bane: Redux is just a complete rewrite of Wolves Bane. I'll leave the original up in case people still want to read it, but it will be receiving no further updates.

    So why rewrite WB?

    I didn't like where the original was going so I scrapped it.

    What are the differences between WB and WB:R? Can't I just read the original?

    Well for 1, the length. Part 1 of Redux is only about 5k words off from the total released length of WB. 2nd for the most part Redux sticks with Kyle, rather jumping around. 3rd while Redux has scenes in it that are rips from the original the overall feel and direction of the story has changed completely.

    Anyway here is Part 1 of WB: Redux
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    6 years 8 months ago #8 by Anne
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    • So I read the chapter you have linked. I have to say this is an excellent start. I look forward to soon seeing more of this story...
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