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Question Titans #1 Discussion

7 years 3 hours ago #1 by Iwasforger03
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    • Yes, this is an extrapolation of that little blurb I posted in micro-scenes. Discuss away! I'm having a bear of a time drawing enough information from mythology on the titans to create a credible base for personality and power, but I think i've got some of it locked down pretty good.
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    6 years 11 months ago #2 by Yolandria
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    • So far we're off to a good start. Curious to see how many origins your going to add to this new little grp.
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    6 years 11 months ago #3 by Iwasforger03
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    • haven't decided yet.
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    6 years 11 months ago #4 by Malady
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    • Well, Rhea incarnated, into a boy, for some reason. Emotional... But very confusing, in the backstory...
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    6 years 11 months ago #5 by Iwasforger03
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    • Granted it is confusing, I hope to clear up some explanations on all that rather eventually, some sooner than others.
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    6 years 11 months ago #6 by Iwasforger03
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    • Part 2 is posted! Part 2

    Lester and Judy-Lynn del Rey (neither of them appear to have been born with that name) did not, to my researches ability to find this out, have any children. However, Judy-lynn suffered from what is commonly referred to as Dwarfism. I chose to create a fictional son, Aaron, who inherited his parent's company and passion, and is afflicted with his mother's condition, a situation he has simply chosen to treat as a minor inconvenience. Though, I admit, i picture him as the boss from Incredibles. Just, you know, not a jerk.
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    6 years 11 months ago #7 by Malady
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    • Oh! More backstory! ... The 'just grabbing a body', bit, reminds me of Domoviye's Glitch. ... Actually, this seems to mimic a bit of Glitch, but with its own magic twists, but any coma-waker should be similar.

    OH! I totally missed this!

    <“Your time is short, and your chances are few enough, but they exist. Hurry, and you may yet see yourself returned. There is one who may aid you, for they cannot aid themselves. Bargain with them, give them a final gift of peace, a request to relay from a mother to her son. It may be enough. If they accept the price, they will surrender to you what you require. A vessel. It is an ill-suited vessel, rife with inconveniences. Still, that will change, if you show patience. I can see little else, but there is… a chance for you, to find in this life a joy denied to you in the last.”>


    So explanatory!

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    6 years 11 months ago #8 by Iwasforger03
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    • Thank you Malady. Edits and corrections made with your assistance. I haven't read Domoviye's Glitch, so I didn't know there was something similar XD. I should clarify this is set in Gen 2, probably.
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    6 years 11 months ago #9 by E!
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    • Just read both parts, very interesting premise. Are you going to do any of the other titans? (sorry if hollow dice is about another titan I haven't read it yet)
    6 years 11 months ago #10 by Iwasforger03
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    • Hollow and Dice is not about the Titans, though I'm considering putting references in place for that in here and vice versa. I AM going to eventually include other titans, but not instantly.
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