Question Unexpected Company - Discussion.

Well, here it is.
Discuss...

Cool! New story series! Her origin! ... No typos as far as I can tell on my quick read!

We've got more info now!

Aww. A crush that must end...

I wonder if he can pick a better location to erupt out of... I suppose throwing him back up, nor making the eruption less violent or in a different place are both non-options?

Nice mod to your sig! I guess you could make a thread for all of your stories, and call it the "Pink Rabbit-verse" ('Cause I find translation fun) or whatever you wanna call it.

pink? ...whaaa?

Yeah, that was a bit too confusing to be funny.

Rose > Pink, and Bunny > Rabbit... Ugh. That only would be sensible if you're making AUs of your own stuff or something...



I gotta sleep... Just ignore the name suggestion... That idea for your own thread is 'cause you seem to be running out of sig space. Am I wrong?

I don't know. I'm totally lost

I'm not sure of this story. I don't want to come across as harsh, but I probably won't read any more of it. For some reason it just rubs the wrong way. But don't take that as me saying you should stop writing on the story. Just that for me it is not the story I want to read. Then again I don't read Stephen King except his excellent little book on writing.

Rose Bunny wrote: pink? ...whaaa?

It's a pun based on your user name. "Rose" being a shade of pink.



Little bro could try exiting through any of three pre-existing orifices.

Warning: more squick.

It's an interesting idea, after all there have been similar real-life incidents. It's a bit gross though. It'll be very interesting to see if the concept has any real legs as a story...

I really only intended it as a one-shot, to give her origin, since I probably would only use her in the micro-scenes, where she has already shown up twice... but I might revisit the idea and add more to this on occasion.

and Null, I think that I'm going to leave the egress method the same. Since he leaves in a forceful method, I don't want him going out the mouth, too close to potentially blowing her head off.

and the other two... ewww, no.
I don't think anyone would want to emerge through the anus, coming out covered in... ew, no.
and I think she would veto vaginally. probably would want to keep her uterus and reproductive system whole, in case she meets a nice boy some time. Plus, who would want to 'give birth' to their own brother?

Rose Bunny wrote: I really only intended it as a one-shot, to give her origin, since I probably would only use her in the micro-scenes, where she has already shown up twice... but I might revisit the idea and add more to this on occasion.

and Null, I think that I'm going to leave the egress method the same. Since he leaves in a forceful method, I don't want him going out the mouth, too close to potentially blowing her head off.

and the other two... ewww, no.
I don't think anyone would want to emerge through the anus, coming out covered in... ew, no.
and I think she would veto vaginally. probably would want to keep her uterus and reproductive system whole, in case she meets a nice boy some time. Plus, who would want to 'give birth' to their own brother?

Wonderfully disgusting story. My inner 6-year-old boy approves.

What about him slithering down below the ribcage, and coming out the soft flesh near the navel? It would do less damage, and still reduce the need for organ replacements.

They will also need to get a more specific diet to counterbalance the amount of regenerating that they both have to do, so as to avoid the problems that Petra had, as well as avoid cellular starvation syndrome.

I'm not sure what to say other than it was suitably gory.
I will go with Mr. D and say that exiting through the naval area would likely be easier with less worries regarding bone shrapnel.

I was thinking the same thing. Even in normal people stomas require keepers or they will mostly close. The smallest (ear piercings etc) will close completely so what would keep them from, even with her horrific regen creating an opening in her abdominal wall and having a keeper to place in it immediately. Little brother would have to tear out a bit but probably could learn to put the keeper back in place. Then she could grow back her tits. Not that I'm obsessed with tits or the like but it would help her to feel more normal.

But then the fun of torturing her and breaking her mentally would fade. Plus it's fun making her into a basket case.