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Question The Misfits - Discussion.

6 years 1 month ago - 6 years 1 month ago #201 by Anne
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  • null0trooper wrote:

    Malady wrote: So, there's a Moose too... Anything else? ... Ah, Koehnes was with them? Well, she follows her Queen everywhere? Wonder if there'll be backup on this trio will win out?


    Moose: “It's what's for after dinner.” :)

    No, no! Moose is for dinner! Mouse I think is for after dinner...
    Laughs hysterically at your link!
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    6 years 1 month ago #202 by null0trooper
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  • Anne wrote:

    null0trooper wrote:

    Malady wrote: So, there's a Moose too... Anything else? ... Ah, Koehnes was with them? Well, she follows her Queen everywhere? Wonder if there'll be backup on this trio will win out?


    Moose: “It's what's for after dinner.” :)

    No, no! Moose is for dinner! Mouse I think is for after dinner...
    Laughs hysterically at your link!


    It explains the reason for moose to be mentioned in The Mercenary Song quite well, no?

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    6 years 1 month ago #203 by Anne
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  • Yes it does!
    6 years 4 weeks ago #204 by Rose Bunny
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  • Next chapter some time this weekend.
    I've been busy

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    6 years 4 weeks ago #205 by Anne
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  • of course, I could postpone my writing , in order to find you an icon.

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    6 years 4 weeks ago #207 by null0trooper
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  • Rose Bunny wrote: of course, I could postpone my writing , in order to find you an icon.


    Would this one do?


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    6 years 4 weeks ago #208 by Anne
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  • nope, I'm much too naughty to use that one.
    6 years 3 weeks ago #209 by Rose Bunny
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  • And now... Chapter 23!

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    6 years 3 weeks ago #210 by Anne
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  • I've been suspicious that was where you were going with this... Now how and why did he get the way he was!?!?!?
    6 years 3 weeks ago - 6 years 3 weeks ago #211 by Rose Bunny
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  • Anne wrote: I've been suspicious that was where you were going with this... Now how and why did he get the way he was!?!?!?


    This will be told... if you write more in-depth of a response to the latest chapter.

    :P

    Now we just need Mal and Null to pop in and say "I knew it all along" ... :S

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    6 years 3 weeks ago #212 by Anne
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  • Hmm... More in depth you say? Your chapters tend to be short (but short is better than none!) and packed with either action or character development. Interesting in a way to see Lucy make herself psychically invisible. I don't recall seeing her do exactly that before. Still sort of wondering what the deal is with Stephanie, why she's having a nose bleed. What her problem is and why she has it in for the misfits so badly. Okay they didn't fall down and worship her, nor did they move out of her way. They ignored her and essentially patted her cheek and said, 'My, you must need to be fed and changed. How'd you escape your keeper...?'
    6 years 3 weeks ago - 6 years 3 weeks ago #213 by Rose Bunny
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  • She's just kind of a general snot. But she cares for Stefan, and wants him happy. That's why she maneuvered Patty into being his girlfriend... and to keep him happy, she has to keep Patty happy.

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  • Anne wrote: Still sort of wondering what the deal is with Stephanie, why she's having a nose bleed. What her problem is and why she has it in for the misfits so badly.


    She still needs to build cred for having her crew's backs. Of course, we knew that. :)

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    6 years 3 weeks ago - 6 years 3 weeks ago #215 by Malady
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  • My schedule's full today, but those scenes!

    Whoops, actually got no time tomorrow, but today is good.

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    6 years 3 weeks ago - 6 years 3 weeks ago #216 by Rose Bunny
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  • No, that was Nacht sitting there. Maybe she heard, maybe she didn't. and no, he can't go back in, as he is now bigger than she is. As for Motherload, you need your skin to be able to breathe, but here she is having to wear this skin-tight suit for hours on end. your skin gets irritated and sweaty and clammy, and you can't take off the suit. Contact dermatitis. As for Exquisite, go back and re-read A little R&R 3.

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    6 years 3 weeks ago - 6 years 3 weeks ago #217 by Malady
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  • ^ - Lol and :sick: if Lucy goes into Donnie. Crazy Silly idea.

    Sweet reunion though!

    Hmm... Can Donnie communicate through Lucy??

    The Doyle staff will react to Lucy's break-in, and the Misfits will work through this revelation of Donnie, but I can't predict more specifically with any accuracy.

    Oh, wait, Donnie can give info on his Handler and from there, to the guy who wants revenge on Carson? Does he have any backup plans, I wonder...

    Maybe Donnie will get a half-human form like Lucy does... Do some meditation, etc.

    Lol as Donnie will look like the older brother, even though he's the younger? ... Protective Older Brother jokes, Ahoy!

    ----

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    6 years 2 weeks ago #218 by Rose Bunny
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  • TOMORROW THOU SHALT GET NEW MISFITS ACTION MOST EPIC.

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  • ... and there you go, new chapter.

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    6 years 2 weeks ago - 6 years 2 weeks ago #220 by Malady
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  • Whoo! Chapter 24!

    Oooh! That opening sentence! [ Click to expand ]
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  • I am laughing because I went through all the trouble of revealing that "Oh look, she turned from African-American to Caucasian"... and Mal totally said nothing.

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    6 years 2 weeks ago - 6 years 2 weeks ago #222 by Malady
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  • I did find the "a complexion that could be best described as pale and creamy." intriguing, but yeah... *facepalm* :silly:

    And “Who’s this girl? She looks very pretty.” That should've been a big hint. *sigh*

    I guess she looks more like her mom now.

    Was her nearly getting run over or whatever, because of the race change, I wonder.

    OH. Duplicity will find it harder to get Trish's data 'cause she changed so much??

    Wonder how Jordan reacted to the Picture, if she saw it...
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  • Mal, that's assuming that her mother was Caucasian. Laura's parents weren't blue ( that we know of) ... but yeah, I'll be getting into why becoming a white girl caused her problems, and may still...

    "Who told Tempest?"

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    6 years 2 weeks ago - 6 years 2 weeks ago #224 by Malady
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  • Rose Bunny wrote: Mal, that's assuming that her mother was Caucasian. Laura's parents weren't blue ( that we know of) ... but yeah, I'll be getting into why becoming a white girl caused her problems, and may still...

    "Who told Tempest?"


    Ah. Cool!

    Yeah, there's that assumption, and I'll run with it as long as I can, 'cause it ups the drama, with a mixed-race couple and stuff. No Misfit has a nice uncomplicated backstory??

    Also, Cerulea was dosed with stuff, she wasn't a regular mutant, so there's that...

    Duplicity using Tempest as a Weapon? I'll take that bet too. ... There is the question of how successful it'll be...
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  • Essylt laughed, and in a laughing tone replied. “Well, you see… Jade was planning a prank for Nikki… I don’t know all the details, exactly… but she saw me at a distance, and due to the similarity in appearance, I soon ended up covered in whipped cream in the middle of the Quad. So now Jade owes me a rather lot of babysitting hours.”


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    6 years 1 week ago #226 by Rose Bunny
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    6 years 6 days ago #227 by Rose Bunny
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  • Or you know, not... because writer's block.

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    6 years 6 days ago - 6 years 6 days ago #228 by Malady
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    6 years 4 days ago #229 by Rose Bunny
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  • Better late than never.

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  • Misfits 25 Notes

    Whoo! Reveals! ... And a few callbacks, and some new mysteries!

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  • Jeez... you do more shipping than FEDeX and UPS combined.

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  • True. ... Since Stephan is paired up, his sister should be, too, since they're the same person?

    Wait... Does she remember everything that happens as Stefan?? :blink:

    ...

    Hmm... Essy hugs solve mental problems, they're also just sweet!

    ... Wonder how many problems will be solved by just hugging it out! Aww! lol.
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  • Who says Stefan and Stephanie don't both get something out of it?

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  • Trish grinned. “Yeah, it was bad. I grew up in a poor section of Cleveland. Mom had left soon after I was born, but Dad loved me and worked his hardest to give me everything I needed.


    I thought that Trish got her code name from a younger sibling?


    "Whoo, aren’t we all a mess?”, Essylt laughed.


    A bit of the old mood whiplash on that segue.


    Dad took me to see a dermatologist, but they couldn’t find a cause. they thought it might be dietary, so they put me on a special diet. That didn’t seem to do anything for my skin problem.


    Initial cap. Tyrosine deficiency is said to be rare. Interestingly, there is a go-see-your-doctor-now illness that has hyperpigmentation as a symptom.


    Next to her was a girl that was somewhat overweight, packed into booty shorts, and a top that didn’t just give her a muffin-top, no it gave her the whole bakery. She had long braids, obviously extensions, her nails were at least 3 inches, and hot pink.


    Girl's got some acceptance issues.


    Malady wrote: Wait, Bellows wanted "a joint session where you both are to be present" ... How would that work, if they share the same body? Can both of them be active at the same time???

    Lol if there's a third personality.


    Both present:
    I've read that some people have alters that can be co-conscious (i.e., Stephanie being aware of what is happening to Stefan when she isn't driving), but those folks may have had a lot of therapy by that point. Maybe one of the Psychic Arts staff or upperclassmen can help. If there are memories, skills, powers that neither Stefan or Stephanie can access, that could mean there's . . .

    A third on board:
    On the one hand, for story reasons it could be funny. On the other, the longer Stephanie has been around, the younger Stefan was when he was traumatized to the point of developing dissociative identity disorder . It would make for a nasty twist: the one who isn't driving stays busy keeping a third alter or some hallow-dwelling entity from taking over and getting them both killed, or worse.

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  • I don't remember the little sister part, if that is true, my bad.

    from Host 6:

    “Yeah”, said Lucy as she looked down. “My code name is Host, because of that.”

    Trish gulped. “I don’t have my MID yet, I think I’m going to choose Backslide as my codename, because I’m a warper, I can push everything in a 50 yard radius away from me.”

    Lucy looked up. “That sounds cool. oh, lunch is nearly over. I should get ready for class.”

    Trish looked at her watch. “Yeah, I should get back to the testing, it was nice to meet you!”

    Lucy watched as Trish got up and turned away. her new friend walked away, with a slight wiggle that in the tight outfit she was wearing clearly showed off a behind that would put to shame J-Lo and any number of Kardashian sisters.

    “Hm… Maybe she should rethink using ‘backslide’… “, Lucy pondered.


    Steph isn't the original, but she seemingly has her license, while Stefan is the original... but has a learner's permit. So he doesn't get to drive without supervision.

    Here's where where we get into the mystery of the "siblings"... We know that Stefan has/had a sister...

    aaaand back to Trish, It's hard on her, growing up black, in a black-majority neighborhood, and turning caucasian. To a large degree, she's trained herself to "fit in" with the white crowd. If she maintained 'hood mannerisms and speech patterns, she'd probably get labeled a wigger , and get beat up or raped.

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  • yeas, and I was expanding on your comment with a metaphor. Stefen may be in the driver's seat, but he has someone else riding shotgun, who can drive on their own.

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  • Misfits is going on indefinite Hiatus.

    It's just too hard writing 5 months ahead of the actual story, and hoping I don't write something that gets turned into "oops, that got nerfed in Canon"

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  • Rose Bunny wrote: Misfits is going on indefinite Hiatus.

    It's just too hard writing 5 months ahead of the actual story, and hoping I don't write something that gets turned into "oops, that got nerfed in Canon"


    Makes sense. Good Luck in whatever comes next!
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  • Rose Bunny wrote: Misfits is going on indefinite Hiatus.

    It's just too hard writing 5 months ahead of the actual story, and hoping I don't write something that gets turned into "oops, that got nerfed in Canon"


    IIRC, the authors have said they'd be willing to answer some questions about planned events, either directly through PM or posted for discussion in Order of the Worn Wrench.

    For some things, as long as the story doesn't develop the canon characters or whatever happens in canon would be off-screen for the story, you could be okay anyway with only minor tweaking or lampshade hanging needed.

    And then there's whatever happens between 1600 04 APR 08 and 0700 14 APR 08, which is a MAJOR plot point, loaded with fudge, tons of tear-salted whipped cream, sprinkled with WTF-brand jimmies, and a hefty slice of GOO thingy plopped on top. At the minimum, I'd expect a massive mindscrew-slash-retcon once the Tao reweaves the burnt section of the Tapestry to match the final outcome.

    For the Misfits, you'd have to ask yourself what information Nimbus would have on them, and decide his initial response. Given their powers, would he want Host or Motherlode anywhere near his working? Would it shut the Necromancer up if he offered to let a Sidhe mage like Eire survive while he uses Fey? Did someone just happen to win an all-expenses-paid vacation for Host and her friends to Disneyland France? (Whateley students visiting France has worked out so well lately!)

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  • The gang will -probably- be returning after the Twitch Presents Dr. Who marathon finishes up.

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  • The Final (!!!!!) episode of The Misfits is up.

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  • What.

    This is a very mysterious episode. And very ominous, as mysteries in this universe, involving mad scientists and large prisons usually are...

    Chances that this LeAnna is referring to a different LeAnna from Call Of The Waters, is unlikely.

    Betting this is a Mutant Cloning Facility of some kind... Focused on Whateley...

    So, now there's a Clone!LeAnna based off her pre-mutation self, running around in the Andes Mountains??

    ...

    Also, those neck itches... What's with that? It seems like a reaction to the Earthquakes or something... But why?
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