Question Deathwalker Discussion

Well, here is the discussion for my fanfiction, Deathwalker.

Wait... So how old is Krachtbron? 'Cause the "He's still alive?" makes me think that the Whateley person expected him to be dead from old age or something... 'Else, how much of a nuisance was Krachtborn?

... There's a few spelling mistakes, like Kracthbron, and adress... ... Too tired to look again, sorry.

No need to be sorry for being tired, we're all humans... right?

Anyway, Krachtbron is a 20 years old female to male mutant transgender who was cute in his own way, but too defiant of the rules, more breaking them out of principle than other reasons, which is why they thought that he'd have done something stupid and got himself killed.

Wyverntamer wrote: No need to be sorry for being tired, we're all humans... right?

Anyway, Krachtbron is a 20 years old female to male mutant transgender who was cute in his own way, but too defiant of the rules, more breaking them out of principle than other reasons, which is why they thought that he'd have done something stupid and got himself killed.

Well, I could have waited to make a comprehensive list, which I'm not doing, so don't expect that... 'sexual defiant' ... 'sexual deviant'? 'sexually defiant'?

And 'headsup' -> 'heads up'

So how old is Alexandra? 'Cause ... Okay, the Netherlands has sexual majority at 16... So, presuming that she's at least 16 since she's dating, and possibly dating+, a 20-yr-old... I don't know how I feel about that... ...

But whatever. Main issue is that... Okay, Netherlands is Adult at 18... ... Okay, is she too old or not strange enough for Whateley? Although, that power is something...

'Cause there are services for adult supers and Alexandra could just use those instead? Or just go to Whateley, get tested, and then return to the Netherlands if there aren't any complications like GSD, etc.

I guess her codename's gotta be Deathwalker...

Malady wrote: Well, I could have waited to make a comprehensive list, which I'm not doing, so don't expect that... 'sexual defiant' ... 'sexual deviant'? 'sexually defiant'?

Ah... You got me there, I don't know the differences between all those formulations, it all looks the same to me...

And 'headsup' -> 'heads up'

So how old is Alexandra? 'Cause ... Okay, the Netherlands has sexual majority at 16... So, presuming that she's at least 16 since she's dating, and possibly dating+, a 20-yr-old... I don't know how I feel about that... ...

But whatever. Main issue is that... Okay, Netherlands is Adult at 18... ... Okay, is she too old or not strange enough for Whateley? Although, that power is something...

'Cause there are services for adult supers and Alexandra could just use those instead? Or just go to Whateley, get tested, and then return to the Netherlands if there aren't any complications like GSD, etc.

I guess her codename's gotta be Deathwalker...

She is technically 18, but got sent back a bit, to where her body is now 16, and by the way, in the Netherlands (at least where I live), we don't look up at some of those couples who have a big gap in age between them. And she doesn't go to the adult services since both Jacob Peterson (one of her fathers) and Krachtbron think it is bad for her, and now her girlfriends and Krachtbron have a good excuse to go the USA.

And she'll have two codenames, Deathwalker for her vigilante persona, and Alexandria for her pure hero persona. Her other father (Jacco Triae) is a mage who is good at predicting powers, and he predicted that a mutant with the powers of Alexandra would appear, and that is why Jacob wrote that book Deathwalker (The quotes above the chapters are from that fictional book).