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Question Tea and Dagger!
- Yolandria
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Mistress of the shelter for lost and redeemable Woobies!
- Rose Bunny
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High-Priestess of the Order of Spirit-Chan
- Iwasforger03
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Jadis is one of my favorites of all favs. I do not deny this. She is amazing.
I'm glad to see Tansy trying to make up to Jadis. I'm glad to see Jadis having something in her life fixed a little bit.
I am a Sexy Shoeless God of War - So suck it CP!
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- Dreamer
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Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.
Tea and Dagger comments
Tansy can only take so much before losing her temper, yell she is trying to apologize so would Jadis shut up so she can already. Ouch, even Louis is freaked out by the devil that was bound to Jadis, poor girl. Tansy really wants to make things right and for them to be friends again, Jadis admitting she can't right now and might never, at least she is honest. Those last comments between them communicated so much in so few words. There is a chance for them to be friends again, in time. Short, but good, loved seeing them talk to each other.
Thank You for story comments appreciated and help me know me they are being read and liked.

- Arcanist Lupus
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Does anybody else think that it would be hilarious to lock Ayla, Tansy, and Jadis in a room together? It wouldn't be very nice, but the awkwardness would be through the roof. I bet Murphy would go for it. Give them a large stack of literature to go through, but cherry pick it for themes of betrayal and bullying.
"Shared pain is lessened; shared joy, increased — thus do we refute entropy." - Spider Robinson
- JG
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Then realize that they won't be allowed out until they reconcile.
Meanwhile...
Murphy is rapidly getting bored, and even on a good day is disinclined to being Miss Sweetness & Light.
- Yolandria
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Mistress of the shelter for lost and redeemable Woobies!
- Katssun
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And Tansy knew it would go that way.
It's a short piece, but it says so much.
It's cute how well Jadis and Tansy know each other's tastes. Even with the iciness of the room, there's this familiarity that even Jadis and Ayla didn't quite have on the patio. They really were that close before.
- Anne
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- Iwasforger03
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Anne wrote: I think the tension between Jadis and Ayla is the tension between a boy and a girl. I think a lot of it is because Jadis just doesn't know how to deal with boys, and Ayla really doesn't know how to deal with girls. Remember that although Ayla looks like a super-model in some ways, his equipment and mind are distinctly male. Oh and Jadis is very aware of that fact (that is that Ayla considers himself male) so she's sort of always looking for that subtle sign that says you poor dear, you must be lonely because you aren't one of the beautiful people. Not that faction 3 wouldn't consider her a 'pretty'...
Yeah, except that by this point, that tension should be partially resolved. They kissed, and decided they were wrong for each other.
I'd say it might be more of a case of "We live in rather different worlds and we know it." Jadis is just too used to being backstabbed. She expects it. Even if we the readers believe Ayla would never, Jadis may not be fully convinced of that herself.
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- elrodw
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I know a secret, I know a secret!!!

Wanna hint? It has nothing to do with Ayla. Evil Grin.
Never give up, Never surrender! Captain Peter Quincy Taggert
- Dreamer
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Hhm, based on the last few previous post before this one, it has something to do with why Jadis wasn't into Ayla. Could it be Jadis is a closeted lesbian and since she has never shown any interest in anyone in any of the stories which I can recall, we have no clue who she is attracted to. *goes back to stirring the pot*elrodw wrote: (amused snerk!)
I know a secret, I know a secret!!!
Wanna hint? It has nothing to do with Ayla. Evil Grin.

Thank You for story comments appreciated and help me know me they are being read and liked.

- Katssun
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I mean, Kate refuses to tell Thorn to go away. Maybe Jadis doesn't mind as much as she claims either. Plus, she's got the PK claws for carving too.
- E. E. Nalley
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Rose Bunny wrote: I still want to see her go home over one of the breaks and make peace with little Spirit-Chan.
I promise, Rose, the spirit is fine!
I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
- E. E. Nalley
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elrodw wrote: (amused snerk!)
I know a secret, I know a secret!!!
Wanna hint? It has nothing to do with Ayla. Evil Grin.
Hehe. Boy do we have fireworks for you guys in July! And if I missed a question feel free to hit me again in a story feedback thread. If I can answer I will and if I can't I'll say so!
I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
- Rose Bunny
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E. E. Nalley wrote:
Rose Bunny wrote: I still want to see her go home over one of the breaks and make peace with little Spirit-Chan.
I promise, Rose, the spirit is fine!
I need closure!

High-Priestess of the Order of Spirit-Chan
- Sir Lee
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Elrod, try cutting down on the pain medication. You are sounding... giddy?elrodw wrote: (amused snerk!)
I know a secret, I know a secret!!!
Wanna hint? It has nothing to do with Ayla. Evil Grin.
- E. E. Nalley
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Sir Lee wrote:
Elrod, try cutting down on the pain medication. You are sounding... giddy?elrodw wrote: (amused snerk!)
I know a secret, I know a secret!!!
Wanna hint? It has nothing to do with Ayla. Evil Grin.
He's alright, I should know, we've met twice this week, both Saturday in GA as he was passing through on family business and then again last night here in Jacksonville where we both happened to be. If you want to be afraid of something, be afraid of those epic scheming sessions!!!

I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
- Phoenix Spiritus
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E. E. Nalley wrote: If you want to be afraid of something, be afraid of those epic scheming sessions!!!
Well ... at least JG wasn't there sooo I'm not actually terrified...
- Rose Bunny
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Phoenix Spiritus wrote:
Well ... at least JG wasn't there sooo I'm not actually terrified...
This is why Satan invented Skype.
High-Priestess of the Order of Spirit-Chan
- elrodw
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Phoenix Spiritus wrote:
E. E. Nalley wrote: If you want to be afraid of something, be afraid of those epic scheming sessions!!!
Well ... at least JG wasn't there sooo I'm not actually terrified...


Never give up, Never surrender! Captain Peter Quincy Taggert
- mittfh
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Then again, there still exists the (remote?) possibility of Bek and/or Morpheus turning up...
As the right side of the brain controls the left side of the body, then only left-handers are in their right mind!
- Iwasforger03
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I am a Sexy Shoeless God of War - So suck it CP!
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