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Question The Gates of the Garden

7 years 9 months ago #1 by mittfh
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    • As the (mis)quote goes, Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned.

    So when the woman in question is the mother of the Mahren siblings, one of whom has been forcibly separated from her, the other she believes is dead; and she's apparently a mutant herself, she takes no prisoners upon reaching the gates of a certain prestigious boarding school...

    Meanwhile, something's afoot in the sims, with suspicion one team's been throwing matches.

    (Deliberately keeping things vague here, in case anyone saunters past who hasn't read the tale yet).
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    7 years 9 months ago #2 by Arcanist Lupus
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    • Ooh, Parents' Day is coming up! I've been looking forward to that.

    It's a good think that Mama Mahren got there a day early. I imagine that Carson doesn't have a drop of time on Parents' Day.


    I'd highlight the parts of the story that I liked the most, but I'd basically be repeating the story again, so I won't bother.
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    7 years 9 months ago - 7 years 9 months ago #3 by Dreamer
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    • SPOILER ALERT
    Below is a stream of conscious commentary I type up as I read the story. There will details from the story included in it. If you have not read the story yet and don't wish to have details of it spoiled, read no further.


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    7 years 9 months ago - 7 years 9 months ago #4 by Arcanist Lupus
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    • Dreamer wrote:

    "Have fun storming the castle!" Sandra grinned.

    Now Monty Python reference.


    Excuse me? That line belongs to Miracle Max, from the Princess Bride!
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    7 years 9 months ago - 7 years 9 months ago #5 by Dreamer
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    • Arcanist Lupus wrote:

    Dreamer wrote:

    "Have fun storming the castle!" Sandra grinned.

    Now Monty Python reference.


    Excuse me? That line belongs to Miracle Max, from the Princess Bride!

    *facepalms* Can't believe I got those two mixed up, my bad. Teach me to drink more water before reading, stupid heat has me mildly dehydrated. :oops:
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    7 years 9 months ago #6 by Domoviye
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    • Dreamer wrote:

    Arcanist Lupus wrote:

    Dreamer wrote:

    "Have fun storming the castle!" Sandra grinned.

    Now Monty Python reference.


    Excuse me? That line belongs to Miracle Max, from the Princess Bride!

    *facepalms* Can't believe I got those two mixed up, my bad.


    We need a kick in the pants button for situations like this.
    7 years 9 months ago #7 by mhalpern
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    • I look forward to part 2...
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    7 years 9 months ago #8 by Katssun
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    • Is JG's favorite word: "harridan" perhaps? Because it is a really good word.

    I think we're starting to see how Miranda ends up being a valued officer in the military years later. She's maturing rapidly just from Fubar's tutelage, and pulling emotions off other adults and older teens. Her wardrobe has also increased dramatically in one day!

    Makes me wonder how much she's rubbing off on the other junior high girls (and one generally-boy). Maybe Team Awesome! won't be as much of a handful of bumbling that the TLW are, for better or far worse.

    Jericho's lady love came up! So much misdirection and verbal interplay JG. How thou toys with us so! Worthy of Austen and Bronte.
    7 years 9 months ago #9 by Rose Bunny
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    • Katssun wrote: Is JG's favorite word: "harridan" perhaps? Because it is a really good word.


    only as much as the writers love to have people "goggle".
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    7 years 9 months ago #10 by JG
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    • My favorite word is eviscerate.

    Harridan is number two.

    I LOVE evocative words with clear, distinct, almost poetic meaning.
    7 years 9 months ago #11 by Arcanist Lupus
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    • So... aposiopesis is not in your top ten, then?
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    7 years 9 months ago - 7 years 9 months ago #12 by JG
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    • Arcanist Lupus wrote: So... aposiopesis is not in your top ten, then?


    Go to time out with the rest of the misbehaving children.
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    • JG wrote: My favorite word is eviscerate.

    Harridan is number two.

    I LOVE evocative words with clear, distinct, almost poetic meaning.

    What about Defenestration - the word that starts wars... at least in Prague
    7 years 9 months ago #14 by JG
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    • DanZilla wrote:

    JG wrote: My favorite word is eviscerate.

    Harridan is number two.

    I LOVE evocative words with clear, distinct, almost poetic meaning.

    What about Defenestration - the word that starts wars... at least in Prague


    You gotta love it when a form of attack becomes common enough that they have to create a word to encompass the majesty of the act.
    7 years 9 months ago #15 by mhalpern
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    • Something that I almost completely glossed over Team Kimba are throwing sim matches, the question is why
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    • mhalpern wrote: Something that I almost completely glossed over Team Kimba are throwing sim matches, the question is why

    Maybe they are taking the Chou route, and trying to make freshman year look like a fluke. I doubt that though. The majority of the conversation was around how Fey hesitated. It might be due to her uncertainty in herself. She put a curse on Hank, one that could have killed him. She was drifting towards becoming the Queen to Come, and an almost certain war between the fae and humanity.

    She needs to get her head back in the right place.
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    7 years 9 months ago #17 by Valentine
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    • mhalpern wrote: Something that I almost completely glossed over Team Kimba are throwing sim matches, the question is why


    Part of them attempting a lower profile, although I doubt they are fooling Gunny, Sam, or any of the staff that was there in the Spring. Probably aren't fooling the Grunts either.

    Hey look, another of Eldritch's family shows up, and no one tells her before she finds out for herself.

    Looks like the Turners and Carlyles are getting along great. I wonder if Mama Turner will be introduced to "Cousin" Toni.

    I bet Darwin would contribute to a feed Razorback fund.
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    7 years 9 months ago #18 by Anne
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    • I imagine that Darwin would do more than feed Jack if they were asked!

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    7 years 9 months ago - 7 years 9 months ago #19 by JG
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    • Valentine wrote:
    Hey look, another of Eldritch's family shows up, and no one tells her before she finds out for herself.


    There really is no "good way" for anyone to break this to Caitlin. Period.

    Esecially since the staff had ZERO lead time to the problem, and because mama is a handful, getting her up to speed and understanding WHY her daughter is there before she does anything MORE rash occupies the priority list.

    People make mistakes. They fuck up. Carson is no more a perfect person than natalie mahren. Delarose doesn't have the time to pander to Caitlin's social insecurities

    And most impotantly, they trust Caitlin not to go nuclear because a parent might not have given up as much as they thought she had.

    Consider that no one was expecting natalie mahren to come to her daughter's defense. No one expected her to come to whateley, because once a child is surrendered to CPS, it is assumed that they have no interest or cannot feasibly see to the health and well-being of the child.

    To get a court-order as fast as she did would have required Natalie to file for divorce on the grounds of child abandonment in an extremely rapid fashion. Which she did.

    Natalie's will and methods are about as subtle and flexible as Caitlin's when it comes right down to it.

    This kind of thing ALWAYS creates problems.
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    7 years 9 months ago #20 by Schol-R-LEA
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    • JG wrote:

    DanZilla wrote:

    JG wrote: My favorite word is eviscerate.

    Harridan is number two.

    I LOVE evocative words with clear, distinct, almost poetic meaning.

    What about Defenestration - the word that starts wars... at least in Prague


    You gotta love it when a form of attack becomes common enough that they have to create a word to encompass the majesty of the act.


    That, and it is not nearly so queasily creepy a word as, say, immurement.
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    7 years 9 months ago - 7 years 9 months ago #21 by Schol-R-LEA
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    • JG wrote: There really is no "good way" for anyone to break this to Caitlin. Period.


    This definitely is something that would elicit a few 'can't see any way this could end badly, nope!' comments. Because that sort of imminent carnage really calls for deadpan.

    It's almost a shame that neither Murphy nor Nacht were on hand and aware of the fuse which just got lit in their midst.
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    7 years 9 months ago #22 by Arcanist Lupus
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    • JG wrote: There really is no "good way" for anyone to break this to Caitlin. Period.

    Esecially since the staff had ZERO lead time to the problem, and because mama is a handful, getting her up to speed and understanding WHY her daughter is there before she does anything MORE rash occupies the priority list.

    People make mistakes. They fuck up. Carson is no more a perfect person than natalie mahren. Delarose doesn't have the time to pander to Caitlin's social insecurities

    And it's not something they can delegate. The number of people who know that Caitlin is Erik Mahren is extremely small, for secrecy's sake. All of them are senior staff and thus up to their eyeballs with work.

    Carson did avoid an earlier meeting. It's just that there's only so much maneuvering she can do without it seeming suspicious.
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    • I half expect that Caitlyn went straight to Foobs room and thatFoob is currently explaining the arrival and calming process of one Natalie Mahren.
    And possibly how Prison Bitch recognized the punch style. :)
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    • I can't wait for the conversation where Caitlyn learns that her mother is a mutant. Actually, better yet have the Caitlyn/Natalie reunion first, and then spring that particular bombshell on them at the same time, while they're still off balance. :twisted:


    On other notes, I loved Delarose's trolling of Carson on the introduction to the problem. Also, Miranda was absolutely magnificent at showing the exact right balance of love for her mother and comfort at Whateley to help her mother accept the necessity of the school.
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    • Arcanist Lupus wrote:

    JG wrote: There really is no "good way" for anyone to break this to Caitlin. Period.

    Esecially since the staff had ZERO lead time to the problem, and because mama is a handful, getting her up to speed and understanding WHY her daughter is there before she does anything MORE rash occupies the priority list.

    People make mistakes. They fuck up. Carson is no more a perfect person than natalie mahren. Delarose doesn't have the time to pander to Caitlin's social insecurities

    And it's not something they can delegate. The number of people who know that Caitlin is Erik Mahren is extremely small, for secrecy's sake. All of them are senior staff and thus up to their eyeballs with work.

    Carson did avoid an earlier meeting. It's just that there's only so much maneuvering she can do without it seeming suspicious.


    Actually the number is much higher than you think, since it was revealed that some of the telepaths and empaths know, because there was no to hide the "broadcast personality." The Magic and Psychic teachers, some of the range instructors, and to be honest if some of third platoon hasn't figured it out, they are dumber than Prison Bitch acts.

    To be realistic though, Fubar would have been best. He spent the time to talk to Miranda. Oddly Grimes can admit that she didn't know this time.
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    • Yeah Grimes is innocent having dealt with the bonfire Caitlin created with the three little witches.

    Great story.
    Natalie has consistently come off as a high strung, violent woman, who would kill to protect her family. Not a good combination, but the love she showed to her youngest makes up for a lot of her flaws.
    And Prison Bitch is rapidly rising in my opinion. He was never a bad guy to me, I try to judge people on their actions, and he came across as a slimy person who would do the right thing when necessary. Jumping in to take down lamp lighter and not actively creeping out the Holigans was more than enough to make up for the stories told about him. Seeing him in action at Whateley, I wouldn't want to be his friend, but I wouldnt look down on him either and could respect him for his work. Even if I never took my hand away from my wallet while anywhere within a hundred meters of him.
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    • So the three little witches have had their wells lit? I'm so hoping they get another story to cause mayham in.
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    • I love the story, but i have a minor thing to nitpick. The dateline on the story is saturday october 26 but

    Miranda nodded unenthusiastically, and with greatly exaggerated unwillingness and slowness made a huge show of not wanting to leave then ran like hell to her first class in the blind hope that running would make the day go faster.

    makes it seem like she has a normal class day.
    I know a lot of people have saturday classes, but i'm surprised a 10 year old grade school kid would have them too
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    • reno wrote: I love the story, but i have a minor thing to nitpick. The dateline on the story is saturday october 26 but

    Miranda nodded unenthusiastically, and with greatly exaggerated unwillingness and slowness made a huge show of not wanting to leave then ran like hell to her first class in the blind hope that running would make the day go faster.

    makes it seem like she has a normal class day.
    I know a lot of people have saturday classes, but i'm surprised a 10 year old grade school kid would have them too


    Probably psychic and powers classes. We saw Ember at the range practicing her pyrotechnics, it's reasonable to think Miranda would have something similar.
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    • konzill wrote: So the three little witches have had their wells lit? I'm so hoping they get another story to cause mayham in.

    Well, it puts a hard limit on the time they have available to try and capture a certain diminiutive flyer to procure some of her non-existent essence...
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    • reno wrote: I love the story, but i have a minor thing to nitpick. The dateline on the story is saturday october 26 but


    The Oct. 26, 2007 date is correct, but the story is happening Friday morning, so Miranda would have had classes.


    “Is this Whateley Academy?” The woman, dressed in black jeans and a wifebeater fixed “Prison Bitch” with a glare that was strangely familiar.

    “Yes ma’am but parent’s day isn’t until…”


    The next day, Saturday, Oct. 27, 2007.
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    • Razorback and friends should probably have nominated to Companions of the Order of Australia, after what happened in Darwin.
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    • It's one of those things. If they nominate the Outcasts, they would pretty much have to nominate Dr. Diabolik too. Politically untenable.
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    • Also, the Outcasts don't really want the recognition.
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    • Arcanist Lupus wrote: Also, the Outcasts don't really want the recognition.


    When someone isn't in it for the glory, usually they don't feel like they deserve a special reward.

    Especially not kids who couldn't save everyone
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    • Sir Lee wrote: It's one of those things. If they nominate the Outcasts, they would pretty much have to nominate Dr. Diabolik too. Politically untenable.


    Umm .... Australia!

    As long as he gave himself up and took the gaol time, he's good to go!

    You know how many criminals are already in Companions of the Order of Australia? Like, that they knew before offing it to them? (As opposed to politicians, where it's assumed, but we looked the other way).
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    • I'd vote to give them the award.
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    • Remember if they get an award they get exposure, a lot more than just some videos of them fighting. I don't think they really want to deal with all of that.
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    • Also, remember that only Razorback is actually eligible to the Order (being an Australian citizen is a requirement); all the others would have to be honorary awards.
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    • JG, Great story, ... Waiting for the next part is going to wear out my patience. May your muse continue to gift you with tales to share. Thanks.

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    • I could definately see a push to have Razorback made a knight of the order of Australia.

    Partly to rub something into the face of the MCO, and partly for shits and giggles. And the survivors of the hero group. Or mayby lower orders for them.

    And honorary members to the rest of the outcast and Dr. Dad.


    Actually, thinking about it, I could see a quiet offer being made to the Outcasts to award them membership, and I could see Jerico asking for a knighthood for Razorback instead.

    Picture Razor turning up to martial arts class with a lance :)
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    • annachie wrote: I could definately see a push to have Razorback made a knight of the order of Australia.

    Partly to rub something into the face of the MCO, and partly for shits and giggles. And the survivors of the hero group. Or mayby lower orders for them.

    And honorary members to the rest of the outcast and Dr. Dad.

    And then Koala dricks out. "Why do I get a lower order? We went toe-to-toe with him too! And call me Spider, dammit!"
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    • annachie wrote: I could definately see a push to have Razorback made a knight of the order of Australia.

    Partly to rub something into the face of the MCO, and partly for shits and giggles. And the survivors of the hero group. Or mayby lower orders for them.

    And honorary members to the rest of the outcast and Dr. Dad.


    Actually, thinking about it, I could see a quiet offer being made to the Outcasts to award them membership, and I could see Jerico asking for a knighthood for Razorback instead.

    Picture Razor turning up to martial arts class with a lance :)

    All I can picture is Razor spooking all the horses at a jousting match, and perhaps Jericho throwing all the riders' focus
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    • What about Jericho riding Razorback into a joust?
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    • Arcanist Lupus wrote: What about Jericho riding Razorback into a joust?

    That was part of my imagining, but its hard to really call it a joust, both opposing horse and rider would be thrown off their game from the mere sight of them.
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