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Question A Little R&R 3

7 years 7 months ago #1 by Dreamer
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  • More fun with Ribbon and Roulette starting up, don't forget to comment.

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  • Yeah, another great installment for sure.But i have a feeling Exquisite is in over her head. All Alyss has to do is have a little talk with Hippy out back one of these days soon. Or maybe run into Caitlin and explain a few things to her about this new chick and how she caused Amy to go into a burnout. Oh my...That wouldn't be pretty. Not at all...Espec if OC gets involved once Exquisite calls in her minions.

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    7 years 7 months ago #4 by E!
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  • Standing in the purple corner! The Gothic Grappler! The Tiny Terror! RIBBON!

    And Standing in the other corner! The Sister of Suffering! The Excruciating Exemplar! EXQUISITE!

    7 years 7 months ago - 7 years 7 months ago #5 by Malady
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  • ^^^ LOL! ... When Roulette got shocked, and said that it felt different from her other burnouts, I thought she might get a new power out of it or something... If she gets Energizer from this, then my guess of Powers used on her determine what she gets next, is more likely!

    ... And we have Parents' Day!

    Wonder what Mel's powers will be...

    And what Donna's secret is... We haven't seen her around, so guesses are sorta useless...

    Nice to see Roulette getting some use out of her powers. And her mom approves!

    Exquisite... You fail, so much? Bets on how long it'll take her to get stomped by some bigger group?

    Introspection from Ribbon! Very interesting!

    So much to talk about, that I can't keep it in my head! :sigh:
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    7 years 7 months ago #6 by Rose Bunny
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  • Malady wrote: And what Donna's secret is... We haven't seen her around, so guesses are sorta useless...


    Yes we have, she's Carson's best friend, and has a sliver of the Astarte force.

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  • Great update.
    I think we are very close to seeing Alyss cutting lose on the bullies. Regular bullying is one thing, almost killing her best friend is well beyond that.

    It's creepy hearing Saphire talking so casually about eggs and some of them not hatching. Almost like hearing about a stillbirth as if it's no big deal.

    What does the green mist do? It's not a poison or Alyss would likely have gotten a rash or strange feeling for a second or two. And when does she head to Whateley?

    So many good things here.
    7 years 7 months ago #9 by Yolandria
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  • Should have known something was going to happen with Jinx near bye.

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    7 years 7 months ago #10 by Dreamer
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  • Domoviye wrote: Great update.
    I think we are very close to seeing Alyss cutting lose on the bullies. Regular bullying is one thing, almost killing her best friend is well beyond that.


    I expect that Exquisite and friends have a bit to learn about the wonderful world of powers, and how much overdraft their assets can cover on the checks their egos are writing. If they're lucky it won't be Team Awesome teaching those lessons. Messing with the girl who makes the good brownies and cookies!

    Domoviye wrote: It's creepy hearing Saphire talking so casually about eggs and some of them not hatching. Almost like hearing about a stillbirth as if it's no big deal.


    There could be more than just a bit of reptilian appearance coming from the DNA/GSD.

    Domoviye wrote: So many good things here.


    Yup!

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    7 years 7 months ago #12 by Valentine
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  • So now the question is how mad is Alyss?

    A. Alyss gets revenge herself.
    B. Alyss tells the Gadgeteers/Devisors about the attack, and let them get revenge.
    C. Alyss gets Poe involved.
    D. Alyss gets Hawthorne involved.
    E. Alyss lets Team Awesome take care of it.


    I wonder if Diamondback saw/met with Sapphire's family. I wonder if Imp saw/met with Sapphire's family or worse overhear Sapphire's sisters.

    Suddenly, Kaylie let out a loud gasp as glowing green mist began to emerge from her skin and hair.

    Where's Absinthe when you need her.

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    7 years 7 months ago - 7 years 7 months ago #13 by konzill
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  • Alyss is a little mad. Something tells me she might bend her rule about not hurting anyone: No more miss nice girl
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    7 years 7 months ago #14 by Yolandria
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  • I wonder if Diamondback saw/met with Sapphire's family

    Now that's a very interesting question. I bet they would definately have a ton of things to talk about. That's for sure.

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  • Yolandria wrote:

    I wonder if Diamondback saw/met with Sapphire's family

    Now that's a very interesting question. I bet they would definitely have a ton of things to talk about. That's for sure.


    I can just imagine Saphire's little sisters swarming Diamondback and asking her to be their new big sister since their old big sister turned into a pretty. It would also clue Diamondback in as to why she has been sensing jealousy from Saphire.
    7 years 7 months ago - 7 years 7 months ago #16 by Rose Bunny
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  • Exquisite in trying to be the "queen of the school" is setting herself up for failure. Let's think of her competition, even if they don't consider themselves as even trying to be the most popular girl in school...

    the top 3 to not mess with:

    Lanie - wouldn't care about the popularity, but the "Devisor Goddess" would have her fans behind her, she would have Kodiak supporting her, Kayda and Tansy would step in to protect her if anyone messed with her, as certainly the Order would as well.

    Tansy - do I have to explain how bad an idea that'd be? Nope.

    Nikki - more nope. Tick off team Kimba, the Outcasts, Venus Inc... oh yes, and Nikki herself, possibly one of the most powerful mages in the world.

    I'm sure there are more names I'm forgetting, but that's because it's late.

    to summarize... trying to plot your way to most popular girl in Whateley is pretty much a death sentence.

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  • Naomi is yet another character who simply has not realised that she is now a little fish in a much bigger pond. Her plans are doomed to failure because she is a second stringer with mid-range powers, in a school with some of the most powerful mutants on the planet.
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  • Valentine wrote: So now the question is how mad is Alyss?

    A. Alyss gets revenge herself.
    B. Alyss tells the Gadgeteers/Devisors about the attack, and let them get revenge.
    C. Alyss gets Poe involved.
    D. Alyss gets Hawthorne involved.
    E. Alyss lets Team Awesome take care of it.


    I'll take F. All of the above. Much more effective and satisfying. Besides, all of the options mentionned have a right to go for the payback (just try to keep Awesomes away from that...)

    Dang, yet another wannabe godling of the campus like Don Assholo, Stupido, Witchbitch and the Wicked Bitch of the Great North... Does Whateley have to fill quotas or what, like 50% of pricks every year?
    7 years 7 months ago #19 by Angeldude
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  • I wonder how it would go if Exquisite hit Roulette while she's in energizer mode, could she absorb the attack? Since she can't carry her railgun with the battery loaded, could she use herself as the battery when in energizer mode? If both of those are true, it would be awesome watching Roulette shoot Exquisite powered by Exquisite herself.

    Not only could Exquisite find herself in deep shit (pardon my french :-p) if she ticks off any of the other groups, but the fact that she attacked Ribbon means that she already has a target on her back for the worst team she could possibly antagonize: Wondercute. I don't think Team Awesome has joined forces with Wondercute like the 3 children of the apocalypse, but it wouldn't surprise me if they will at some point. They already have a reason to go after her after she attacked the cookie lady.

    Let the speculation of Kaylie's powers and codename begin! Manifester perhaps? As for what the gas does is anyone's guess at this point.

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  • All it would take is Alyss one throw...And Exquisite is done. Dense bracelet to the back of the head. Followed by a circular motion and a quick ribbon garrot to finish her off. Easy peasy. Down side..We would have no more story since Ribbon would either be on the run...or in prison.

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  • Big Al might be of the school that a man fights his own battles, but he is an adult in a child's body. Unlike a teenager in this situation going to the authorities is not anathema to her. Might not be any obvious proof, but the results of that second attack were serious enough that the administration would not just brush it off.

    Arresting her in class and announcing she's being investigated for attempted murder might smarten her up. The fact that they can't make such a charge stick would just mean that they could go. "But we're prepared to give you a second chance." without mentioning how flimsy their evidence is.
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  • Honestly, I found it hard not to respect Exquisite the way she was presented here. She's just made a very bad choice in stooges since she hasn't figured out how Whateley works.

    She wanted to be the new queen bee, the same as she was before, and set out to do exactly that in a very methodical way. She looked at the major cliques to take them over, but found out that thanks to the events of last year, the Alphas no longer control the school, the New Olympians wouldn't let her in and aren't really that strong with Team Kimba and The Outcasts around, The Golden Kids won't take her, and she doesn't want to use modeling for influence and money. So she did the smarter thing and formed her own little group.

    But the problem is she isn't as brutal as Hekate, isn't as manipulative as Tansy (and that didn't work out great for her, did it?), and isn't as powerful as Freya. So she can't brute force it the way she's been doing it. Exquisite hasn't caught on to the fact that no matter how smart or skilled or powerful you are, there's someone else out there that can beat you. That's the entire point of the sims or the grades in combat finals.

    She's about to get a very harsh lesson in why that is, and it will probably make her far, far more dangerous in the long run, because Miss Pryce is clearly not stupid.

    She's just picked the right people at the wrong time. She made the right choices. Starbrite, Gravmax, and Iron are all easy to manipulate idiots. Starbrite has already gathered a lot of the other mean and bitchy girls, Gravmax is wealthy and pretty strong, and Iron is a freebie. Exquisite can manipulate them and ensured their loyalty to her with just two ambushes. She doesn't even care about Amy and Alyss.

    Had she chosen anyone other than Gravmax, Exquisite would probably be fine. Alyss doesn't really care too much now that she's gotten advice from her granddaughter on how to handle teen girls. She's been hit by worse pain, including Rachel's plasma gun, and as Alyss continued to humiliate Starbrite, eventually Exquisite would have cut the girl loose for being an embarrassment, but still kept the rest of the mean girls of the freshmen class.

    But Gravmax and Amy? Amy has a lot of friends. Like...the entirety of Hawthorne lot of friends. Like a large portion of Poe lot of friends. Exquisite was looking at money with Gravmax, and forgot to look at the social circle.


    That aside. I love Amy's mom. All her scenes and Amy's references to her made me laugh or smile or just go "awww". She means well, but for her faults, she made Amy the motherly and self-sufficient young lady she is today. A frozen statue for a whole month when Amy was nine? :lol:

    Sapphire's precocious little sisters were adorable. Opal even liked Amy's hair, so there's a chance that they'll appreciate their big sister again eventually as well.
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  • Valentine wrote: So now the question is how mad is Alyss?

    A. Alyss gets revenge herself.
    B. Alyss tells the Gadgeteers/Devisors about the attack, and let them get revenge.
    C. Alyss gets Poe involved.
    D. Alyss gets Hawthorne involved.
    E. Alyss lets Team Awesome take care of it.


    I wonder if Diamondback saw/met with Sapphire's family. I wonder if Imp saw/met with Sapphire's family or worse overhear Sapphire's sisters.

    Suddenly, Kaylie let out a loud gasp as glowing green mist began to emerge from her skin and hair.

    Where's Absinthe when you need her.


    F. Gets the bad seeds involved.
    G. Informs security.
    E. Asks Tansy for help.
    G. All of the above.
    H. Or just informs the Alpha. They cover most of those options.
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  • If the sphere was back up and running, then they might have more evidence than you'd think, plus the bioscanners they have on her, if they see that Amy was in intense pain before the burnout started and immediately after contact with Exquisite, that will be more than enough evidence to make this burnout suspicious.

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  • NJM1564 wrote:

    Valentine wrote: So now the question is how mad is Alyss?

    A. Alyss gets revenge herself.
    B. Alyss tells the Gadgeteers/Devisors about the attack, and let them get revenge.
    C. Alyss gets Poe involved.
    D. Alyss gets Hawthorne involved.
    E. Alyss lets Team Awesome take care of it.


    I wonder if Diamondback saw/met with Sapphire's family. I wonder if Imp saw/met with Sapphire's family or worse overhear Sapphire's sisters.

    Suddenly, Kaylie let out a loud gasp as glowing green mist began to emerge from her skin and hair.

    Where's Absinthe when you need her.


    F. Gets the bad seeds involved.
    G. Informs security.
    E. Asks Tansy for help.
    G. All of the above.
    H. Or just informs the Alpha. They cover most of those options.

    I. all of the above possibly minus F, plus goodwill incentives where applicable.

    also remember Alyss now knows Exquisite is an EX 4, now with Ribbon's mental enhancements, such as internal calculator and fairly accurate internal clock mean that she can gauge and exert exactly the force needed to hurt as much as she can without causing injury. she just needs a little bit of practice with her bracelets to get the speed down.

    On a side note, I am guessing Kaylie's a PK or related power set, it sounds like a variant of a pk shell, not a lot of detail to go off of, but still, as for money, thats easy, not only does Alyss already have a job, but the Poe Halloween costumes are a great audition for Venus Inc,

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  • Domoviye wrote: It's creepy hearing Saphire talking so casually about eggs and some of them not hatching. Almost like hearing about a stillbirth as if it's no big deal.

    More like the reality of what used to happen every month. You could drive yourself to depression about the lost potential, or just accept it as a part of life and move on.
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  • konzill wrote: Alyss is a little mad. Something tells me she might bend her rule about not hurting anyone:

    Actually, the rule is narrower. She won't significantly hurt "children" (which includes teens) unless absolutely necessary. Big difference. But in this case, it would likely hold. To her Big Al part, the girl is little more than a painfully naughty child who caused unexpectedly severe problems with her tantrums. A child to be corrected rather than an enemy to be destroyed.
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  • Katssun wrote: Honestly, I found it hard not to respect Exquisite the way she was presented here. She's just made a very bad choice in stooges since she hasn't figured out how Whateley works.


    i.e., "Excellent plan, details need work"?


    Katssun wrote: She wanted to be the new queen bee, the same as she was before, and set out to do exactly that in a very methodical way. She looked at the major cliques to take them over, but found out that thanks to the events of last year, the Alphas no longer control the school, the New Olympians wouldn't let her in and aren't really that strong with Team Kimba and The Outcasts around, The Golden Kids won't take her, and she doesn't want to use modeling for influence and money. So she did the smarter thing and formed her own little group.


    I'd file her assessment of the Alphas under "hasn't figured out how Whateley works", cross-referenced under "underestimating the lower social classes". In one swoop, Cody's co-opted not only his most openly-dangerous student opponents - if he remembers to follow through, else risk losing the Grunts, Outcasts, Bad Seeds, and Kimbas - but also the most powerful side-liners, given that performance in the Sims carries a lot of the social cachet. On the other hand, there should be a lot more combat sim team leaders than the "Alpha Council" is intended to include. That could just be a "work in progress" issue.


    Katssun wrote: But the problem is she isn't as brutal as Hekate, isn't as manipulative as Tansy (and that didn't work out great for her, did it?), and isn't as powerful as Freya. So she can't brute force it the way she's been doing it. Exquisite hasn't caught on to the fact that no matter how smart or skilled or powerful you are, there's someone else out there that can beat you. That's the entire point of the sims or the grades in combat finals.

    She's about to get a very harsh lesson in why that is, and it will probably make her far, far more dangerous in the long run, because Miss Pryce is clearly not stupid.


    To sharks like HM and TWFKAH - and we have good reason to believe there are other users and abusers just as subtle and ruthless on-campus - the wannabe queen might make a perfect rook or bishop. Once the "hook" is set, she's smart enough to know how badly her line's been played against her.


    Katssun wrote: That aside. I love Amy's mom. All her scenes and Amy's references to her made me laugh or smile or just go "awww". She means well, but for her faults, she made Amy the motherly and self-sufficient young lady she is today. A frozen statue for a whole month when Amy was nine? :lol:


    Heh. "Boob Job" So many lessons taught, in so few words.


    Katssun wrote: Sapphire's precocious little sisters were adorable. Opal even liked Amy's hair, so there's a chance that they'll appreciate their big sister again eventually as well.


    Adorable in that "can't live with them/can't wring their necks either" way that some kids have. :)

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  • The way I would see it, since Ribbon is a adult experience-wise, I think she would cover as many bases as she could inform security Or the Housemothers of Poe and Hawthorn, of her suspicions. continue the thought of asking Ayla for advice.(Who could inform JT and the Bully-busters, get info to find out if she is an energizer or possibly a PDP or an Avatar for PAIN...or some Wyrm Incarna.)

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  • Hardric wrote: I'll take F. All of the above. Much more effective and satisfying. Besides, all of the options mentionned have a right to go for the payback (just try to keep Awesomes away from that...)

    Dang, yet another wannabe godling of the campus like Don Assholo, Stupido, Witchbitch and the Wicked Bitch of the Great North... Does Whateley have to fill quotas or what, like 50% of pricks every year?

    It's not so much a quota, as the reality of how most manifestations would change people's personalities. The "social queens who lost it all" who want it back? Well, think about it:
    -If they have a good manifestation and don't come to Whateley 'under endorsement from law enforcement' then, of course, they're going to want their top space back. And the nature of kids/teenagers is to be prepared to be a little bit of a bully to get other's respect.
    -If they had a bad manifestation and their presence at Whateley is to prevent their presence otherwise being in prison? At the very least, they live in a world that mostly hates mutants, so it's not unreasonable they adopted a bit of "Well, then let me be evil" and have less of a problem being a jerk. At the more worse outcomes, they'll have been turned into some form of selfish-nihilist who thinks they have to be top dog to survive.

    In any case, the school's psychiatric staff is, much like real life schools based in 'rough' areas, badly understaffed.


    In regards to the revenge: I can see it going three ways:
    -Alyss gets Carson/Security involved somehow, arguing that she's not prepared to hurt children herself.
    -Alyss gets the other students involved since Amy has a lot of friends who wouldn't stand for someone picking on her. Hawthorne-bully-busters especially, and Team Awesome would be my favourites to see what happens.
    -Alyss gets another attack on her, and in the moment, lashes out. That could then go several ways, either Exquisite's bruises teach her why you don't pick fights with exemplar sixes, or the fight gets attention from others and people are like "What kind of loser bitch picks a fight with the ten-year-old?"

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  • null0trooper wrote:

    Katssun wrote: But the problem is she isn't as brutal as Hekate, isn't as manipulative as Tansy (and that didn't work out great for her, did it?), and isn't as powerful as Freya. So she can't brute force it the way she's been doing it. Exquisite hasn't caught on to the fact that no matter how smart or skilled or powerful you are, there's someone else out there that can beat you. That's the entire point of the sims or the grades in combat finals.

    She's about to get a very harsh lesson in why that is, and it will probably make her far, far more dangerous in the long run, because Miss Pryce is clearly not stupid.


    To sharks like HM and TWFKAH - and we have good reason to believe there are other users and abusers just as subtle and ruthless on-campus - the wannabe queen might make a perfect rook or bishop. Once the "hook" is set, she's smart enough to know how badly her line's been played against her.

    I didn't think of this until later while I was at work, but isn't Exquisite the first actual "queen bee" we've seen in Gen 1?

    Freya used her powers and simply obtained followers. She asked, they obeyed. She used them like a baseline queen bee would, but she has never had to work at obtaining flunkies. She has big strategy down on using them, but she's missing the key subtle psychological manipulation behind putting another person under her thumb. It simply happened for her. She never knew where they're mentally weak, where they're strong. There's been hints that she can't really deal with people immune to her power, because she's really never been tested or challenged except once or twice.

    Hekate inherited her position from Freya, and maintained it through sheer brutality. She used her magic, her slaves, stringing along the Don, and what she learned from her master to hold that position until Fey and Jade destroyed her. Hekate was calculating, cautious, and utterly vicious, but she was all stick. I think she's smarter now that she's returned, realized her limitations from Fey/Jade as well as Diamondback outmanuvering her during combat finals, but a leader she wasn't. A tyrant, yes, but her position was handed to her.

    Tansy is even more amusing. She took control, but had no idea what to even do with it! We need to remember that deep down, Tansy was a kind-hearted, nerdy, overweight, pimply,lonely girl with low self-esteem. She was a outcast. She never learned the crucial skills of being an evil bitch enough to maintain her power. Not deep down. She was emulating Ayla's sisters and Freya. She could manipulate, she was just pretending and using force to try and keep it. Which she didn't.

    But Exquisite? She's used to doing it the baseline way. She already has all the skills needed to be a queen bee, and her powers don't even really help her maintain it. Her powers are nothing more than a better stick, or an easier carrot for her subordinates. But she could certainly do it the baseline way. She already knows how. She spent her time working on Starbrite. Weeks, by her own admission. There's nothing there for Fubar to find in terms of abusing powers. Starbrite really and truly believes that Naomi Pryce is her friend, that she'll be part of the popular girls for being her "second in command." But Exquisite acknowledges that she's just a pawn.

    That's far scarier to me than girls who become queen bee by mutant powers alone.

    Exquisite knows how to bring others beneath her authority by psychological and political means alone. I don't know any other Gen 1 character that has done that before.
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  • "What kind of loser bitch picks a fight with the ten-year-old?"

    Which would possibly morph into, "What kind of loser bitch LOSES a fight with a ten-year-old"... That would make her "burnt toast" socially speaking on two fronts. Picking on little kids and getting beat down by one.
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  • What happens if Alyss confronts Naomi, and she simply apologizes for not knowing the risk she put Amy through? How will Alyss react to that?

    That's one thing Queen Bees are really good at. Playing ignorant and innocent. She already has Starbrite positioned for taking the fall about Alyss...or anything else for that matter. That's what Starbrite is for. Gravmax can be replaced when she finds someone else with money to spend on her.

    Or worse, Alyss and she fight, Naomi loses, and starts following the example of people like Tansy and paying attention in Basic Martial Arts, or thinks that taking Exemplar Grace is a good idea as well. Tansy is approximately an Exemplar-4 as well, and we've seen what nastiness she is truly capable of if need requires.

    Imagine someone who fights like Tansy, but can put people temporarily off balance like Alicia Thacker can to create openings?

    Only Alyss, who is familiar with constant pain from cancer, and a handful of others would stand a chance against her. That's pretty terrifying to me.
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  • Only Alyss, who is familiar with constant pain from cancer, and a handful of others would stand a chance against her. That's pretty terrifying to me.

    Caitlinn would take her easily with one hand tied behind her back. Last i remember rocks don't have nerves like normal people.

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  • Yolandria wrote:

    Only Alyss, who is familiar with constant pain from cancer, and a handful of others would stand a chance against her. That's pretty terrifying to me.

    Caitlinn would take her easily with one hand tied behind her back. Last i remember rocks don't have nerves like normal people.


    I just remembered that the "Order of the Worn Wrench" would have dibs in this situation. Whahaha.
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  • NJM1564 wrote:

    Valentine wrote: So now the question is how mad is Alyss?

    A. Alyss gets revenge herself.
    B. Alyss tells the Gadgeteers/Devisors about the attack, and let them get revenge.
    C. Alyss gets Poe involved.
    D. Alyss gets Hawthorne involved.
    E. Alyss lets Team Awesome take care of it.


    I wonder if Diamondback saw/met with Sapphire's family. I wonder if Imp saw/met with Sapphire's family or worse overhear Sapphire's sisters.

    Suddenly, Kaylie let out a loud gasp as glowing green mist began to emerge from her skin and hair.

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    F. Gets the bad seeds involved.
    G. Informs security.
    E. Asks Tansy for help.
    G. All of the above.
    H. Or just informs the Alpha. They cover most of those options.


    Since this is more about Amy, why would the Seeds care, (some would care because they are decent human beings, but other than that...)

    Alyss isn't really big into revenge for things done to herself, especially if they are physical. It was the teasing/bullying that she didn't know how to react to. Physically hurting a friend, possibly causing her death? Yeah Alyss is going to get her back, and it probably won't be pretty. If she talks to Ayla it might even be within school rules.

    Hmmm, Alyss, Amy, Sapphire, and ??? vs Lightbright, Exquisite, Iron, and Gravmax.in a sanctioned fight.

    Maybe Sphere?

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  • NJM1564 wrote:

    Yolandria wrote:

    Only Alyss, who is familiar with constant pain from cancer, and a handful of others would stand a chance against her. That's pretty terrifying to me.

    Caitlinn would take her easily with one hand tied behind her back. Last i remember rocks don't have nerves like normal people.


    I just remembered that the "Order of the Worn Wrench" would have dibs in this situation. Whahaha.


    Yes. I meant to mention the "Order" They most certainly do have a stake in this. A queen bee type randomly attacking a devisor because she thinks there would be no consequences. oh yeah, exactly the sort of thing they were created to deal with.

    If they become aware of it. Now, big question, Has Alyss been approached by them. She is certainly qualified. A first rate mechanic who seems to be a small ten year old girl. It was to protect the vulnerable from the strong that the group was formed, and she is not obviously powerful.


    Would be a story type coincidence if they were to approach her just as she's trying to figure out how to deal with this situation.
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  • Talking about the Order...Technically Amy is a part time member as well. So in that case Alyss just needs to talk to Lanie and tell the reigning queen gear head whats going on. Easy peasy...

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  • peter wrote: If they become aware of it. Now, big question, Has Alyss been approached by them. She is certainly qualified. A first rate mechanic who seems to be a small ten year old girl. It was to protect the vulnerable from the strong that the group was formed, and she is not obviously powerful.


    Great. Now I want to see Alyss whack someone with a wrench.

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  • Great. Now I want to see Alyss whack someone with a wrench.

    But her bracelets are more fashionable. And hit harder. :evil:

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  • Technically the previous want to be Queen Bee character would have to be Patricia Horton (Yellow Queen), Though her Martial Arts Cheerleaders seem to have mostly dropped off the radar. Now that I mention her I have to wonder what her actual code name is, seeing as Whateley does not allow unearned titles in code names.
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  • Yolandria wrote:

    Great. Now I want to see Alyss whack someone with a wrench.

    But her bracelets are more fashionable. And hit harder. :evil:

    And within the "not looking for a fight because they are always with on person" rule,

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  • Angeldude wrote:

    peter wrote: If they become aware of it. Now, big question, Has Alyss been approached by them. She is certainly qualified. A first rate mechanic who seems to be a small ten year old girl. It was to protect the vulnerable from the strong that the group was formed, and she is not obviously powerful.


    Great. Now I want to see Alyss whack someone with a wrench.


    This wrench?

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  • Man, this is worthy of Agatha Heterodyne.

    Don't call me "Shirley." You will surely make me surly.
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  • Sphere vs. Exquisite = Sphere Mimic's Exquisite's Energizer Trait, which Syncs with her own, allowing Sphere to give Exquisite a TaseOfOwnMedicine.
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  • bergy wrote: One of these days Alyss needs to actually learn French so that we can appropriately pardon it.


    Oui.

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  • Nightshade (Tatiana Markov - one of the members of CORE, and also someone Freya was well-acquainted with) might qualify as a Queen Bee. We only know of the one minion, but there doubtless could be others.

    Come to think of it, even though his power set lends itself to that kind of use, The Don in the past had broken down and remade some of his crew. If he hadn't become complacent with the Alphas, he could have been a lot more dangerous and successful without ever drawing much attention to himself.

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  • Valentine wrote:

    NJM1564 wrote:

    Valentine wrote: So now the question is how mad is Alyss?

    A. Alyss gets revenge herself.
    B. Alyss tells the Gadgeteers/Devisors about the attack, and let them get revenge.
    C. Alyss gets Poe involved.
    D. Alyss gets Hawthorne involved.
    E. Alyss lets Team Awesome take care of it.


    I wonder if Diamondback saw/met with Sapphire's family. I wonder if Imp saw/met with Sapphire's family or worse overhear Sapphire's sisters.

    Suddenly, Kaylie let out a loud gasp as glowing green mist began to emerge from her skin and hair.

    Where's Absinthe when you need her.



    F. Gets the bad seeds involved.
    G. Informs security.
    E. Asks Tansy for help.
    G. All of the above.
    H. Or just informs the Alpha. They cover most of those options.


    Since this is more about Amy, why would the Seeds care, (some would care because they are decent human beings, but other than that...)

    Alyss isn't really big into revenge for things done to herself, especially if they are physical. It was the teasing/bullying that she didn't know how to react to. Physically hurting a friend, possibly causing her death? Yeah Alyss is going to get her back, and it probably won't be pretty. If she talks to Ayla it might even be within school rules.

    Hmmm, Alyss, Amy, Sapphire, and ??? vs Lightbright, Exquisite, Iron, and Gravmax.in a sanctioned fight.

    Maybe Sphere?


    Any and Alyss are both Bad Seeds. If someone came after two of them they would care. You don't do that with out reprisals.
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  • NJM1564 wrote:
    Any and Alyss are both Bad Seeds. If someone came after two of them they would care. You don't do that with out reprisals.


    Actually neither Amy nor Alyss are Bad Seeds. Amy's mother, Boom Job, was actually a hero for a while.

    Roulette Chapter 1 wrote: Mom had briefly tried being a super hero, just so she could be Beth's partner, though it hadn't worked out. Mom hadn't liked being in that kind of danger, nor had she dealt well with the stress it caused. After going into a Diedricks rant in the middle of trying to stop a bank robber, she'd hung up her tights for good. Now, the closest Mom got to the super hero game was getting stories from Beth and occasionally making weapons for the local heroes.


    And while the rumor that Alyss is Lady Havoc's daughter, she isn't.

    Jessie and Fina are Bad Seeds, or at least qualify.

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  • I yawn at y'all's continued attempts to have everybody fight everybody else's battles for them.

    Rose Bunny wrote: Exquisite in trying to be the "queen of the school" is setting herself up for failure. Let's think of her competition, even if they don't consider themselves as even trying to be the most popular girl in school...

    the top 3 to not mess with:

    Lanie - wouldn't care about the popularity, but the "Devisor Goddess" would have her fans behind her, she would have Kodiak supporting her, Kayda and Tansy would step in to protect her if anyone messed with her, as certainly the Order would as well.

    Tansy - do I have to explain how bad an idea that'd be? Nope.

    Nikki - more nope. Tick off team Kimba, the Outcasts, Venus Inc... oh yes, and Nikki herself, possibly one of the most powerful mages in the world.

    I'm sure there are more names I'm forgetting, but that's because it's late.

    to summarize... trying to plot your way to most popular girl in Whateley is pretty much a death sentence.

    Except that Exquisite told us her plan will take time to reach fruition. She didn't spell out her timetable, but I doubt she expects to finish in her freshman year. So, that means seniors like Tansy are irrelevant so long as she avoids crossing lines with people they care about this year (e.g. Danny). Even juniors like Elaine probably won't have much opportunity to butt heads with Exquisite before graduating. Nikki is definitely an obstacle though.

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  • I find it amusing how often us forumites immediately jump to "these new characters could go to x,y, and z established characters, and they will solve the problem for them."

    Yes, they could. They're not going to, but they could. :D

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  • One of the best parts about a series is speculating on what happens next. I have a nasty habit of reading through stuff as fast as I can get my hands on material. Here I an forced to pace myself which leaves more time for thought and reflection. My other major reading area is history related, we already know what happens next in history. So I have to stick to "what it" type thought there. The scenarios I often end up with are far more terrifying that what I get here...

    It makes speculating here much more enjoyable. I suspect that many others operate on the same lines. Then you have people with favorite characters (I lean toward Corporal Mahren/Eldritch, Gunny Bardue and Hive. I'll blame the Navy for my twisted sense of what is appropriate). Everyone wants to see "their" character come out on top of any situation. Just like going to a football game. Your team can be 0-fer but you still want to see them win, I think it is a similar concept. Then, much like football, you have the next day quarterbacking. As my father says (a coach for over 40 years and still going), "It's a lot easier to coach in the stands". Like fans at a game, the forumites "have all the answers". Then, just like the fans in the bleachers, we have to remember that the coach is the one on the sidelines (or in this case that the author is the one doing the writing). But we can still yell from the bleachers! :D
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  • Arcanist Lupus wrote: I find it amusing how often us forumites immediately jump to "these new characters could go to x,y, and z established characters, and they will solve the problem for them."

    Yes, they could. They're not going to, but they could. :D


    I just want Sphere vs. Exquisite 'cause turnabout sounds awesome, or hilarious, to me.

    And that's what Micros are for... Wait... How to legit get Sphere involved... Anyone got a grudge against her? Maybe Archon (Victory Jaxton)?
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  • Arcanist Lupus wrote: I find it amusing how often us forumites immediately jump to "these new characters could go to x,y, and z established characters, and they will solve the problem for them."

    Yes, they could. They're not going to, but they could. :D


    If the characters and their one or two friends are too intellectually and emotionally crippled to look for help, it will be just as entertaining to see how they are killed off as collateral damage from whatever goes down in Spring 2008.

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  • null0trooper wrote:

    Arcanist Lupus wrote: I find it amusing how often us forumites immediately jump to "these new characters could go to x,y, and z established characters, and they will solve the problem for them."

    Yes, they could. They're not going to, but they could. :D


    If the characters and their one or two friends are too intellectually and emotionally crippled to look for help, it will be just as entertaining to see how they are killed off as collateral damage from whatever goes down in Spring 2008.

    That's a bit harsh. I don't go running for help every time a fly comes buzzing around, why should Alyss and Amy? They're more than capable of wielding their own flyswatters, thank you very much.

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    peter wrote: If they become aware of it. Now, big question, Has Alyss been approached by them. She is certainly qualified. A first rate mechanic who seems to be a small ten year old girl. It was to protect the vulnerable from the strong that the group was formed, and she is not obviously powerful.


    Great. Now I want to see Alyss whack someone with a wrench.


    Technically that's Monkey Wrench's job isn't it?
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  • Arcanist Lupus wrote: I find it amusing how often us forumites immediately jump to "these new characters could go to x,y, and z established characters, and they will solve the problem for them."

    Yes, they could. They're not going to, but they could. :D

    TBH, I find it a little funny, except for Alyss.
    She's one of the few I could see doing it, in terms of "help me prank them and make them look stupid" instead of "help me beat them up."

    Just because she has the mind of an adult and a physical strength level that she's scared of (See: denting the car in Steel Ribbon and jumping a mile in surprise.) She might have been fine deciding to beat up the Marquis, but IIRC, she mentioned that she was pissed the hell off with him and noted that he was an adult supervillain.

    Pretty much everyone else jumping to established characters? Nah. They might turn to their training teams or friends, but realistically, only Jimmy-T and Miss Bardue defending the Hawthornites is going to happen.

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  • Kaitha39 wrote:

    Arcanist Lupus wrote: I find it amusing how often us forumites immediately jump to "these new characters could go to x,y, and z established characters, and they will solve the problem for them."

    Yes, they could. They're not going to, but they could. :D

    TBH, I find it a little funny, except for Alyss.
    She's one of the few I could see doing it, in terms of "help me prank them and make them look stupid" instead of "help me beat them up."

    Just because she has the mind of an adult and a physical strength level that she's scared of (See: denting the car in Steel Ribbon and jumping a mile in surprise.) She might have been fine deciding to beat up the Marquis, but IIRC, she mentioned that she was pissed the hell off with him and noted that he was an adult supervillain.

    Pretty much everyone else jumping to established characters? Nah. They might turn to their training teams or friends, but realistically, only Jimmy-T and Miss Bardue defending the Hawthornites is going to happen.

    I could see the Poe characters going to Team Kimba for advice. The Kimbas were the top teams on campus previously, so having someone ask how they did it is certainly an option.
    Asking established characters to fight their battles on the other hand is less likely.
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  • Kaitha39 wrote:

    Arcanist Lupus wrote: I find it amusing how often us forumites immediately jump to "these new characters could go to x,y, and z established characters, and they will solve the problem for them."

    Yes, they could. They're not going to, but they could. :D

    TBH, I find it a little funny, except for Alyss.
    She's one of the few I could see doing it, in terms of "help me prank them and make them look stupid" instead of "help me beat them up."

    Just because she has the mind of an adult and a physical strength level that she's scared of (See: denting the car in Steel Ribbon and jumping a mile in surprise.) She might have been fine deciding to beat up the Marquis, but IIRC, she mentioned that she was pissed the hell off with him and noted that he was an adult supervillain.

    Pretty much everyone else jumping to established characters? Nah. They might turn to their training teams or friends, but realistically, only Jimmy-T and Miss Bardue defending the Hawthornites is going to happen.

    Exquisite is an Ex 4, and there is a difference between being annoying and almost killing someone, the 50 yr old mind may justify it as keeping Exquisite from accidentally killing someone and teaching her actions have consequences.

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  • The adult mind, even when not overcharged with exemplar juices is a frightening thing. People tend to have certain values and when those are trespassed upon can be very upset. Not in the raging mad sense, but in the "I am so angry I am calm and have determined how to adjust your attitude without getting busted by the cops" way.

    Right now, I could see Ribbon plotting to "recalibrate" Exquisite and not in the "I will put you in a baby romper in the cafeteria" way.

    P.S. Yes, I said recalibrate, we couldn't say "I beat some sense into Seaman Joe", we had to recalibrate him instead.
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  • Domoviye wrote: I could see the Poe characters going to Team Kimba for advice. The Kimbas were the top teams on campus previously, so having someone ask how they did it is certainly an option.
    Asking established characters to fight their battles on the other hand is less likely.


    Remember who Alyss was looking for near the end, Ayla or Zoe. The two fixers. So she wasn't just going to go off on anyone, she was looking for information on them. The adult mind, as opposed to just shooting someone with a taser round.

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  • Not that there is anything really wrong with tasering someone...those things really hurt. Much worse than CS gas IMHO.

    My prediction is: Alyss gets information, plots, and makes a covert take down of some sort. Possibly taking out one of the perps and framing the other.

    Old age and treachery win hands down over juvenile delinquency.
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  • Then again Alyssa is also constantly wondering how much of her old personality is still there. it's quite possible that she will actually react more and more like someone her apparent age over time. She may have fifty years worth of memories but her brain is effectively ten years old.

    But yes it does look more like she is looking for information, then for someone fix it for her. There are many external reasons why this is. Firstly because this isn't a story about the older characters, and not being written by one of the original authors. Secondly, because it just wouldn't make a very good story, or if it did, it would need a different focal character. A series of stories that focus on Alyssa and Amy is going to have Alyssa and Amy try to solve the central problem. Sure they may fail and end up needing to be rescued, but they won't just run for help at the first sign of trouble.
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    P.S. Yes, I said recalibrate, we couldn't say "I beat some sense into Seaman Joe", we had to recalibrate him instead.

    In my unit...we called it " Wall to Wall Counselling."


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  • "calibrate"
    "wall to wall counseling"
    "incentive training" (thanks for a new one JG)
    "physical motivation"
    "bounce test" (pushing someone to the deck...or of a ladder)
    "float test" (throw anything or person over the side)
    "tune up"
    "recharge"
    "smoke" (not usually a beat down, but make the person do lots of unpleasant things like push ups and such)
    "intensive training" (also called "IT", can be a beating or a smoke session)
    "phase correction"

    Those are the ones I remember hearing. Anyone else got some more?
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    Doc made the guy demonstrate a proper Navy shower...didn't fix him.

    The toilet brushes and simple green did.
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  • MM2ss wrote: Yes...there was always "that guy" that didn't shower. We developed a measuring system, the "funk radius"...


    This one's funk was a little more mobile and capable of reproducing. :blink:

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  • null0trooper wrote: "NJT" ( Pray it wasn't the XO that just gave your DivO some helpful advice. )

    Okay, top result from google is "New Jersey Transport" company, so I have to ask, what does NJT stand for?

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    null0trooper wrote: "NJT" ( Pray it wasn't the XO that just gave your DivO some helpful advice. )

    Okay, top result from google is "New Jersey Transport" company, so I have to ask, what does NJT stand for?

    "Nice Job Team" would be my guess.

    These days, it is best to start with UrbanDictionary when you find a term you don't know.
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  • ALright folks, time to put the train back on the rails. We've gone WAAAAY off-topic.
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  • But...but...Ribbon loves acronyms! " Pardon my french!"

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  • JG wrote: ALright folks, time to put the train back on the rails. We've gone WAAAAY off-topic.


    Fair enough, but I think we lost both the rails and the train a long time ago.

    Anyways, back the the regularly scheduled topic. I say Ribbon devises a cunning plan to recalibrate Exquisite and company without getting caught in the act. It will take time, but she is somewhat like Guy Fawkes in a way (you know, the only man to enter Parliament with a clear agenda and the means to see it through), but smarter. She'll research the enemy, make a plan and establish an alibi then take them down hard and covertly.
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  • hmm it seems that Naomi has no idea about Alyss's Ex rating, or her regen, mind you that is largely because she focuses on her lowest rated power the most, but unless they use a large gauge titan wire cable which would have a hard time flexing to tighten around her small frame, tying her down will only last a few seconds of her brute forcing it, a minute if she uses her Mani-3C ability to help untie it. In other news Amy semi-actively used her shifter ability

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  • Interesting here is seeing what drove part of Agies decision to agree to have Imp teach him. I wonder if he will ever get over the idea that GSD equals criminal. Also wonder if he will ever get to the point that he realizes that Imp has retired and does deserve his respect... He's not a really heavy brick or Mrs Dennon could deal with him... After all she's a black hat too...
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  • Alyss may feel she has trouble controlling her temper, but she's doing a better job than I would in that situation, given the credible threat they pose to her friend's life.

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  • Oh no doubt...I would have severely hurt that boy...And any other one i could have gotten my hands on. 1v1 is ok. I can live with a butt whoppin. But when you go 4v1 the gloves come off and the butt whoppins commence.

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  • Team Don-wannabe might be looking for more friends, but I think that Team French might be unknowingly gathering allies as well. Outcast Corner, Team Kimba, and the JT of DOOM!

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  • They need a Sophomore. Just someone to give them some advice on how to issue challenges and avoid detention.

    BTW where do Thornie's do detention?

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  • This conflict between the two Rs and Sapphire and the mean girl squad has really escalated. And it's gotten to a point that it has me curious. Did anyone have these kind of experiences in high school? I mean, obviously not anything with super powers, but the sort of extreme inter-clique war thing that we see going on here. Whenever I read stories set in high school they always contain these sort of extreme "mean girls vs the outcasts" or "jocks vs nerds" or just "my group of friends vs some group of assholes and their friends". And I wonder how much truth there is to it.

    When I was in school, I never saw this sort of thing. Not just to myself, but to others. I wasn't a jock, or a cool kid, or popular at all. I was a nerd in Academic Decathlon (the most hardcore of nerds!), and in fact, I had a hormone deficiency, so I looked like I was about 10 until I started getting hormone injections when I was 20. And even then, a nobody nerd looking and sounding like a little kid - the ubertarget - and I still didn't get picked on at all. Like, maybe once or twice. (I remember a time in middle school gym class where a girl I thought of as mean saw my legs, laughed and asked if I shaved them. That was about as bad as I got.) And it wasn't just to me. None of my equally nerdy friends were picked on. I never saw it happening around to people. Nothing really malicious anyway. I always figured that the sort of clique wars I saw in all the famous high school movies like Revenge of the Nerds or Mean Girls or what have you was all just an elaborate mythology cooked up by the collective public consciousness.

    But it's been maintained so steadily by tv and movies, and now stories I read by so so many different authors from different walks of fiction that I can't help but wonder if I was some sort of outlier. Like, maybe I went to the one mellow high school in existence. Some weird bastion of decency amongst the storm of bullying, fighting, deception, and catty namecalling. That's not to say that everyone loved everyone and we all lived together in peace and harmony. But I never saw the sort of stereotypical conflicts that usually characterizes high school fiction. Is this just REALLY weird and the sort of fighting we see in R & R is normal? Because the degree of hate we're seeing here between these two groups is starting to feel, to me any my experience anyway, kind of ridiculous. But maybe I'm the outlier?
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  • I used to finish a lot of fights where the name of the game was "hit the big, awkward and goofy kid for laughs and see him get beat down."

    They usually didn't find it funny afterward. My Eighth grade year clocked in at eight separate fights, five of which were in the last half of the second semester. I never swung first.
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  • My schools all seemed pretty tame, but I was also kind of in my own little world so I probably just didn't pick up on it if stuff was happening between other people, and keeping to myself meant I didn't get tangled up in other people's drama.

    The bulk of the bullying I personally experienced during high school was just verbal abuse that I ignored. That kind of thing used to bother me way back in elementary school, but then my parents got divorced. After that, verbal abuse no longer registered. Those people were just idiots, and why would I give a shit about the opinion of an idiot?

    In ninth grade homeroom, the guy who sat in front of me wrote "Fuck" on my binder (it was one of those fancy ones with pockets and zippers). One of us tried to wash it off with spit; I forget which. So from then on I had a blackish smudge on the thing. I was kind of annoyed by that.

    In Spanish I (still in ninth grade) I usually got to class early enough that I had some time to burn, so I'd spend it by reading Animorphs books. Those each have a little flip-book animation in the page corner. There was an upperclassman guy who sat behind me, a stereotypical jock. He always wanted to flip through the animation. Usually I let him, but one day I didn't for some reason. Probably because I was annoyed and trying to read the damn book. So when class let out for lunch, he came up behind me on on the way down the stairs and got his arm around my neck to give me a bit of a strangling while he lectured me on how I was just some loser freshman and I should never say no to him again, or else. Not being able to breathe properly was somewhat alarming, but honestly I was more annoyed by the fact that while he was dicking around, the lunch line was only growing longer. So when he let me go, I got the hell out of there and made a beeline for the cafeteria. And that was the end of that. There were a lot of people around when it happened, so maybe somebody reported him. Maybe he had a change of heart. Or maybe he just realized that I didn't give a shit about his empty threats. I don't know.

    My normal routine after finishing lunch was to go outside, lean against one of the poles holding up the awning covering the walkways of the quad, and read a book for the rest of the lunch period. Sometimes people would come up and start asking a bunch of annoying questions about what I was reading, whether I'd "gotten to the part where they fuck yet," etc. Very occasionally they tried to knock the book out of my hands. That was probably the most successful method of intentionally bothering me anyone tried in high school. They didn't quite manage to get me visibly angry, but they came close.

    And that was pretty much it for bullying.

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  • There might have been a little bit in middle school for me, but really that building has more cameras and great line of sight zones that anything that there was got shut down quickly, as a result that kind of behaviour was partially non-existent in High school, mind you my school was weird in that a few of the Jocks were part time nerds

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  • If Amy manages to control her shifting, she goes from one of the weakest, to one of the most dangerous combatants in the school, her psi can be used for assembling/disassembling (almost sonic screwdriver style), lock picking (sonic screwdriver) and to recover weapons Star Wars style, but those are all situational advantages, most of her abilities being low level are highly situational or preparatory,
    On another note:

    Maybe Alyss is bending pipes and such for Shine, it would make sense, Shine doesn't need money and Alyss doesn't have much, basically what Alyss can provide him is pipe/metal bending and heavy lifting which actually can double as a means for her to learn her strength with accurate control.

    Speaking of Shine, i can imagine 3 types of weapons he could make which he will need for combat finals, thrown (ie molatove), flamethrower, and dev alcohol propelled projectile, both in gun and rocket form.

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  • mhalpern wrote: If Amy manages to control her shifting, she goes from one of the weakest, to one of the most dangerous combatants in the school, her psi can be used for assembling/disassembling (almost sonic screwdriver style), lock picking (sonic screwdriver) and to recover weapons Star Wars style, but those are all situational advantages, most of her abilities being low level are highly situational or preparatory, .


    This is where the lessons that Mimeo described, and, Ayla's help would be useful.

    CrazyPrepared, and, low-level multi-skill flexibility, can really be ReadyForAnything...

    mhalpern wrote: On another note:

    Maybe Alyss is bending pipes and such for Shine, it would make sense, Shine doesn't need money and Alyss doesn't have much, basically what Alyss can provide him is pipe/metal bending and heavy lifting which actually can double as a means for her to learn her strength with accurate control.

    Speaking of Shine, i can imagine 3 types of weapons he could make which he will need for combat finals, thrown (ie molatove), flamethrower, and dev alcohol propelled projectile, both in gun and rocket form.


    I can see the tutors considering that Shine might take this approach, and putting him and another user of Area-Of-Effect weapons/powers, and putting them both in a situation where they would have to watch out for damaging bystanders.


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  • 'Shine does not need the money, but it's both a "still thinking small" thing and a pride thing.
    First, he's a millionaire who still thinks like a small-time moonshiner and hasn't assimilated the meaning of that old joke about if it's worth Bill Gates' time to stop and bend for a US$ 100.00 bill.
    Also, a pride thing. He takes a lot of pride on the quality of his work. Having people pay for it is a way to validate his pride.

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  • Katssun wrote: Exquisite knows how to bring others beneath her authority by psychological and political means alone. I don't know any other Gen 1 character that has done that before.


    Ayla has that skill set, but hasn't used it for anything that trivial. Treavor was raised to head up a major business empire, and given a thorough understanding of such tools. Since manifesting, Ayla has built on that base, but instead of wasting his time looking for the ego boost of "leading" a school clique he has turned his hand to more real-world results.
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  • Sir Lee wrote: 'Shine does not need the money, but it's both a "still thinking small" thing and a pride thing.
    First, he's a millionaire who still thinks like a small-time moonshiner and hasn't assimilated the meaning of that old joke about if it's worth Bill Gates' time to stop and bend for a US$ 100.00 bill.
    Also, a pride thing. He takes a lot of pride on the quality of his work. Having people pay for it is a way to validate his pride.

    True, but Alyss still doesn't have much in the way of money, and trading favors is quite valid in the type of community he grew up in, its one thing to accept it from people who have some cash to spare, though trading it for favors may be more valuable to him as it means someone will go out of their way and spend their time doing something for him as opposed to just going to an ATM or something for his product

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  • joreymay wrote:

    Katssun wrote: Exquisite knows how to bring others beneath her authority by psychological and political means alone. I don't know any other Gen 1 character that has done that before.


    Ayla has that skill set, but hasn't used it for anything that trivial. Treavor was raised to head up a major business empire, and given a thorough understanding of such tools. Since manifesting, Ayla has built on that base, but instead of wasting his time looking for the ego boost of "leading" a school clique he has turned his hand to more real-world results.

    i know a few others, Tansy, and possibly Hekate come to mind.

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  • “But they used their powers,” Sapphire protested. “We heard their voices…”

    “And all that can be faked,” Amy pointed out. “I know at least three people in the labs, who have voice modulators of one sort or another. There are a ton of bricks around campus, and everything else could easily be mimicked with magic, devises, or some other power. I mean, any strong telekinetic could make it look like they had Gravmax’s power.”

    Amy could work most of that up, especially if she masters the new shift on demand. And with a little help from friends like Sphere, they can do a lot.

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  • mhalpern wrote:

    joreymay wrote:

    Katssun wrote: Exquisite knows how to bring others beneath her authority by psychological and political means alone. I don't know any other Gen 1 character that has done that before.


    Ayla has that skill set, but hasn't used it for anything that trivial. Treavor was raised to head up a major business empire, and given a thorough understanding of such tools. Since manifesting, Ayla has built on that base, but instead of wasting his time looking for the ego boost of "leading" a school clique he has turned his hand to more real-world results.

    i know a few others, Tansy, and possibly Hekate come to mind.


    While they were already discussed in this thread, there is a relevant point about Tansy. She was raised in a similar part of the mega-business community, but she was raised to be a high function member of that community rather than as a leader. Her endgame would more likely have been as a wife and/or senior subordinate to a leader. A lot of overlap, but not the same.
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  • I was thinking the same thing. Especially since Tansy crashed so hard when she tried to be the head alpha with Cody as her front man. Maybe in another two or so years when she's had a chance to work through her anger and angst over how she was treated by Trevor/Ayla's older sisters she will plan rather than simply strike out. Then she might have the skills. But until she stops trying to gain her father's approval (something that may always be in doubt) and comes to understand that the best she may be able to do is live a good life without his approval then she will not break out of her tendency to want to belittle people. One of the best things that seems to be happening to Tansy is her relationship with Kayda, Cody and Loophole.
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  • I did bring this up before. Tansy is an "uplifted" nerd, lest we forget.

    Parental abuse, bullying, and emulating Freya turned her into what she became. Tansy is not a leader, never was. Just a hurt, lonely, unloved girl who just wanted friends.

    Jadis is a leader, and the closest thing to what Tansy would be if she didn't manifest as a high-exemplar.

    Roulette is a leader. She has the maturity and calm demeanor that even Alyss wishes she had. Alyss sees Megan in Roulette, the Thornies look to her as a motherly figure, she's even a bit of a mother hen to her own mother.
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  • pumpernickel, high schools vary widely in the range of behaviors seen. I consider my home town school a fairly tame place...most of the time. But I am in the deep South. The klan is still around sadly. Back in my school days I recall more than a few race related incidents, some were very violent, but involved small numbers. There were also other types of problems, I recall seeing one girl stabbed by another in the cafeteria my 10th or 11th grade year. The weapon of choice was a metal nail file in that case. She had a few friends grab the girl and straight up shanked her with the file. I was involved in very few incidents growing up thankfully. But I have been stabbed twice (once in a school parking lot and once in the Navy). So yeah, the extreme violence between cliques is a very real thing at times. It usually isn;t an on-going thing, but rarely they escalate and continue (as with the klan incident, that went from a few whites and blacks jawing, to shoving, to fighting to ultimately a bomb threat).
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  • This story seems to have finished without resolving its main plot line, and the same goes for Imp 6 really, neither for them feel like a complete story to me. Because in both cases the central villain is still out there and still pursuing the same goal they had initially. And the heroes don't even have a plan of action at the end, other than we'll deal with it when it happens.
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  • konzill wrote: This story seems to have finished without resolving its main plot line, and the same goes for Imp 6 really, neither for them feel like a complete story to me. Because in both bases the central villain is still out there and still pursuing the same goal they had initially. And the heroes don't even have a plan of action at the end, other than we'll deal with it when it happens.


    Not every story ends with resolution... look at Empire Strikes Back for instance. Many consider it to be the best of the trilogy but it ended with a few rather large things up in the air.
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  • mhalpern wrote: If Amy manages to control her shifting, she goes from one of the weakest, to one of the most dangerous combatants in the school, her psi can be used for assembling/disassembling (almost sonic screwdriver style), lock picking (sonic screwdriver) and to recover weapons Star Wars style, but those are all situational advantages, most of her abilities being low level are highly situational or preparatory,
    On another note:

    Maybe Alyss is bending pipes and such for Shine, it would make sense, Shine doesn't need money and Alyss doesn't have much, basically what Alyss can provide him is pipe/metal bending and heavy lifting which actually can double as a means for her to learn her strength with accurate control.

    Speaking of Shine, i can imagine 3 types of weapons he could make which he will need for combat finals, thrown (ie molatove), flamethrower, and dev alcohol propelled projectile, both in gun and rocket form.


    Exactly what expenses does Alyss currently have?

    Clothes? No, she makes her own.
    Makeup? She's not at that point in her life yet, maybe in 20 years.
    Food? No, it's part of her tuition.
    Toys, games, and stuff like that (sort of stuff teens buy)? No, while she may join in a game, I doubt she owns anything more than a deck of cards and poker chips.
    Books? Not until she finishes Whateley's Library and every other library out there.
    Cigars? Yep
    Booze? Yep

    For all we know she had a tip jar out for Halloween costumes.

    'Shine needs a weapon to put out a heavy mist of his strongest booze, although the staff might object to that weapon.

    I'm still waiting to see 'Shine in a shoot off with the Grunts.

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  • Valentine wrote:

    mhalpern wrote: If Amy manages to control her shifting, she goes from one of the weakest, to one of the most dangerous combatants in the school, her psi can be used for assembling/disassembling (almost sonic screwdriver style), lock picking (sonic screwdriver) and to recover weapons Star Wars style, but those are all situational advantages, most of her abilities being low level are highly situational or preparatory,
    On another note:

    Maybe Alyss is bending pipes and such for Shine, it would make sense, Shine doesn't need money and Alyss doesn't have much, basically what Alyss can provide him is pipe/metal bending and heavy lifting which actually can double as a means for her to learn her strength with accurate control.

    Speaking of Shine, i can imagine 3 types of weapons he could make which he will need for combat finals, thrown (ie molatove), flamethrower, and dev alcohol propelled projectile, both in gun and rocket form.


    Exactly what expenses does Alyss currently have?

    Clothes? No, she makes her own.
    Makeup? She's not at that point in her life yet, maybe in 20 years.
    Food? No, it's part of her tuition.
    Toys, games, and stuff like that (sort of stuff teens buy)? No, while she may join in a game, I doubt she owns anything more than a deck of cards and poker chips.
    Books? Not until she finishes Whateley's Library and every other library out there.
    Cigars? Yep
    Booze? Yep

    For all we know she had a tip jar out for Halloween costumes.

    'Shine needs a weapon to put out a heavy mist of his strongest booze, although the staff might object to that weapon.

    I'm still waiting to see 'Shine in a shoot off with the Grunts.


    What steady sources of income does Alyss have? I mean she works at the Garage, but that's mainly going into Tuition and there is saving up for a project car on the horizon, maybe she will find a '77 Plymouth Barracuda to restore... And then there will be aiding Kaylie's expenses, regardless of if it is needed or not.

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  • If I'm reading things right she doesn't like her schooling being paid for by her kids so she's probably putting all she can to covering that so they don't have to keep doing so. It's not like she has the ability to make a substance that's worth millions or has invented something that can be patented and sold.
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  • DanZilla wrote: If I'm reading things right she doesn't like her schooling being paid for by her kids so she's probably putting all she can to covering that so they don't have to keep doing so. It's not like she has the ability to make a substance that's worth millions or has invented something that can be patented and sold.


    Remember that while no number has ever been put forward, the tuition at Whateley is higher than the most expensive colleges in the world. Any amount that Alyss is making wouldn't make a drop in the bucket of the cost of tuition. Assuming she works 10 hours or so a week, and works for 30 weeks, that is about 300 hours. Even at Ayla rates, it's not much help towards her tuition.

    If you remember from Straight from the Squirrel's Mouth Aquerna got a stipend for her landscaping work. Likely Alyss does too.

    If Alyss does get a project car, then she will have some more expenses, depending upon how much she wants to improve the car.

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  • konzill wrote: This story seems to have finished without resolving its main plot line, and the same goes for Imp 6 really, neither for them feel like a complete story to me. Because in both cases the central villain is still out there and still pursuing the same goal they had initially. And the heroes don't even have a plan of action at the end, other than we'll deal with it when it happens.


    That's because Whately stories aren't really complete, self-contained stories. They're more like issues in a comic series. None of them truly resolve. They wrap up a plot thread or two and then introduce yet another shadowy conspiracy in the bowels of the school that has the intent of screwing with whichever student/group that story is centered around. Then that thread is address over the next couple stories.

    And none of them are truly self-contained, because you get characters popping in and out from the other stories like how Spiderman will be going about his adventures and then suddenly Wolverine or Deadpool with show up and help out before wandering back off. Really the only difference is the presence of pictures and editors notes to remind you who's who. [Ed: Uncanny X-Men #325, true believers!]
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  • konzill wrote: This story seems to have finished without resolving its main plot line, and the same goes for Imp 6 really, neither for them feel like a complete story to me. Because in both cases the central villain is still out there and still pursuing the same goal they had initially. And the heroes don't even have a plan of action at the end, other than we'll deal with it when it happens.


    A lot of the Whateley Stories end this way, deliberately so. We don't kill the badguy at the end of the story every time, and not every plotline will be wrapped with a neat little bow. Many of the stories are intended to be told over multiple installments, chapters and plot arcs. You guys have seen just how long I've kept a few plans under wraps.

    Morpheus has long-term plans for both our heroes and our villains, and given his track record, I do not think you all will be disappointed with the results.
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  • Valentine wrote:

    DanZilla wrote: If I'm reading things right she doesn't like her schooling being paid for by her kids so she's probably putting all she can to covering that so they don't have to keep doing so. It's not like she has the ability to make a substance that's worth millions or has invented something that can be patented and sold.


    Remember that while no number has ever been put forward, the tuition at Whateley is higher than the most expensive colleges in the world. Any amount that Alyss is making wouldn't make a drop in the bucket of the cost of tuition. Assuming she works 10 hours or so a week, and works for 30 weeks, that is about 300 hours. Even at Ayla rates, it's not much help towards her tuition.

    If you remember from Straight from the Squirrel's Mouth Aquerna got a stipend for her landscaping work. Likely Alyss does too.

    If Alyss does get a project car, then she will have some more expenses, depending upon how much she wants to improve the car.

    Which is why she should try for a job as a costumer for Venus Inc

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  • mhalpern wrote: Which is why she should try for a job as a costumer for Venus Inc

    Heh. I'm suddenly imagining Alyss becoming the Venus Inc costumer. Then, in a year or two, Kaylie comes to Whateley and tries out for the club, and Alyss suddenly is responsible for dressing her granddaughter in revealing outfits. :D

    Not that Kaylie seems like a likely Venus Inc candidate. But still, it would be funny.

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  • Katssun wrote: Jadis is a leader, and the closest thing to what Tansy would be if she didn't manifest as a high-exemplar.

    Roulette is a leader. She has the maturity and calm demeanor that even Alyss wishes she had. Alyss sees Megan in Roulette, the Thornies look to her as a motherly figure, she's even a bit of a mother hen to her own mother.

    There is a big difference between "being a leader" and having the knowledge and skills "to bring others beneath her authority by psychological and political means alone." And Jadis is a good example of that difference. The only people operating "under her authority" are those under the authority delegated by her father (family, servants, and some of his other employees/minions). Her leadership is by example, advice, and persuasion rather than by authority. She may use "because I say so" on rare occasions, but she uses it as a peer rather than as an authority. She wields considerable power as a campus fixer and by way of her circle of friends and aquaintences, but relatively little authority.

    Roulette has the moral authority of the caregiver, but the only time she exercises more traditional authority is when she's shaking her finger at the youngsters. Even then, it is the authority of age and standing. She has shown neither the desire nor the aptitude to bring others beneath her authority by psychological and political means.
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  • JG wrote: ...and not every plotline will be wrapped with a neat little bow.


    What about for characters who wrap themselves and others with neat little bows?

    Insanity: for when normal just isn't interesting enough.
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  • Arcanist Lupus wrote:

    mhalpern wrote: Which is why she should try for a job as a costumer for Venus Inc

    Heh. I'm suddenly imagining Alyss becoming the Venus Inc costumer. Then, in a year or two, Kaylie comes to Whateley and tries out for the club, and Alyss suddenly is responsible for dressing her granddaughter in revealing outfits. :D

    Not that Kaylie seems like a likely Venus Inc candidate. But still, it would be funny.

    BITs can take a while to do their thing, and in a year or two, who knows, she WILL be a teenager after all

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  • mhalpern wrote:
    What steady sources of income does Alyss have? I mean she works at the Garage, but that's mainly going into Tuition and there is saving up for a project car on the horizon, maybe she will find a '77 Plymouth Barracuda to restore... And then there will be aiding Kaylie's expenses, regardless of if it is needed or not.


    Don't know why it didn't occur to me early. After a hint that heavy dropping I wonder when she's going to walk into the garage and find a present waiting for her. A wreck of a Barracuda.

    The shop teacher's have ears everywhere in car circles I'm guessing and if one of Alyss's friends were to drop a hint in the right ear they might be able to find one.
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  • Bonus points if they rig up the shop to start playing the appropriate song when she first walks in that day.

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  • mhalpern wrote:

    Arcanist Lupus wrote:

    mhalpern wrote: Which is why she should try for a job as a costumer for Venus Inc

    Heh. I'm suddenly imagining Alyss becoming the Venus Inc costumer. Then, in a year or two, Kaylie comes to Whateley and tries out for the club, and Alyss suddenly is responsible for dressing her granddaughter in revealing outfits. :D

    Not that Kaylie seems like a likely Venus Inc candidate. But still, it would be funny.

    BITs can take a while to do their thing, and in a year or two, who knows, she WILL be a teenager after all


    More importantly, teenagers reinvent themselves at a drop of a hat, so she might decide that being a goth is "so over" and go for the fashion model thing.

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  • Kettlekorn wrote: Bonus points if they rig up the shop to start playing the appropriate song when she first walks in that day.


    Alyss probably has that on 8-Track.

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  • WRT Sapphire and Garafena, my tendency is to take the statement about the meetup at face value. That said, I enjoyed the Garafena stand-alone story and I'm glad to see she hasn't been forgotten by TINCC. I'm also curious as to how Sapphire and Diamondback would get along. If nothing else, pointers on how to survive with/without a tail can be exchanged by characters going in opposite directions.

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  • mhalpern wrote:

    Sir Lee wrote: 'Shine does not need the money, but it's both a "still thinking small" thing and a pride thing.
    First, he's a millionaire who still thinks like a small-time moonshiner and hasn't assimilated the meaning of that old joke about if it's worth Bill Gates' time to stop and bend for a US$ 100.00 bill.
    Also, a pride thing. He takes a lot of pride on the quality of his work. Having people pay for it is a way to validate his pride.

    True, but Alyss still doesn't have much in the way of money, and trading favors is quite valid in the type of community he grew up in, its one thing to accept it from people who have some cash to spare, though trading it for favors may be more valuable to him as it means someone will go out of their way and spend their time doing something for him as opposed to just going to an ATM or something for his product


    Alyss is also a Gearhead, so wouldl be part of the favour-trading that operates in the Workshops.


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  • Mister D wrote:

    mhalpern wrote:

    Sir Lee wrote: 'Shine does not need the money, but it's both a "still thinking small" thing and a pride thing.
    First, he's a millionaire who still thinks like a small-time moonshiner and hasn't assimilated the meaning of that old joke about if it's worth Bill Gates' time to stop and bend for a US$ 100.00 bill.
    Also, a pride thing. He takes a lot of pride on the quality of his work. Having people pay for it is a way to validate his pride.

    True, but Alyss still doesn't have much in the way of money, and trading favors is quite valid in the type of community he grew up in, its one thing to accept it from people who have some cash to spare, though trading it for favors may be more valuable to him as it means someone will go out of their way and spend their time doing something for him as opposed to just going to an ATM or something for his product


    Alyss is also a Gearhead, so wouldl be part of the favour-trading that operates in the Workshops.

    Which reminds me, Alyss probably has been picking up loads of small hard to quantify favors by the little things like tightening hard to reach bolts and such, a lot of goodwill favors, add to that Amy has a very highly demanded product, when word gets out they are looking for back up, they will get it.

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  • I got the impression that the thing that Alyss and Donna are better at providing the Gearheads is their apparent exhaustive knowledge of the basics.

    Donna knows hot-rods, the flathead V8, and the monstrous engines (V-12 and V-16). Aylss knows all the general little bits everywhere on an engine and drivetrain.

    When dealing with devisors and gagdeteers, who are too focused on knick-knacks, doodads, and thingamabobs, whoozits and whatits galore, the forget about the stuff like fuseboxes and wiring harnesses, coolant lines and probably even sparkplug gaps when they're trying to add in a twin-turbo or push the compression ratios to the limits of physics, seeking ever more horsepower.

    Donna and Alyss are the troubleshooters, who can catch the obvious when someone is bootstrapping a micro-cascading W-injector vaporizer mixer with a micro-controller in place of their fuel valves. Things like the reason the engine is knocking is the young and ambitious gadgeteer has their cam timing off post-upgrade.

    Not every Gearhead is Kayda, Lanie and Murphy, who operate on a very iterative approach to upgrading their vehicles.
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  • Also... something I remember reading in an old-time (like, the 70s) motorcycle enthusiast magazine:

    The guy was telling this tale of how he was becoming frustrated with an engine that "didn't want" to run, and a friend gave him the most illuminating speech he had, as a mechanic: that engines have no will and, if they are turning, the right mix of air and fuel is placed in the cylinder, the right amount of compression is applied and a spark is struck at the right time, it has no choice but run. So, you check if it's seizing, if it has compression, if air and fuel are entering and the spark, and eventually you will figure out what's wrong. But too many mechanics never internalize this process, and keep looking for "tricks" and "gotchas."

    If this is true for regular people, triple it for the devisor/gadgeteer crowd. Particularly the devisors, who are used to making things work by sheer force of will. They would rather re-engineer their new thingummabob than check if there are physical conditions for the engine to run.

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  • mhalpern wrote:

    Mister D wrote:

    mhalpern wrote:

    Sir Lee wrote: 'Shine does not need the money, but it's both a "still thinking small" thing and a pride thing.
    First, he's a millionaire who still thinks like a small-time moonshiner and hasn't assimilated the meaning of that old joke about if it's worth Bill Gates' time to stop and bend for a US$ 100.00 bill.
    Also, a pride thing. He takes a lot of pride on the quality of his work. Having people pay for it is a way to validate his pride.

    True, but Alyss still doesn't have much in the way of money, and trading favors is quite valid in the type of community he grew up in, its one thing to accept it from people who have some cash to spare, though trading it for favors may be more valuable to him as it means someone will go out of their way and spend their time doing something for him as opposed to just going to an ATM or something for his product


    Alyss is also a Gearhead, so wouldl be part of the favour-trading that operates in the Workshops.

    Which reminds me, Alyss probably has been picking up loads of small hard to quantify favors by the little things like tightening hard to reach bolts and such, a lot of goodwill favors, add to that Amy has a very highly demanded product, when word gets out they are looking for back up, they will get it.


    Ohh Yeah! messing with Maker of Devisor Brownies is up there with messing with their Coffee....that might get the Ratchet on them.

    In the end reality is only consensual! It means that Al Gore is causing "Global Warming" by his rhetoric alone! Fortunately, there are enough Global Warming "Deniers" still about to keep him from boiling the planet.

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  • Dpragan wrote:

    mhalpern wrote:

    Mister D wrote:

    mhalpern wrote:

    Sir Lee wrote: 'Shine does not need the money, but it's both a "still thinking small" thing and a pride thing.
    First, he's a millionaire who still thinks like a small-time moonshiner and hasn't assimilated the meaning of that old joke about if it's worth Bill Gates' time to stop and bend for a US$ 100.00 bill.
    Also, a pride thing. He takes a lot of pride on the quality of his work. Having people pay for it is a way to validate his pride.

    True, but Alyss still doesn't have much in the way of money, and trading favors is quite valid in the type of community he grew up in, its one thing to accept it from people who have some cash to spare, though trading it for favors may be more valuable to him as it means someone will go out of their way and spend their time doing something for him as opposed to just going to an ATM or something for his product


    Alyss is also a Gearhead, so wouldl be part of the favour-trading that operates in the Workshops.

    Which reminds me, Alyss probably has been picking up loads of small hard to quantify favors by the little things like tightening hard to reach bolts and such, a lot of goodwill favors, add to that Amy has a very highly demanded product, when word gets out they are looking for back up, they will get it.


    Ohh Yeah! messing with Maker of Devisor Brownies is up there with messing with their Coffee....that might get the Ratchet on them.


    If the gearheads realize just what happened the people responsible for it might as well leave Whateley. Remember what Mrs Carson told Loophole, the real future was with them if they ever get their ideas together. And seriously, if Lanie wasn't languishing in amnesia in Gen 2, we might well have seen her single handedly change the face of the space program.
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  • Dpragan wrote:

    mhalpern wrote:

    Mister D wrote:

    mhalpern wrote:

    Sir Lee wrote: 'Shine does not need the money, but it's both a "still thinking small" thing and a pride thing.
    First, he's a millionaire who still thinks like a small-time moonshiner and hasn't assimilated the meaning of that old joke about if it's worth Bill Gates' time to stop and bend for a US$ 100.00 bill.
    Also, a pride thing. He takes a lot of pride on the quality of his work. Having people pay for it is a way to validate his pride.

    True, but Alyss still doesn't have much in the way of money, and trading favors is quite valid in the type of community he grew up in, its one thing to accept it from people who have some cash to spare, though trading it for favors may be more valuable to him as it means someone will go out of their way and spend their time doing something for him as opposed to just going to an ATM or something for his product


    Alyss is also a Gearhead, so wouldl be part of the favour-trading that operates in the Workshops.

    Which reminds me, Alyss probably has been picking up loads of small hard to quantify favors by the little things like tightening hard to reach bolts and such, a lot of goodwill favors, add to that Amy has a very highly demanded product, when word gets out they are looking for back up, they will get it.


    Ohh Yeah! messing with Maker of Devisor Brownies is up there with messing with their Coffee....that might get the Ratchet on them.

    Its higher, not only are they messing with one of them, but they are messing with the ONLY source of a tasty alternative to their coffee, that's like messing with the guy who makes the psi grenades

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  • Sir Lee wrote: Also... something I remember reading in an old-time (like, the 70s) motorcycle enthusiast magazine:

    The guy was telling this tale of how he was becoming frustrated with an engine that "didn't want" to run, and a friend gave him the most illuminating speech he had, as a mechanic: that engines have no will and, if they are turning, the right mix of air and fuel is placed in the cylinder, the right amount of compression is applied and a spark is struck at the right time, it has no choice but run. So, you check if it's seizing, if it has compression, if air and fuel are entering and the spark, and eventually you will figure out what's wrong. But too many mechanics never internalize this process, and keep looking for "tricks" and "gotchas."

    If this is true for regular people, triple it for the devisor/gadgeteer crowd. Particularly the devisors, who are used to making things work by sheer force of will. They would rather re-engineer their new thingummabob than check if there are physical conditions for the engine to run.


    My dad told a story of him and a couple of his brothers doing maintenance on a lawn mower, including sharpening the blade. When they had finished and put it back together, it wouldn't run. It would turnover and a few seconds later stop. After troubleshooting for a while, one joked about having put the blade on upside down. They all laughed, and then turned the blade over. It started and ran like it was brand new. Never overlook what obviously can't be the problem.

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  • mhalpern wrote:

    Dpragan wrote:

    mhalpern wrote:

    Mister D wrote:

    mhalpern wrote:

    Sir Lee wrote: 'Shine does not need the money, but it's both a "still thinking small" thing and a pride thing.
    First, he's a millionaire who still thinks like a small-time moonshiner and hasn't assimilated the meaning of that old joke about if it's worth Bill Gates' time to stop and bend for a US$ 100.00 bill.
    Also, a pride thing. He takes a lot of pride on the quality of his work. Having people pay for it is a way to validate his pride.

    True, but Alyss still doesn't have much in the way of money, and trading favors is quite valid in the type of community he grew up in, its one thing to accept it from people who have some cash to spare, though trading it for favors may be more valuable to him as it means someone will go out of their way and spend their time doing something for him as opposed to just going to an ATM or something for his product


    Alyss is also a Gearhead, so wouldl be part of the favour-trading that operates in the Workshops.

    Which reminds me, Alyss probably has been picking up loads of small hard to quantify favors by the little things like tightening hard to reach bolts and such, a lot of goodwill favors, add to that Amy has a very highly demanded product, when word gets out they are looking for back up, they will get it.


    Ohh Yeah! messing with Maker of Devisor Brownies is up there with messing with their Coffee....that might get the Ratchet on them.

    Its higher, not only are they messing with one of them, but they are messing with the ONLY source of a tasty alternative to their coffee, that's like messing with the guy who makes the psi grenades


    Yup! because not all like coffee (Taste bitter to me even with cream ans sugar and even the Starbucks fancy coffee's small and taste nasty to me.) I can sometimes take the jellybeans that taste like that but not liquid. Can you imagine what would happened if he used concentrated Mountain Dew Brownies?

    OR NoS Rowdy (Cherry Flavor goes with the Dark Chocolate better!)

    In the end reality is only consensual! It means that Al Gore is causing "Global Warming" by his rhetoric alone! Fortunately, there are enough Global Warming "Deniers" still about to keep him from boiling the planet.

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  • Hmm I have a recipe for Chocolate-Orange Brownies...I wonder if I can modify it to take NoS Rowdy??? (Replacing the orange, zested and juiced)

    I wonder how you can concentrate the NoS? Freeze and let the syrup dribble off like in that one White Wolf Mage: Initiates of the Art does with Jolt 2 liters? or boil it down to a syrup?

    In the end reality is only consensual! It means that Al Gore is causing "Global Warming" by his rhetoric alone! Fortunately, there are enough Global Warming "Deniers" still about to keep him from boiling the planet.

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  • I'd go with the freeze distillation. While boiling would eventually yield a syrup, you do lose the lighter volatile molecules that are responsible for much of a "fruit" (ketones and aldehydes) flavor.

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    7 years 7 months ago #131 by E. E. Nalley
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  • Sir Lee wrote: Also... something I remember reading in an old-time (like, the 70s) motorcycle enthusiast magazine:

    The guy was telling this tale of how he was becoming frustrated with an engine that "didn't want" to run, and a friend gave him the most illuminating speech he had, as a mechanic: that engines have no will and, if they are turning, the right mix of air and fuel is placed in the cylinder, the right amount of compression is applied and a spark is struck at the right time, it has no choice but run. So, you check if it's seizing, if it has compression, if air and fuel are entering and the spark, and eventually you will figure out what's wrong. But too many mechanics never internalize this process, and keep looking for "tricks" and "gotchas."

    If this is true for regular people, triple it for the devisor/gadgeteer crowd. Particularly the devisors, who are used to making things work by sheer force of will. They would rather re-engineer their new thingummabob than check if there are physical conditions for the engine to run.


    Another prime example is Elaine forgetting to upgrade her rear differential after upgrading her engine and transmission. She had increased the torque from the transmission to the wheels to such an extent that the gears in the rear differential were literally chewing themselves to pieces like trying to use a power drill to remove a stubborn screw and having the bit slowly hollow out the screw instead of moving it.

    I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
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    7 years 7 months ago #132 by OtherEric
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  • Valentine wrote:

    Sir Lee wrote: Also... something I remember reading in an old-time (like, the 70s) motorcycle enthusiast magazine:

    The guy was telling this tale of how he was becoming frustrated with an engine that "didn't want" to run, and a friend gave him the most illuminating speech he had, as a mechanic: that engines have no will and, if they are turning, the right mix of air and fuel is placed in the cylinder, the right amount of compression is applied and a spark is struck at the right time, it has no choice but run. So, you check if it's seizing, if it has compression, if air and fuel are entering and the spark, and eventually you will figure out what's wrong. But too many mechanics never internalize this process, and keep looking for "tricks" and "gotchas."

    If this is true for regular people, triple it for the devisor/gadgeteer crowd. Particularly the devisors, who are used to making things work by sheer force of will. They would rather re-engineer their new thingummabob than check if there are physical conditions for the engine to run.


    My dad told a story of him and a couple of his brothers doing maintenance on a lawn mower, including sharpening the blade. When they had finished and put it back together, it wouldn't run. It would turnover and a few seconds later stop. After troubleshooting for a while, one joked about having put the blade on upside down. They all laughed, and then turned the blade over. It started and ran like it was brand new. Never overlook what obviously can't be the problem.


    Balancing the dilemma was best described to me when dealing with computer tech support, but the idea pertains to other pieces of hardware:

    Whatever you do, NOT anthropomorphize the computers! They HATE that!
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    7 years 7 months ago #133 by Anne
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  • Favorite computer snafu (don't know if it is true...) supposedly someone was asked was the computer plugged it? (it wasn't coming on) Answer yes, to the power strip. Was the power strip plugged in? Yes (to itself) BONK! Do check the simple stuf!
    7 years 7 months ago #134 by Kettlekorn
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  • Yeah, that is a real thing that happens sometimes. A couple years ago my neighbor asked if I could fix her computer and it turned out she'd done exactly that.

    I am the kernel that pops in the night. I am the pain that keeps your dentist employed.
    7 years 7 months ago #135 by MM2ss
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  • I saw something similar. I helped to set up the school network when I was in a CCNA program in high school. Had a teacher tell me her printer wasn't working. Turns out it was not connected to the computer OR plugged in...
    7 years 6 months ago #136 by Echo
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  • A good story.

    My only real issue with it is that it's short :(

    Keep on writing!
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