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Question A Little R&R 3
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- Yolandria
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And Standing in the other corner! The Sister of Suffering! The Excruciating Exemplar! EXQUISITE!
- Malady
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... And we have Parents' Day!
Wonder what Mel's powers will be...
And what Donna's secret is... We haven't seen her around, so guesses are sorta useless...
Nice to see Roulette getting some use out of her powers. And her mom approves!
Exquisite... You fail, so much? Bets on how long it'll take her to get stomped by some bigger group?
Introspection from Ribbon! Very interesting!
So much to talk about, that I can't keep it in my head! :sigh:
- Rose Bunny
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Malady wrote: And what Donna's secret is... We haven't seen her around, so guesses are sorta useless...
Yes we have, she's Carson's best friend, and has a sliver of the Astarte force.
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- Domoviye
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I think we are very close to seeing Alyss cutting lose on the bullies. Regular bullying is one thing, almost killing her best friend is well beyond that.
It's creepy hearing Saphire talking so casually about eggs and some of them not hatching. Almost like hearing about a stillbirth as if it's no big deal.
What does the green mist do? It's not a poison or Alyss would likely have gotten a rash or strange feeling for a second or two. And when does she head to Whateley?
So many good things here.
- Yolandria
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A Little R&R 3 Part 1 comments
Erin Carrew aka Cauldron, interesting bracelets, wonder what the symbols on them really are. Potion to become an exemplar, yikes, Erin needs to hear the horror stories of such attempts to scare her off, devisor, magic user and otherwise who have attempted it. Infusing spells into potions, very interesting, plus esp as a psychometrist, potent combination.
Darn it, making me wish I had a recording of his lectures more and more. Sitting next to Amy, nice they have classes together. Awww, poor Sapphire, hope seeing her family isn't as awkward as she expects.However, he was also the most boring teacher I'd ever encountered, and could even put a hyperactive kid, loaded up on devisor coffee, to sleep with one of his lectures.
Mischief showing up and glad that Imp is back to normal, guess we are going to see Parent's Day from multiple perspectives. And Dr. Quintain can put Mischief to sleep, they could use him at hospitals.
Amy sitting with Alyss and Sapphire for lunch, Alyss as curious as I am about what upgrades Amy did to some of her devises. Very interesting battery and good idea with how Amy's powers work. And works with a recharge station of her own design too, neat. And more aww for poor Sapphire, she needs to have her family be proud of her so she can get a much needed boost of self-esteem.
Exquisite, exemplar freshman and with rumors like that about her, I have a bad feeling. Left without incident, but wonder if she is in their martial arts class. Oh great, figures she hangs out with Starbright. Okay, that sucks, against Aegis and he can use her powers but Amy can't, Tolman is being harsh today. At least Aegis is nice about it.
Alyss reading cookbooks so she can better help Amy in the kitchen and have something to talk to her about, what a great friend. Dana and Jinx sitting together, no Pinball for Parent's Day but Jinx is excited to introduce Dana to her parents, hehehe. Uh oh, the way Jinx grinned I have a feeling Rachael is somehow going be at Whateley for Parent's Day, sneaky girl.
Huh, mental trick to organize and understand what you learn, interesting. Feeling like she is on fire, in that kind of pain and Exquisite shows up, attacking her like that as a message from Starbright, sick creep.
So Exquisite's real name is Naomi Pryce and Starbright's Traci Hoffman. Confirmed Exquisite did attack Alyss for Starbright, guessing it was an ESP or PSI ability. Naomi thinks she is going to have Starbright as part of her group of 'friends' to help her become the queen of the school, she has a lot of competition in that area already. She thinks her power can be used as an unspoken threat, at Whateley there are probably at least a few ways to counter it.
Parents Day. Status beam accident when 9 and mom stuck like a statue, Amy has had a very interesting upbringing. Beth with her mom, 6'4" amazonian beauty will still stand out at Whateley. And Kara there as well, 2 months and finally gets to see her best friend and girlfriend again, another cute couple.
No burnout in a week, at least Amy seems to be improving there.
Bwahahahaha, sorry, hard not to laugh when she says that with a straight face."You know," Mom pointed out wryly, "I am an adult woman, and am perfectly capable of taking care of myself..."
The needle gun, interesting detail about the spell she put on it and why it won't work on regular firearms. Spells on a devise, was hoping to see someone do that, nice it is Amy who figured it out. Okay...should have expected a few craters involved while Amy's mom went to Whateley.
Whoa, so that is Sapphire's mom, Ebon Scale, impressive. Aww, being teased about having no scales and no tail, done by Sapphire's 3 little sisters, 7-8 year olds. *sigh* Even her own sister, the one with green scales, upset she turned into a 'pretty', saying it like an insult. Emerald, Ruby, and Opal, named for the color of their scales, cute.
Lol, teasing by Kara for a moment about how close of friends Amy is with Sapphire. Hawthorne still has a bit of a reputation, wonder how much worse it was back when her mom went to Whateley. Seeing how her room is set-up, I would be concerned for Amy as well. Nice look for the recharge station, practical and functional without taking up much space. Interesting essence battery, durable too.
Just don't say that in range of Ms. Grimes or anything from Harry Potter.Kara grinned, and in her best Hagrid voice, said, "Yer a wizard Amy."
Caitlin meeting Amy's mom along with Beth and Kara, love the smirk she has upon looking at Kara. A compliment about Mom's singularity grenades from Caitlin, high praise indeed, those came in handy. But just hope her mom never mails any more to her or that they are inspected and accidentally set off.
Rich showing up at Whateley to see Alyss with Min along. Melanie and Kaylie showing up as well, talk about a family visit, with the exception of Rachael.
And teasing Rich about making a dress for him as well, Alyss has got a great sense of humor."You need to start drinking coffee, to stunt your growth, so I won't have to keep looking up at you..."

Awww, Kimberly spending a day at the zoo with her father, even though she wished to come. Martina, wonder if she will meet Alyss' family. Quick tour of Poe and Kaylie's reaction to Crystal Hall is great, love seeing that look of wonder from someone who hasn't gotten jaded living at Whateley. Bwahahaha, Dana thinking her kids are her parents, ah, the misunderstandings are a great source of humor.
Ooo, the exchange about her age between Alyss and Amy's mom, if they weren't so good at keeping secrets. Ugh, it figures someone like that pain Super Star is the big sister of Starbright. Oh crap, Kaylie manifesting right on Parents Day, glowing green mist coming from her skin and hair. At least Alyss is able to get to Kaylie and calm her down so she gets some control over her powers, for now. Figures, the odds of this not happening with Jinx around were slim to none.
Awww, Sapphire's sisters not respecting her anymore and teasing her, they need to be taught she is still the sister they love and not tease her about something outside of her control. At least Amy and Kara got some time alone for some kissing, at Whateley on Parents Day I thought that would be near impossible. Ugh, so it was a man, an old classmate of her mom's, who called her Boob Job, triggering a diedricks episode, talk about running Parents Day.
At least Kaylie is doing okay, if a little freaked out over manifesting. Ouch, thinking they can't afford for Alyss and Kaylie to attend Whateley. Breakdown, Downpour, and Voodude joining them for lunch, Breakdown's brother actually trying to hit on Sharisha, he is lucky she didn't respond violently to that. Doubt there is any male who came to Whateley and saw Fey who didn't drool over her.
Still fallout from the devisor brownies incident, Team Awesome is a handful and a half. And rumor about what really happened to Imp when she came back to school hurting is already circulating around Whateley, the rumor mill of Whateley is so fast, plus prank war against security by Imp and getting away with it, hehehe, if they only knew.
Mechanic's overalls in her size, wonder what kind of vehicles she is working on today. Helping out Ringo reminding Alyss she needs her own car to work on. Troubleshooting and car maintenance, always good to have such experience when working on cars. Donna isn't a student or faculty, wonder why she is working on the cars myself. Ah, that Donna, Mrs. Carson's friend, a way to help her adjust to how much the world has changed and a hobby.
And Alyss is the perfect person for her to work around, someone who knows not to poke into others secrets. More and more you make me jealous of Alyss' power to manifest her own clothes and not worry if they get dirty. Check-up at Doyle, smart, wish more places outside Whateley had facilities for mutant check-ups right after manifesting.
Great, Exquisite and Starbright watching her from a distance, hope these two get caught and in serious trouble if they assault her. At least they didn't make a move, this time. And back at Poe kids already working on Halloween costumes. Oh boy, CeeCee described like that, wonder who she has drawn the attention of.
Alyss has been taking lessons from Cecilia Rogers, wonder what kind of outfits she can make now. Having Alyss help them out with costumes, this is going to be a bigger job than Alyss first suspects. And sexy Cat in the Hat costume for Danica, Cindy, don't, just don't. Oh boy, CeeCee, Alyss set-up like that to make Halloween costumes, sneaky little devils.
Naomi having all those plans, she has no idea how the social environment of Whateley works and will be shocked when she tries to join the Alphas area at their response. Boy, she is a snob to think Wyatt is a redneck from Alaska. Form her own clique and build her power base from scratch, she is arrogant if she thinks that will work. *facepalms* Starbright is gullible to fall for Naomi's act.
Gravmax's father runs a company like that, that is why he has such a huge ego, talk about conceited. And Iron with him, all meeting with Naomi, all so he can get her to target Amy, delusional saying she has mocked him and made false accusations, he needs his head examined. Ugh, this group is going to be huge trouble until someone reveals what they are doing to the staff and they get in trouble.
Shifter class causing frustration for Amy and Iron Rose as well, due to the nature of their particular types of shifting. When it seems there is nothing you can learn from a class, it just leaves you feeling you are wasting your time being there. Transmutational shapeshifters, interesting. Seem to transform into iron, seem being the operative word.
Monkeywrench still working on his banana gun, can't wait to see what it can do when 'perfected'. Devisor brownies, actually able to sell them to students in the Workshop, nice. Aww, poor Balderdash, hope she gets some self-confidence. And trading the brownies for parts and favors, nice exchange. 3 more batteries, plus ideas for more projects, love seeing how a combination of low-level powers can add up to a greater whole with Amy. So help me, if they figure out that Exquisite using her power on Amy triggered a burnout, she better be in serious trouble.
Oh great, Alyss relating a bit to Roland Williams, as he reminds him a bit of himself before his rebirth as Alyss. Worried about Amy who suffered a severe burnout, Exquisite might as well have tried to kill her with that attack. At least Amy is about to joke about the whole situation of being in Doyle so much. Telling how the burnout started, how it felt different from every other time, hope Alyss can connect the dots. And she does after asking about Exquisite, Amy having bumped into her right before this happened.
At least they have figured out Exquisite is behind it, if she keeps picking up enemies of other students like this there is going to be big trouble, equal to a major gang war. Ah, the incident where Aegis had to be rescued from Unstoppable by Miranda and Ember. Fun seeing these two together, reminding us how different you can be and be best friends.
Back at the Poe common room, Erin, Victory, and Lexi studying, Angel chatting with Lily, and Martina typing away on her laptop. Everyone concerned for Amy, when the severe GSD cases have pity for you it is bad. And it seems Exquisite is a mid-level Exemplar, possibly a 4, plus an energizer who can zap people according to Erin.
Yikes! And now Alyss has vengeance in mind against Exquisite for her attack on Amy which could have killed her, Alyss is scary when protecting those she cares for.However, it was Martina who explained, "She can hit people with some kind of bio-electrical burst, that sets off all the pain receptors in their nervous systems at once."
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- null0trooper
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Domoviye wrote: Great update.
I think we are very close to seeing Alyss cutting lose on the bullies. Regular bullying is one thing, almost killing her best friend is well beyond that.
I expect that Exquisite and friends have a bit to learn about the wonderful world of powers, and how much overdraft their assets can cover on the checks their egos are writing. If they're lucky it won't be Team Awesome teaching those lessons. Messing with the girl who makes the good brownies and cookies!
Domoviye wrote: It's creepy hearing Saphire talking so casually about eggs and some of them not hatching. Almost like hearing about a stillbirth as if it's no big deal.
There could be more than just a bit of reptilian appearance coming from the DNA/GSD.
Domoviye wrote: So many good things here.
Yup!
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A. Alyss gets revenge herself.
B. Alyss tells the Gadgeteers/Devisors about the attack, and let them get revenge.
C. Alyss gets Poe involved.
D. Alyss gets Hawthorne involved.
E. Alyss lets Team Awesome take care of it.
I wonder if Diamondback saw/met with Sapphire's family. I wonder if Imp saw/met with Sapphire's family or worse overhear Sapphire's sisters.
Where's Absinthe when you need her.Suddenly, Kaylie let out a loud gasp as glowing green mist began to emerge from her skin and hair.
Don't Drick and Drive.
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- Yolandria
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Now that's a very interesting question. I bet they would definately have a ton of things to talk about. That's for sure.I wonder if Diamondback saw/met with Sapphire's family
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Yolandria wrote:
Now that's a very interesting question. I bet they would definitely have a ton of things to talk about. That's for sure.I wonder if Diamondback saw/met with Sapphire's family
I can just imagine Saphire's little sisters swarming Diamondback and asking her to be their new big sister since their old big sister turned into a pretty. It would also clue Diamondback in as to why she has been sensing jealousy from Saphire.
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the top 3 to not mess with:
Lanie - wouldn't care about the popularity, but the "Devisor Goddess" would have her fans behind her, she would have Kodiak supporting her, Kayda and Tansy would step in to protect her if anyone messed with her, as certainly the Order would as well.
Tansy - do I have to explain how bad an idea that'd be? Nope.
Nikki - more nope. Tick off team Kimba, the Outcasts, Venus Inc... oh yes, and Nikki herself, possibly one of the most powerful mages in the world.
I'm sure there are more names I'm forgetting, but that's because it's late.
to summarize... trying to plot your way to most popular girl in Whateley is pretty much a death sentence.
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- Hardric
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Valentine wrote: So now the question is how mad is Alyss?
A. Alyss gets revenge herself.
B. Alyss tells the Gadgeteers/Devisors about the attack, and let them get revenge.
C. Alyss gets Poe involved.
D. Alyss gets Hawthorne involved.
E. Alyss lets Team Awesome take care of it.
I'll take F. All of the above. Much more effective and satisfying. Besides, all of the options mentionned have a right to go for the payback (just try to keep Awesomes away from that...)
Dang, yet another wannabe godling of the campus like Don Assholo, Stupido, Witchbitch and the Wicked Bitch of the Great North... Does Whateley have to fill quotas or what, like 50% of pricks every year?
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Not only could Exquisite find herself in deep shit (pardon my french

Let the speculation of Kaylie's powers and codename begin! Manifester perhaps? As for what the gas does is anyone's guess at this point.
Insanity: for when normal just isn't interesting enough.
All ideas free to use. You can probably make better use of them than me.
- Yolandria
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Arresting her in class and announcing she's being investigated for attempted murder might smarten her up. The fact that they can't make such a charge stick would just mean that they could go. "But we're prepared to give you a second chance." without mentioning how flimsy their evidence is.
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She wanted to be the new queen bee, the same as she was before, and set out to do exactly that in a very methodical way. She looked at the major cliques to take them over, but found out that thanks to the events of last year, the Alphas no longer control the school, the New Olympians wouldn't let her in and aren't really that strong with Team Kimba and The Outcasts around, The Golden Kids won't take her, and she doesn't want to use modeling for influence and money. So she did the smarter thing and formed her own little group.
But the problem is she isn't as brutal as Hekate, isn't as manipulative as Tansy (and that didn't work out great for her, did it?), and isn't as powerful as Freya. So she can't brute force it the way she's been doing it. Exquisite hasn't caught on to the fact that no matter how smart or skilled or powerful you are, there's someone else out there that can beat you. That's the entire point of the sims or the grades in combat finals.
She's about to get a very harsh lesson in why that is, and it will probably make her far, far more dangerous in the long run, because Miss Pryce is clearly not stupid.
She's just picked the right people at the wrong time. She made the right choices. Starbrite, Gravmax, and Iron are all easy to manipulate idiots. Starbrite has already gathered a lot of the other mean and bitchy girls, Gravmax is wealthy and pretty strong, and Iron is a freebie. Exquisite can manipulate them and ensured their loyalty to her with just two ambushes. She doesn't even care about Amy and Alyss.
Had she chosen anyone other than Gravmax, Exquisite would probably be fine. Alyss doesn't really care too much now that she's gotten advice from her granddaughter on how to handle teen girls. She's been hit by worse pain, including Rachel's plasma gun, and as Alyss continued to humiliate Starbrite, eventually Exquisite would have cut the girl loose for being an embarrassment, but still kept the rest of the mean girls of the freshmen class.
But Gravmax and Amy? Amy has a lot of friends. Like...the entirety of Hawthorne lot of friends. Like a large portion of Poe lot of friends. Exquisite was looking at money with Gravmax, and forgot to look at the social circle.
That aside. I love Amy's mom. All her scenes and Amy's references to her made me laugh or smile or just go "awww". She means well, but for her faults, she made Amy the motherly and self-sufficient young lady she is today. A frozen statue for a whole month when Amy was nine?

Sapphire's precocious little sisters were adorable. Opal even liked Amy's hair, so there's a chance that they'll appreciate their big sister again eventually as well.
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Valentine wrote: So now the question is how mad is Alyss?
A. Alyss gets revenge herself.
B. Alyss tells the Gadgeteers/Devisors about the attack, and let them get revenge.
C. Alyss gets Poe involved.
D. Alyss gets Hawthorne involved.
E. Alyss lets Team Awesome take care of it.
I wonder if Diamondback saw/met with Sapphire's family. I wonder if Imp saw/met with Sapphire's family or worse overhear Sapphire's sisters.
Where's Absinthe when you need her.Suddenly, Kaylie let out a loud gasp as glowing green mist began to emerge from her skin and hair.
F. Gets the bad seeds involved.
G. Informs security.
E. Asks Tansy for help.
G. All of the above.
H. Or just informs the Alpha. They cover most of those options.
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I. all of the above possibly minus F, plus goodwill incentives where applicable.NJM1564 wrote:
Valentine wrote: So now the question is how mad is Alyss?
A. Alyss gets revenge herself.
B. Alyss tells the Gadgeteers/Devisors about the attack, and let them get revenge.
C. Alyss gets Poe involved.
D. Alyss gets Hawthorne involved.
E. Alyss lets Team Awesome take care of it.
I wonder if Diamondback saw/met with Sapphire's family. I wonder if Imp saw/met with Sapphire's family or worse overhear Sapphire's sisters.
Where's Absinthe when you need her.Suddenly, Kaylie let out a loud gasp as glowing green mist began to emerge from her skin and hair.
F. Gets the bad seeds involved.
G. Informs security.
E. Asks Tansy for help.
G. All of the above.
H. Or just informs the Alpha. They cover most of those options.
also remember Alyss now knows Exquisite is an EX 4, now with Ribbon's mental enhancements, such as internal calculator and fairly accurate internal clock mean that she can gauge and exert exactly the force needed to hurt as much as she can without causing injury. she just needs a little bit of practice with her bracelets to get the speed down.
On a side note, I am guessing Kaylie's a PK or related power set, it sounds like a variant of a pk shell, not a lot of detail to go off of, but still, as for money, thats easy, not only does Alyss already have a job, but the Poe Halloween costumes are a great audition for Venus Inc,
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More like the reality of what used to happen every month. You could drive yourself to depression about the lost potential, or just accept it as a part of life and move on.Domoviye wrote: It's creepy hearing Saphire talking so casually about eggs and some of them not hatching. Almost like hearing about a stillbirth as if it's no big deal.
- joreymay
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Actually, the rule is narrower. She won't significantly hurt "children" (which includes teens) unless absolutely necessary. Big difference. But in this case, it would likely hold. To her Big Al part, the girl is little more than a painfully naughty child who caused unexpectedly severe problems with her tantrums. A child to be corrected rather than an enemy to be destroyed.konzill wrote: Alyss is a little mad. Something tells me she might bend her rule about not hurting anyone:
- null0trooper
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Katssun wrote: Honestly, I found it hard not to respect Exquisite the way she was presented here. She's just made a very bad choice in stooges since she hasn't figured out how Whateley works.
i.e., "Excellent plan, details need work"?
Katssun wrote: She wanted to be the new queen bee, the same as she was before, and set out to do exactly that in a very methodical way. She looked at the major cliques to take them over, but found out that thanks to the events of last year, the Alphas no longer control the school, the New Olympians wouldn't let her in and aren't really that strong with Team Kimba and The Outcasts around, The Golden Kids won't take her, and she doesn't want to use modeling for influence and money. So she did the smarter thing and formed her own little group.
I'd file her assessment of the Alphas under "hasn't figured out how Whateley works", cross-referenced under "underestimating the lower social classes". In one swoop, Cody's co-opted not only his most openly-dangerous student opponents - if he remembers to follow through, else risk losing the Grunts, Outcasts, Bad Seeds, and Kimbas - but also the most powerful side-liners, given that performance in the Sims carries a lot of the social cachet. On the other hand, there should be a lot more combat sim team leaders than the "Alpha Council" is intended to include. That could just be a "work in progress" issue.
Katssun wrote: But the problem is she isn't as brutal as Hekate, isn't as manipulative as Tansy (and that didn't work out great for her, did it?), and isn't as powerful as Freya. So she can't brute force it the way she's been doing it. Exquisite hasn't caught on to the fact that no matter how smart or skilled or powerful you are, there's someone else out there that can beat you. That's the entire point of the sims or the grades in combat finals.
She's about to get a very harsh lesson in why that is, and it will probably make her far, far more dangerous in the long run, because Miss Pryce is clearly not stupid.
To sharks like HM and TWFKAH - and we have good reason to believe there are other users and abusers just as subtle and ruthless on-campus - the wannabe queen might make a perfect rook or bishop. Once the "hook" is set, she's smart enough to know how badly her line's been played against her.
Katssun wrote: That aside. I love Amy's mom. All her scenes and Amy's references to her made me laugh or smile or just go "awww". She means well, but for her faults, she made Amy the motherly and self-sufficient young lady she is today. A frozen statue for a whole month when Amy was nine?
Heh. "Boob Job" So many lessons taught, in so few words.
Katssun wrote: Sapphire's precocious little sisters were adorable. Opal even liked Amy's hair, so there's a chance that they'll appreciate their big sister again eventually as well.
Adorable in that "can't live with them/can't wring their necks either" way that some kids have.

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It's not so much a quota, as the reality of how most manifestations would change people's personalities. The "social queens who lost it all" who want it back? Well, think about it:Hardric wrote: I'll take F. All of the above. Much more effective and satisfying. Besides, all of the options mentionned have a right to go for the payback (just try to keep Awesomes away from that...)
Dang, yet another wannabe godling of the campus like Don Assholo, Stupido, Witchbitch and the Wicked Bitch of the Great North... Does Whateley have to fill quotas or what, like 50% of pricks every year?
-If they have a good manifestation and don't come to Whateley 'under endorsement from law enforcement' then, of course, they're going to want their top space back. And the nature of kids/teenagers is to be prepared to be a little bit of a bully to get other's respect.
-If they had a bad manifestation and their presence at Whateley is to prevent their presence otherwise being in prison? At the very least, they live in a world that mostly hates mutants, so it's not unreasonable they adopted a bit of "Well, then let me be evil" and have less of a problem being a jerk. At the more worse outcomes, they'll have been turned into some form of selfish-nihilist who thinks they have to be top dog to survive.
In any case, the school's psychiatric staff is, much like real life schools based in 'rough' areas, badly understaffed.
In regards to the revenge: I can see it going three ways:
-Alyss gets Carson/Security involved somehow, arguing that she's not prepared to hurt children herself.
-Alyss gets the other students involved since Amy has a lot of friends who wouldn't stand for someone picking on her. Hawthorne-bully-busters especially, and Team Awesome would be my favourites to see what happens.
-Alyss gets another attack on her, and in the moment, lashes out. That could then go several ways, either Exquisite's bruises teach her why you don't pick fights with exemplar sixes, or the fight gets attention from others and people are like "What kind of loser bitch picks a fight with the ten-year-old?"
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- Katssun
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I didn't think of this until later while I was at work, but isn't Exquisite the first actual "queen bee" we've seen in Gen 1?null0trooper wrote:
Katssun wrote: But the problem is she isn't as brutal as Hekate, isn't as manipulative as Tansy (and that didn't work out great for her, did it?), and isn't as powerful as Freya. So she can't brute force it the way she's been doing it. Exquisite hasn't caught on to the fact that no matter how smart or skilled or powerful you are, there's someone else out there that can beat you. That's the entire point of the sims or the grades in combat finals.
She's about to get a very harsh lesson in why that is, and it will probably make her far, far more dangerous in the long run, because Miss Pryce is clearly not stupid.
To sharks like HM and TWFKAH - and we have good reason to believe there are other users and abusers just as subtle and ruthless on-campus - the wannabe queen might make a perfect rook or bishop. Once the "hook" is set, she's smart enough to know how badly her line's been played against her.
Freya used her powers and simply obtained followers. She asked, they obeyed. She used them like a baseline queen bee would, but she has never had to work at obtaining flunkies. She has big strategy down on using them, but she's missing the key subtle psychological manipulation behind putting another person under her thumb. It simply happened for her. She never knew where they're mentally weak, where they're strong. There's been hints that she can't really deal with people immune to her power, because she's really never been tested or challenged except once or twice.
Hekate inherited her position from Freya, and maintained it through sheer brutality. She used her magic, her slaves, stringing along the Don, and what she learned from her master to hold that position until Fey and Jade destroyed her. Hekate was calculating, cautious, and utterly vicious, but she was all stick. I think she's smarter now that she's returned, realized her limitations from Fey/Jade as well as Diamondback outmanuvering her during combat finals, but a leader she wasn't. A tyrant, yes, but her position was handed to her.
Tansy is even more amusing. She took control, but had no idea what to even do with it! We need to remember that deep down, Tansy was a kind-hearted, nerdy, overweight, pimply,lonely girl with low self-esteem. She was a outcast. She never learned the crucial skills of being an evil bitch enough to maintain her power. Not deep down. She was emulating Ayla's sisters and Freya. She could manipulate, she was just pretending and using force to try and keep it. Which she didn't.
But Exquisite? She's used to doing it the baseline way. She already has all the skills needed to be a queen bee, and her powers don't even really help her maintain it. Her powers are nothing more than a better stick, or an easier carrot for her subordinates. But she could certainly do it the baseline way. She already knows how. She spent her time working on Starbrite. Weeks, by her own admission. There's nothing there for Fubar to find in terms of abusing powers. Starbrite really and truly believes that Naomi Pryce is her friend, that she'll be part of the popular girls for being her "second in command." But Exquisite acknowledges that she's just a pawn.
That's far scarier to me than girls who become queen bee by mutant powers alone.
Exquisite knows how to bring others beneath her authority by psychological and political means alone. I don't know any other Gen 1 character that has done that before.
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Which would possibly morph into, "What kind of loser bitch LOSES a fight with a ten-year-old"... That would make her "burnt toast" socially speaking on two fronts. Picking on little kids and getting beat down by one.
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That's one thing Queen Bees are really good at. Playing ignorant and innocent. She already has Starbrite positioned for taking the fall about Alyss...or anything else for that matter. That's what Starbrite is for. Gravmax can be replaced when she finds someone else with money to spend on her.
Or worse, Alyss and she fight, Naomi loses, and starts following the example of people like Tansy and paying attention in Basic Martial Arts, or thinks that taking Exemplar Grace is a good idea as well. Tansy is approximately an Exemplar-4 as well, and we've seen what nastiness she is truly capable of if need requires.
Imagine someone who fights like Tansy, but can put people temporarily off balance like Alicia Thacker can to create openings?
Only Alyss, who is familiar with constant pain from cancer, and a handful of others would stand a chance against her. That's pretty terrifying to me.
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Caitlinn would take her easily with one hand tied behind her back. Last i remember rocks don't have nerves like normal people.Only Alyss, who is familiar with constant pain from cancer, and a handful of others would stand a chance against her. That's pretty terrifying to me.
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Yolandria wrote:
Caitlinn would take her easily with one hand tied behind her back. Last i remember rocks don't have nerves like normal people.Only Alyss, who is familiar with constant pain from cancer, and a handful of others would stand a chance against her. That's pretty terrifying to me.
I just remembered that the "Order of the Worn Wrench" would have dibs in this situation. Whahaha.
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NJM1564 wrote:
Valentine wrote: So now the question is how mad is Alyss?
A. Alyss gets revenge herself.
B. Alyss tells the Gadgeteers/Devisors about the attack, and let them get revenge.
C. Alyss gets Poe involved.
D. Alyss gets Hawthorne involved.
E. Alyss lets Team Awesome take care of it.
I wonder if Diamondback saw/met with Sapphire's family. I wonder if Imp saw/met with Sapphire's family or worse overhear Sapphire's sisters.
Where's Absinthe when you need her.Suddenly, Kaylie let out a loud gasp as glowing green mist began to emerge from her skin and hair.
F. Gets the bad seeds involved.
G. Informs security.
E. Asks Tansy for help.
G. All of the above.
H. Or just informs the Alpha. They cover most of those options.
Since this is more about Amy, why would the Seeds care, (some would care because they are decent human beings, but other than that...)
Alyss isn't really big into revenge for things done to herself, especially if they are physical. It was the teasing/bullying that she didn't know how to react to. Physically hurting a friend, possibly causing her death? Yeah Alyss is going to get her back, and it probably won't be pretty. If she talks to Ayla it might even be within school rules.
Hmmm, Alyss, Amy, Sapphire, and ??? vs Lightbright, Exquisite, Iron, and Gravmax.in a sanctioned fight.
Maybe Sphere?
Don't Drick and Drive.
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NJM1564 wrote:
Yolandria wrote:
Caitlinn would take her easily with one hand tied behind her back. Last i remember rocks don't have nerves like normal people.Only Alyss, who is familiar with constant pain from cancer, and a handful of others would stand a chance against her. That's pretty terrifying to me.
I just remembered that the "Order of the Worn Wrench" would have dibs in this situation. Whahaha.
Yes. I meant to mention the "Order" They most certainly do have a stake in this. A queen bee type randomly attacking a devisor because she thinks there would be no consequences. oh yeah, exactly the sort of thing they were created to deal with.
If they become aware of it. Now, big question, Has Alyss been approached by them. She is certainly qualified. A first rate mechanic who seems to be a small ten year old girl. It was to protect the vulnerable from the strong that the group was formed, and she is not obviously powerful.
Would be a story type coincidence if they were to approach her just as she's trying to figure out how to deal with this situation.
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peter wrote: If they become aware of it. Now, big question, Has Alyss been approached by them. She is certainly qualified. A first rate mechanic who seems to be a small ten year old girl. It was to protect the vulnerable from the strong that the group was formed, and she is not obviously powerful.
Great. Now I want to see Alyss whack someone with a wrench.
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But her bracelets are more fashionable. And hit harder.Great. Now I want to see Alyss whack someone with a wrench.

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And within the "not looking for a fight because they are always with on person" rule,Yolandria wrote:
But her bracelets are more fashionable. And hit harder.Great. Now I want to see Alyss whack someone with a wrench.
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Angeldude wrote:
peter wrote: If they become aware of it. Now, big question, Has Alyss been approached by them. She is certainly qualified. A first rate mechanic who seems to be a small ten year old girl. It was to protect the vulnerable from the strong that the group was formed, and she is not obviously powerful.
Great. Now I want to see Alyss whack someone with a wrench.
This wrench?
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bergy wrote: One of these days Alyss needs to actually learn French so that we can appropriately pardon it.
Oui.
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Come to think of it, even though his power set lends itself to that kind of use, The Don in the past had broken down and remade some of his crew. If he hadn't become complacent with the Alphas, he could have been a lot more dangerous and successful without ever drawing much attention to himself.
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Valentine wrote:
NJM1564 wrote:
Valentine wrote: So now the question is how mad is Alyss?
A. Alyss gets revenge herself.
B. Alyss tells the Gadgeteers/Devisors about the attack, and let them get revenge.
C. Alyss gets Poe involved.
D. Alyss gets Hawthorne involved.
E. Alyss lets Team Awesome take care of it.
I wonder if Diamondback saw/met with Sapphire's family. I wonder if Imp saw/met with Sapphire's family or worse overhear Sapphire's sisters.
Where's Absinthe when you need her.Suddenly, Kaylie let out a loud gasp as glowing green mist began to emerge from her skin and hair.
F. Gets the bad seeds involved.
G. Informs security.
E. Asks Tansy for help.
G. All of the above.
H. Or just informs the Alpha. They cover most of those options.
Since this is more about Amy, why would the Seeds care, (some would care because they are decent human beings, but other than that...)
Alyss isn't really big into revenge for things done to herself, especially if they are physical. It was the teasing/bullying that she didn't know how to react to. Physically hurting a friend, possibly causing her death? Yeah Alyss is going to get her back, and it probably won't be pretty. If she talks to Ayla it might even be within school rules.
Hmmm, Alyss, Amy, Sapphire, and ??? vs Lightbright, Exquisite, Iron, and Gravmax.in a sanctioned fight.
Maybe Sphere?
Any and Alyss are both Bad Seeds. If someone came after two of them they would care. You don't do that with out reprisals.
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NJM1564 wrote:
Any and Alyss are both Bad Seeds. If someone came after two of them they would care. You don't do that with out reprisals.
Actually neither Amy nor Alyss are Bad Seeds. Amy's mother, Boom Job, was actually a hero for a while.
Roulette Chapter 1 wrote: Mom had briefly tried being a super hero, just so she could be Beth's partner, though it hadn't worked out. Mom hadn't liked being in that kind of danger, nor had she dealt well with the stress it caused. After going into a Diedricks rant in the middle of trying to stop a bank robber, she'd hung up her tights for good. Now, the closest Mom got to the super hero game was getting stories from Beth and occasionally making weapons for the local heroes.
And while the rumor that Alyss is Lady Havoc's daughter, she isn't.
Jessie and Fina are Bad Seeds, or at least qualify.
Don't Drick and Drive.
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Except that Exquisite told us her plan will take time to reach fruition. She didn't spell out her timetable, but I doubt she expects to finish in her freshman year. So, that means seniors like Tansy are irrelevant so long as she avoids crossing lines with people they care about this year (e.g. Danny). Even juniors like Elaine probably won't have much opportunity to butt heads with Exquisite before graduating. Nikki is definitely an obstacle though.Rose Bunny wrote: Exquisite in trying to be the "queen of the school" is setting herself up for failure. Let's think of her competition, even if they don't consider themselves as even trying to be the most popular girl in school...
the top 3 to not mess with:
Lanie - wouldn't care about the popularity, but the "Devisor Goddess" would have her fans behind her, she would have Kodiak supporting her, Kayda and Tansy would step in to protect her if anyone messed with her, as certainly the Order would as well.
Tansy - do I have to explain how bad an idea that'd be? Nope.
Nikki - more nope. Tick off team Kimba, the Outcasts, Venus Inc... oh yes, and Nikki herself, possibly one of the most powerful mages in the world.
I'm sure there are more names I'm forgetting, but that's because it's late.
to summarize... trying to plot your way to most popular girl in Whateley is pretty much a death sentence.
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Yes, they could. They're not going to, but they could.

"Shared pain is lessened; shared joy, increased — thus do we refute entropy." - Spider Robinson
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It makes speculating here much more enjoyable. I suspect that many others operate on the same lines. Then you have people with favorite characters (I lean toward Corporal Mahren/Eldritch, Gunny Bardue and Hive. I'll blame the Navy for my twisted sense of what is appropriate). Everyone wants to see "their" character come out on top of any situation. Just like going to a football game. Your team can be 0-fer but you still want to see them win, I think it is a similar concept. Then, much like football, you have the next day quarterbacking. As my father says (a coach for over 40 years and still going), "It's a lot easier to coach in the stands". Like fans at a game, the forumites "have all the answers". Then, just like the fans in the bleachers, we have to remember that the coach is the one on the sidelines (or in this case that the author is the one doing the writing). But we can still yell from the bleachers!

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Arcanist Lupus wrote: I find it amusing how often us forumites immediately jump to "these new characters could go to x,y, and z established characters, and they will solve the problem for them."
Yes, they could. They're not going to, but they could.
I just want Sphere vs. Exquisite 'cause turnabout sounds awesome, or hilarious, to me.
And that's what Micros are for... Wait... How to legit get Sphere involved... Anyone got a grudge against her? Maybe Archon (Victory Jaxton)?
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Arcanist Lupus wrote: I find it amusing how often us forumites immediately jump to "these new characters could go to x,y, and z established characters, and they will solve the problem for them."
Yes, they could. They're not going to, but they could.
If the characters and their one or two friends are too intellectually and emotionally crippled to look for help, it will be just as entertaining to see how they are killed off as collateral damage from whatever goes down in Spring 2008.
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That's a bit harsh. I don't go running for help every time a fly comes buzzing around, why should Alyss and Amy? They're more than capable of wielding their own flyswatters, thank you very much.null0trooper wrote:
Arcanist Lupus wrote: I find it amusing how often us forumites immediately jump to "these new characters could go to x,y, and z established characters, and they will solve the problem for them."
Yes, they could. They're not going to, but they could.
If the characters and their one or two friends are too intellectually and emotionally crippled to look for help, it will be just as entertaining to see how they are killed off as collateral damage from whatever goes down in Spring 2008.
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Angeldude wrote:
peter wrote: If they become aware of it. Now, big question, Has Alyss been approached by them. She is certainly qualified. A first rate mechanic who seems to be a small ten year old girl. It was to protect the vulnerable from the strong that the group was formed, and she is not obviously powerful.
Great. Now I want to see Alyss whack someone with a wrench.
Technically that's Monkey Wrench's job isn't it?
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TBH, I find it a little funny, except for Alyss.Arcanist Lupus wrote: I find it amusing how often us forumites immediately jump to "these new characters could go to x,y, and z established characters, and they will solve the problem for them."
Yes, they could. They're not going to, but they could.
She's one of the few I could see doing it, in terms of "help me prank them and make them look stupid" instead of "help me beat them up."
Just because she has the mind of an adult and a physical strength level that she's scared of (See: denting the car in Steel Ribbon and jumping a mile in surprise.) She might have been fine deciding to beat up the Marquis, but IIRC, she mentioned that she was pissed the hell off with him and noted that he was an adult supervillain.
Pretty much everyone else jumping to established characters? Nah. They might turn to their training teams or friends, but realistically, only Jimmy-T and Miss Bardue defending the Hawthornites is going to happen.
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I could see the Poe characters going to Team Kimba for advice. The Kimbas were the top teams on campus previously, so having someone ask how they did it is certainly an option.Kaitha39 wrote:
TBH, I find it a little funny, except for Alyss.Arcanist Lupus wrote: I find it amusing how often us forumites immediately jump to "these new characters could go to x,y, and z established characters, and they will solve the problem for them."
Yes, they could. They're not going to, but they could.
She's one of the few I could see doing it, in terms of "help me prank them and make them look stupid" instead of "help me beat them up."
Just because she has the mind of an adult and a physical strength level that she's scared of (See: denting the car in Steel Ribbon and jumping a mile in surprise.) She might have been fine deciding to beat up the Marquis, but IIRC, she mentioned that she was pissed the hell off with him and noted that he was an adult supervillain.
Pretty much everyone else jumping to established characters? Nah. They might turn to their training teams or friends, but realistically, only Jimmy-T and Miss Bardue defending the Hawthornites is going to happen.
Asking established characters to fight their battles on the other hand is less likely.
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Exquisite is an Ex 4, and there is a difference between being annoying and almost killing someone, the 50 yr old mind may justify it as keeping Exquisite from accidentally killing someone and teaching her actions have consequences.Kaitha39 wrote:
TBH, I find it a little funny, except for Alyss.Arcanist Lupus wrote: I find it amusing how often us forumites immediately jump to "these new characters could go to x,y, and z established characters, and they will solve the problem for them."
Yes, they could. They're not going to, but they could.
She's one of the few I could see doing it, in terms of "help me prank them and make them look stupid" instead of "help me beat them up."
Just because she has the mind of an adult and a physical strength level that she's scared of (See: denting the car in Steel Ribbon and jumping a mile in surprise.) She might have been fine deciding to beat up the Marquis, but IIRC, she mentioned that she was pissed the hell off with him and noted that he was an adult supervillain.
Pretty much everyone else jumping to established characters? Nah. They might turn to their training teams or friends, but realistically, only Jimmy-T and Miss Bardue defending the Hawthornites is going to happen.
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Right now, I could see Ribbon plotting to "recalibrate" Exquisite and not in the "I will put you in a baby romper in the cafeteria" way.
P.S. Yes, I said recalibrate, we couldn't say "I beat some sense into Seaman Joe", we had to recalibrate him instead.
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Domoviye wrote: I could see the Poe characters going to Team Kimba for advice. The Kimbas were the top teams on campus previously, so having someone ask how they did it is certainly an option.
Asking established characters to fight their battles on the other hand is less likely.
Remember who Alyss was looking for near the end, Ayla or Zoe. The two fixers. So she wasn't just going to go off on anyone, she was looking for information on them. The adult mind, as opposed to just shooting someone with a taser round.
Don't Drick and Drive.
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My prediction is: Alyss gets information, plots, and makes a covert take down of some sort. Possibly taking out one of the perps and framing the other.
Old age and treachery win hands down over juvenile delinquency.
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In my unit...we called it " Wall to Wall Counselling."P.S. Yes, I said recalibrate, we couldn't say "I beat some sense into Seaman Joe", we had to recalibrate him instead.
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But yes it does look more like she is looking for information, then for someone fix it for her. There are many external reasons why this is. Firstly because this isn't a story about the older characters, and not being written by one of the original authors. Secondly, because it just wouldn't make a very good story, or if it did, it would need a different focal character. A series of stories that focus on Alyssa and Amy is going to have Alyssa and Amy try to solve the central problem. Sure they may fail and end up needing to be rescued, but they won't just run for help at the first sign of trouble.
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Yolandria wrote:
In my unit...we called it " Wall to Wall Counselling."P.S. Yes, I said recalibrate, we couldn't say "I beat some sense into Seaman Joe", we had to recalibrate him instead.
"Incentive Training"
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"wall to wall counseling"
"incentive training" (thanks for a new one JG)
"physical motivation"
"bounce test" (pushing someone to the deck...or of a ladder)
"float test" (throw anything or person over the side)
"tune up"
"recharge"
"smoke" (not usually a beat down, but make the person do lots of unpleasant things like push ups and such)
"intensive training" (also called "IT", can be a beating or a smoke session)
"phase correction"
Those are the ones I remember hearing. Anyone else got some more?
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There may be a term for scheduling the forward and aft IC spaces for painting ASAP after sea and anchor detail, but I was too amused myself to ask what they'd done to annoy the Chief. Judging by the color Aft IC ended up, the boatswain's mates in the Paint Locker were in on it.
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Doc made the guy demonstrate a proper Navy shower...didn't fix him.
The toilet brushes and simple green did.
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MM2ss wrote: Yes...there was always "that guy" that didn't shower. We developed a measuring system, the "funk radius"...
This one's funk was a little more mobile and capable of reproducing.

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Okay, top result from google is "New Jersey Transport" company, so I have to ask, what does NJT stand for?null0trooper wrote: "NJT" ( Pray it wasn't the XO that just gave your DivO some helpful advice. )
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"Nice Job Team" would be my guess.Kaitha39 wrote:
Okay, top result from google is "New Jersey Transport" company, so I have to ask, what does NJT stand for?null0trooper wrote: "NJT" ( Pray it wasn't the XO that just gave your DivO some helpful advice. )
These days, it is best to start with UrbanDictionary when you find a term you don't know.
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JG wrote: ALright folks, time to put the train back on the rails. We've gone WAAAAY off-topic.
Fair enough, but I think we lost both the rails and the train a long time ago.
Anyways, back the the regularly scheduled topic. I say Ribbon devises a cunning plan to recalibrate Exquisite and company without getting caught in the act. It will take time, but she is somewhat like Guy Fawkes in a way (you know, the only man to enter Parliament with a clear agenda and the means to see it through), but smarter. She'll research the enemy, make a plan and establish an alibi then take them down hard and covertly.
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Hehe, calling her friends unsavory characters. Boy, one of her power sets had predictable behavior her crew has learned to recognize, wonder if any of the power sets have things like that. Interesting how her part-time exemplar works in memorizing things, was curious about that.I was sitting at my usual table for lunch, surrounded by my regular cast of unsavory characters.
Kaylie can make glowing green fog that is kind of hard to see through, might be manifestor, still curious what else that fog might do. Kara wishing to go to Whateley, hope until then Amy and her can keep the long-distance relationship going. Great, finally see Gravmax, Iron, Exquisite, and Starbright sitting together at lunch, at least they know their enemies are teaming up. Interesting metaphor for their enemies by Alyss, and Sapphire is scary when angry. And loved that Three Musketeers line by Amy, classic.
Awww, working that hard so the costumes she creates for others will give them good memories, just like her memories of her kids in their Halloween costumes, Alyss is such a sweety. All that noise and only when it starts to die down does her curiosity get the better of her. Hallway, white fluffy goo, and Jade running off, this prank war between Jade and Beltane has gotten out of hand. And it is marshmallow, figures, covering a whole hallway and everyone in it just to get Jade, typical Beltane.
A human-sized Stay Puffed Marshmallow Man, good grief, never a dull day at Whateley. Starbright just can't help revealing she is connected to Exquisite's attack the other day, smug little b. Alyss and Amy having to be reasonable when Sapphire wants to strike back, if only they could use the rules against this group.
And Aegis sounds like he is bummed about his training with Imp, talking about being lucky she didn't drop an anvil on his head. Normal, does Whateley even have a standard to gauge normal by. Sapphire going to talk with a girl named Garafena, wonder if the topic is actually what she said, with that faint smile almost seems like something else.
Hope Amy is okay with exemplar mode and her needle gun, wouldn't put it past those 4 to jump her. Alyss meeting with Shine in a tunnel branch with no cameras or security watching, wonder what she trades for his good stuff. And from the sounds of it is a regular customer of his by now, sneaky.
Hawthorne sounds like a nice cottage to be in. Adore watching the news once again, Achoo, with that kind it is probably the latter, trying to get close to sneak a peak, little perv. Jimmy T and Olympia in a loud discussion, Caitlin sharpening her knife and uh oh, tomorrow is Halloween, talk about bad memories from last year.
The stone sphere she uses as an essence battery is the size of a bowling ball! Maintenance on one of her spells and not in mage mode, ouch. Guess knowing you can draw in more essence easily to replace what is used would give more confidence when casting spells. Interesting detail about the spell on her needle gun and how it works. Get Gravmax to pull one of his stunts on Anomaly and watch her wipe the floor with him, I would bring popcorn and film it. Whoa, Caitlin showing Amy how to make essence batteries, very nice. Great to have Caitlin as her RA in a lot of ways.
And the creep crew are planning on jumping Sapphire, talk about cowards, 4 on 1. Going after their friends, wish she would find out Amy is friends with Caitlin and try it on her. Trying to gain loyalty and favors owed like this, it is going to backfire on Exquisite sooner or late. And great, Iron is another anti-GSD bigot. At least Naomi is smart enough not to go after a teacher. Ah hah! So she knows how to maneuver so the security cameras only pick up her walking near someone, not her touching them.
Yes! Sapphire dodges and counters, Naomi's arm is numb. Oh brother, deal with Sapphire more harshly just to save face, Naomi is one twisted b. Oh crap! Using the costumes on Halloween to attack Sapphire and frame someone else, Naomi is one sick number.
Wonder what has Dr. Quintain so distracted and is so interesting. And they still don't know why Exquisite came after Sapphire, oh boy. Oh course Halloween is Mischief's favorite holiday, wonder if she will dress up as Imp. Trick or treating in the village, only have heard Mischief think of that. Poor Aegis, still bummed and no one knowing why.
Bwahahaha, poor Amy, already henpecked.Then, she let out a sigh, admitting, "Kara sent me a princess costume, so I'm kind of obligated to wear it..."
PDP today for Amy, 10 yard range and 20 lbs., fine control is definitely the way to go. Yikes, Back to the Future brings more bad memories of Alyss. Rachael tried to turn his project car at the time, a 1972 Plymouth Barracuda into a time machine, melted into a puddle of slag, ouch. Nice way to practice with her power for Alyss and cute to see her turn red at the teacher's reprimand. And putting a car together and taking it apart with telekinesis, wondered how they could train fine control.
Figures, the moment she begins to bake cookies Miranda knows and announces it. And Amy knows how to get Team Awesome to behave with the promise of treats. Violet and purple 'princess' dress with gold trim, Kara knows how to get to Amy. Pictures to keep the girlfriend happy, smart girl, though yes, the teasing from your Mom and Beth will be huge. Making one of her floating spheres look like a large light bulb over her head, genius. Sapphire as a vampire, even wearing a stereotypical vampire cape instead of her normal cloak, whoa.
Ribbon on costume duty, Cindy getting her Cinderella dress, and forming the glass slippers for herself to wear. Lina as a genie, Jody aka Plastic Girl and Flux next, wonder what they asked for. Ricardo, there is bound to be one like that in Poe, at least he is confident, so it seems. Plus help with make-up and wigs for costumes, better set-up than I've seen.
Gwen as Peter Pan, always cute to see. Electrode as Electra Woman, cute. Drinking in the dorm room, don't get drunk, Alyss, and do something you will regret. That version of Alice in Wonderland, yikes, now there is a Halloween costume. At least the Halloween party is going off without any problems this time.
Spotting Monkeywrench as Diddy Kong, Rapier as Zorro, Aegis as a cowboy with a white hat, oh brother. Medieval knight costume, one in black costume and white mask of Scream movie villain Ghostface, girl in feathered dress with bird mask and feathered headdress. Who emitted a blinding burst of light, figures, it's Starbright. Meaning knight boy is probably Iron and Ghostface is probably Gravmax. Hit by Gravmax's gravity and then suddenly pain, talk about cowards. Girl in a white dress and cloak, golden metallic mask over her face, Exquisite hits her again with her 'pain touch', bunch of thugs.
Amy and Sapphire show up and spot the creep crew in costume, and it was the knight who was Gravmax, as he attacks Amy and Sapphire with his power again. And hitting them both at the same time with her 'pain blast', Exquisite and her 'crew' need to learn their are consequences for their actions. *eyes go red* Gravmax needs to be taught no human is better than another, thinking he is their 'better' is the height of arrogance.
Hiding their attack like this, really wish they would get caught. Nice way to mess up Gravmax by using his helmet against his. Darn it, Sapphire can't use her neurotoxin on them due to their costumes protecting them, all are fully covered for the most part with mask for their faces. Darn, needle gun attack on Exquisite blocked by Iron. Even Gravmax using a heavy gravity field to stop them, this is bad.
Exquisite and her 'friends', the way she talks and acts is like a mob thug. Blasting Amy with her 'pain blast', glad it hasn't triggered another burnout. And finally someone catches on. And it is Aegis, hope he has improved. Great, punched away by Iron and blinded by Starbright, they are going to draw attention to themselves with that stunt. Wait, no burnout and she switched to energizer mode, this is major.
Hitting Iron with a ball of energy after avoiding his blow, MA classes paying off. And Ribbon to the rescue, ribbons tied around Gravmax's ankles which she used to make him fall flat on his face, yay! *wipes brow* Good thing Amy was able to talk Alyss down from going too far. Whoa, Sapphire bit Exquisite and her toxin KOed her, hope she isn't dead. Starbright afraid of Sapphire's venom spray and backs away, and the cowards run off, not knowing Exquisite's fate. Aegis hasn't started training with Imp yet, forgot the date he did and this fight is what convinced him he needed her training to get stronger.
Dang, ambushed and beat up by the creep crew before came to the party, Alyss isn't having a good day because of that group. Darn, trashed Amy's Sphere, wore full face masks and costumes to hide their body types so security couldn't identify them, it would be our girls word against theirs. Darn, all those points Amy makes, it is too easy to fake that group's powers. And can't even take the fight to them, darn it!
Uh oh, pushing Alyss to the breaking point of her temper, that group has no idea what they might unleash.
I knew it! Wonder if this means her BIT can be stabilized and she could have all her powers at once eventually. Though able to switch power sets at will would make a huge difference.However, to my surprise, Amy shook her head. "No, she didn't. I switched powers, without going to sleep or through a burnout. This is the first time that has EVER happened to me..."
Sapphire biting them, bet Ito would approve, anything to survive a fight. Overkill, from Amy. Exquisite and her 'friends' are going to wish they never messed with these girls by the time it is all over.
Darn, paralysis that only lasted an hour, wish it did more to Exquisite. And Gravmax and Iron need a lesson about being bigots. Great, Naomi didn't learn a thing, just thinking of how she will get her revenge on Sapphire, thug. Thought they scared Alyss away, no, you just made her angry, you don't want her angry or enraged at you. Break them, useful examples, this girl is going to end up in being handed over the MCO for going too far at this rate. And thinking they can crush anyone who gets in their way with enough 'friends', she has no idea how Whateley works.
Great story, loved seeing the growing relationship between Amy, Alyss and their friends, the growing threat of Exquisite and her 'friends', and all the details from classes and how certain forms of power training are done. Parent's Day was nice, and now Amy, Alyss and Sapphire know they are being targeted. Plus that huge detail, Amy switching powers without sleep or due to burnout is huge, especially if she can figure out how she did it and train to do it at will eventually. Can't wait to read more and hope to see Exquisite and her group get caught.
Thank You for story comments appreciated and help me know me they are being read and liked.

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- Valentine
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BTW where do Thornie's do detention?
Don't Drick and Drive.
- pumpernickel
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When I was in school, I never saw this sort of thing. Not just to myself, but to others. I wasn't a jock, or a cool kid, or popular at all. I was a nerd in Academic Decathlon (the most hardcore of nerds!), and in fact, I had a hormone deficiency, so I looked like I was about 10 until I started getting hormone injections when I was 20. And even then, a nobody nerd looking and sounding like a little kid - the ubertarget - and I still didn't get picked on at all. Like, maybe once or twice. (I remember a time in middle school gym class where a girl I thought of as mean saw my legs, laughed and asked if I shaved them. That was about as bad as I got.) And it wasn't just to me. None of my equally nerdy friends were picked on. I never saw it happening around to people. Nothing really malicious anyway. I always figured that the sort of clique wars I saw in all the famous high school movies like Revenge of the Nerds or Mean Girls or what have you was all just an elaborate mythology cooked up by the collective public consciousness.
But it's been maintained so steadily by tv and movies, and now stories I read by so so many different authors from different walks of fiction that I can't help but wonder if I was some sort of outlier. Like, maybe I went to the one mellow high school in existence. Some weird bastion of decency amongst the storm of bullying, fighting, deception, and catty namecalling. That's not to say that everyone loved everyone and we all lived together in peace and harmony. But I never saw the sort of stereotypical conflicts that usually characterizes high school fiction. Is this just REALLY weird and the sort of fighting we see in R & R is normal? Because the degree of hate we're seeing here between these two groups is starting to feel, to me any my experience anyway, kind of ridiculous. But maybe I'm the outlier?
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They usually didn't find it funny afterward. My Eighth grade year clocked in at eight separate fights, five of which were in the last half of the second semester. I never swung first.
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The bulk of the bullying I personally experienced during high school was just verbal abuse that I ignored. That kind of thing used to bother me way back in elementary school, but then my parents got divorced. After that, verbal abuse no longer registered. Those people were just idiots, and why would I give a shit about the opinion of an idiot?
In ninth grade homeroom, the guy who sat in front of me wrote "Fuck" on my binder (it was one of those fancy ones with pockets and zippers). One of us tried to wash it off with spit; I forget which. So from then on I had a blackish smudge on the thing. I was kind of annoyed by that.
In Spanish I (still in ninth grade) I usually got to class early enough that I had some time to burn, so I'd spend it by reading Animorphs books. Those each have a little flip-book animation in the page corner. There was an upperclassman guy who sat behind me, a stereotypical jock. He always wanted to flip through the animation. Usually I let him, but one day I didn't for some reason. Probably because I was annoyed and trying to read the damn book. So when class let out for lunch, he came up behind me on on the way down the stairs and got his arm around my neck to give me a bit of a strangling while he lectured me on how I was just some loser freshman and I should never say no to him again, or else. Not being able to breathe properly was somewhat alarming, but honestly I was more annoyed by the fact that while he was dicking around, the lunch line was only growing longer. So when he let me go, I got the hell out of there and made a beeline for the cafeteria. And that was the end of that. There were a lot of people around when it happened, so maybe somebody reported him. Maybe he had a change of heart. Or maybe he just realized that I didn't give a shit about his empty threats. I don't know.
My normal routine after finishing lunch was to go outside, lean against one of the poles holding up the awning covering the walkways of the quad, and read a book for the rest of the lunch period. Sometimes people would come up and start asking a bunch of annoying questions about what I was reading, whether I'd "gotten to the part where they fuck yet," etc. Very occasionally they tried to knock the book out of my hands. That was probably the most successful method of intentionally bothering me anyone tried in high school. They didn't quite manage to get me visibly angry, but they came close.
And that was pretty much it for bullying.
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On another note:
Maybe Alyss is bending pipes and such for Shine, it would make sense, Shine doesn't need money and Alyss doesn't have much, basically what Alyss can provide him is pipe/metal bending and heavy lifting which actually can double as a means for her to learn her strength with accurate control.
Speaking of Shine, i can imagine 3 types of weapons he could make which he will need for combat finals, thrown (ie molatove), flamethrower, and dev alcohol propelled projectile, both in gun and rocket form.
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mhalpern wrote: If Amy manages to control her shifting, she goes from one of the weakest, to one of the most dangerous combatants in the school, her psi can be used for assembling/disassembling (almost sonic screwdriver style), lock picking (sonic screwdriver) and to recover weapons Star Wars style, but those are all situational advantages, most of her abilities being low level are highly situational or preparatory, .
This is where the lessons that Mimeo described, and, Ayla's help would be useful.
CrazyPrepared, and, low-level multi-skill flexibility, can really be ReadyForAnything...
mhalpern wrote: On another note:
Maybe Alyss is bending pipes and such for Shine, it would make sense, Shine doesn't need money and Alyss doesn't have much, basically what Alyss can provide him is pipe/metal bending and heavy lifting which actually can double as a means for her to learn her strength with accurate control.
Speaking of Shine, i can imagine 3 types of weapons he could make which he will need for combat finals, thrown (ie molatove), flamethrower, and dev alcohol propelled projectile, both in gun and rocket form.
I can see the tutors considering that Shine might take this approach, and putting him and another user of Area-Of-Effect weapons/powers, and putting them both in a situation where they would have to watch out for damaging bystanders.
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First, he's a millionaire who still thinks like a small-time moonshiner and hasn't assimilated the meaning of that old joke about if it's worth Bill Gates' time to stop and bend for a US$ 100.00 bill.
Also, a pride thing. He takes a lot of pride on the quality of his work. Having people pay for it is a way to validate his pride.
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Katssun wrote: Exquisite knows how to bring others beneath her authority by psychological and political means alone. I don't know any other Gen 1 character that has done that before.
Ayla has that skill set, but hasn't used it for anything that trivial. Treavor was raised to head up a major business empire, and given a thorough understanding of such tools. Since manifesting, Ayla has built on that base, but instead of wasting his time looking for the ego boost of "leading" a school clique he has turned his hand to more real-world results.
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True, but Alyss still doesn't have much in the way of money, and trading favors is quite valid in the type of community he grew up in, its one thing to accept it from people who have some cash to spare, though trading it for favors may be more valuable to him as it means someone will go out of their way and spend their time doing something for him as opposed to just going to an ATM or something for his productSir Lee wrote: 'Shine does not need the money, but it's both a "still thinking small" thing and a pride thing.
First, he's a millionaire who still thinks like a small-time moonshiner and hasn't assimilated the meaning of that old joke about if it's worth Bill Gates' time to stop and bend for a US$ 100.00 bill.
Also, a pride thing. He takes a lot of pride on the quality of his work. Having people pay for it is a way to validate his pride.
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i know a few others, Tansy, and possibly Hekate come to mind.joreymay wrote:
Katssun wrote: Exquisite knows how to bring others beneath her authority by psychological and political means alone. I don't know any other Gen 1 character that has done that before.
Ayla has that skill set, but hasn't used it for anything that trivial. Treavor was raised to head up a major business empire, and given a thorough understanding of such tools. Since manifesting, Ayla has built on that base, but instead of wasting his time looking for the ego boost of "leading" a school clique he has turned his hand to more real-world results.
Any Bad Ideas I have and microscene OC character stories are freely adoptable.
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Amy could work most of that up, especially if she masters the new shift on demand. And with a little help from friends like Sphere, they can do a lot.“But they used their powers,” Sapphire protested. “We heard their voices…”
“And all that can be faked,” Amy pointed out. “I know at least three people in the labs, who have voice modulators of one sort or another. There are a ton of bricks around campus, and everything else could easily be mimicked with magic, devises, or some other power. I mean, any strong telekinetic could make it look like they had Gravmax’s power.”

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mhalpern wrote:
i know a few others, Tansy, and possibly Hekate come to mind.joreymay wrote:
Katssun wrote: Exquisite knows how to bring others beneath her authority by psychological and political means alone. I don't know any other Gen 1 character that has done that before.
Ayla has that skill set, but hasn't used it for anything that trivial. Treavor was raised to head up a major business empire, and given a thorough understanding of such tools. Since manifesting, Ayla has built on that base, but instead of wasting his time looking for the ego boost of "leading" a school clique he has turned his hand to more real-world results.
While they were already discussed in this thread, there is a relevant point about Tansy. She was raised in a similar part of the mega-business community, but she was raised to be a high function member of that community rather than as a leader. Her endgame would more likely have been as a wife and/or senior subordinate to a leader. A lot of overlap, but not the same.
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Parental abuse, bullying, and emulating Freya turned her into what she became. Tansy is not a leader, never was. Just a hurt, lonely, unloved girl who just wanted friends.
Jadis is a leader, and the closest thing to what Tansy would be if she didn't manifest as a high-exemplar.
Roulette is a leader. She has the maturity and calm demeanor that even Alyss wishes she had. Alyss sees Megan in Roulette, the Thornies look to her as a motherly figure, she's even a bit of a mother hen to her own mother.
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konzill wrote: This story seems to have finished without resolving its main plot line, and the same goes for Imp 6 really, neither for them feel like a complete story to me. Because in both bases the central villain is still out there and still pursuing the same goal they had initially. And the heroes don't even have a plan of action at the end, other than we'll deal with it when it happens.
Not every story ends with resolution... look at Empire Strikes Back for instance. Many consider it to be the best of the trilogy but it ended with a few rather large things up in the air.
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mhalpern wrote: If Amy manages to control her shifting, she goes from one of the weakest, to one of the most dangerous combatants in the school, her psi can be used for assembling/disassembling (almost sonic screwdriver style), lock picking (sonic screwdriver) and to recover weapons Star Wars style, but those are all situational advantages, most of her abilities being low level are highly situational or preparatory,
On another note:
Maybe Alyss is bending pipes and such for Shine, it would make sense, Shine doesn't need money and Alyss doesn't have much, basically what Alyss can provide him is pipe/metal bending and heavy lifting which actually can double as a means for her to learn her strength with accurate control.
Speaking of Shine, i can imagine 3 types of weapons he could make which he will need for combat finals, thrown (ie molatove), flamethrower, and dev alcohol propelled projectile, both in gun and rocket form.
Exactly what expenses does Alyss currently have?
Clothes? No, she makes her own.
Makeup? She's not at that point in her life yet, maybe in 20 years.
Food? No, it's part of her tuition.
Toys, games, and stuff like that (sort of stuff teens buy)? No, while she may join in a game, I doubt she owns anything more than a deck of cards and poker chips.
Books? Not until she finishes Whateley's Library and every other library out there.
Cigars? Yep
Booze? Yep
For all we know she had a tip jar out for Halloween costumes.
'Shine needs a weapon to put out a heavy mist of his strongest booze, although the staff might object to that weapon.
I'm still waiting to see 'Shine in a shoot off with the Grunts.
Don't Drick and Drive.
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Valentine wrote:
mhalpern wrote: If Amy manages to control her shifting, she goes from one of the weakest, to one of the most dangerous combatants in the school, her psi can be used for assembling/disassembling (almost sonic screwdriver style), lock picking (sonic screwdriver) and to recover weapons Star Wars style, but those are all situational advantages, most of her abilities being low level are highly situational or preparatory,
On another note:
Maybe Alyss is bending pipes and such for Shine, it would make sense, Shine doesn't need money and Alyss doesn't have much, basically what Alyss can provide him is pipe/metal bending and heavy lifting which actually can double as a means for her to learn her strength with accurate control.
Speaking of Shine, i can imagine 3 types of weapons he could make which he will need for combat finals, thrown (ie molatove), flamethrower, and dev alcohol propelled projectile, both in gun and rocket form.
Exactly what expenses does Alyss currently have?
Clothes? No, she makes her own.
Makeup? She's not at that point in her life yet, maybe in 20 years.
Food? No, it's part of her tuition.
Toys, games, and stuff like that (sort of stuff teens buy)? No, while she may join in a game, I doubt she owns anything more than a deck of cards and poker chips.
Books? Not until she finishes Whateley's Library and every other library out there.
Cigars? Yep
Booze? Yep
For all we know she had a tip jar out for Halloween costumes.
'Shine needs a weapon to put out a heavy mist of his strongest booze, although the staff might object to that weapon.
I'm still waiting to see 'Shine in a shoot off with the Grunts.
What steady sources of income does Alyss have? I mean she works at the Garage, but that's mainly going into Tuition and there is saving up for a project car on the horizon, maybe she will find a '77 Plymouth Barracuda to restore... And then there will be aiding Kaylie's expenses, regardless of if it is needed or not.
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- Valentine
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DanZilla wrote: If I'm reading things right she doesn't like her schooling being paid for by her kids so she's probably putting all she can to covering that so they don't have to keep doing so. It's not like she has the ability to make a substance that's worth millions or has invented something that can be patented and sold.
Remember that while no number has ever been put forward, the tuition at Whateley is higher than the most expensive colleges in the world. Any amount that Alyss is making wouldn't make a drop in the bucket of the cost of tuition. Assuming she works 10 hours or so a week, and works for 30 weeks, that is about 300 hours. Even at Ayla rates, it's not much help towards her tuition.
If you remember from Straight from the Squirrel's Mouth Aquerna got a stipend for her landscaping work. Likely Alyss does too.
If Alyss does get a project car, then she will have some more expenses, depending upon how much she wants to improve the car.
Don't Drick and Drive.
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konzill wrote: This story seems to have finished without resolving its main plot line, and the same goes for Imp 6 really, neither for them feel like a complete story to me. Because in both cases the central villain is still out there and still pursuing the same goal they had initially. And the heroes don't even have a plan of action at the end, other than we'll deal with it when it happens.
That's because Whately stories aren't really complete, self-contained stories. They're more like issues in a comic series. None of them truly resolve. They wrap up a plot thread or two and then introduce yet another shadowy conspiracy in the bowels of the school that has the intent of screwing with whichever student/group that story is centered around. Then that thread is address over the next couple stories.
And none of them are truly self-contained, because you get characters popping in and out from the other stories like how Spiderman will be going about his adventures and then suddenly Wolverine or Deadpool with show up and help out before wandering back off. Really the only difference is the presence of pictures and editors notes to remind you who's who. [Ed: Uncanny X-Men #325, true believers!]
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konzill wrote: This story seems to have finished without resolving its main plot line, and the same goes for Imp 6 really, neither for them feel like a complete story to me. Because in both cases the central villain is still out there and still pursuing the same goal they had initially. And the heroes don't even have a plan of action at the end, other than we'll deal with it when it happens.
A lot of the Whateley Stories end this way, deliberately so. We don't kill the badguy at the end of the story every time, and not every plotline will be wrapped with a neat little bow. Many of the stories are intended to be told over multiple installments, chapters and plot arcs. You guys have seen just how long I've kept a few plans under wraps.
Morpheus has long-term plans for both our heroes and our villains, and given his track record, I do not think you all will be disappointed with the results.
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Which is why she should try for a job as a costumer for Venus IncValentine wrote:
DanZilla wrote: If I'm reading things right she doesn't like her schooling being paid for by her kids so she's probably putting all she can to covering that so they don't have to keep doing so. It's not like she has the ability to make a substance that's worth millions or has invented something that can be patented and sold.
Remember that while no number has ever been put forward, the tuition at Whateley is higher than the most expensive colleges in the world. Any amount that Alyss is making wouldn't make a drop in the bucket of the cost of tuition. Assuming she works 10 hours or so a week, and works for 30 weeks, that is about 300 hours. Even at Ayla rates, it's not much help towards her tuition.
If you remember from Straight from the Squirrel's Mouth Aquerna got a stipend for her landscaping work. Likely Alyss does too.
If Alyss does get a project car, then she will have some more expenses, depending upon how much she wants to improve the car.
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Heh. I'm suddenly imagining Alyss becoming the Venus Inc costumer. Then, in a year or two, Kaylie comes to Whateley and tries out for the club, and Alyss suddenly is responsible for dressing her granddaughter in revealing outfits.mhalpern wrote: Which is why she should try for a job as a costumer for Venus Inc

Not that Kaylie seems like a likely Venus Inc candidate. But still, it would be funny.
"Shared pain is lessened; shared joy, increased — thus do we refute entropy." - Spider Robinson
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There is a big difference between "being a leader" and having the knowledge and skills "to bring others beneath her authority by psychological and political means alone." And Jadis is a good example of that difference. The only people operating "under her authority" are those under the authority delegated by her father (family, servants, and some of his other employees/minions). Her leadership is by example, advice, and persuasion rather than by authority. She may use "because I say so" on rare occasions, but she uses it as a peer rather than as an authority. She wields considerable power as a campus fixer and by way of her circle of friends and aquaintences, but relatively little authority.Katssun wrote: Jadis is a leader, and the closest thing to what Tansy would be if she didn't manifest as a high-exemplar.
Roulette is a leader. She has the maturity and calm demeanor that even Alyss wishes she had. Alyss sees Megan in Roulette, the Thornies look to her as a motherly figure, she's even a bit of a mother hen to her own mother.
Roulette has the moral authority of the caregiver, but the only time she exercises more traditional authority is when she's shaking her finger at the youngsters. Even then, it is the authority of age and standing. She has shown neither the desire nor the aptitude to bring others beneath her authority by psychological and political means.
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JG wrote: ...and not every plotline will be wrapped with a neat little bow.
What about for characters who wrap themselves and others with neat little bows?
Insanity: for when normal just isn't interesting enough.
All ideas free to use. You can probably make better use of them than me.
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BITs can take a while to do their thing, and in a year or two, who knows, she WILL be a teenager after allArcanist Lupus wrote:
Heh. I'm suddenly imagining Alyss becoming the Venus Inc costumer. Then, in a year or two, Kaylie comes to Whateley and tries out for the club, and Alyss suddenly is responsible for dressing her granddaughter in revealing outfits.mhalpern wrote: Which is why she should try for a job as a costumer for Venus Inc
Not that Kaylie seems like a likely Venus Inc candidate. But still, it would be funny.
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mhalpern wrote:
What steady sources of income does Alyss have? I mean she works at the Garage, but that's mainly going into Tuition and there is saving up for a project car on the horizon, maybe she will find a '77 Plymouth Barracuda to restore... And then there will be aiding Kaylie's expenses, regardless of if it is needed or not.
Don't know why it didn't occur to me early. After a hint that heavy dropping I wonder when she's going to walk into the garage and find a present waiting for her. A wreck of a Barracuda.
The shop teacher's have ears everywhere in car circles I'm guessing and if one of Alyss's friends were to drop a hint in the right ear they might be able to find one.
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mhalpern wrote:
BITs can take a while to do their thing, and in a year or two, who knows, she WILL be a teenager after allArcanist Lupus wrote:
Heh. I'm suddenly imagining Alyss becoming the Venus Inc costumer. Then, in a year or two, Kaylie comes to Whateley and tries out for the club, and Alyss suddenly is responsible for dressing her granddaughter in revealing outfits.mhalpern wrote: Which is why she should try for a job as a costumer for Venus Inc
Not that Kaylie seems like a likely Venus Inc candidate. But still, it would be funny.
More importantly, teenagers reinvent themselves at a drop of a hat, so she might decide that being a goth is "so over" and go for the fashion model thing.
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Kettlekorn wrote: Bonus points if they rig up the shop to start playing the appropriate song when she first walks in that day.
Alyss probably has that on 8-Track.
Don't Drick and Drive.
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mhalpern wrote:
True, but Alyss still doesn't have much in the way of money, and trading favors is quite valid in the type of community he grew up in, its one thing to accept it from people who have some cash to spare, though trading it for favors may be more valuable to him as it means someone will go out of their way and spend their time doing something for him as opposed to just going to an ATM or something for his productSir Lee wrote: 'Shine does not need the money, but it's both a "still thinking small" thing and a pride thing.
First, he's a millionaire who still thinks like a small-time moonshiner and hasn't assimilated the meaning of that old joke about if it's worth Bill Gates' time to stop and bend for a US$ 100.00 bill.
Also, a pride thing. He takes a lot of pride on the quality of his work. Having people pay for it is a way to validate his pride.
Alyss is also a Gearhead, so wouldl be part of the favour-trading that operates in the Workshops.
Measure Twice
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Which reminds me, Alyss probably has been picking up loads of small hard to quantify favors by the little things like tightening hard to reach bolts and such, a lot of goodwill favors, add to that Amy has a very highly demanded product, when word gets out they are looking for back up, they will get it.Mister D wrote:
mhalpern wrote:
True, but Alyss still doesn't have much in the way of money, and trading favors is quite valid in the type of community he grew up in, its one thing to accept it from people who have some cash to spare, though trading it for favors may be more valuable to him as it means someone will go out of their way and spend their time doing something for him as opposed to just going to an ATM or something for his productSir Lee wrote: 'Shine does not need the money, but it's both a "still thinking small" thing and a pride thing.
First, he's a millionaire who still thinks like a small-time moonshiner and hasn't assimilated the meaning of that old joke about if it's worth Bill Gates' time to stop and bend for a US$ 100.00 bill.
Also, a pride thing. He takes a lot of pride on the quality of his work. Having people pay for it is a way to validate his pride.
Alyss is also a Gearhead, so wouldl be part of the favour-trading that operates in the Workshops.
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Donna knows hot-rods, the flathead V8, and the monstrous engines (V-12 and V-16). Aylss knows all the general little bits everywhere on an engine and drivetrain.
When dealing with devisors and gagdeteers, who are too focused on knick-knacks, doodads, and thingamabobs, whoozits and whatits galore, the forget about the stuff like fuseboxes and wiring harnesses, coolant lines and probably even sparkplug gaps when they're trying to add in a twin-turbo or push the compression ratios to the limits of physics, seeking ever more horsepower.
Donna and Alyss are the troubleshooters, who can catch the obvious when someone is bootstrapping a micro-cascading W-injector vaporizer mixer with a micro-controller in place of their fuel valves. Things like the reason the engine is knocking is the young and ambitious gadgeteer has their cam timing off post-upgrade.
Not every Gearhead is Kayda, Lanie and Murphy, who operate on a very iterative approach to upgrading their vehicles.
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The guy was telling this tale of how he was becoming frustrated with an engine that "didn't want" to run, and a friend gave him the most illuminating speech he had, as a mechanic: that engines have no will and, if they are turning, the right mix of air and fuel is placed in the cylinder, the right amount of compression is applied and a spark is struck at the right time, it has no choice but run. So, you check if it's seizing, if it has compression, if air and fuel are entering and the spark, and eventually you will figure out what's wrong. But too many mechanics never internalize this process, and keep looking for "tricks" and "gotchas."
If this is true for regular people, triple it for the devisor/gadgeteer crowd. Particularly the devisors, who are used to making things work by sheer force of will. They would rather re-engineer their new thingummabob than check if there are physical conditions for the engine to run.
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mhalpern wrote:
Which reminds me, Alyss probably has been picking up loads of small hard to quantify favors by the little things like tightening hard to reach bolts and such, a lot of goodwill favors, add to that Amy has a very highly demanded product, when word gets out they are looking for back up, they will get it.Mister D wrote:
mhalpern wrote:
True, but Alyss still doesn't have much in the way of money, and trading favors is quite valid in the type of community he grew up in, its one thing to accept it from people who have some cash to spare, though trading it for favors may be more valuable to him as it means someone will go out of their way and spend their time doing something for him as opposed to just going to an ATM or something for his productSir Lee wrote: 'Shine does not need the money, but it's both a "still thinking small" thing and a pride thing.
First, he's a millionaire who still thinks like a small-time moonshiner and hasn't assimilated the meaning of that old joke about if it's worth Bill Gates' time to stop and bend for a US$ 100.00 bill.
Also, a pride thing. He takes a lot of pride on the quality of his work. Having people pay for it is a way to validate his pride.
Alyss is also a Gearhead, so wouldl be part of the favour-trading that operates in the Workshops.
Ohh Yeah! messing with Maker of Devisor Brownies is up there with messing with their Coffee....that might get the Ratchet on them.
In the end reality is only consensual! It means that Al Gore is causing "Global Warming" by his rhetoric alone! Fortunately, there are enough Global Warming "Deniers" still about to keep him from boiling the planet.
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Dpragan wrote:
mhalpern wrote:
Which reminds me, Alyss probably has been picking up loads of small hard to quantify favors by the little things like tightening hard to reach bolts and such, a lot of goodwill favors, add to that Amy has a very highly demanded product, when word gets out they are looking for back up, they will get it.Mister D wrote:
mhalpern wrote:
True, but Alyss still doesn't have much in the way of money, and trading favors is quite valid in the type of community he grew up in, its one thing to accept it from people who have some cash to spare, though trading it for favors may be more valuable to him as it means someone will go out of their way and spend their time doing something for him as opposed to just going to an ATM or something for his productSir Lee wrote: 'Shine does not need the money, but it's both a "still thinking small" thing and a pride thing.
First, he's a millionaire who still thinks like a small-time moonshiner and hasn't assimilated the meaning of that old joke about if it's worth Bill Gates' time to stop and bend for a US$ 100.00 bill.
Also, a pride thing. He takes a lot of pride on the quality of his work. Having people pay for it is a way to validate his pride.
Alyss is also a Gearhead, so wouldl be part of the favour-trading that operates in the Workshops.
Ohh Yeah! messing with Maker of Devisor Brownies is up there with messing with their Coffee....that might get the Ratchet on them.
If the gearheads realize just what happened the people responsible for it might as well leave Whateley. Remember what Mrs Carson told Loophole, the real future was with them if they ever get their ideas together. And seriously, if Lanie wasn't languishing in amnesia in Gen 2, we might well have seen her single handedly change the face of the space program.
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Its higher, not only are they messing with one of them, but they are messing with the ONLY source of a tasty alternative to their coffee, that's like messing with the guy who makes the psi grenadesDpragan wrote:
mhalpern wrote:
Which reminds me, Alyss probably has been picking up loads of small hard to quantify favors by the little things like tightening hard to reach bolts and such, a lot of goodwill favors, add to that Amy has a very highly demanded product, when word gets out they are looking for back up, they will get it.Mister D wrote:
mhalpern wrote:
True, but Alyss still doesn't have much in the way of money, and trading favors is quite valid in the type of community he grew up in, its one thing to accept it from people who have some cash to spare, though trading it for favors may be more valuable to him as it means someone will go out of their way and spend their time doing something for him as opposed to just going to an ATM or something for his productSir Lee wrote: 'Shine does not need the money, but it's both a "still thinking small" thing and a pride thing.
First, he's a millionaire who still thinks like a small-time moonshiner and hasn't assimilated the meaning of that old joke about if it's worth Bill Gates' time to stop and bend for a US$ 100.00 bill.
Also, a pride thing. He takes a lot of pride on the quality of his work. Having people pay for it is a way to validate his pride.
Alyss is also a Gearhead, so wouldl be part of the favour-trading that operates in the Workshops.
Ohh Yeah! messing with Maker of Devisor Brownies is up there with messing with their Coffee....that might get the Ratchet on them.
Any Bad Ideas I have and microscene OC character stories are freely adoptable.
- Valentine
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Sir Lee wrote: Also... something I remember reading in an old-time (like, the 70s) motorcycle enthusiast magazine:
The guy was telling this tale of how he was becoming frustrated with an engine that "didn't want" to run, and a friend gave him the most illuminating speech he had, as a mechanic: that engines have no will and, if they are turning, the right mix of air and fuel is placed in the cylinder, the right amount of compression is applied and a spark is struck at the right time, it has no choice but run. So, you check if it's seizing, if it has compression, if air and fuel are entering and the spark, and eventually you will figure out what's wrong. But too many mechanics never internalize this process, and keep looking for "tricks" and "gotchas."
If this is true for regular people, triple it for the devisor/gadgeteer crowd. Particularly the devisors, who are used to making things work by sheer force of will. They would rather re-engineer their new thingummabob than check if there are physical conditions for the engine to run.
My dad told a story of him and a couple of his brothers doing maintenance on a lawn mower, including sharpening the blade. When they had finished and put it back together, it wouldn't run. It would turnover and a few seconds later stop. After troubleshooting for a while, one joked about having put the blade on upside down. They all laughed, and then turned the blade over. It started and ran like it was brand new. Never overlook what obviously can't be the problem.
Don't Drick and Drive.
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mhalpern wrote:
Its higher, not only are they messing with one of them, but they are messing with the ONLY source of a tasty alternative to their coffee, that's like messing with the guy who makes the psi grenadesDpragan wrote:
mhalpern wrote:
Which reminds me, Alyss probably has been picking up loads of small hard to quantify favors by the little things like tightening hard to reach bolts and such, a lot of goodwill favors, add to that Amy has a very highly demanded product, when word gets out they are looking for back up, they will get it.Mister D wrote:
mhalpern wrote:
True, but Alyss still doesn't have much in the way of money, and trading favors is quite valid in the type of community he grew up in, its one thing to accept it from people who have some cash to spare, though trading it for favors may be more valuable to him as it means someone will go out of their way and spend their time doing something for him as opposed to just going to an ATM or something for his productSir Lee wrote: 'Shine does not need the money, but it's both a "still thinking small" thing and a pride thing.
First, he's a millionaire who still thinks like a small-time moonshiner and hasn't assimilated the meaning of that old joke about if it's worth Bill Gates' time to stop and bend for a US$ 100.00 bill.
Also, a pride thing. He takes a lot of pride on the quality of his work. Having people pay for it is a way to validate his pride.
Alyss is also a Gearhead, so wouldl be part of the favour-trading that operates in the Workshops.
Ohh Yeah! messing with Maker of Devisor Brownies is up there with messing with their Coffee....that might get the Ratchet on them.
Yup! because not all like coffee (Taste bitter to me even with cream ans sugar and even the Starbucks fancy coffee's small and taste nasty to me.) I can sometimes take the jellybeans that taste like that but not liquid. Can you imagine what would happened if he used concentrated Mountain Dew Brownies?
OR NoS Rowdy (Cherry Flavor goes with the Dark Chocolate better!)
In the end reality is only consensual! It means that Al Gore is causing "Global Warming" by his rhetoric alone! Fortunately, there are enough Global Warming "Deniers" still about to keep him from boiling the planet.
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I wonder how you can concentrate the NoS? Freeze and let the syrup dribble off like in that one White Wolf Mage: Initiates of the Art does with Jolt 2 liters? or boil it down to a syrup?
In the end reality is only consensual! It means that Al Gore is causing "Global Warming" by his rhetoric alone! Fortunately, there are enough Global Warming "Deniers" still about to keep him from boiling the planet.
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Sir Lee wrote: Also... something I remember reading in an old-time (like, the 70s) motorcycle enthusiast magazine:
The guy was telling this tale of how he was becoming frustrated with an engine that "didn't want" to run, and a friend gave him the most illuminating speech he had, as a mechanic: that engines have no will and, if they are turning, the right mix of air and fuel is placed in the cylinder, the right amount of compression is applied and a spark is struck at the right time, it has no choice but run. So, you check if it's seizing, if it has compression, if air and fuel are entering and the spark, and eventually you will figure out what's wrong. But too many mechanics never internalize this process, and keep looking for "tricks" and "gotchas."
If this is true for regular people, triple it for the devisor/gadgeteer crowd. Particularly the devisors, who are used to making things work by sheer force of will. They would rather re-engineer their new thingummabob than check if there are physical conditions for the engine to run.
Another prime example is Elaine forgetting to upgrade her rear differential after upgrading her engine and transmission. She had increased the torque from the transmission to the wheels to such an extent that the gears in the rear differential were literally chewing themselves to pieces like trying to use a power drill to remove a stubborn screw and having the bit slowly hollow out the screw instead of moving it.
I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
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Valentine wrote:
Sir Lee wrote: Also... something I remember reading in an old-time (like, the 70s) motorcycle enthusiast magazine:
The guy was telling this tale of how he was becoming frustrated with an engine that "didn't want" to run, and a friend gave him the most illuminating speech he had, as a mechanic: that engines have no will and, if they are turning, the right mix of air and fuel is placed in the cylinder, the right amount of compression is applied and a spark is struck at the right time, it has no choice but run. So, you check if it's seizing, if it has compression, if air and fuel are entering and the spark, and eventually you will figure out what's wrong. But too many mechanics never internalize this process, and keep looking for "tricks" and "gotchas."
If this is true for regular people, triple it for the devisor/gadgeteer crowd. Particularly the devisors, who are used to making things work by sheer force of will. They would rather re-engineer their new thingummabob than check if there are physical conditions for the engine to run.
My dad told a story of him and a couple of his brothers doing maintenance on a lawn mower, including sharpening the blade. When they had finished and put it back together, it wouldn't run. It would turnover and a few seconds later stop. After troubleshooting for a while, one joked about having put the blade on upside down. They all laughed, and then turned the blade over. It started and ran like it was brand new. Never overlook what obviously can't be the problem.
Balancing the dilemma was best described to me when dealing with computer tech support, but the idea pertains to other pieces of hardware:
Whatever you do, NOT anthropomorphize the computers! They HATE that!

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