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Question Hank 7: And all who sail in her!
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That ending was sweet and funny! Nice!
That small but important info of what Hannah was like, compared to Hank! Woah!
No wonder your brother was such a brat if you pulled tricks like that on your parents to get your way!
I'm wondering how seriously to take that... 'Cause it makes me sympathetic for Jay, and I dunno if I should? ... I need to review the origin scenes to better understand his reaction...
To top it off, you've done it across three continents! If there is a more pressing threat to the continued existence of this institution than you lot, I cannot imagine what it could be!"
TemptingFate. I'll bet it's Mythos-related, and it's The Bastard.
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Malady wrote:
To top it off, you've done it across three continents! If there is a more pressing threat to the continued existence of this institution than you lot, I cannot imagine what it could be!"
TemptingFate. I'll bet it's Mythos-related, and it's The Bastard.
Or Justin Bieber.
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Malady wrote:
To top it off, you've done it across three continents! If there is a more pressing threat to the continued existence of this institution than you lot, I cannot imagine what it could be!"
TemptingFate. I'll bet it's Mythos-related, and it's The Bastard.
Or Justin Bieber.
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And Gunny figured out they let the Grunts win, darn. Guess can't keep sandbagging sim fights without Gunny catching up. Zeta track and new favorite 'red', arrggggh! The plan backfired, trying to lay low and just drew more attention from Gunny. And also a way for them to get the training they need for those who see through their act. Darn, laughing and enjoying Leanne's antics gave them away. Cut loose an unknown 'red' team, I pity those pitted against them.
Support of the staff to continue their subterfuge, always a good thing to have. Boy, at least they know what they are getting into with the Zeta track. Jade isn't wrong about Hank or Ayla playing the supervillain, without lessons on how to it would be a comedy to watch. Pretend to be teachers and Jade wants to play Imp, bwhahaha, only one of them I would trust with the role. All of Wondercute in Imp's art class, oh boy.
"I can't believe she turns up to teach a class with all of Wondercute in it!" Nikki exclaimed. "Imp's awesome!" Jade repeated with a huge smile.
Leanne sneaking around and trying to mess with Koehnes, only to be caught by Toni and Jade right outside, too predictable. Puppy dog eyes and Toni encouraging her to be more like Jade, yikes. Toni and Jade leading Leanne away from the dorm room, Toni talking about Leanne having Hank's martial arts knowledge, uh oh, please don't train Leanne, Toni. Ah, Poe Martial Arts practice room and show what Leanne and Cabbit have been practicing together. Get Teri involved in this training, no wait, nevermind. Bad idea.
No power behind Leanne's punches or kicks and lacks stamina. Leave it in the hands of the Cabbit, never thought I would read those words. Hank as the supervillain against the Ghost Walkers, he is going to need Jade's help. If only Jade wasn't so enthusiastic, kind of pity Hank having to deal with her right now.
Jade and Leanne at the Wondercute table, can see why Nikki might be concerned about Leanne spending so much time with Jade though, her wackiness might rub off. Treating Leanne like a normal girl despite her size and nature, see why Hank is okay with it. Ah, that is what everyone was forgetting, the difference between memories and muscle memory.
Hank, are you trying to tempt fate or Murphy's law? *sigh* And all of them make Hank's point for him, thinking he can't play a supervillain even with Jade's help. And oh boy, Hank is going to get an earful from Lily later about why he is playing a supervillain."Come on Nikki, it's Jade! I trust her! Besides, Leanne is just a brownie, how much trouble can they be getting into?" Hank answered with a laugh. Even Lily gave a disbelieving stare at that declaration.
Leanne slipping back to Poe that stealthily, even at her size that is some feat to pull at Whateley. Spells to help Koehnes to better serve Nikki being used by Leanne, bet that annoys Koehnes greatly. Checking in with Mrs. Horton, good she isn't just sneaking around Poe with no one knowing she is there right now. Listening to a radio station of music while cleaning up Hank and Danny's dorm room, Kitty as a nickname for Danny, cute.
A thump at the door while she is still cleaning, 3 times and she goes to open the door, squealing in terror, just what scared her that is at the door. Ah, the new Kimba doll that carried poor Leanne around Poe, no wonder she freaked, doesn't know it is Jade. Trying to talk to the white lion, it just growling and then forcing its way into the room, Jade needs to learn when to stop teasing someone. The Kimba DVD to indicate what it wants to be called, at least Kimba winks at Leanne so she knows it is Jade animating it. *sigh* Biting and batting at a pinned Leanne, even if that form is plush would be terrifying at her size. At least she realizes the silly lion can't hurt her and is just playing, one less problem for Leanne.
Can't clean the windows and Kimba's butts against, probably trying to give her a lift. Tickling Leanne until she agrees to call her Kimba in this form, not to call her Jade again, silly Jade. Riding 'Kimba' to clean the windows, so many cute scenes in this story.
And riding Kimba to the Crystal Hall for lunch, now there is a rare sight even at Whateley. Sir Didymus, I forgot about him being in Labyrinth, haven't seen that movie in ages. Jim Henson creatures taking over the campus, I don't see that as a bad thing.

Bwhahahahaha, Danny in female mountain lion form chased by Leanne on Jade's Kimba the White Lion plush toy into the forest, Leanne calling out "Kitty!" Priceless. Mounted on a white steed and following this year's bully magnet, oh god, it is a White Stage hunt in cute form. And Ayla bringing back Hank's pronouncement from that morning, never tempt fate.
Hank and Lily kissing, only for Leanne to show up in a get-up like that, *groan* At least Lily and Jade point out Leanne is not She-Ra. Walks up an invisible staircase and then...
Teasing the little brownie over just mostly eating sausages. And oh crud, Jade getting an idea looking at Leanne on Kimba and the mention of She-Ra, what chaos will she unleash with this."Sausages?" Leanne asked hopefully, causing Hank to burst out laughing.
Nikki upset and crying again, Leanne remembers to inform Hank thanks to what Sandra said to her, quick learner. *sigh* Something needs to be done to help Nikki with what is troubling her, she can't keep running to the Grove and away from her friends and family. Ayla upset and angry, hope it isn't connected to what is happening with Nikki. Oh boy, no wonder Ayla is upset, dealing with Mr. Williams and his "U.S.A. history is more important than the rest of the world" attitude would get many upset.
An A-, I would be ticked as well, probably given that grade because he put down things from WWI that weren't covered in the class. Dang, forgot how far ahead the other Gen 1 stories are, this is before Hank talks to Nikki and resolves her being upset about what happened in Washington. Toni trying to change the subject with teasing, Hank can't seem to catch a break with the teasing.
Leanne going as far as she can into the Grove to wait for Nikki just for Hank's sake, awww. Even Leanne moved with how sad Nikki looks, even getting her what I assume is a gift from the Grove. A bouquet of flowers for Nikki, so sweet. Refreshing to get the evil eye from Leanne, guess she is used to other attention. And Nikki confused why Leanne doesn't get along with Koehnes, this will be interesting.
Ah, she is an outdoor and indoor brownie but one for common soldier, not Royalty, very interesting. Awww, Nikki wondering if Koehnes serves her or the memory of someone else, worried about Koehnes' loyalty sometimes. Puppy-dog eyes as good as Jade's, Leanne has learned well. Erasing all existence of the campsite, good skill for a soldier's brownie to have. Nikki walking back holding Leanne's hand as they head towards Crystal Hall, glad to see Nikki in good cheer again.
Named the sapling World Tree after Aunghadhail, nice way to remember her. Laughing and smiling while carrying Leanne, that might confuse Hank for a moment. Puppy-dog eyes that potent on a brownie that looks like Nikki, oh god, what has been unleashed, Hahahah, so the puppy dog eyes come from Hank, very interesting and funny. It only worked on Father, Hanna was a sneaky girl. And whoa, Nikki is right, if you went from someone like Leanne in personality to Hank it would confuse anyone who knew you.
And fun to see Nikki teasing Hank again. Oh boy, seeing Hank's dreams and nightmares in Washington, thinking she scares Hank, no wonder she is breaking down and crying so much. Finally, they talk things out and sort this mess, one less reason for Nikki to be upset. Scary Elf Queen in sim matches, how some students don't come away in awe of her even without the glamour is beyond me.
Jade teasing Ayla about his A- and we find out why, Williams is way too "USA! USA!" in attitude to let such a paper fly. No Leanne, Wondercute movie night for the third time in as many days, and more teasing of Hank about being with Lily. Too bad he has a sim match to do, hope it goes well. Toni glad to have happy Nikki back and teasing Hank once more. Molly bought a lot of boxed sets of anime, shopping when she is worried, would hate to see her with a credit card in that state.
Fey's Fairy Princess Fan Club swept Leanne away to the underdog table, uh oh. "Thoroughly Modern Millie" and it is one of Hank's DVDs, never even heard of that movie until now. Bullies avoiding Leanne, hehehe, would love to see her beat them up some more. Huh, that is weird, the shared PK field and the distance it works at varies, curious. Yeah, those limitations sure sound psychological, possibly on both Hank and Leanne's parts. And able to detect where Leanne is at all times along with Lily, Lily able to do the same but detect where Hank is, handy.
Hank followed Jade's advice for playing the supervillain against the Ghost Walkers, the expression on Gunny's face priceless, that is a rare sight. Lily there holding Leanne, Balls of Power as part of his monologue, good grief is that bad. Costume=good, supervillain dialog=bad, definitely have Lily write them next time.
Uh oh, brought in to Mrs. Carson's office, summer antics have caught up with them. The museum adventure in France, Toni's adventure in China adding Cho, Billie going to the Pentagon, plus Nikki helping Kayda with Unchy's 2nd son and then planting the World Tree seed in the Grove, busy summer. All their past incidents and the new ones over the summer, oh boy. A more pressing threat to the continued existence of Whateley than Team Kimba Mrs. Carson can't imagine, yikes. Now put on the 'Alpha' track of sim matches, good grief, the fallout has hit and it is huge.
Toni thinking this is Carson stamping her approval of Gunny's plan, with the gossips brought in right after them I have to wonder if she is deliberating having the news of Team Kimba being on the 'Alpha' track spread. A performance and upset at them, Carson is good. Hank and Ayla prove why they are the team's information gathers and leader, figuring those things out so quickly.
Rematch against the Grunts with Hank on Team Kimba, talk about holding a grudge. Keep the new holdouts under wraps and Jade is upset, how can she have fun without new toys to test. Jade lead Mule into the ambush with Leanne, that boy needs to learn to let go or his grudges are going to get him in trouble. Toni, why oh why did you have to give Jade an idea? Those poor Grunts might be in trouble.
Oh boy, Leanne going back to Poe and waiting outside the dorm room to mess with Koehnes, but slips away unnoticed. Going to the next floor, using the Servants Way to go into Lily's room, and taking care not to move anything. Cleaning and polishing everything, making sure the clothes are all put away properly, then leaves the room with a huge smile, what is Leanne up to.
Lily having to change out of her supersuit due to a devisor spilling who-knows-what on her, never run when carrying a liquid without a lid to contain it. Eat with Ashley and her sister, ouch, hope her sister is doing better. Not wearing any perfume, wonder what Hank smelled then.
Angel talking to Lily about being early to watch the rematch against the Grunts. Lily teasing Angel about not being an RA so has more time to keep her room clean. Hehe, the speech Angel gives her about their fellow students, that close to a perfect Mrs. Horton impression. Uh oh, Angel pointing out all these little details to Lily, she is going to know Leanne has been sneaking in to clean. And she figured it out, Leanne is going to get an earful.
At least Angel points out what Leanne is and how she cares for Hank and Lily too much not to clean for her. So that is the source of the scent, her clothes saturated in the scent from a box of dried flowers and other plants. Hank loves the scent of her new 'perfume', Lily won't do anything to Leanne. Angel going with Lily to watch the rematch, Jade smirking and giggling something fierce all day, now I really pity the Grunts.
Awww, Leanne upset and distraught, the Grunts better have not taken things too far with her, even if it was just a sim. Mule and Bunker hunting down Hank and Leanne relentlessly, ouch, no wonder the poor dear is upset. At least Hank tried to prepare Leanne for being hunted, but Mule needs to learn revenge is a sucker's game. Mule and Bunker covered in glitter, sparkles, and Hello Kitty stickers before tying them up and using them as bait for the others, Jade is just too unpredictable. And glaring daggers, Mule and Bunker are looking at a future of trouble if they don't learn to let things go.
Ayla having to remind them to act upset at losing to the Grunts, no chance of that with Jade in such a good mood, even bringing Leanne along to the Wondercute table. Hank having trouble carding Leanne's meals, hope this doesn't cause too much trouble.
Causing Hank to have a coughing fit and then lying to Lily about causing it, Nikki is in rare form."Well to be fair, Lily's much nicer company then Hank," Nikki joined in the teasing. "After all, little girls much prefer to be with their mothers!" Nikki smiled innocently at Hank as he choked on that statement.
Ack! Lily's mom watching the sim match live at home and lecture them on it through video conferencing setup, can't escape even when she isn't at Whateley. Teasing about knowing Hank was almost there through their link, at least Ayla is able to ignore Toni to enjoy a treat from the chefs.
Hehe, love how Lily just swoops in and calmly sweeps Leanne into her arms, before telling her what they need to discuss, she is so a mother right then. Figures Jade would have it all figured out, can't punish Leanne physically without Hank feeling it, has Hank and Lily wrapped around her little fingers, definitely their daughter.
Lily gave Leanne a bubble bath with her special scented soap, no wonder she is so contented. Hank felt everything that Leanne did, no wonder he ran off. And Toni wishing to see what Hank is like after that, new material for teasing. Nikki and Bunny too curious about what condition Hank is in as well.
Fun story loved learning the consequences of all Team Kimba's adventures and sandbagging in the sims. Loved seeing all the interactions with Leanne and learning the spells placed on Poe which the brownies can use, seeing Leanne coming to comfort and cheer up Nikki, she is just so fun to watch no matter who she is interacting with. Plus how rabid Williams is about U.S.A. history to the detriment of his students learning the history of the rest of the world. And loved seeing all the interaction between Hank and Lily. Can't wait for the next piece.
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And those Servants Tunnels spells... Was Vamp ambushed inside Poe, and if so, that's how the kidnappers avoided things and stuff?
They're a massive security hole, for Poe... How long before it's exploited by some villains??
Kohenes is intended for one of the other Queens? ... Has Kohenes met any of the other Royal-relateds? Elle or Absinthe, if she counts? Maybe the Curser?
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Dreamer wrote: Thank You for story comments appreciated and help me know me they are being read and liked.
Note: My story comments can't nor are trying to replace reading the stories, simply my way of enjoying them and letting the authors know I enjoy them.
Even if sometimes they are longer than the story.

A great little story showing what the Kimbas and friends are up to. It's nice to see that Leanne is learning that 'orders' from Hank's friends are things she should be doing, even if she doesn't have to do them.
Don't Drick and Drive.
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I know it was in one of the Kayda stories I think!Malady wrote: Oh! Right, we saw the Ghost Walkers battle in another POV... I think?
No I'm pretty sure that Vamp was taken outside of Poe. I know that Murphy was taken outside of Melville, mainly because she did one thing that is hard to avoid. She used the same spot, and the same method for getting to that spot, if I recall correctly.... Forget where, though...
And those Servants Tunnels spells... Was Vamp ambushed inside Poe, and if so, that's how the kidnappers avoided things and stuff?
They're a massive security hole, for Poe... How long before it's exploited by some villains??
Kohenes is intended for one of the other Queens? ... Has Kohenes met any of the other Royal-relateds? Elle or Absinthe, if she counts? Maybe the Curser?
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Now, I think Anne is correct about Vamp and Murphy. However, if someone decides to target Hank, Lily or Team Kimba by going after Leanne, or similarly target Fey by going after Koehnes... Yes, the "Servants Entrance" spells could be a weak point that they might be able to exploit, say if they have to be in a certain area to use them or go through certain procedures for example.
One of the things we trained on repeatedly in the military was to break up our routines. There was also one somewhat funny incident report, where an officer had a particular routine that ended up protecting him. See, every day he was observed checking his car before going to work and the people targeting him eventually got caught before they could strike. They thought he was checking for bombs and tracking devices and was a "hard" target to get at. The reality was he was losing fluids and was looking for the source of the leak. So funny, but also sort of frightening. He had no idea he was being targeted.
Now, the breaking of routines training was another matter. We were told to use different gates when entering the base, drive different routes, not always leave home at the same time (which was annoying, who wants to be at work an hour early just because of some terrorists?), not to always stop at the same places (so get your coffee from different gas stations I guess). The idea was that it made you a harder target for ambush or snatch and grab type things.
Strangely, the value of keeping certain routines was also discussed, that is when the incident report about the officer came up. The key point was that you developed a sense of familiarity with places and people. Thus you were more likely to notice if something was "wrong" or "off". The end result was that our command wanted us to have a few routes we knew intimately so that "the enemy" could not decide we would be at a particular place at a particular time but that we would know those places well enough to know when something wasn't right.
Lastly, Barney...I mean Williams... I think we all had "that teacher" at some point in our lives. That "see things my way or else" teacher that just makes everyone hate whatever subject they teach. I am a history nut. Hell, I am a bushel or maybe even a hogshead of nuts if one is measuring interest in history. But I had one teacher in high school that well, to put it politely should not have been allowed to train her own dog, much less teach students. She did not know history well at all and even if you showed in the book where something was stated if she didn't agree with it then it was wrong. I ended up having to appeal to the principal several times during that course to have grades changed. On the final I literally went from a 47 to a 98 on my appeal... Somehow her gross ignorance and incompetence did not douse the flame of my lust for historical knowledge, but several other students, well they went from some degree of interest to pretty much zero in that classroom... Williams seems to be of that ilk... Anything Imp does to him is well deserved not only for what he did to her but for how he treats the subject of history. One of the key elements in ALL of the social sciences, including history, is to identify personal biases and mitigate them.
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Malady wrote: Oh! Right, we saw the Ghost Walkers battle in another POV... I think? ... Forget where, though...
Kayda 10: There's No Place Like Poe (Part 4)
Kohenes is intended for one of the other Queens? ... Has Kohenes met any of the other Royal-relateds? Elle or Absinthe, if she counts? Maybe the Curser?
Kohenes Is meant for Aughadhail, Nikki is not Aughadhail and worries that Kohenes may not exactly enjoy being her servant.
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Phoenix Spiritus wrote:
Malady wrote: Oh! Right, we saw the Ghost Walkers battle in another POV... I think? ... Forget where, though...
Kayda 10: There's No Place Like Poe (Part 4)
As Phoenix says below, the issue isn't any other Royal, it is that she is Aunghadhail's brownie, not Niki's. But because until Aunghadhail ended up having a house dropped on her to save Niki from becoming a supervillain to end all supervillains Niki was essentially Aunghadhail. Kohenes won't go to someone else, but now that Aunghadhail is gone Niki does rightfully (I expect) concern herself with the feeling that Kohenes may serve less than willingly.Kohenes is intended for one of the other Queens? ... Has Kohenes met any of the other Royal-relateds? Elle or Absinthe, if she counts? Maybe the Curser?
Oh also, thank you for finding the correct Kayda part for me, I could remember reading it just not where!Kohenes Is meant for Aughadhail, Nikki is not Aughadhail and worries that Kohenes may not exactly enjoy being her servant.
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Phoenix Spiritus wrote: Kohenes Is meant for Aughadhail, Nikki is not Aughadhail and worries that Kohenes may not exactly enjoy being her servant.
I didn't know that Koehnes is Jewish!
W/r/t Barney, I now have even less remorse over having a (WhatIF) character turn in a couple of weeks' homework written in Old Norse on birch bark.

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Anne wrote: Hey you could have turned in the scriptures of the Kellith in their original form. I understand that they often cause radical changes in attitude!
And gender, sexual orientation, promiscuity, and the ability to make Julienne Fries.
Don't Drick and Drive.
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mhalpern wrote: MM2ss Barney giving him an A- is basically acknowledging he's right, begrudgingly
I can see that point of view. My feelings on the matter (biased as they are) would make me suggest that a place like Whateley might make just failing someone or giving arbitrary grades a bit more difficult. Or that a place like Whateley likely has some sort of appeals process for grades and that someone like Ayla would know very well how to use it.
Now, if Whateley lacked an effective appeals process or if Ayla was a "don't rock the boat" sort of person that would not stand up and complain over something? All the bits and pieces we have seen of Williams leads me to believe he would fail someone or give poor grades as retribution if he thought he could get away with it.
Lastly, there is one other thing I despised in school, and that was an English Lit professor that believed no paper was perfect, he would not give anyone a 100 even when he found no errors. He reason was, "just because I can't find it doesn't mean it is not wrong"... Those are two of the three types of teachers I /hated/. The third was the kind that thought you only had their course and piled on hours of homework...
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As for the "my way or the highway" sort... well, I had a Intro to Sociology prof (she didn't deserve the "essor" part) who explained the history of Sociology roughly this way:
1. It all started with Auguste Comte, but he was an elitist jerk and everything he wrote is wrong.
2. Then came Marx and his Only Prophet Engels, and they brought wisdom from the Heavens.
3. Then, there was a guy called... I forget... oh yeah, Max Weber. He disagreed with Marx, so by definition he's Comte rebaked and it's not worth talking about him.
4. Then came the Frankfurt School, who were Marxists and therefore right. And no, I'm not going to even mention that Adorno, for instance, later recanted many of his Marxist writings.
5. And then came the Second Coming, in the form of Gramsci. Who you KNOW was right, because he ended up in prison. Ohh... Gramsci... <huff> <huff>... yes baby, do me... sorry, I have to go to the restroom.
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Sir Lee wrote: 5. And then came the Second Coming, in the form of Gramsci. Who you KNOW was right, because he ended up in prison. Ohh... Gramsci... <huff> <huff>... yes baby, do me... sorry, I have to go to the restroom.
I need to go wash my eyes...with bleach...

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Anne wrote: Hey you could have turned in the scriptures of the Kellith in their original form. I understand that they often cause radical changes in attitude!
IIRC, "Incongruity" was written in English, which seems well-suited to abuse of temporal perspectives.
On another note, it's been two whole weeks of Fall 2007 and TK hasn't had group detention yet!
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As for Gramsci...well his theory on cultural hegemony has some merit, the rest of his ideas, not so much. Of course what he calls "cultural hegemony" the rest of us call "society" and it includes things like norms and mores, you know the accepted overall ways one should act in a given society...sometimes known as "culture".
Next, "Attention shoppers, eye bleach is two for one on aisle 17"...
Lastly, as one of my professors pointed out. Socialism/Marxism does work in certain situations and scenarios. For example very small groups where people are truly dependent on each other. Where it falters is when a society gets large enough to require some form of overall direction (you know,"government"). Essentially the Marxist model can only function in a group where all are able to contribute and are willing to do so. As soon as you have people unable or unwilling to contribute and require some outside factor to force compliance or to manage aspects of the group, it collapses.
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Utopian ideals work perfectly well.
Until you add humans.
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The hard part is finding a true Enlightened Despot. People have been trying for about... 8000 years? And the rate of success has been really low (most would argue "zero", but I'm allowing for the possibility that it has really happened somewhere).
Myself, I do have my Absolute Despot fantasies now and again. They usually involve adding a couple articles to the Constitution and then retiring (half an hour later), with the proviso "don't even THINK about revoking those articles, or I'll come back". I don't really want the job.
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In the end reality is only consensual! It means that Al Gore is causing "Global Warming" by his rhetoric alone! Fortunately, there are enough Global Warming "Deniers" still about to keep him from boiling the planet.
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My theorem is this: Govts are all expressions of power. Having read and believed Lord Acton, that Power corrupts and absolute power corrupts absolutely, It is my contention that the founders of the USA who said that the govt that governs best is that which governs least were exactly right. However, men being men and politicians of all stripes being overshadowed by evil entities (or their base nature [whichever you choose to believe]) men who enter the arena of politics seek always to arrogate to themselves as much power as they can. They use power as a substitute for nuts, or cash if you prefer.JG wrote: In short, we come to my sociological theorem:
Utopian ideals work perfectly well.
Until you add humans.
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Oh we were supposed to discuss the story rather than snark on politics? Okay...Phoenix Spiritus wrote: So, um … about the story?
Hmm...
I really enjoy your work Phoenix. I think you bring so much life to Hank that you take him from the two dimensional supporting role (at best) where he started, to an actual person who I can identify with. Your story catches my attention from the first line and holds it past the last line. Like most of the parts of stories posted here I wait with bated breath for the next part you have to share with us.
Thank you many many times for taking the time to write, and then share with us.
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Phoenix Spiritus wrote: So, um … about the story?
So is TK running the Alpha Track, the Omega Track or the OpFor Track or all of the Tracks?
I'm pretty sure that Jade isn't a good influence for Leanne, but Anna, Molly, and the other members of Wondercute probably are.
Don't Drick and Drive.
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Phoenix Spiritus wrote: So, um … about the story?
Story? There was a story?
Just messing obviously. I found it to be great, well, except for Williams, like I mentioned earlier, something about him bugs me. Everything progresses logically, it all ties together well, you are one of those folks that write in a manner that anyone should be able to follow the plot, even after a long day of work. Your works, including this one, act almost like a pick me up and even when I am utterly bushed, I just can't stop reading. That, in my opinion, is the mark of a dang good piece of writing.
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Anne wrote: Hey you could have turned in the scriptures of the Kellith in their original form. I understand that they often cause radical changes in attitude!
And gender, sexual orientation, promiscuity, and the ability to make Julienne Fries.
Or Julian Fries

I love watching their innocent little faces smiling happily as they trip gaily down the garden path, before finding the pit with the rusty spikes.
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Phoenix Spiritus wrote: So, um … about the story?
I liked how she pranked Hank, hence the laughing

In the end reality is only consensual! It means that Al Gore is causing "Global Warming" by his rhetoric alone! Fortunately, there are enough Global Warming "Deniers" still about to keep him from boiling the planet.
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Hardric wrote: One question I'm asking myself right now is how the Grunts will deal with the truth when they learn about it. Learning you won two fights because the opposition threw them is bad enough, but there is also the facts they only won these matches by the skin of their teeth will surely sting extra hard
On the other hand, they only lost by the skin of their teeth against a team that still has all of its members from Spring 2007, while the Grunts are down two graduating seniors (Breaker, Deadeye) from the previous year until they find suitable personnel to bring up to speed. They should be struggling more to achieve a win than they did in the past.
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sam105 wrote: With TK being the secret red team to the other teams who will be the red team for TK? I ask because people will get suspicious it they do not face a red team.
They won't be THE red team, but function as A red team that's scaled up or down to suit the scenario. Some of those other opposing forces will still include instructors, staff, and/or any of the more senior teams that haven't been shown.
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Your writing skills are second to none imo because you make your stories entertaining in a very believable way, with many nuances and subtle bits inserted throughout the story. Plus the story flows easily without us readers having to re-read all the previous episodes to understand the current one

Your writing of Hank and the rest of team Kimba is breathing life into the Gen One Story Line, no mean feat with 90% of the Authors of team Kimba “On Holiday”

Your telling of Team Kimba stories from Hanks perspective is balancing up The Whole Gen One story line, by providing a backdrop and foil for the newer authors to weave more great stories involving their own Characters

I appreciate and enjoy all of the story’s from all the Authors here and I find your Hank Story’s the most heart warming of all

- Phoenix Spiritus
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Hardric wrote: On the other hand, they only lost by the skin of their teeth against a team that still has all of its members from Spring 2007, while the Grunts are down two graduating seniors (Breaker, Deadeye) from the previous year until they find suitable personnel to bring up to speed. They should be struggling more to achieve a win than they did in the past.
Ah, the Grunts won, both times … they just don't know that the Kimbas let them

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Phoenix Spiritus wrote:
Hardric wrote: On the other hand, they only lost by the skin of their teeth against a team that still has all of its members from Spring 2007, while the Grunts are down two graduating seniors (Breaker, Deadeye) from the previous year until they find suitable personnel to bring up to speed. They should be struggling more to achieve a win than they did in the past.
Ah, the Grunts won, both times … they just don't know that the Kimbas let them
Do you or JG have any new Grunts planned?
Don't Drick and Drive.
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Team Awesome, obviously.sam105 wrote: With TK being the secret red team to the other teams who will be the red team for TK? I ask because people will get suspicious it they do not face a red team.
What's worse than losing to a well-trained team in a close match? Or worse than losing to Wondercute?
Losing to 10 to 12 year olds.
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Phoenix Spiritus wrote:
Hardric wrote: On the other hand, they only lost by the skin of their teeth against a team that still has all of its members from Spring 2007, while the Grunts are down two graduating seniors (Breaker, Deadeye) from the previous year until they find suitable personnel to bring up to speed. They should be struggling more to achieve a win than they did in the past.
Ah, the Grunts won, both times … they just don't know that the Kimbas let them
Yet. At some point TK will slip or they will realize they have been losing too often not to be throwing the match with so many near wins
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Katssun wrote:
Team Awesome, obviously.sam105 wrote: With TK being the secret red team to the other teams who will be the red team for TK? I ask because people will get suspicious it they do not face a red team.
What's worse than losing to a well-trained team in a close match? Or worse than losing to Wondercute?
Losing to 10 to 12 year olds.
Pretty sure that all of Team Awesome is 4th and 5th graders, 9 or 10 years old.
Don't Drick and Drive.
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You're right about that. Given their youth, I wonder how long it will take them to realize that it is not a good idea to be seen as the best sim team around. After all in a sort of caricature of the old west, if you become known as a tough man, others will come gunning for you, to help build their own reputation as tough teams...Valentine wrote:
Katssun wrote:
Team Awesome, obviously.sam105 wrote: With TK being the secret red team to the other teams who will be the red team for TK? I ask because people will get suspicious it they do not face a red team.
What's worse than losing to a well-trained team in a close match? Or worse than losing to Wondercute?
Losing to 10 to 12 year olds.
Pretty sure that all of Team Awesome is 4th and 5th graders, 9 or 10 years old.
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Problem with going against Team Awesome is that they are thornies for a reason they can barely control their powers safelyAnne wrote:
You're right about that. Given their youth, I wonder how long it will take them to realize that it is not a good idea to be seen as the best sim team around. After all in a sort of caricature of the old west, if you become known as a tough man, others will come gunning for you, to help build their own reputation as tough teams...Valentine wrote:
Katssun wrote:
Team Awesome, obviously.sam105 wrote: With TK being the secret red team to the other teams who will be the red team for TK? I ask because people will get suspicious it they do not face a red team.
What's worse than losing to a well-trained team in a close match? Or worse than losing to Wondercute?
Losing to 10 to 12 year olds.
Pretty sure that all of Team Awesome is 4th and 5th graders, 9 or 10 years old.
Any Bad Ideas I have and microscene OC character stories are freely adoptable.
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Except regarding Jade and Leanne - whoever thought that pair up deserves a straight jacket and then some.

Seriously, thank you for your time and effort. It is appreciated.
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Ametros wrote: Oi Phoenix! You deserve the compliments.

Except regarding Jade and Leanne - whoever thought that pair up deserves a straight jacket and then some.

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Anne wrote: It is my contention that the founders of the USA who said that the govt that governs best is that which governs least were exactly right.
As Ayla might point out, there is no contemporary evidence of that claim appearing in English prior to its expression by Henry David Thoreau. The earliest published statement attributing it to a "Founding Father" is a 1954 propaganda tract.
OTOH, Williams would probably insist that they either said it or at least believed it deeply. And mark Ayla down for disagreeing.
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Anne wrote: And there you see gentle beings, the reason that govts are not to be trusted ever!
I don’t know, I trust the Australian government, but we made sure that you know, not only does everyone get the right to vote, but they also get equal rights to vote and then are made to use them. Australian governments really do have at least half the population voting for them, not half the people who voted, half the people in the land.
When a Government is ‘elected’ by a minority of the people who voted, and on top of that millions of people didn’t even have the right to vote for it in the first place, you tend to get things like distrust and anger at that government, that’s only natural. It’s then highly ironic to the rest of the world when they go on about their ‘founding fathers’ and their fight for ‘no taxation without representation’. Do you not tax the US territories? How come they can’t vote for the president of the United States then?
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We, as a society and our government have forgotten that the Constitution was designed to limit the government.
Yes, the federal government did need more authority that the Articles of Confederation provided for. But the idea that it needs as much authority and power as it now wields is a concept promoted by the government, not the people as a whole.
Now, that being said, election participation is a part of the problem. How one could go about changing that is something I do not have the answer to. I do have some theories on why voter turn out is so low. I attribute it to the lack of political diversity (the two party system is a disaster no matter how you look at it) and to the feeling that "it doesn't matter" that many voters have (if you are a liberal in a highly conservative area, your vote lacks meaning, same for a conservative in a highly liberal area...that problem is intensified by allowing politicians to draw up the voting districts). The other problem is with the way candidates are selected, they tends to be from the far left or far right because they are chosen in a party primary and so try to be "exemplars" of whatever the party ideology is, meaning when you get to the general election you are stuck with the left and right wingnuts instead of someone rational.
Lastly, on territories and taxes... It is complicated. See, territories pay no federal income taxes, so they are not taxed in that sense. But the people there still pay many other federal taxes (payroll, social security, estate, gift and business taxes for example). However, the no federal income tax is a big break for those areas. The trade off is they do not get to vote in presidential elections. They also have limited congressional representation, in the form of a delegate in the house of representatives. Those delegates have most of the same powers as a representative from a state with one exception, they do not get to vote on measures on the house floor. They are permitted to serve on committees, debate measures, introduce legislation, add amendments to legislation and vote in committees they are part of. The only real difference is they do not get a vote on measures that are before the house as a whole. The territories have no representation in the senate.
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MM2ss wrote: Lastly, on territories and taxes... It is complicated. See, territories pay no federal income taxes, so they are not taxed in that sense. But the people there still pay many other federal taxes (payroll, social security, estate, gift and business taxes for example). However, the no federal income tax is a big break for those areas. The trade off is they do not get to vote in presidential elections. They also have limited congressional representation, in the form of a delegate in the house of representatives. Those delegates have most of the same powers as a representative from a state with one exception, they do not get to vote on measures on the house floor. They are permitted to serve on committees, debate measures, introduce legislation, add amendments to legislation and vote in committees they are part of. The only real difference is they do not get a vote on measures that are before the house as a whole. The territories have no representation in the senate.
So ... that would be taxation without representation right?
Kind of hard for the rest of the world to not see that as a rather hypocritical, which does spoil the whole ‘defender of democracy’ bravado.

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Now for everyone's information I don't like T(he)Rump. I consider him a Rump. The sad thing is that I didn't like Hillary either, and would have voted for practically anyone but Hillary. Even Bernie was better than Hillary, and without going into other things not to be discussed here, he was my last choice, if he could have overcome the deck stacking Hillary did against him.
Now, back to Hank and Leanne, or shall we just say Hannah? I guess from what Lily did to her that Lily likes girls almost as much as she likes boys? Or is it that Leanne is so tightly connected to Hank that Lily knows that she can use her as a living voodoo doll to send her caresses and whatnot to Hank?
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MM2ss wrote: People keep talking about democracy... I have lost count of how many times I have pointed out that the USA is not, nor was it ever a democracy. Hell, a democratic form of government would be contrary to the Constitution. We are a Republic. Contrary to what the folks on the news seem to think, there is a difference.
Except that it is.
Contrary to whatever far right wing bullshit that you seem to have swallowed whole.
Unless of course you believe that there wasn't an actual fair vote, that it was rigged to the point of being pointless to support the power grab of a mad dictator, like what happens in North Korea.
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A difference is in how things works between a democracy and a republic. See, in a democracy you are dealing with direct voting and strict majority rules. In a republic you have limited government via some form of charter (the constitution) and representative government that vote on behalf of the population on government matters, hence the house and senate. Even a president elected not by the people but by electors (electoral college). Strangely, there is no right to even vote for those electors, Each state legislature is permitted to determine the means of choosing electors as well, a state could simply decide to have the governor appoint them if the state legislature agreed to do so.
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Anne wrote: Now, back to Hank and Leanne, or shall we just say Hannah? I guess from what Lily did to her that Lily likes girls almost as much as she likes boys? Or is it that Leanne is so tightly connected to Hank that Lily knows that she can use her as a living voodoo doll to send her caresses and whatnot to Hank?
Errr ... she gave her a bath? Kind of like a mother with her daughter, I not sure what you read into that.
Now Hank feeling Lily giving Leanne a bath and the soft touches of naked Lily against his skin, that’s an entirely other thing and Lily will be very embarrassed when Team Kimba starts teasing her about it and she finally realises what she did to Hank.
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Rose Bunny wrote: Of course assuming Hank has seen the "Beautiful but Fierce" poster... At what point does Nikki realize it, and check to see just HOW identical the two of them are... and then how furious does she get when she realizes that at some point Hank must have seen Leanne unclothed.?
You think Hank’s worried about Nikki’s reaction to all of that?
