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7 years 4 weeks ago #1 by Yolandria
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  • Looks like a new Angel has made it's way to us! Post comments in the sections below!

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    7 years 4 weeks ago #2 by Dreamer
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  • Please take note of the NSFW rating, fully read the author's forward by E.E. Nalley and From Kristin and Site Administration before deciding if you wish to read it yourselves.

    Due to these I may not read and comment on the story. This is due to my own mental health issues if so and not a commentary on the quality of the story.

    Thank You for story comments appreciated and help me know me they are being read and liked. :-) Note: My story comments can't nor are trying to replace reading the stories, simply my way of enjoying them and letting the authors know I enjoy them.
    7 years 4 weeks ago #3 by Kristin Darken
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  • Yes, please take note of the content warnings before reading. And please remember that the forums and comments sections may potentially be read by those who have not first read the warnings page. I *THINK* I've managed to set up a method of posting the story that should keep it from being stumbled across without first going through the warning page... but I can't do that with the feedback. So please try to keep anything NSFW or graphic in the sense that under 18 readers should not be exposed to it... in spoiler tags or 'ambiguous' in your feedback.


    For more specifics of the content that is involved and why you may or not read the story --- one of the characters is an intersexed call girl. Sexual acts with an intersexed partner, including some dom/sub interactions are described. Some of the common mutant psychological complexes / conditions are influences on the story (including the heightened libido, sensory systems, and hormonal/biochemistry levels of the Exemplar; as well as Galahad's and other such things). If any of these things are 'hands off' or 'trigger' elements for you, please don't feel like you have to push yourself to read it. I think, in comparison... its probably on 'this side' of Tennyo in Hell.

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    7 years 4 weeks ago #4 by null0trooper
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  • Hm, more explicit than Kayda and the Showerheads of Poe, but assuredly less horror than Tennyo Goes to Hell.

    But there is a touch of nightmare fuel to be found, wondering how much of the attraction and the consent is real and how much is fueled by mutant power effects. I'd imagine that being the center of attention of someone who's almost supernaturally attractive, and an empath as well, might feel just barely on the angels' side of addictive.

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    7 years 4 weeks ago - 7 years 4 weeks ago #5 by Malady
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  • null0trooper wrote: But there is a touch of nightmare fuel to be found, wondering how much of the attraction and the consent is real and how much is fueled by mutant power effects. I'd imagine that being the center of attention of someone who's almost supernaturally attractive, and an empath as well, might feel just barely on the angels' side of addictive.


    Gah. Well, I finished reading this, and still got time for my stuff... That title made me think it would be about Domo's Angel Girl. Was wrong. Ah well. ... If what's-her-name's-story's called Broken Angel, that'd be interesting...

    Hmm... Those consent issues seem to be possible manifestations of "What is consent if you're both drunk?" And "Is... being happy an addiction", and wireheading and stuff...

    Cause it was short enough for me to read it all, but long comments. Ish [ Click to expand ]


    If she learns Shielding, I wonder how that'll affect their relationship...

    Anyway... Addictive Powers Ref: Bliss of Sax and Violence !

    I wonder how many supervillains would have gone straight, but they’re addicted to mixing it up with Bliss.

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    7 years 4 weeks ago #6 by Anne
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  • While I don't want to play D/s games, I don't mind reading about them. For me no triggers were tripped, but I can see how they might be. Over all I enjoyed the story. A bit more mature than what we usually post here, but not out of the question. We don't see behavior of this sort on screen most of the time yet it is pretty obvious what Lanie, Tansy and Wyatt are up to in all of the possible combinations three beautiful people can get up to!
    7 years 4 weeks ago #7 by annachie
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  • Personall, Kristen, if you feel the need to drop a warning on a story then it probably shouldn't be the regular release.
    7 years 4 weeks ago #8 by Kettlekorn
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  • Honestly, the most off-putting thing I saw in this story was the word gurl. I disinterestedly plodded through the erotic stuff, but gurl? That brought my momentum to a screeching halt.

    Well, that and the fact that $350k per year does not, in fact, average out to $400 per night. More like about $960. But I just assumed that was meant to mean that the typical night averaged $400, not that it was the actual average.

    I wonder how long she's been pulling in that kind of income. She could actually have enough saved up to retire on by now, if she hasn't been pissing it away on Cessnas and stuff. She could certainly afford to hop the trolley over to Georgia Tech and fix that whole "Fucking's all I know" issue. You don't get to complain about the cost of education when you're in the 1%.

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    7 years 4 weeks ago #9 by Anne
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  • I think, if EE decides to continue this story (which I hope he does) that we'll find that her fiance will help her with going to school. He to seems to be socking away quite a stash. Nothing by the way wrong with that. Every squirrel ought to have his own stash of nuts and not depend on the other squirrels to have stashed some that he can steal. After all if all the squirrels try to only steal the other squirrels' stashes, then none of the squirrels will have a stash and they will all be hungry!
    7 years 4 weeks ago #10 by Angeldude
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  • Was put off by the warning. After reading these comments, I can say I don't think I've spoiled the story, but I've seen enough to suspect that it's probably fine for me to read. I have read (and re-read) TGTH and outside of one scene, it was passable. That said, it's late, so I'll likely be reading this tomorrow.

    That said, I don't think this will feature Ms. J. Sinclair casually checking her hair with the help of an eyeball in her palm.

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    7 years 4 weeks ago #11 by Valentine
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  • For several reasons I am uninterested in stories that are about sex. But I figured this was a story with sex scenes, as opposed to sex scenes trying to be a story. This didn't disappoint, even if I kinda just skipped through the sex bits. The characters are interesting, and it makes you wonder how many EX ones and twos are running around not knowing they are mutants.

    I wonder if Tigger was a Posie, he certainly seems like the type to have filled out the Whateley application fully.

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    7 years 4 weeks ago #12 by Kristin Darken
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  • I'll tell you all, the main reason there are warnings on here is because we, as a site, make no efforts to confirm that you are an adult when you log into the site. As far as I'm concerned, some portion of the Whateley Academy target audience is actually under the age of consent for most of the US. And for the purposes of net cybercrime factors and hosting and a variety of other elements, putting stories about kids and stories with sex in them on the same site can be problematic. Because some people are asshats like that. So yes, its probably not up to the hype of the warnings we put on it. But consider that IF we had left the Google ads in place, this story would have had to be isolated like a couple others because even what little is present is 'too much' by some standards.

    As to "if it has to be restricted, it shouldn't be the release" ... ya... no one is promising 100% of the time, a release per week, even if we'd like to promise 3 or 4 per week (or more, which is what it would be if I had the funds to hire and pay the authors per release). So if you feel that this doesn't count as a release because its limited/restricted? Ok. There was no regular release this week. But for those of you who aren't triggered or offended by a little dominance play or descriptions of non-hetero sex? There's a bonus story. Problem solved? :-p

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    7 years 4 weeks ago #13 by mhalpern
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  • Valentine wrote: For several reasons I am uninterested in stories that are about sex. But I figured this was a story with sex scenes, as opposed to sex scenes trying to be a story. This didn't disappoint, even if I kinda just skipped through the sex bits. The characters are interesting, and it makes you wonder how many EX ones and twos are running around not knowing they are mutants.

    I wonder if Tigger was a Posie, he certainly seems like the type to have filled out the Whateley application fully.

    If he is, i wonder if he will be lead to Truffles.

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    7 years 4 weeks ago - 7 years 4 weeks ago #14 by Ametros
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  • Stylistically, I found myself somewhat taken aback. I knew I had read the author as being E. E. Nalley, but the language and flow thereof I thought reminiscent of Bek. Were it not for the lack of egotistical and verbose grandstanding or scathing wit, I'd have remained confused. :-p

    To be clear though, I mean this as a compliment. It's proof positive that I don't fathom the depth of your art, so I find the rather stark contrast to your other Whateley works very much refreshing and certainly a credit to your ability.

    null0trooper wrote: But there is a touch of nightmare fuel to be found, wondering how much of the attraction and the consent is real and how much is fueled by mutant power effects. I'd imagine that being the center of attention of someone who's almost supernaturally attractive, and an empath as well, might feel just barely on the angels' side of addictive.


    Now this piques my interest as for some reason I recall an offhand comment (either in a story or here in the forums) that intimate relationships of Whateley students have a greater ratio of lasting than non-mutant counterparts. Of course, I might have entirely fabricated this.

    Seriously, thank you for your time and effort. It is appreciated.
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    7 years 4 weeks ago #15 by E. E. Nalley
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  • Ametros wrote: Now this piques my interest as for some reason I recall an offhand comment (either in a story or here in the forums) that intimate relationships of Whateley students have a greater ratio of lasting than non-mutant counterparts. Of course, I might have entirely fabricated this.


    It's more a function of the various syndromes Mutants are subject to and their amplified teen-aged emotions. While the sample size is so small to be statistically irrelevant to the world at large, or even the Mutant community, there is a fair amount of anecdotal evidence that relationships at Whateley do tend to last. It is more likely to be just a question of when two click, they really click and when they don't they spectacularly don't...

    :D

    As for reading like Bek, well, NO ONE can withstand Scathing wit of THAT magnitude!

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    7 years 4 weeks ago - 7 years 4 weeks ago #16 by null0trooper
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  • Ametros wrote:

    null0trooper wrote: But there is a touch of nightmare fuel to be found, wondering how much of the attraction and the consent is real and how much is fueled by mutant power effects. I'd imagine that being the center of attention of someone who's almost supernaturally attractive, and an empath as well, might feel just barely on the angels' side of addictive.


    Now this piques my interest as for some reason I recall an offhand comment (either in a story or here in the forums) that intimate relationships of Whateley students have a greater ratio of lasting than non-mutant counterparts. Of course, I might have entirely fabricated this.


    I think that this was mentioned in Sara's Little Purple Book , which I recently re-read for background for one of my own stories.

    Edit: Re: Wizards: "Everything that is said in this book applies to you, the entire book without exceptions."
    Now picture an exemplar changeling empath sharing a hotel room with a wizard channeler who's also an esper.

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    7 years 4 weeks ago #17 by Kristin Darken
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  • null0trooper wrote: Now picture an exemplar changeling empath sharing a hotel room with a wizard channeler who's also an esper.


    Uh huh. Now picture an empathy driven/triggered Shifter sharing a room/wing/dorm with a Sidhe wizard/empath, an extraplanar being of lust, and... well... I think even just that is far enough. There's a reason Fling's arrival at Whateley is still 'down' the timeline. ;)

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    7 years 4 weeks ago - 7 years 4 weeks ago #18 by Sir Lee
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  • Let me be clear: I don't think that, other than due to the reasons Kristin exposed above, calling this story "NSFW" is really appropriate. Your average airport thriller has scenes just as explicit, if not worse, yet nobody has a problem with someone having one of those books on their work desks. Hades, a couple years back having one of those erotic-Twilight-fanfic-with-the-serials-filed-off porn-for-women books on sight was a matter of pride among certain circles. So a story, a text-only story with a few steamy sex scenes shouldn't raise anybody's eyebrows at work.
    Well, it shouldn't. But we live in a highly hypocritical society, so it sometimes does, unfortunately.

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    Last Edit: 7 years 4 weeks ago by Sir Lee.
    7 years 4 weeks ago - 7 years 4 weeks ago #19 by konzill
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  • I'm hoping this story develops some conflict in the next instalment. So far there seem to be no major barriers to Sheila getting what she wants. I mean sure she has had decisions to make, but there doesn't seem to be anything stopping her from doing so.
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    7 years 4 weeks ago #20 by Malady
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  • ^ - If that Whateley Alumni gathering doesn't go tits up, I'll be surprised. Then again, that might be what happens. ... It sure would be surprising... The old Unexpected Hanging Paradox .

    But, any threats that flow out from her environment, instead of being external? ... Maybe she'll stop a robbery or something...
    7 years 3 weeks ago #21 by Katssun
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  • Monday night, I was not expecting, and was not in the mood for a NSFW story. But having read EE's entries into the Caregivers and Erinyes stories, I wasn't opposed to it. Just not in the mood Monday. But I did get around to reading most of it Tuesday night and finished it at work today...on my phone of course. ;)

    I liked it. A lot. I love Whateley "world building" side stories that don't take place at the Academy. Those are the types of microscenes I love to write myself. You have the framework of the universe, and can really have fun with the constraints.

    My big takeaways were this:
    - Whateley is accepting. New England is accepting. New York is accepting (Kayda and Debra ♥). Atlanta is accepting. But the administrative government of Georgia and the US are not. This story reiterated that the WU is not as accepting as our 2018 reality. IRL, it was basically only Massachusetts and Canada until well into the intermediary and Gen 2 timeframe. Gen 2 has hinted that even then, the WU hasn't gotten to that level of acceptance or indifference.

    - Imp's stories started to bring it up before, but there's a huge segment of the Active MGC population that has either no idea what is happening to them or that has no idea that the Academy exists. From a practical standpoint this makes sense. There's only so many student slots available, and the school's secrecy is what keeps it safe. So I love seeing what "outsiders" see as a missed opportunity for them. Sometimes they're bitter. Sometimes they're disappointed. Sometimes they feel regret.

    - OMG...I loved greek mythology in high school. The Bellerophon-Philonoe reference was lovely, It does make me wonder...was there a "Greek Hero" phase among the Whateley Exemplar Alums prior to the New Olympians showing up? :cheer:
    7 years 2 weeks ago - 7 years 2 weeks ago #22 by Echo
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  • It's fairly explicit but less explicit than some. Read the Journal Entries of Kennet Shardik sometime if you want more explicit but more or less tasteful.
    Overall an intersting read and a good show of moral ambiguity.

    If this character gets taken further then a scene on Sheila's reconnecting with her family ought to be interesting, especially if Tony is also present.

    Keep up the good writing!
    Last Edit: 7 years 2 weeks ago by Echo.
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