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Question Fallen Angel
- Yolandria
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Mistress of the shelter for lost and redeemable Woobies!
- Dreamer
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Due to these I may not read and comment on the story. This is due to my own mental health issues if so and not a commentary on the quality of the story.
Thank You for story comments appreciated and help me know me they are being read and liked.

- Kristin Darken
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For more specifics of the content that is involved and why you may or not read the story --- one of the characters is an intersexed call girl. Sexual acts with an intersexed partner, including some dom/sub interactions are described. Some of the common mutant psychological complexes / conditions are influences on the story (including the heightened libido, sensory systems, and hormonal/biochemistry levels of the Exemplar; as well as Galahad's and other such things). If any of these things are 'hands off' or 'trigger' elements for you, please don't feel like you have to push yourself to read it. I think, in comparison... its probably on 'this side' of Tennyo in Hell.
Fate guard you and grant you a Light to brighten your Way.
- null0trooper
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But there is a touch of nightmare fuel to be found, wondering how much of the attraction and the consent is real and how much is fueled by mutant power effects. I'd imagine that being the center of attention of someone who's almost supernaturally attractive, and an empath as well, might feel just barely on the angels' side of addictive.
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- Malady
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null0trooper wrote: But there is a touch of nightmare fuel to be found, wondering how much of the attraction and the consent is real and how much is fueled by mutant power effects. I'd imagine that being the center of attention of someone who's almost supernaturally attractive, and an empath as well, might feel just barely on the angels' side of addictive.
Gah. Well, I finished reading this, and still got time for my stuff... That title made me think it would be about Domo's Angel Girl. Was wrong. Ah well. ... If what's-her-name's-story's called Broken Angel, that'd be interesting...
Hmm... Those consent issues seem to be possible manifestations of "What is consent if you're both drunk?" And "Is... being happy an addiction", and wireheading and stuff...
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So, hyper abnormal genetic stuff can affect MGC. Well, why wouldn't it?? Pentaploid is possible then, Cool.
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“And the lights all over the outside...?”
“Um, well, yeah, they just look cool.”
LOL!
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I didn't like it, I felt very strongly that a line was being crossed that I really didn't want to cross. I had made sure that every time Tony got his way with me it had been one hundred percent free, that there was no way he could get in dutch by banging me. I wasn't a hooker as far as they knew, I was just a slutty girl friend. But this, this went places I wasn't happy about. What if internal affairs caught wind of... But he looked at me and smiled, and all my worries just seemed to melt away, as unimportant as he felt they were. I felt my head nod because I could never tell him 'No.' What he wanted, he got and that was that.
Characters' moralities are always interesting!
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The stereo, a massive unit with more speakers than some night clubs I'd been to, was playing a soft, soothing melody on stringed instruments. It seemed like Tony had said they were cellos and violins and the piece was called Canon. That struck me as odd because you would expect something named after a firearm to be loud, but this was very relaxing.
LOL!
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He grinned at me and even now that gave me a thrill. “Whateley was, well,different. It was founded to help mutants and let us get control of our powers and learn citizenship and...”
Ah. That's the in into Whateley!
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More Exemplar Info, and a sweet ending!
Whateley doesn't actually make an appearance. Huh. I thought something told me that she would get there... Well, of course she's getting there, but not as a student? 'Cause she's gotta age-regress for that...
If she learns Shielding, I wonder how that'll affect their relationship...
Anyway... Addictive Powers Ref: Bliss of Sax and Violence !
I wonder how many supervillains would have gone straight, but they’re addicted to mixing it up with Bliss.
- Anne
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- annachie
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- Kettlekorn
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Well, that and the fact that $350k per year does not, in fact, average out to $400 per night. More like about $960. But I just assumed that was meant to mean that the typical night averaged $400, not that it was the actual average.
I wonder how long she's been pulling in that kind of income. She could actually have enough saved up to retire on by now, if she hasn't been pissing it away on Cessnas and stuff. She could certainly afford to hop the trolley over to Georgia Tech and fix that whole "Fucking's all I know" issue. You don't get to complain about the cost of education when you're in the 1%.
- Anne
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- Angeldude
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That said, I don't think this will feature Ms. J. Sinclair casually checking her hair with the help of an eyeball in her palm.
Insanity: for when normal just isn't interesting enough.
All ideas free to use. You can probably make better use of them than me.
- Valentine
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I wonder if Tigger was a Posie, he certainly seems like the type to have filled out the Whateley application fully.
Don't Drick and Drive.
- Kristin Darken
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As to "if it has to be restricted, it shouldn't be the release" ... ya... no one is promising 100% of the time, a release per week, even if we'd like to promise 3 or 4 per week (or more, which is what it would be if I had the funds to hire and pay the authors per release). So if you feel that this doesn't count as a release because its limited/restricted? Ok. There was no regular release this week. But for those of you who aren't triggered or offended by a little dominance play or descriptions of non-hetero sex? There's a bonus story. Problem solved?

Fate guard you and grant you a Light to brighten your Way.
- mhalpern
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If he is, i wonder if he will be lead to Truffles.Valentine wrote: For several reasons I am uninterested in stories that are about sex. But I figured this was a story with sex scenes, as opposed to sex scenes trying to be a story. This didn't disappoint, even if I kinda just skipped through the sex bits. The characters are interesting, and it makes you wonder how many EX ones and twos are running around not knowing they are mutants.
I wonder if Tigger was a Posie, he certainly seems like the type to have filled out the Whateley application fully.
Any Bad Ideas I have and microscene OC character stories are freely adoptable.
- Ametros
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To be clear though, I mean this as a compliment. It's proof positive that I don't fathom the depth of your art, so I find the rather stark contrast to your other Whateley works very much refreshing and certainly a credit to your ability.
null0trooper wrote: But there is a touch of nightmare fuel to be found, wondering how much of the attraction and the consent is real and how much is fueled by mutant power effects. I'd imagine that being the center of attention of someone who's almost supernaturally attractive, and an empath as well, might feel just barely on the angels' side of addictive.
Now this piques my interest as for some reason I recall an offhand comment (either in a story or here in the forums) that intimate relationships of Whateley students have a greater ratio of lasting than non-mutant counterparts. Of course, I might have entirely fabricated this.
Seriously, thank you for your time and effort. It is appreciated.
- E. E. Nalley
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Ametros wrote: Now this piques my interest as for some reason I recall an offhand comment (either in a story or here in the forums) that intimate relationships of Whateley students have a greater ratio of lasting than non-mutant counterparts. Of course, I might have entirely fabricated this.
It's more a function of the various syndromes Mutants are subject to and their amplified teen-aged emotions. While the sample size is so small to be statistically irrelevant to the world at large, or even the Mutant community, there is a fair amount of anecdotal evidence that relationships at Whateley do tend to last. It is more likely to be just a question of when two click, they really click and when they don't they spectacularly don't...

As for reading like Bek, well, NO ONE can withstand Scathing wit of THAT magnitude!

I would rather be exposed to the inconveniences attending too much liberty than to those attending too small a degree of it.
Thomas Jefferson, to Archibald Stuart, 1791
- null0trooper
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Ametros wrote:
null0trooper wrote: But there is a touch of nightmare fuel to be found, wondering how much of the attraction and the consent is real and how much is fueled by mutant power effects. I'd imagine that being the center of attention of someone who's almost supernaturally attractive, and an empath as well, might feel just barely on the angels' side of addictive.
Now this piques my interest as for some reason I recall an offhand comment (either in a story or here in the forums) that intimate relationships of Whateley students have a greater ratio of lasting than non-mutant counterparts. Of course, I might have entirely fabricated this.
I think that this was mentioned in Sara's Little Purple Book , which I recently re-read for background for one of my own stories.
Edit: Re: Wizards: "Everything that is said in this book applies to you, the entire book without exceptions."
Now picture an exemplar changeling empath sharing a hotel room with a wizard channeler who's also an esper.
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- Kristin Darken
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null0trooper wrote: Now picture an exemplar changeling empath sharing a hotel room with a wizard channeler who's also an esper.
Uh huh. Now picture an empathy driven/triggered Shifter sharing a room/wing/dorm with a Sidhe wizard/empath, an extraplanar being of lust, and... well... I think even just that is far enough. There's a reason Fling's arrival at Whateley is still 'down' the timeline.

Fate guard you and grant you a Light to brighten your Way.
- Sir Lee
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Well, it shouldn't. But we live in a highly hypocritical society, so it sometimes does, unfortunately.
- konzill
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- Malady
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But, any threats that flow out from her environment, instead of being external? ... Maybe she'll stop a robbery or something...
- Katssun
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I liked it. A lot. I love Whateley "world building" side stories that don't take place at the Academy. Those are the types of microscenes I love to write myself. You have the framework of the universe, and can really have fun with the constraints.
My big takeaways were this:
- Whateley is accepting. New England is accepting. New York is accepting (Kayda and Debra ♥). Atlanta is accepting. But the administrative government of Georgia and the US are not. This story reiterated that the WU is not as accepting as our 2018 reality. IRL, it was basically only Massachusetts and Canada until well into the intermediary and Gen 2 timeframe. Gen 2 has hinted that even then, the WU hasn't gotten to that level of acceptance or indifference.
- Imp's stories started to bring it up before, but there's a huge segment of the Active MGC population that has either no idea what is happening to them or that has no idea that the Academy exists. From a practical standpoint this makes sense. There's only so many student slots available, and the school's secrecy is what keeps it safe. So I love seeing what "outsiders" see as a missed opportunity for them. Sometimes they're bitter. Sometimes they're disappointed. Sometimes they feel regret.
- OMG...I loved greek mythology in high school. The Bellerophon-Philonoe reference was lovely, It does make me wonder...was there a "Greek Hero" phase among the Whateley Exemplar Alums prior to the New Olympians showing up?

- Echo
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Overall an intersting read and a good show of moral ambiguity.
If this character gets taken further then a scene on Sheila's reconnecting with her family ought to be interesting, especially if Tony is also present.
Keep up the good writing!